Unit 6 Outdoor fun 满分范文（含解析）

Unit 6 Outdoor fun
单元满分范文必背
1．请根据以下提示，以 “My Favorite Outdoor Activity” 为题，写一篇不少于60词的英语短文。
(1) 我最喜欢的户外运动是野营；
(2) 原因：省钱，对健康有益；待在户外可以欣赏美丽的湖光山色；
(3) 曾经 (once) 有一次在海边野营……
(4) 本周末如果有空，我打算邀请我的几个好友一起去野营。
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
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【答案】例文：
My Favorite Outdoor Activity
My favorite outdoor activity is camping. It’s very cheap and it’s good for my health. I can stay outside and enjoy the beautiful lakes and hills.
Once, I went camping by the sea. The sunrise was so beautiful. I enjoyed nice food and drinks. The camping really brought me a lot of fun. If I am free this weekend, I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自己最喜欢的户外活动是野营；
第二步，介绍自己喜欢野营的原因；
第三步，分享自己的一次野营经历与接下来的野营计划。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of 很多
②go camping 去野营
[高分句型]
①It’s very cheap and it’s good for my health.（and连接并列句）
②If I am free this weekend, I will invite my good friends to go camping with me.（if引导条件状语从句）
2．请根据下面的故事梗概，发挥想象力，以“Two little pigs”为题写一则小故事。要求：80个词左右。
时间：从前
地点：森林里
人物：幸福的猪妈妈和两只小猪
情节：两只小猪长大了，猪妈妈决定让他们走出森林，到城市里看一看……
Two little pigs
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【答案】例文
Two little pigs
Once upon a time, there were two little pigs. One was black and the other was white. They lived happily with their mother in the forest. When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city. And then they left home with some food. When they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy. So they returned to the forest and enjoyed their life.
【详解】[总体分析]
题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
提示：故事梗概已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，借用“简单介绍两只小猪”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从“时间、地点、人物、情节等”几个方面重点介绍两只小猪的具体情况；
第三步，书写结语，表达“它们享受着它们的生活”。
[亮点词汇]
①once upon a time以前
②grow up长大
③enjoy one’s life享受某人的生活
[高分句型]
①When they grew up, their mother decided to let them go out of the forest and look around the city.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②When they got to the city, they noticed people in the city were not really happy.（when引导的时间状语从句）
3．假如你是约翰，上周你的学校举行了风筝节（Kite Festival），请用英语写一封电子邮件把你的经历告诉你的笔友爱德华。词数80左右(已给出的部分不计入总词数)。
提示：
1.上周我们在黄山湖公园（the Huangshan Lake Park）举行了风筝节；
2.我们花了一小时走到公园。进入公园后，我们朝沙滩走去；
3.抬头一看，天上有很多风筝在飞。我们从包里拿出了风筝；
4.一些同学在湖边放风筝，另一些在树下搭起了帐篷；
5.我们还享用了很多美食。我们……
注意：第5点必须要用2至3句话展开合理想象，作适当发挥。
Dear Edward,
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All the best.
John
【答案】例文
Dear Edward,
Last week, we held the Kite Festival in the Huangshan Lake Park. It took us an hour to walk to the park. After entering the park, we walked towards the beach. We looked up and saw many kites flying in the sky. We took the kites out of our bags. Some students flew kites near the lake, and others put up tents under the tree. We also enjoyed lots of delicious food. We found it interesting to fly kites. Also, we had a picnic there. We had a good time there.
All the best.
John
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要用一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按照所给提示，介绍我们怎么到达黄山湖公园，同学们是如何游玩的；
第二步， 展开合理想象，对除写作提示部分外的部分进行补充；
第三步，书写结束用语。
[亮点词汇]
①put up建造，搭建
②enjoy享受
③also也
[高分句型]
①It took us an hour to walk to the park. （it+takes/took+时间+to do sth.）
②We found it interesting to fly kites. （it作形式宾语）
4．经常参加户外活动对我们的身心都大有好处。请你根据下列内容提示，用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，第4点可适当发挥1—2句。短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。
内容提示：1.上周日，你与同学们一起去野营；
2.你们在湖边搭了帐篷，老师教你们如何生火；
3.你忘记带午餐盒（lunchbox），同学们与你分享午餐，大家一起在树下享受美食和饮料；
4.这次活动带给你……
Taking part in outdoor activities is really wonderful. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
Taking part in outdoor activities is really wonderful. Last Sunday I went camping with my classmates. We put up tents beside the lake. Our teacher taught us how to make a fire. I forgot to take my lunchbox but my classmates were happy to share their food with me. We enjoyed lots of nice food and drinks together under the tree. This camping really brought us a lot of fun and we learned to help each other when having problems. I’m looking forward to another fun day now.
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据内容提示介绍自己上周末参加的一次野营活动，要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点。
2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称为主，时态采用一般过去时。可采用一段式写作，根据提示内容讲述自己的经历，并表明这次活动给自己带来了什么。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
5．忙碌了一周的你在周末会做些什么来放松呢？陪伴家人，培养爱好和服务社会……这些都是很好的选择。请你写一篇英语短文，介绍一下你的周末安排。
要求：1. 中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范；
2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名；
3. 词数不少于60。
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【答案】例文：
After a busy week, I really want to enjoy myself a lot at the weekend.
My weekend will be busy and meaningful. First, my friends and I are going to collect litter in the park nearby because it can be good for our environment. Then, having a football match with Class Three is another interesting activity. We are going to play hard. I am sure our team will win. At last, the weekend will be a great time for family to get together, so I will visit my grandparents and tell them my colorful school life. Usually, on Sunday evening I do my homework, but this weekend I will help my mother with the housework. It’s my duty to do something for my family.
I am looking forward to the weekend. It’s going to be great fun for me.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
②时态：以 “一般将来时” 为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍周末计划；
第三步，表达对周末的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①enjoy oneself 玩得愉快
②be good for 对……有好处
③at last 最后
[高分句型]
①First, my friends and I are going to collect litter in the park nearby because it can be good for our environment.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Then, having a football match with Class Three is another interesting activity.（动名词作主语）
6．每逢周末，人们都希望做一些开心的事情来放松自己。上周末，彼得一家做了些什么事呢？请根据表格中的内容提示，以“The Weekend of Peter’s Family”为题写一篇短文。
Who Where What
Peter’s parents 去超市 购买蔬菜
Peter’s sister 去公园 和朋友一起放风筝
Peter 去电影院 和朋友一起看电影
要求：
1. 不少于60词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实的校名或人名；
3. 包含所有的要点，可以适当发挥。
The Weekend of Peter’s Family
Peter’s family had a happy weekend last week. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Weekend of Peter’s Family
Peter’s family had a happy weekend last week. Peter’s parents were busy. They went to the supermarket and they bought a lot of fresh vegetables in it. His sister went to the park and flew a kite with her friends there. She said it was exciting. What did Peter do Peter went to the cinema and watched a movie with his friends. The movie was interesting.
They were very busy but they felt happy on the weekend.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，上下文连贯，条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，总体表达周末大家的情况；
第二步，分别介绍每个人的活动；
第三步，总结大家的周末又忙碌又开心。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of很多
②on the weekend周末
[高分句型]
①She said it was exciting.（宾语从句）
②What did Peter do （特殊疑问句）
7．假定你是李华，请根据图片提示，向你的笔友Lisa介绍你刚刚度过的繁忙的周末。
要求：
1. 语言表达要准确，语意要通顺、连贯；
2. 词数70词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Lisa,
I’d like to tell you something about my weekend.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Lisa,
I’d like to tell you something about my weekend. On Saturday morning, I cleaned my room. In the afternoon, I flew kites with my friends in the park. We had great fun. After dinner, I had to finish my homework. On Sunday morning, I helped my mother do the dishes. In the afternoon, I played soccer with my cousins. I watched TV with my parents after dinner.
Though I was quite busy, I had a great weekend.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信，属于看图作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：信件开头以及要点已经给出，按照图片提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接信件开头，引出话题；
第二步，按照图片提示介绍周六和周日两天是如何度过的，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，表达感想并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have great fun玩得很愉快
②help sb do sth帮助某人做某事
③do the dishes洗碗
[高分句型]
①Though I was quite busy, I had a great weekend.（though引导让步状语从句）
8．假如你是学校报刊的小记者李华，你采访了同学们上周末的活动情况，下面是你收到的周末调查表之一，请根据以下表格内容介绍Lisa的个人信息以及上周末活动情况。
写作要点：
Name Lisa
Age 12
Country Canada
Appearance tall and thin，long curly hair
Hobby like telling stories
Last weekend Activities go to a farm feed chickens milk a cow take some photos...
Traffic by car
Lunch tomato and beef noodles
Weather sunny and hot
Feeling tired but happy
写作要求：1. 文章必须包括所给信息要点，结构完整，语句流畅，行文连贯，可适当发挥；
2. 文章的开头已经给出（不计入总词数），你只需接着写，书写规范；
3. 词数在60字左右，文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名。
We did some weekend surveys. Here is Lisa’s survey result. She ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
We did some weekend surveys. Here is Lisa’s survey result. She is twelve years old. She is from Canada. She’s tall and thin. And he has long curly hair. She likes telling stories.
Last weekend it was sunny and hot. She went to a farm with her parents by car. She had a good time there. Lisa fed chickens, milked a cow, rode a horse and took some photos in the morning. They ate tomato and beef noodles for lunch on the farm. In the afternoon they came home. She felt tired but happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”，描写Lisa的个人信息时使用一般现在时，叙述上周末活动情况用一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中的提示要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接描写“我”们周末做了一些调查。这是Lisa的调查结果。（文章已给出）；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，从年龄、国籍、外貌和爱好等方面来介绍Lisa，然后叙述上周末活动情况；
第三步，书写总结。对上周末活动情况作一下总结，表达感受（累并快乐着）。
[亮点词汇]
①like doing sth.喜欢做某事
②have a good time玩得愉快
③take some photos拍照
④ate tomato and beef noodles for lunch午餐吃番茄牛肉面
[高分句型]
①She’s tall and thin. And she has long curly hair.（描述外貌的句型）
②Lisa fed chickens, milked a cow, rode a horse and took some photos in the morning.（几个并列的动词短语共同作谓语）
9．英语课上，同学们讨论上周末的活动情况。假如你是李华，请根据下面的表格提示，以“My Weekend”为题，在班上用英语介绍你上周末的活动。
周六 上午 做作业，看书
下午 练钢琴，…… (至少1点)
晚上 在电脑上看部新电影
周日 上午 和朋友踢足球
下午 购物，…… (至少1点)
感受 …… (至少1点)
要求：
1. 用上所给的要点，并适当发挥。
2. 书写认真，行文流畅，语句通顺。
3. 词数70左右。
My Weekend
Hi, everyone. I’m Li Hua.
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【答案】例文
My Weekend
Hello, everyone. I’m Li Hua. I had a great weekend.
On Saturday morning, I did my homework and read books. In the afternoon, I practiced playing the piano. And then I cleaned my room. In the evening, I watched a new movie on computer. It was interesting. On Sunday morning, I played soccer with my friends. We were happy. On Sunday afternoon, I went shopping with my friends. We bought milk, vegetables and fruit. After that I helped my mother cook dinner. The food was delicious!
What a happy weekend I had!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出本文“度过了一个很棒的周末”的主题；
第二步，介绍周末的活动；
第三步，发表自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①practice doing sth练习做某事
②play soccer with sb与某人踢足球
[高分句型]
What a happy weekend I had!（感叹句）
10．每周六你都会和爸爸妈妈一起打扫小区，今天邻居Kelly也加入了你们的活动。请你根据以下表格内容写一篇日记。
时间 周六上午
地点 小区
志愿者 爸爸、妈妈、你和Kelly
活动内容 清扫小区路上的落叶(fallen leaves)；捡草丛中的垃圾(rubbish)；把共享单车(shared bikes)摆放整齐(put...in order)…
活动感受 ……
要求：
1.包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯；
3.80词左右。
Saturday April 21st Sunny
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【答案】例文:
Saturday April 21st Sunny
Every Saturday, my parents and I clean up our neighborhood. Today Kelly volunteered to join us. This cheered us up.
We started doing some cleaning in the morning. First, we cleaned the fallen leaves on the road. Then we picked up all the rubbish in the grass. After that, I found that shared bikes were here and there. So we put them in order.
We spent two hours cleaning our neighborhood. I felt very tired but happy. I also got a feeling of satisfaction.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，介绍本次活动的详情，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍本次活动的时间、地点、人物；
第二步，具体介绍本次活动的内容；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②cheer sb up使某人振奋
③pick up捡起
④spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
I found that shared bikes were here and there.（that引导的宾语从句）