2024年中考英语二轮题型专题：书面表达 (浙江专用) （含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(浙江专用)
1．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Lee在你学校公众号上了解到你们这学期举行了许多安全教育活动。请你阅读他的邮件与部分活动提示，根据信中内容与实际情况进行回复。
TO LIHUA@
SUBJECT Safety Activities
Hi there, Li Hua!
How’s everything going
Well, I read some articles from your school public account (公众号) and showed interest in the safety activities your school held, so could you introduce two of them And let me know your opinions.
Take care and hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Lee
注意：
1. 词数80—100左右，开头与结尾已给，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须符合要求，包含所提内容，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail.
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How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lee,
Glad to receive your e-mail. Our school held quite a few safety activities this term. Let me tell you two of them.
First of all, we had the knowledge contest about the drowning prevention. We realized that we shouldn’t swim alone without permission. Besides, what impressed me most was the fire drill. We learned how to run away from danger quickly. In addition, we learned how to put out fire. It was really an unforgettable experience. Besides, we gave some speeches about traffic safety. It was really useful. We must remember to follow traffic rules when we are out.
All those activities not only tell us that we should try our best to protect ourselves, but also remind us that we need to treasure our lives. Stay safe, stay pleased.
How about your school activities Could you tell me some Have a good time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍学校的安全教育活动，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍学校举办的安全教育活动；
第三步，介绍自己从此活动中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①run away from逃离
②put out扑灭
③try one’s best to do sth.尽某人最大的努力去做某事
[高分句型]
①Besides, what impressed me most was the fire drill. (what引导的主语从句)
②All those activities not only tell us that we should try our best to protect ourselves, but also remind us that we need to treasure our lives. (that引导的宾语从句)
2．（2024·浙江嘉兴·一模）在学校”健康周”活动期间，你们小组第一次尝试策划并开展了班级趣味运动日(fun sports day)。假设你是李华，请以”Our First Try”为题，向 Week Junior 杂志投稿分享你们的组织过程、活动成效和收获感悟。
注意:
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数80-100，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Our First Try
During the School Health Week, our team organized a fun sports day for the whole class. Here I want to introduce our first try to you.
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【答案】
Our First Try
During the School Health Week, our team organized a fun sports day for the whole class. Here I want to introduce our first try to you.
First, we made the plan about fun sports day. Then, we prepared the activities such as jumping ropes, having races, throwing events and so on. Finally, we designed the medals and prizes for those who had perfect performances. We got everyone join in it, hoped to reduce worries and kept fit both phically and mentally.
After the first try, we felt a sense of responbility and a strong cohesion among our students.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从过程、效果等阐述首次策划内容；
第三步，阐述感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as比如
②a sense of responbility责任感
[高分句型]
①Finally, we designed the medals and prizes for those who had perfect performances.（定语从句）
3．（23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·期中）假如你是Li Hua，你的英国笔友 Tom对你们学校的拓展课程很感兴趣，想了解相关信息。请你根据表格内的提示向他介绍部分课程及开设原因，并表达自己还希望学校开设哪门拓展课和理由。
Special after-school classes in our school
classes reasons
Cooking 1. help parents 2. master the life skills
English play 1. learn how to act 2. improve spoken English
Basketball 1. be good for our health 2. encourage teamwork
Your wishes …
注意：
1.短文须包括所有要点，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2.文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
3.词数：100词左右，开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom,
How’s it going _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best Wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tom,
How’s it going Learning in your letter that you are interested in our special after-school classes, I’m very glad to introduce three of them.
Cooking is the first we like because it offers us the life skills and we can do it by ourselves when parents aren’t in. English play course, which can help us with both acting skills and spoken English, is also our favorite. Besides, some of us prefer basketball classes since playing basketball is not only good for our health but also encourages us to work as a team. In a word, these fascinating programs make our school lives colorful and meaningful.
Honestly, I do hope IT class will be held as quickly as possible because to be a programmer is my dream.
Best Wishes!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是书信作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示所给出的三个点，添加适当细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候对方然后表明主题并引出下文；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从提示中的三个点，烹饪，英语话剧，篮球来介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的意愿和期许。
[亮点词汇]
①are interested in对……感兴趣
②be glad to do 开心去做某事
[高分句型]
①Cooking is the first we like because it offers us the life skills and we can do it by ourselves when parents aren’t in.（原因状语从句，时间状语从句）
4．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）初中生活即将结束，你一定参加过各种伴随着你成长的社团，如篮球队、合唱团等。请以“My Favorite Club at School”为题，写一篇英文短文，向校刊的School Life栏目投稿，介绍你最喜欢的社团。
注意：(1) 短文必须包括思维导图中的所有要点，并适当发挥；
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
(3) 词数：100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in.
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Club at School
In our school, there are many clubs which I have been in. There are the Robot Club, the Solar Power Club, the Singing Club and so on. All of them are fun and interesting. My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much.
In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. We often went out to practise our skills. And we showed our photos in the club. I made lots of friends in the club and I also became better at taking photos. It is interesting and exciting.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给内容介绍我最喜欢的俱乐部，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍参加的俱乐部以及最喜欢的俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍自己经常做的活动；
第三步，介绍从俱乐部学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①take photos拍照
②make lots of friends交许多朋友
[高分句型]
①My favorite club is the Photography Club because I love taking photos very much. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②In the club, the teacher told us how to take photos better. （“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
5．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你在网上读到一则网名为Flying guy的学生所发布博文，内容如下。请根据博文内容，给博主留言回复。
Help！ Always tired on Monday！
To tell the truth, I am always tired on Monday and don’t feel like taking classes or doing homework. I guess there must be something wrong. Is it because I don’t make good use of my weekends Can anyone share your experience with me and give me some advice to solve the problem
注意：
1）请回复博文中所提及的问题，可适当发挥；
2）回复中不得出现真实人名和校名等相关信息；
3）词数：80—100词。
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【答案】例文
You are not the only one who feels tired on Monday. I used to have the same problem as you.
I used to play all weekends and had to stay up late to finish my homework. Every Monday I felt tired and it had bad effects on my study. I knew it was time to make a change. So I planned my time carefully and made good use of my weekend. Anyway, don’t play too much on weekends and try to go to bed earlier on Sunday. I hope you will manage time well and keep happy on Monday.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，提出自己与博主有相同的问题；
第二步，叙述出现问题的原因，并提出建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do sth.过去常常做某事
②stay up熬夜
③make good use of好好利用
[高分句型]
①You are not the only one who feels tired on Monday.（who引导的限制性定语从句）
②I hope you will manage time well and keep happy on Monday.（省略that的宾语从句）
6．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你叫李华，近日你收到了你的英国笔友Alice发来的电子邮件。请根据邮件内容用英语回复，与她交流自己看法，提出合理的建议，为她排忧解难。
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（2）词数80-100。
Dear Li Hua,
How’s everything going I’ve been at my new school for a week, but I feel lonely and unhappy. I miss my old friends so much. What’s worse, I even have a headache these days. I can’t sleep well at night. What shall I do Yours, Alice
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
Everything goes well. I’m sorry to hear that you’ve got some trouble these days. It’s normal to feel lonely in a new environment. In fact, it’s a good idea to make some new friends by joining some clubs. There’s no need for you to make many friends as long as they’re good. If you have problems in sleeping well, you should see a doctor in time. Taking the right medicine will also help relieve your headache.
I do hope you’ll feel better soon and I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给邮件提炼出写作要点；考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表达关切；
第二步，针对孤独和睡眠问题提出合理的建议；
第三步，表达希望。
[亮点词汇]
①make friends交朋友
②as long as只要
③hear from 收到……来信
[高分句型]
If you have problems in sleeping well, you should see a doctor in time.（if引导的条件状语从句）
7．（2024·浙江杭州·一模）假设你是李华，现以“An unforgettable experience with my family”为题，向你校英语杂志社“亲子空间”栏目投稿。
注意：
1.包含图中的所有内容，可适当发挥。
2.文中不能出现真实学校、姓名等信息。
3. 词数：80—100。
An Unforgettable Experience with My Family
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【答案】例文
An Unforgettable Experience with My Family
Last winter holiday, my family and I had an unforgettable experience. My parents took me to a village for three days.
On the first day, we went to the forest near the village and saw many lovely rabbits and squirrels. The next day, my mother taught me how to make dumplings in a family. She patiently guided me through every step. On the last day, my family went skating on a frozen lake near the village. It’s my first time skating and I’m a little nervous. However, with the help and encouragement of my parents, I slowly got the hang of it. I felt very happy.
This winter holiday has taught me the importance of spending quality time with my family and trying new things. At the same time, it makes me understand my parents better. I decide to be more helpful and considerate to them in future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在这个难忘的经历中你做了什么；
第二步，具体描述经历和自己感受；
第三步，最后介绍自己学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
① a little有点
② the importance of……的重要性
③ make sb do sth使某人做某事
[高分句型]
①It’s my first time skating and I’m a little nervous.（and并列句）
②The next day, my mother taught me how to make dumplings in a family. （“疑问词+动词不定式”作宾语）
8．（2024·浙江绍兴·一模）假如你是李华，你收到了美国笔友Mark的电子邮件，请阅读邮件并回复。FROM: Mark
TO: Li Hua
SUBJECT: How to behave properly as a guest
Dear Li Hua,
How’s it going Next week I’ll fly to Zhejiang to celebrate Helen’s birthday. Are you free then We can have fun together! I’m not sure what gifts I should buy for her, do you have any suggestions
It’s my first time to attend a birthday dinner in China. I’m afraid I can’t behave well at Helen’s home. Can you tell me some table manners
I’m so excited about that! See you soon.
Best,
Mark
注意：
（1）文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
（2）词数：80—100，邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
FROM: Li Hua
TO: Mark
SUBJECT: Re: How to behave properly as a guest
Dear Mark,
I’m happy to hear that you are going to Helen’s birthday party. I will go with you and have a birthday dinner together.
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Best,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Mark,
I’m happy to hear that you are going to Helen’s birthday party. I will go with you and have a birthday dinner together.
As for gifts, I suggest you buy her something that represents Chinese culture, such as a silk scarf or a tea set. You can also buy her a gift card to a local department store so that she can choose something she likes.
Here are some table manners to keep in mind when attending a birthday dinner in China. Use chopsticks like this: hold them about one-third of the way from the top with your thumb and pointer finger, and rest the bottom chopstick on your ring finger. Don’t stick your chopsticks straight up into your rice bowl, because that’s considered bad luck. Don’t share food with your own chopsticks. Instead, use the special chopsticks that are provided for taking food from shared dishes. Be quiet while you eat, and finish everything on your plate before asking for more.
I hope these tips will help you behave properly as a guest at Helen’s birthday dinner. See you soon!
Best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明主题。告诉对方自己会去参加生日派对；
第二步，具体阐述内容。从礼物和餐桌礼仪两方面给出具体建议；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望建议能帮助他。
[亮点词汇]
①represent代表
②so that以便
③keep in mind牢记
④tips建议
[高分句型]
①As for gifts, I suggest you buy her something that represents Chinese culture, such as a silk scarf or a tea set. (that引导定语从句)
②Don’t stick your chopsticks straight up into your rice bowl, because that’s considered bad luck. (祈使句否定形
式；because引导原因状语从句)
9．（2024·浙江绍兴·一模）你校将举办英语文化节，现向全校学生征求活动意见。假如你是李华，请用英语给负责人写一封书信，从学校的活动意向表中推荐2—3个活动并阐明理由。
□sing English songs □read English novels □watch English movies □tell English stories □make English posters □perform English sitcoms
注意：（1）书信内容要点应选自上表，可适当发挥；
（2）词数： 80-100；
（3）书信开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions.
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I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version
Dear sir,
For the coming English festival, I have some suggestions. I think watching English movies is a good choice. Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way. Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English. Another way I would like to recommend is to play English sitcoms. The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. At the same time, we can learn to work together well.
I hope my suggestions will be helpful. Thank you!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“英语文化节”来引出下文中对推荐的活动的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“看英文电影、讲英文故事和演英语情景喜剧”三方面入手，重点介绍推荐这些活动的理由；
③第三步，书写结语。希望自己的建议能够被采纳。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also 不但……而且
②as well as 和
③share sth with sb 与某人分享某物
④at the same time 同时
[高分句型]
①Not only can we enjoy the performance of the actors, but we can also learn English in a fun way.（倒装句）
②Also, I recommend telling English stories as a way to celebrate the festival, by which we can enrich our knowledge as well as share favorite stories with each other in English.（定语从句）
③The reason is that it helps to improve our spoken English and acting skills. （表语从句）
10．（2024·浙江·一模）假如你叫 Li Ping，你校英国交换生Jack想参加你们本周五以“Protect our mother river”为主题的户外公益活动。请你结合下表内容用英文写一封邮件，向他介绍一下此次活动的安排并给予一些合理建议。
Time Plans Advice
set out at 8:00 a. m. do clean-up work be active …
plant trees
teach the public about…
注意：
1）文中必须包括表格中全部内容，可适当发挥；
2）你的建议至少再补充一条；
3）词数：80-100;
4）邮件格式已提供，不计入总词数。
Hi, Jack,
I’m glad that you are interested in our voluntary work about protecting our mother river.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Ping
【答案】例文
Hi, Jack,
I’m glad that you are interested in our voluntary work about protecting our mother river. There will be various meaningful activities on that day.
In the morning, we will be divided into some groups and work by the river. Some of us will do clean-up work, such as cleaning up the rubbish and sorting the waste. And others can play a part in planting trees along the river. In the afternoon, we will hand out notices to teach the public about keeping the river clean.
To make everything go well, we are supposed to be active though the work is tiring. More importantly, we are expected to pull together. It will surely be an excellent experience.
Remember to meet us at 8:00 a. m. this Saturday.
Looking forward to seeing you then.
Yours,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要介绍本周五的户外公益活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了当天的活动内容和建议；
第三步，提醒出发时间。
[亮点词汇]
①various各种各样的
②meaningful有意义的
③such as例如
④be supposed to应该
⑤excellent极好的
[高分句型]
①In the morning, we will be divided into some groups and work by the river. (一般将来时被动语态)
②To make everything go well, we are supposed to be active though the work is tiring. (动词不定式作目的状语；让步状语从句)
11．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）呵护心灵，快乐成长。你校英语报正在举行以“心理健康（mental health）”为主题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请根据表格中的信息，用英文写一篇倡议书投稿谈谈心理健康的重要性，提出改善建议，并表达你的祝愿。
注意：
（1）短文必须包括表格中的要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100。倡议书格式和首句已给出，不计入总词数。
Importance ● be connected with physical health ● influence one’s daily life
Ways to improve ● do sports ● build good relationships ● …
My hope ● …
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone.
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【答案】例文：
Dear fellow students,
Mental health is important to everyone. It is closely connected with physical health. Mental health influence everyone’s daily life. There are things we can do to improve mental health.
First, do sports regularly. Exercise can help us relax and improve our ability to cope with stress. Second, we should build good relationships with the people around us. Finally, happiness is important for us too. We should learn to smile and be active. Be happy to be healthy.
I hope we are all mentally healthy and we will have a happy and successful middle school life.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏表格中给出的关键信息，要保证语法和单词拼写正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，谈谈心理健康的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍如何提高心理健康水平；
第三步，书写结语，谈谈自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①daily life 日常生活
②cope with 处理
[高分句型]
①There are things we can do to improve mental health.（There be句型；省略that定语从句）
②Be happy to be healthy.（祈使句）
12．（2024·浙江衢州·一模）假如你是李华，你的英国笔友Michael刚度过“考试周 (the exam week)”。他想了解你在考试后通常做些什么来调整自己。请你给他写一封邮件，分享你考试后的感受和做法。
内容要点 参考词汇
Feelings relaxed/worried/…
Things to do play basketball with friends/go for a walk with parents/…
注意：
(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名等信息；
(2)词数：90-110；
(3)表格中参考词汇仅供选择使用，可适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯。
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【答案】例文
Dear Michael,
How are you doing these days I know that you have just taken some important exams. There is something that I want to share with you about how to adjust ourselves after exams.
Although I reviewed all the subjects carefully before exams, I was still not confident about the results of exams. I felt worried. I realized that I had to deal with it. I decided to play basketball with friends in order to make me relaxed and be active in going for a walk with parents. Besides, I also shared my feelings with my parents so
that they could give me some useful advice.
I’m looking forward to your letter.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：一般现在时与一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，并适当添加细节，突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，分享自己考试后的感受和做法。
[亮点词汇]
①deal with应对
②decide to do决定做
③in order to为了
[高分句型]
①There is something that I want to share with you about how to adjust ourselves after exams.（定语从句）
13．（23-24九年级下·浙江杭州·阶段练习）假定你是学生李平，你的英国交换生Adam在回国后给你写了一封邮件，请你用英语进行回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hi Li Ping, I hope you’re doing well. Since returning to the UK, I become more interested in learning Chinese. However, I’m facing some difficulties. How can I write Chinese well How can I use four main tones (声调) correctly when I speak Chinese Could you offer me some advice to improve these skills Your help would mean a lot. I hope to hear from you soon! Best, Adam
Hi Adam,
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Best regards,
Li Ping
【答案】例文：
Hi Adam,
I’m glad to hear from you! It’s great that you start learning Chinese and it’s common to have some challenges.
I think it is necessary for you to practice regularly to improve writing skills. Using language apps can also help a lot. For mastering tones, you can listen to native speakers actively and repeat after them. Having conversations with them will also improve your spoken skills.
Feel free to ask me any time if needed. Your progress is impressive, and I’m here to offer support.
Best regards,
Li Ping
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”；
③提示：分析来信可知，写作重点是对于“如何把中文书写得更好”和“说中文时的正确运用声调”两方面给出自己的建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明学中文遇到问题很正常；
第二步，从“书写”和“声调”两方面给出自己的建议；
第三步，评价并支持对方学中文。
[亮点词汇]
①hear from 收到来信
②practice regularly 经常练习
③have conversations with 与某人对话
[高分句型]
①It’s great that you start learning Chinese and it’s common to have some challenges.（it作形式主语）
②Feel free to ask me any time if needed.（if引导条件状语从句）
14．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）假如你是李华，收到加拿大笔友Mike的邮件，请阅读邮件并回复。词数80左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
To: lihua@
From: mike2010@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Li Hua， How’s it going I hope everything is OK with you. I hear that your junior high school life is coming to an end. How have you changed since you started junior high Do you have any special memories How do you like your teachers and classmates Looking forward to your reply!Mike
To: mike2010@
From: lihua@
Subject: My Life in Junior High School
Dear Mike, I’m glad to hear from you. _________________________________________________________________________ Li Hua
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【答案】例文
Dear Mike,
I’m glad to hear from you. My life in junior high is colorful and I’ve changed a lot. First, I have become better at solving problems. Besides, I have become more confident. I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons. However, with the help of my teachers and classmates. I’ve made great progress.
The past three years has also left me warm memories. I remember falling down in a running race in Grade 8. My friend helped me stand up and encouraged me to finish the race.
I value my life in junior high!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③ 提示：根据邮件问题所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的近况；
第二步，介绍上初中以来的变化和特别的记忆；
第三步，书写小结。
[亮点词汇]
① be worried that担心
② with the help of在……帮助下
③ encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事
[高分句型]
I was worried that I couldn’t do well in my lessons.（宾语从句）
15．（2024·浙江·一模）如今，青少年的娱乐方式与他们父母辈小时候的娱乐方式大有不同，某英文报观点专栏就此向全国中小学生征稿。请你写一篇英语短文投稿，简要描述图片内容，谈谈你的看法并提出建议，让青少年通过阅读这篇文章有所启发。
注意：（1）词数：110左右；
（2）开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。
With the development of society, teenagers’ recreation has also changed. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
With the development of society, teenagers’ recreation has also changed.
From picture 1, we can see some children playing outside in the past. In picture 2, a boy is playing computer games. He’s surrounded by all kinds of electronics. In the past, children always had a good time, but now the teenagers always feel lonely.
Nowadays, with the development of technology, there are many after-school entertainment activities. We should choose some activities that are good for our health. We had better balance the time between exercising and playing on the computer.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据所给图片完成写作，给出自己的建议，注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题；
第二步，具体描述画面中的内容，并对比过去和现在的娱乐方式；
第三步，表达自己的看法和建议。
[亮点词汇]
①see sb doing sth看见某人正在做某事
②play computer games玩电脑游戏
③have a good time玩得开心
④had better最好
[高分句型]
①We should choose some activities that are good for our health.（that引导的定语从句）
16．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）随着科技的发展，智能化应用软件如“作业帮”、”小猿搜题”、“文心一言”等正不断深入教学领域，在赋能教学的同时也不断挑战着我们的认知。上周五的主题班会同学们就此展开了激烈的讨论, 请根据表格提示描述正反两方观点，并表明你站在哪一方，且陈述理由。
Some think Others think My opinion
1. save much time 2. act like patient teachers 1. more screen time 2. be poorer in problem solving ...
注意: (1) 必须包含所有要点，可适当拓展。
(2) 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名。
(3) 词数80-100；首句已给，不计入总词数。
Last Friday, we had a heated discussion on whether the Apps like “Zuoyebang”, ”Wenxinyiyan”, and the like can truly help us in study.
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【答案】One possible version:
Last Friday, we had a heated discussion on whether the Apps like “Zuoyebang”, “Wenxinyiyan”, and the like can truly help us in study.
Some think we can save much time by using them. Once we have problems, we needn’t take time to look for someone for help. Instead, we can use Apps anytime and anywhere. What’s more, such Apps act like patient teachers and never get fed up with anyone. Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often. Moreover, we might be poorer in problem solving if we rely more on Apps.
After entering junior school, my parents can’t help me with my study any longer. Unlike humans, Apps never get angry with us. So I agree that we can use them for help.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，介绍正反两方的观点；
第三步，介绍自己的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①save节省
②take time to do sth.花时间做某事
③get fed up with…对……感到厌烦
④screen time屏幕时间
⑤rely on依靠
⑥not…any longer不再……
[高分句型]
Others think we will have more screen time if we use them often.(省略that的宾语从句；if引导条件状语从句)
17．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者项目的报名通道现已开启! 假如你是李华，请根据下方赛事官方的报名要求，写一篇英语短文作为你的申请信。
PARIS 2024 VOLUNTEER PROGRAMME
Conditions to Be A Volunteer※Be at least 14 years old. ※Speak French or English well. ※Have at least one volunteer experience and tell us about it. ※Tell us what you can do to help. ※Tell us your hope for Paris 2024.
注意：
（1）短文必须包括所有要点，并适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的人名和校名；
（3）词数：80—100；
（4）书信开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Paris 2024,
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Paris 2024,
I’m Li Hua, a 16-year-old boy from China. I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.
I can speak English very well. I have taken part in several English speech contests in the past three years. Besides, I have some volunteer experiences. For example, I was a volunteer at the 19th Asian Games in 2023. I
helped many foreign visitors and athletes. If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.
Last but not least, I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“自己补充”内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出请求：希望加入2024年巴黎奥运会（Paris 2024）志愿者；
第二步，具体介绍自己申请加入的目的、原因、优势、打算等内容；
第三步，书写结语，希望能通过申请。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②in the past three years在过去的三年里
③become a member of成为……的成员
④be able to能
[高分句型]
①I think I am qualified to be a volunteer for you next summer.（省略that的宾语从句）
②If I become a member of you, I could help organize activities or check tickets.（if引导的条件状语从句）
③I sincerely hope that everyone will be able to share exciting moments and unforgettable memories!（that引导的宾语从句）
18．（23-24九年级下·浙江湖州·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你所在的村庄有幸荣获“中国美丽休闲乡村”的荣誉。为更好地服务游客，正在招募志愿者担任导游。请你根据以下提示，用英语给负责人赵先生写一封自荐信，报名成为一名志愿者导游。

写作要求：1.要点齐全，语句通顺，语法正确，书写规范；
2.可适当增加细节，以使行文流；
3.100词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Mr. Zhao,
I’m glad to hear that some volunteer guides are wanted in our village. I am writing to apply for this position.
I’m a Junior 3 student, who was born in the village. I believe I am fit for the position. I’m polite and outgoing. So I am confident that I can show the visitors around our village and introduce it to them patiently. Besides, I speak good English and I have no difficulty communicating with foreigners. What’s more, as a local villager, I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce it to foreign guests.
Thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意要介绍自己的性格和特长，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，说明你想报名成为一名志愿者导游；
第二步，具体介绍自己的所在年级、性格、特长等；
第三步，书写结语。感谢对方的考虑。
[亮点词汇]
①fit合适的
②confident自信的
③besides此外
④what’s more而且
[高分句型]
①I’m a Junior 3 student, who was born in the village.（who引导的定语从句）
②I believe I am fit for the position.（省略that的宾语从句）
③I am sure my knowledge will prove helpful when I introduce it to foreign guests.（省略that的宾语从句，when引导的时间状语从句）
19．（2024·浙江湖州·一模）假如你是李华，交换生Peter即将来你校学习，他对你校的社团活动很感兴趣。请根据以下信息，用英文写一封电子邮件，向他推荐一个你参加过的社团。
提示词语: take part in , improve, benefit
提示问题: What club did you join
What did you do in the club
Why do you recommend the club
注意：
(1) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息；
(2) 内容须包含以上内容，可适当发挥；
(3) 词数：80-100词。短文首句仅供参考，不计入总词数。
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school!
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Peter,
Welcome to our school! I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. I, as a basketball lover, highly recommend you join the “BasketballClub”. This club provides a platform for us students to improve their basketball skills and build up our bodies. With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth.
Looking forward to seeing you at our club and I will actively take part in the activities together with you during your stay. Wish you a pleasant stay at our school!
Best wishes,
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Peter,
I’m glad to hear the exciting news recently that you will be coming to our school as an exchange student! As an experienced student who took part in various activities, I would like to recommend the “Science Club” to you.
We can learn science knowledge through various lectures here. We also have the chance to work on several exciting projects, which can not only enrich our learning experience but also develop our team work and leadership skills.
Looking forward to your arrival and I'm sure you’ll find it both educational and fun. If you have any questions or need more information, feel free to ask.
Best regards,
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】范文一：
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出作者向Peter推荐的社团；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。作者讲述参加社团的收获及推荐该社团的原因；
第三步，书写结语。作者表达了希望Peter来参加他们的俱乐部并一起参加活动的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in 对……感兴趣
②provide sth. for sb. 为某人提供某物
③not only…but also 不仅……而且
④take part in 参加(活动)
[高分句型]
①I’m glad to hear that you are interested in our school clubs. (宾语从句)；
②With various matches every term, we have not only received professional training there, but also developed organization abilities, which are beneficial for my personal growth. (介词短语；定语从句)
20．（2024·浙江宁波·一模）中国人一直为古代的四大发明感到骄傲。如今，新的四大发明——高铁、电子支付、共享单车、网上购物再次影响着人们的生活，请你写一篇英语短文，向外国友人介绍其中一项你认为最重要的新四大发明并说明理由，帮助外国友人更好地了解中国。
注意：(1)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等；
(2)词数：80—100（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”.
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【答案】例文：
Now China has once again shown its ability to change the world with its “four great new inventions”. They are high-speed railways, electronic payments, shared bicycles and online shopping. I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways. Here are my reasons:
Firstly, high-speed railways are safe. They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather. Secondly, the services are wonderful. They use advanced technology to make passengers feel comfortable. Thirdly, they are nearly as fast as planes. The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time. With high-speed railway, you can go anywhere in China now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题干中的要求，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“新四大发明”来引出下文中对高铁的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“更安全、服务好、速度快和准时”四方面入手，重点介绍高铁；
③第三步，书写结语。高铁有利出行。
[亮点词汇]
①so that 以便
②in case of 以防
③on time 准时
[高分句型]
①I think the most important innovation is high-speed railways.（宾语从句）
②They use electronic information to monitor the on-going driving so that they can avoid some terrible things even in case of bad weather.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
③The most important thing is that you don’t have to stay at the station for a long time because high-speed railways are always on time.（that引导的表语从句+because引导的原因状语从句）