2024年中考英语二轮复习指导 书面表达（含答案）

书面表达
一、题材：（短文）近几年的中考书面表达的题材大致为
（1）与中学生学习有关的题材
（2）与中学生日常生活有关的题材
（3）与中学生交际有关的题材
二、评分标准
要求文章切题并有所发挥；
上下文连贯、用词造句流畅、表达得体；
词汇的用量符合要求，拼写、书写格式和标点符号准确。
总分15分，基本上是6 + 6 + 3，即 “内容 + 准确性 + 流畅性”
（内容分主要考查文章主题是否明确、内容是否紧扣命题、语言是否精炼。语言分主要考查学生
单词的拼写能力、标点符号的使用、句子语法的运用是否正确等。结构分主要考查学生是否能熟
练恰当地运用所学单词、词组和各类句型,行文是否流畅,衔接是否合理）
三、解题技巧
1. 认真审题，明确要求
（1）写作:运用最有把握的句型和结构
写作前先仔细审题, 确定题材。分析题目与要求,搞清题意及写作格式。研究题目要求与关键词或要点提
示之间的关系,确定主题、中心思想和要写的主要内容以及写作思路与框架。
（格式：记叙文；说明文；议论文；日记；书信等）
（2）确定文章的时态。注意时态前后一致,动笔之前根据题意把需要的句型、动词短语等罗列出来备用。
（3）确定人称。动笔前确定是第一人称还是第三人称。
（4）审读提示中所交代的的时间、地点、人物及人物关系。
2. 依据要点，草拟提纲。列出各要点所用的单词、短语及句式。
3. 扩展成句，连句成篇。注意时态、语态；注意句与句，段与段间的衔接。
4. 仔细检查，认真修改。
从语法角度。拼写、名词、代词、数和格是否正确。
从句法角度。动词时态语态是否正确，主谓是否一致
从语篇角度。
5. 认真书写，讲究规范。（“印象分”）
四、文章结构：
文章分3段：
（1）综述：概括性强，最多2句话引入主题；
（2）正文——主要内容：层次性强，一定要有过渡型连接词。
（3）结尾：紧扣主题，2句话内结束，尽量升华。
常用句式：
一、开头用语：
A. Just as every coin has two sides, cars have both advantages and disadvantages．
B. As we all know, computers have played an important part in our daily life.
C. With the development of internet… more and more popular…
D. As a student
E. as an old saying goes….
二、句式：
1.too...to...
He is very young. he can’t go to school.
He is too young to go to school.
2.so...that...
He is very clever. He can work out the problem.
He is so clever that he can work it out the problem.
He is clever enough to work out the problem.
3.not only...but also...
She not only plays well, but also writes music.
她不仅很会演奏，而且还会作曲。
4.It has many advantages . First, 优点1… Besides, 优点2…
5.However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influences.
On the one hand, 缺点1…
On the other hand, 缺点2…
6. It is important（easy, hard, possible, good, bad…）for sb. to do sth.
三、连词：
1)表层次:
first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly,
what is more, last, also, and then, next, besides
At first; at last; in the end…
finally；On one hand ....on the other hand；each/one coin has two sides
2)表转折：
but, however, though, although, after all, fortunately，unfortunately，at the same time…
3)表递近：
in addition, besides, what’s more
4)因果
because, so, because of, thanks to, due to, for, thus
5)例证
for example, such as
6)表示利弊的：
be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.;
7)表示喜爱的：
love/like/enjoy…; be interested in…; show great interest in…;
8)总结
As I see, As we all know, in general, generally speaking, I think..., in fact , in a word
四、作文万能句式
I will work hard to make my dream come true.
I hope your dream will come true one day.
It takes sb. +时间+to do…
Sb. spend（某种人称时态）+时间/钱+on sth./ (in) doing sth.
It’s important/necessary/useful/useless/common…(for sb.) to do…
It’s nice/kind of sb. to do..
It’s time for sb. to do sth.
It seems/seemed that…
It is said that…
too + adj./adv. to do
【练一练】
良好的饮食习惯是健康成长的保证。请你以Good Eating Habits, Good Health为题，并根据下表提示（可以适当补充内容），用英语写一篇不少于80个词的作文谈谈你的看法（开头已经给出，但不计算在内）
Good Eating Habits, Good Health
不良习惯 不吃早餐；爱吃零食；偏食；饮食过量
良好习惯 饮食多样化；饮食定时定量
个人看法 （请补充个人看法）
“Good eating habits lead to good health.”____________________________________________________________
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【范文】
“Good eating habits lead to good health.” So it’s very important for us to form healthy eating habits. However, many students still have bad eating habits. Many students still have bad eating habits. Some go to school without breakfast; some like to eat snacks all the time; someone always like to eat the same food or eat and drink too much. All these habits are bad for our health.
To keep fit, we should eat all kinds of healthy foods: rice, fish, meat, vegetables and fruit. Besides, we had better have meals at the right time.
In my opinion, we should develop healthy eating habits to make ourselves stonger.