2024年牛津上海版七年级下册期末书面表达专练（含解析）

2024年牛津上海版七年级下册期末书面表达专练
题号 一 总分
得分
一、书面表达：
1.假如你是Anna，你们学校的Buddy Club要招收新成员。你想通过加入这个俱乐部结识更多的朋友，请你根据下面的思维导图，写一封申请书，向俱乐部负责人Mr. Smith介绍自己。
要求：
（1）内容丰富，覆盖导图中所有要点，可适当发挥；
（2）80词左右，开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Anna from Class 3 Grade 8. I'd like to join the Buddy Club.
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I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Anna
2. 在即将举行的中学生国际文化交流活动中，你将代表学校介绍中国的传统节日，请你从所给的卡片中任选一张，用英语写一篇发言稿，介绍该节日。
the Spring Festival ☆Time: in January or February ☆Activities: welcome the new year, visit relatives, get together... ☆Meaning: the biggest day of a year, a new start...

the Mid-Autumn Festival ☆Time: September or October ☆Activities: express wishes and hopes, have mooncakes, enjoy the moon... ☆Meaning: symbols of being together, missing family members far away...
注意：
①发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥；
②文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
③词数80～100；
④文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour.
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That's all. Thanks for listening.
3. 我们国家有许多传统节日。每个节日都有不同的风俗习惯。假如你是周琪，请你根据以下邮件提示，给你的英国朋友Jessie写一封80词左右的英语邮件，介绍一下中国的端午节。
Dear Zhou Qi, How's everything I have been learning about Chinese traditional festivals these days. The Dragon Boat Festival is the one that I am most interested in. Could you tell me something about the origin of Dragon Boat Festival When and how do you celebrate the festival I'm looking forward to your reply. Yours, Jessie
Dear Jessie,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
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Are there any traditional festivals in your country Please write and let me know.
Yours,
Zhou Qi,
4.以“My ideal school”为题，写一篇80个单词左右的英语短文，要求语句通顺，无语法错误。内容必须包括以下要点：
(1)时间安排； (2)科目设置； (3)设施及活动。
My ideal school
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5.每年的6月5日是世界环境日。今年的世界环境日的中国主题是"人与自然，相联相生"．
为配合今年的环保主题活动，请你以"Better Environment，Better Life"为题，写一篇90字环保征文（开头已给出，不计入总数）．要点如下：
环境问题 政府要求人们怎么做？ 青少年应该怎么做？
1．乱扔垃圾；
2．河流湖泊被污染；
3．空气污染引起健康问题；
4．污染对人们的日常生活影响很大 1．少开车；
2．节约水；
3．保持公共卫生；
4．培养环保的生活方式 1．
2．
要求：（1）内容包括所提供的要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译；
（2）文中不要提及真实姓名、学校等信息。
（3）作为青少年，请你补充1-2点你的个人做法。
Better Environment，Better Life
Pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world．______．
6.某一国际学校为了充分体现孩子们的自主性和责任感，决定向同学们征求如何让学校生活更美好的建议。假如你是Tom，请用英语向写一封80词左右的建议信。
Suggestions for a Better School Life（建议）
Our school（学校方面） 增加图书馆开放时间；开展丰富的课外活动；……
Our teachers（老师方面） 给学生更多的自主学习时间；让课堂更有趣；……
Our students（学生方面） 团结友好，健康向上……
其他 合理补充……
要求：(1)文中应包含所给要点，并增加合理的补充；
(2)开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers,
I’m very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours, Tom
7.假如你是David，看了上面这篇短文后，请你根据下面的写作要点提示，写一篇班会发言稿．
【写作要点】1．简要介绍自己的两个烦恼或担心．
2．针对自己的烦恼或担心，说说新年的决心和计划．
【写作要求】1．不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现真实校名、班级和姓名等．
2．语句连贯，词数60词左右．开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数．
Hello，everyone，
Today I want to tell you something about my worries and new year's resolution．
______That's all，thanks．
8.书面表达
你最喜欢哪个季节呢？请根据下面提示内容写一篇60词左右的文章，向大家介绍一下你最喜欢的季节。
提示：(1) 你最喜欢的季节是什么？天气如何？
(2) 在这个季节有什么节日吗？
(3) 在这个季节能做什么有趣的事？
My favourite season
9.宁波的冬季阴冷，多雨，比起北方的凛冽干冷更加令人难受。寒假里，有机会暂避宁波的湿冷，你会选择去有暖气且冬意十足的北方旅行，还是去真正暖意十足的南方游玩，感受不一样的“冬季”。
Heilongjiang Province Guangdong Province
Reasons feel warm inside (the heating暖气 ) feel warm and comfortable
experience the International Ice and Snow Festival (go skiing ) experience different local culture(Cantonese tea 广式早茶)
enjoy the beauty of winter in the North enjoy the beautiful scenery in the South
… …
注意：（1）短文根据提示做适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
短文首句：
Winter vacation is coming, I prefer to go to ____________ to spend my holiday.
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10.书面表达。
请以“My future”为题写一篇短文，根据表格内容，介绍 20年后的你，至少80词。
In 20 years
Job Appearance Place Sports Family
police officer tall, strong, short straight hair Shanghai swimming, table tennis two children
My future
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11.书面表达请将短文写在答题卡相应的位置上。
在上周的实践活动课上，你们班同学对网上购物这一现象进行了调查。你们在某小区抽取了100名年龄在15岁到65岁之间的受访者。下图是相关活动的统计结果。
请你用两段话写一篇短文，第一段简要说明图表内容，第二段表明你自己的购物习惯，并说明理由。
要求：(1)词数不少于80词。文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数；
(2)文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results.
假如你是李华，你在美国的笔友Peter来信，询问你广州四季的天气情况，以及哪个季节最适合参观广州。请你根据下列提示给他回一封电子邮件。
要点提示：
(1)冬季稍寒但时间短；
(2)春季的广州潮湿多雨，可以看到各种花；
(3)夏季稍稍炎热，阳光充足，偶尔会有台风；
(4)秋季凉爽干燥，总是有好天气，旅游最舒服；
(5)广州很漂亮，期待很快能在广州见到他。
注意：参考词汇：台风typhoon
Dear Peter,
I'm so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China.
_______________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
13.当今有不少小说被改编成电影。有人喜欢看电影，有人喜欢看小说。以“Film and Novel, Which do You Prefer ”为题，根据下列要点，写一篇80词左右的短文。
(1)电影：省时、有趣、易懂；
(2)小说：享受精彩的描述、学习优美的语言；
(3)你的看法和理由。
整理成文
Film and Novel, Which do You Prefer
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14.英语课上，老师让大家以“My favourite film/play”为题写一篇短文，在课堂上与同学们一起分享。
要点提示：
(1)What is your favourite film/play
(2) What is the film/play about
(3)Why do you like it best
提示：
(1) 80词左右；
(2)语句通顺，语法正确。
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15.每个人都有自己梦想的职业。你梦想的职业是什么呢？请以“My dream job”为题，并根据下表中的内容提示，写一篇不少于70词的英语短文来阐述你梦想的职业。
梦想的职业 导游
理由 1．可参观许多旅游景点； 2．可学习许多历史和地理知识。
实现途径 1．进入一所好的大学学习； 2．参加演讲比赛，提高沟通能力。
理想的工作地点 北京
16. 你校英语社团正在开展主题为“How do students find study partners ”的讨论，为此你采访了一些学生，请你根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。
方式 理由
部分学生 使用网络 ·方便找到学伴 ·及时得到帮助
部分学生 参加社团 ·面对面分享经验 ·共同解决问题
你 …… ……
注意：
①短文必须包括表中所有内容，可适当增加细节；
②你的理由至少两条；
③词数：80～100；
④短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
参考词汇：学伴study partner 方便的convenient
短文首句：I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.
【定人称、定时态】
(1)人称：介绍其他学生的方式与理由用第三人称，介绍个人的方式与理由用第一人称；
(2)时态：介绍现实情况用一般现在时。
【列提纲、写句子】
列提纲 写句子
开头：引出主题 I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.
中间：同学们的观点 部分学生：使用网络 (1)____________________________________________________（他们认为通过网络寻找学习伙伴很便捷。） (2)____________________________________________________（无论何时，他们都能从学习伙伴那里得到帮助。）
部分学生：参加社团 (1)____________________________________________________（一些学生喜欢参加社团寻找学习伙伴，这样他们能够面对面交流经验。） (2)____________________________________________________（更重要的是，他们认为一起解决问题有助于更容易地学习。）
结尾：介绍个人观点 ______________________________________________________（这是一个学习如何与他人相处的好方法。）
【巧衔接】
(1)介绍两部分学生的观点时，可使用Some students... Some students...并列介绍；
(2)介绍个人观点时，可用As for me引出；
(3)短文整体可使用Besides，Also，What's more等衔接词，使过渡顺畅；
(4)成文时，可使用so that引导目的状语从句，说明参加社团能够帮助学生面对面交流；
(5)可使用because引导原因状语从句，说明喜欢夏令营的原因。
【成篇章】
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【句子升格】
(1)They believe to find partners to study with online is convenient.（宾语从句用it作形式主语来升格）
_____________________________________________________________________(2)To me, I'd like to get study partners by going on a summer camp. It can help me learn something new.（用as for和because引导的原因状语从句升格）
_____________________________________________________________________(3)To learn how to get on well with others is a good way.（用it作形式主语升格）
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17.请根据以下提示写一篇70词左右的短文。
如今，人人家里都有很多电器。电让我们的生活变得更加的容易。但是，但是电也非常危险。请根据以下的提示写一篇短文，说明我们应该如何安全用电。
(1)不湿手碰电器；
(2)电饭煲：空着的时候不要打开电源；
(3)洗衣机：运转的时候，不要把手放进去。
(4) ……(再举一个例子)
参考词汇： pot内胆, electrical appliance电器
How to use the electrical appliance safely
Nowadays, we use a lot of electrical appliances in our home. _________________________
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18.

你的美国朋友Alice计划七月份去青海湖旅游。请你根据提示，向她介绍青海湖。
Location (位置) in Qinghai, China (about 100 kilometers west of Xining)
Area (面积) about 4,400 square kilometers (the largest lake in China)
The best visiting time from July to August isn't too hot or too cold lots of wild flowers
Advice take a hat and sunglasses
要求:
（1) 所写内容须包含所有提示信息，意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯；
（ 2) 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。
Hi Alice! I'm glad to hear that you plan to visit Qinghai Lake in July. I'd like to tell you something about Qinghai Lake first.
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I hope you will have a good trip.
19.请根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文。
事故经过 上星期六下午你在街上看到一位老太太在过马路时,被一辆电瓶车撞倒。骑电瓶车的人吓坏了,并逃走了。你立即走过去将老太太扶起来,然后叫了一辆出租车,把老太太送到医院。幸运的是,老太太伤势不重。
你的看法 ……
要求：
1．短文必须包括所有提示要点,叙述事情的整个过程,并就此事发表你自己的看法;
2．词数：80左右。短文开头已给,不计入总词数;
3．词汇提示：electric bicycle电瓶车,cyclist骑电瓶车的人,be badly hurt伤势严重。
Last Saturday afternoon when l was walking along the street, I saw an old lady in front of me.
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答案和解析
1.【答案】Dear Mr. Smith,
I'm Anna from Class 3 Grade 8. I'd like to join the Buddy Club.
I am a cute girl. I have a round face, long hair and medium-fat body. I like music very much, so you can imagine how attractive singing and dancing are to me.
Both in class and at home, they always think of me as honest and helpful. The keys to the questions quickly pop out in my mind, so teachers praise I am clever.
I hope I can make new friends in this club and try to be a singer step by step.
I'm looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Anna
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文要点已给出，要求考生写一封申请书。写作时，应注意不要对要点做生硬的翻译，可以做适当的内容拓展，同时选择准确的词汇和地道的句式，保证文章的连贯性。本文以第一人称为主，时态以一般现在时为主。
【亮点词汇】
1. be attractive to sb.对某人有吸引力
2. think of sb. as...认为某人是……的
3. pop out闪现
【高分句型】
1. I like music very much, so you can imagine how attractive singing and dancing are to me.（how引导宾语从句）
2. I hope I can make new friends in this club and try to be a singer step by step.（省略了that的宾语从句）
2.【答案】Ladies and gentlemen,
Welcome to the Chinese culture tour. Now allow me to introduce one of the Chinese traditional festivals—the Mid-Autumn Festival.
The Mid-Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year. During the festival, Chinese people sit around the table with their family members and enjoy mooncakes as well as the beautiful moon. People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. When seeing them, people will miss their family members far away. At the same time, they will express wishes and hopes for them. Does it sound interesting
That's all, Thanks for listening.
【解析】【思路点拨】这是一篇提示作文，也是一篇发言稿，根据卡片内容介绍中国的传统节日，包括节日时间，活动以及意义。本文主要以第三人称为主，时态主要使用一般现在时。发言稿中必须包含卡片上的信息，并适当发挥，语言通顺，逻辑合理。
【亮点词汇】
1.as well as也，和，和……一样；
2.far away在远处；
3.at the same time同时，然而。
【高分句型】
1.The Mid- Autumn Festival usually falls in September or October when the moon appears the biggest and the brightest in the year. (when引导的时间状语从句）
2.People believe that the round mooncakes and a full moon are symbols of being together. (that引导的宾语从句）
3.【答案】Dear Jessie,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
The Dragon Boat Festival is a traditional festival in China.
Many years ago, a poet called Qu Yuan loved his country very much. However, the king asked him to leave the country. He felt very sad. When he learned that another country had taken over his country, he didn't want to live any more. At last he jumped into the Miluo River. The local people rowed their boats to save him, but it was too late. They didn't want the fish to eat his body, so they dropped rice balls into the river. Since then Chinese people have been celebrating the Dragon Boat Festival on the fifth day of the fifth lunar month every year.
On this day, people usually hold dragon boat races and eat zongzi in memory of Qu Yuan.
Are there any traditional festivals in your country Please write and let me know.
Yours,
Zhou Qi
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇英语邮件应用文，根据所给邮件内容写篇关于中国端午节的邮件，组成一篇通顺连贯的短文，需要注意紧扣文章主题。写作时注意准确运用时态，人称用第三人称，时态主要是一般现在时和一般过去时；上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意要求的词数，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮点词汇】
①take over接管
②at last最后
③since then从那以后
【高分句型】
①Many years ago, a poet called Qu Yuan loved his country very much.（过去分词作定语）
②When he learned that another country had taken over his country, he didn't want to live any more.（when引导的时间状语从句，that引导的宾语从句）
【结构布局】
引言：表达对收到Jessie邮件的喜悦
中心：详细介绍端午节
结尾：询问对方传统节日
4.【答案】略
【解析】略
5.【答案】The rubbish is everywhere。 The rivers are dirty． Air pollution causes health problems． Pollution has a great influence on People's people's daily life。
As students，we should stop anyone from polluting the environment．It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy．We should obey the traffic rules．People should be more friendly with each other．To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise。I think I can talk with my friends about what to do and I will ask my family members to join us in protecting environment．So let's take action from now on so that we can reach our aim"BetterEnvironment，BetterLife"．
【解析】Better Environment，Better Life
Pollution is one of the most serious problems in the world。The rubbish is everywhere。 The rivers are dirty． Air pollution causes health problems． Pollution has a great influence on People's people's daily life。（现状）
As students，we should stop anyone from polluting the environment．It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy．【高分句型一】We should obey the traffic rules．People should be more friendly with each other．To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise【高分句型二】（应该怎么做）．I think I can talk with my friends about what to do and I will ask my family members to join us in protecting environment．So let's take action from now on so that we can reach our aim"Better Environment，Better Life"．（我应该怎么做）
【高分句型一】
It's our duty to keep our city clean and tidy让我们的城市干净整洁是我们的职责。
it's one's duty to do sth做某事是某人的职责。
【高分句型二】
To stay healthy，we ought to take more exercise为了保持健康我们应该更多的锻炼。
动词不定式做目的状语。
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。
6.【答案】Dear teachers,
I'm very glad to write a letter to you. These days we are talking about how to have a better school life. Here are some of my suggestions.
I think school is a good place for us to learn and practice more. So, giving more time to us to read in the library is a good thing. We also enjoy the wonderful after-class activities in our school, the more, the better for us. I hope our teachers can make their classes more interesting. If we can have more time to learn by ourselves, we will be happy. It's a good thing to have friendly friends at school, I hope all the students in our school can help each other, be healthy. In my mind, school is a happy and safe family.
Hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thanks for reading my letter!
Yours
Tom
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇关于建议信的应用文写作。写作时用第一人称，用一般现在时，使用合适的连词使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，写全要点，可适当增加细节，注意字数要求。
【亮点短语】
1.be glad to do sth. 高兴做某事；
2.talk about 谈论；
3.by oneself 独自；
4.at school 在学校；
5.in one's mind 在某人的心目中。
【高分句型】
1.I think school is a good place for us to learn and practice more.（school is a good place for us to learn and practice more是宾语从句）
2.If we can have more time to learn by ourselves, we will be happy. （if引导条件状语从句）
7.【答案】I have two worries．First，it is that I'm not good at my subjects at school．So I'm going to study harder to get good grades next year． I'm going to listen to teachers carefully in class and do my homework on time every day．Second，I'm worried about my physical health．Next year I'm going to run more to keep fit．And I'm going to eat more vegetables and try to eat less junk food．
【解析】Hello，everyone，
Today I want to tell you something about my worries and new year's resolution（引起下文）
I have two worries．First，it is that I'm not good at my subjects at school．So I'm going to study harder to get good grades next year．【高分句型一】I'm going to listen to teachers carefully in class and do my homework on time every day．Second，I'm worried about my physical health．【高分句型二】Next year I'm going to run more to keep fit．And I'm going to eat more vegetables and try to eat less junk food．（简要介绍自己的两个烦恼或担心及针对新年决心和计划）
That's all，thanks．
【高分句型一】
So I'm going to study harder to get good grades next year．所以我要努力学习在明年取得好成绩．
be going to+动词原形，表示打算做某事；study harder更加努力地学习
【高分句型二】
I'm worried about my physical health．我担心我的身体健康．
be worried about担心…
能够根据提示进行书面表达，能够围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务．
8.【答案】 My favourite season
My favourite season is autumn. It is cool and sometimes rainy. Leaves turn brown, red and yellow. How beautiful they are! It is relaxing to go on a picnic with my best friends.
The Mid-Autumn Festival is in autumn. I have a big meal with my family and we eat mooncakes together. It is nice to spend time with my family members during the Mid-Autumn Festival.
That's why I like autumn best. How about you
【解析】【思路点拔】
本文是一篇提示作文。根据所给题目My favourite season，向大家介绍一下自己最喜欢的季节。介绍最喜欢的季节是什么，天气如何，在这个季节是否有节日，在这个季节能做什么有趣的事等。人称用第一人称为主，时态用一般现在时。根据提示内容，适当发挥，逻辑清晰，行文有条理，词数60左右。【亮点词汇】
1.go on a picnic去野餐；
2.spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事；
【高分句型】
1.How beautiful they are!（感叹句）
2.It is nice to spend time with my family members during the Mid-Autumn Festival.（固定句型）
9.【答案】 略
【解析】 略
10.【答案】略
【解析】略
11.【答案】 Last week, we asked 100 people between 15 and 65 about online shopping in the neighborhood. Here are the results. We found that 20% of the people do not shop online at all. 35% sometimes shop online. 26% do it often, and 19% always shop online.
As for me, I often shop online. First, it makes my life much easier and more convenient. For example, I can get nearly everything online and don't have to go to the stores. Second, things on the Internet are usually cheaper than those in stores. What's more, shopping online can save me much time. In a word, I really enjoy this way of shopping.
【解析】【思路点拨】根据提示，可知本文需用一般过去时，第一人称写作，在写作过程中，所有提示要点不可遗漏，可适当发挥，要求句子连贯，语法正确，符合逻辑，书写规范，无拼写错误，词数不少于80词。文章开头已给出，但不计入总词数，文中不得出现真实人名和校名。
【亮点词汇】
1.shop online网购；
2.for example例如；
3.what's more而且，此外
【高分句型】
1.We found that 20% of the people do not shop online at all.我们发现20%的人根本不在网上购物。（that引导的宾语从句）
2.Second, things on the Internet are usually cheaper than those in stores.其次，网上的东西通常比商店里的便宜。（使用了比较级句型）
12.【答案】Dear Peter,
I'm so glad to receive your letter. You know, Guangzhou is in the south of China. So winter is not very cold. It is short and it doesn't snow. In spring, it is wet and rains a lot. But it is warm and you can see all kinds of flowers. Summer is a little hot. The sun usually shines brightly. Sometimes there is a typhoon. But summer is my favourite season, because I can usually go swimming. It is cool and dry in autumn. The weather is always good. It is comfortable to take a trip to Guangzhou in autumn.
Guangzhou is really a beautiful city. I'm looking forward to seeing you in Guangzhou soon.
Best wishes to you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇应用文，话题为介绍广州的气候，写作时应注意词汇的选择和句式的准确使用，可适当添加一定的衔接词，以使行文连贯。
【结构布局】
引言：说明意图
中心：介绍广州的气候
结尾：表达愿望
【亮点词汇】
1.go swimming游泳
2.take a trip旅游，去旅行
【高分句型】
1.But summer is my favourite season, because I can usually go swimming.（because引导的原因状语从句）
2.It is comfortable to take a trip to Guangzhou in autumn.（it作形式主语，动词不定式短语作真正的主语）
13.【答案】Film and Novel, Which do You Prefer
Some people think it better to see the film than to read the novel. The reason is that it takes less time to know the whole story. Besides, the film is usually more interesting with the music and actions, and it also helps you understand the story better.
Others, however, believe that by reading the novel, they can enjoy the wonderful descriptions and learn the beautiful language.
Personally, I prefer novels. I always like to read a novel with a cup of tea and quietly communicate with the author. It helps improve my reading skills in a relaxing way.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提纲作文，也是一便命题作文。在写作过程中要注意人称和时态的正确运用，根据内容要求可知，文章以一般现在时描述为主，写作中所给参考词汇的运用，同时注意上下文的衔接，要做到语句通顺，语法正确，单词拼写无误，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。
【亮点词汇】
1.the whole story zhen整个故事
2.communicate with sb. 与某人交流
【高分句型】
1.Some people think it better to see the film than to read the novel.（宾语从句）
2.The reason is that it takes less time to know the whole story.（that引导的表语从句）
14.【答案】My Favorite Film My favorite film is How to Train Your Dragon. It's about a boy named Hiccup. He is small and weak. His father wants him to be strong to kill dragons because they take their food away. But Hiccup doesn't want to. One day he found a dragon and got on well with it. He then found a bigger dragon. Hiccup and his friend killed the bigger one. All the people think of him as a hero. I like the film because I learn a lot from Hiccup.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇提示作文，要求你写一篇短文，和同学分享你最喜欢的电影或者戏剧，介绍电影或戏剧的内容，并写出你喜欢它的原因。根据要求和提示信息合理安排篇章中各个部分内容的比例。本片短文的重点应该在是电影或戏剧的内容。要做到详略得当、条理清楚、过渡自然、文字简练。此外，要准确使用语法和词汇，尽可能地使用一定的高级句型、词汇和特殊句式，清楚、连贯地表达自己的意思。恰当选用过渡词，使文章更流畅。要注意句型的多样化。本文主要用一般现在时和一般过去时。
【高分句型】
1.take away带走；
2.get on well with与……相处很好；
3.think of...as把……看作
15.【答案】 My dream job
I want to be a tour guide when I grow up. I can travel to a lot of places of interest and get lots of knowledge about history and geography. What should I do to make my dream come true First, I'm going to study at a good university after finishing high school. Second, I'm going to take part in all kinds of speech contests to improve my communication ability. My ideal workplace is Beijing.
【解析】【思路点拨】
本文是一篇阐述自己梦想的文章，表达要口语化，思路清晰。能够阐述清楚拥有这个梦想的理由以及实现梦想的途径。本文主要用一般现在时态和第一人称来写作。写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。另外注意书写工整，尽量避免拼写错误，不少于70词。
【亮点词汇】
1.places of interest旅游胜地；
2.get lots of knowledge掌握许多知识；
3.take part in参加；
4.improve my communication ability提高我的交流能力。
【高分句型】
1.I want to be a tour guide when I grow up.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2. I'm going to study at a good university after finishing high school.（动名词结构）
16.【答案】 I have recently done a survey about how students find study partners.
Some students find study partners through the Internet. They believe it's convenient to find partners to study with online. Besides, they can get help from study partners whenever necessary. Some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face. What's more, they think working out problems together helps learn more easily.
As for me, I'd like to get study partners by going on a summer camp because I can learn something new while having fun. Also, it's a good way to learn how to get on well with others.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提纲作文，你校英语社团正在开展主题为“How do students find study partners ”的讨论，根据下表内容用英语写一篇短文进行交流，并说明你自己的方式及理由。本文主要用一般现在时态，人称以第一和第三人称为主来写作。题干给出了写作提纲，注意把提示要点准确的表达出来，并适当发挥，使文章更充实。写作时注意上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。另外注意书写工整，尽量避免拼写错误，词数80～100，短文首句仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
【亮点词汇】
1.be convenient to do sth. 做某事方便；
2.prefer to do sth. 更喜欢做某事；
3.face to face 面对面；
4.What's more 此外；
5.work out 算出；
6.get on well with 与……相处融洽
【高分句型】
1.They believe it's convenient to find partners to study with online.（宾语从句用it作形式主语）
1.They can get help from study partners whenever necessary.（whenever引导的时间状语从句的省略）
2.Some students prefer to join clubs to find study partners so that they can share experience face to face.（so that引导的结果状语从句）
3.Because I can learn something new while having fun.（because引导的原因状语从句）
4.It's a good way to learn how to get on well with others.（it作形式主语）
17.【答案】 How to use the electrical appliance safely
Nowadays, we use a lot of electrical appliances in our home. Electricity makes our lives easier. But we should use them safely. We mustn't touch the electrical appliances with wet hands. We mustn't turn the rice cooker on if the pot is empty. We mustn't put our hand in the washing machine when it is on. We must turn the lights off before we leave the room. Electricity is good for our lives, but it is dangerous, too. Please use it in the right way.
【解析】【思路点拨】
这是一篇提示作文，以“How to use the electrical appliance safely”为题，按照所给的提示进行书写，要注意时态、语法变化，适当运用词组、句型，让句子表达更为流畅，保持语法准确。
【亮点词组】
1.make sb./sth.+形容词：让某人/物……；
2.turn off关闭；
3.be good for对……有好处
【高分句型】
1.We mustn't turn the rice cooker on if the pot is empty. 如果锅是空的，我们不能打开电饭煲。mustn't禁止，不允许；if引导的条件状语从句。
2.We mustn't put our hand in the washing machine when it is on. 打开时，我们不能把手放在洗衣机里。put…in…把……放……里面；when引导的时间状语从句。
3.We must turn the lights off before we leave the room. 我们必须在离开房间之前关灯。 before引导的时间状语从句。
18.【答案】Hi Alice!
I'm glad to hear that you plan to visit Qinghai Lake in July. I'd like to tell you something about Qinghai Lake first.
Qinghai Lake is in Qinghai, China, about 100 kilometers west of Xining. It's about 4,400 square kilometers and it's the largest lake in China. ①The best time to visit Qinghai Lake is from July to August because the weather isn't too hot or too cold. What's more, you can enjoy a lot of wild flowers at that time. But don't forget to take your hat and sunglasses because the sunshine in Qinghai is quite strong.
②I hope you will have a good trip.
【解析】【思路点拨】
【思路点拨】
本篇书面表达是提示类写作。写作时应该注意以下几点：1.人称：本文主要介绍旅游景点青海湖，所以应以第三人称为主。2.时态：以一般现在时为主。3.写作要点：青海湖所处的地理位置、面积、旅游的最佳时节及你的建议。4.使用适当的关联词，如what's more等，使句子通顺，全文意思连贯。5.在能力范围内使用亮点短语和高分句型。6.书写工整。
【结构布局】
引言：说明写作目的
中心：介绍青海湖
结尾：表达祝愿
【亮点短语】
①what's more 另外，而且，最重要的是
②have a good trip 旅途愉快
【高分句型】
①The best time to visit Qinghao Lake is from July to August because the weather isn't too hot or too cold.（动词不定式作定语；原因状语从句）
②I hope you will have a good trip.（hope后面为省略了that的宾语从句）
19.【答案】 Last Saturday afternoon when I was walking along the street, I saw an old lady in front of me. She was walking across the street when suddenly an electric bicycle ran towards her at a high speed. The old woman fell to the ground. The cyclist was very frightened and ran away. I was in a great hurry to help the lady up. I called a taxi and sent her to the nearest hospital. Luckily, she was not badly hurt. We live in the same city and it is like a big family. We should care for each other.
【解析】【思路点拨】
1.本文内容应包含题目中所提供的所有信息。
2.灵活运用各种句式，采用不同的表达方式将各个要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。语言力求正确、简洁。
3.必须认真查验是否有漏写，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。
【亮点词汇】
1.ran away 逃跑
2.care for 关心
3.live in 居住
【高分句型】
1.Last Saturday afternoon when I was walking along the street, I saw an old lady in front of me.（when引导的时间状语从句）
2.She was walking across the street when suddenly an electric bicycle ran towards her at a high speed.（when引导的时间状语从句）
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