专题六　书面表达 课件(共113张PPT) 2024年中考英语二轮专题复习（广东专版）

(共113张PPT)
第三部分　专题训练
专题六　书面表达
书面表达的命题要求词数为80个左右,词数过多或过少都会影响得分。书面表达综合考查学生运用所学的知识进行输出的能力,要求学生能够根据要点组织语篇。近几年,深圳市书面表达考查内容的主要特点是:以学生熟悉的生活题材为主,不考查格式,文章的开头和结尾通常都会给出,考生只要写出正文即可。随着英语试卷的改革,书面表达的分值提升到15分。
一、认真审题,列出要点。
审题时确定作文的时态、人称、文体及要点。要点用简单的英语单词或短语标注出来。
二、根据要点,有效表达。
写作文的过程中切记不可遗漏要点。多用熟悉的句型,避免语法错误,不熟悉的词句可用同义词或同义句替换。熟练运用各种衔接和过渡的语言,比如常见的副词、连词、介词短语等,使整篇文章结构完整、自然流畅。
三、仔细检查书写和拼写。
如果书写的版面较乱,会影响作文得分,所以切记保持卷面整洁。另外要检查句子表达是否流畅,语法是否有误,单词拼写、大小写和标点符号是否正确,以及词数是否符合要求。
四、作文评分标准
第五档(13-15分):很好地完成了试题规定的任务,完全达到了预期的写作目的,覆盖所有的内容要点,用了丰富的语法结构,语法与高级词汇有少许错误,全篇流畅,连词使用较好。
第四档(10-12分):完全完成试题规定的任务,达到了预期的写作目的,写漏了一两个要点,语法和词汇基本正确,有少许错误,主要是想使用高级词汇与复杂句子所致。
第三档(7-9分):大错(时态、句子结构等)超过五六处,不能及格;写漏了一些内容,但覆盖了主要要点,基本上让人能够看懂,基本达到预期目的。
第二档(4- 6分):未适当完成试题规定的任务,有要点,但表达不清晰,只有一些句子可读。
第一档(1-3分):未完成试题规定的任务,只是一些字词的堆积,不成句,让读者根本不明白写什么。白卷或抄袭来自试卷中的句子给0分。

Ⅳ.书面表达(15分) (2023·深圳市中考)
你是李华,你学校的外籍教师Mr Brown打算招募志愿者迎接新西兰教育团,来介绍学校的智慧校园建设成果。你打算参加,请写一封自荐信,包含以下要点内容:
　　1.你的个人优势
(1)你熟知智慧校园,例如教师和学生可在教室上网;
(2)你喜欢与人交流;
(3)你擅长英语;
(4)……(自行补充)
2.你期待的收获
3.你希望获得机会
注意:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
Dear Mr Brown,
　 Learning that the New Zealand Education Group is coming to our school,I am writing to____________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________　
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
【解析】
审题:
　　初步判断本次书面表达的写作题材、找准关键词、提炼关键信息、确定写作的时态和人称。
1.写作题材:自荐信
2.关键词:招募志愿者(volunteer)、智慧学校(smart campus)等等
3.①主体时态:一般现在时(叙述事实)
②辅助时态:一般将来时(期待的收获部分可以用一般将来时,也可以通篇使用一般现在时,两种写法均可)
4.人称:第一人称(我:李华)
5.难度系数:中等
套用词组句型:
自荐(volunteer to serve as / recommend oneself)
擅长(be good at)
熟知(be familiar with…)
期待(expect to do…/ look forward to doing…)
参考范文:
Dear Mr Brown,
　 Learning that The New Zealand Education Group is coming to our school,I am writing to recommend oneself as a volunteer.
　 First of all,not only do I have the qualifications for this job,but I also have the right personality.I am familiar with smart campus in which teachers and students can surf the Internet freely.Besides,I enjoy communicating with others and I am good at English,in which I could introduce our school to our visitors fluently and effectively.Last but not least,I have rich experience in volunteering for similar events,which improves my personal ability.
If I am chosen as a volunteer,I will seize this precious opportunity and try my best to introduce our Smart Campus,I’m glad to contribute to our school.I believe that I will gain a lot of knowledge about New Zealand and harvest a lot.It will be a valuable and unforgettable experience for me.
　 Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to your reply.
Your sincerely,
Li Hua
一、书面表达 (2022·深圳市中考)
假定你是李华,你和同学们拍了一个毕业活动视频,打算做成视频日志(vlog),参加主题为“青春飞扬”的国际中学生vlog作品展。请给该视频写一段解说词。
内容包括:1.海边活动:
下午:①沙滩排球;②……
晚上:搭帐篷;聚餐和清理垃圾;分享会。
2.活动感言。
注意:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);
2.要点齐全,可适当发挥;
3.不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
参考词汇:冲浪surf　帐篷tent
　 Hi,everyone! I am Li Hua.It’s my great pleasure to present my vlog to you.
　 Last Saturday,we went to the seaside to celebrate our graduation.In the afternoon, __________________________________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　 So much for my video.I hope you have enjoyed it.Thank you.
we had a beach volleyball game.Then,we enjoyed the fun of surfing.Before dark,we picked up the litter on the beach.How meaningful it was! At night,we put up two tents and had a picnic.The food cooked by us was so delicious.Finally,all of us shared our feelings about this fantastic experience.Not only can it promote our friendship,but also it leaves us a valuable experience.
二、(2021·深圳市中考)
深圳是一座科技之城、创新之城,为培养学生对科技的兴趣,你的学校上周举办了科技节。假定你是你校英语报的小记者,请你编写一篇新闻报道,介绍这次活动。
要点:1.活动目的
2.活动项目:①模型制作比赛;②……
3.活动亮点:学生发明的服务于校园的机器人(外表、功能)
4.学生感受
提示词:1.科技节 science festival　2.实验 experiment
Shenzhen is well-known as a city of technology and innovation.Last week,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
our school held a science festival,which aimed to develop students’ interest in science and technology and broaden their horizons.
During the festival,some students took an active part in the model-making competition.Many of their robots,which were the highlight of the festival,drew people’s attention.These robots were in the shape of lovely animals,such as rabbits,monkeys and dogs.They were doing some simple tasks like sweeping the floor and throwing away rubbish.Besides,some other students did science experiments.The students present at the festival were all surprised at the exhibits and gave them a big round of applause.　
Our school hopes that more and more students can learn science and technology better to serve our country.
三、(2020·深圳市中考)
深圳市正在争创全国文明城市,假定你是鹏城中学学生会主席,希望同学们为“创文”做出自己的贡献。请你按照所提示的要点,代表学生会写一篇倡议书。
环境保护 ①垃圾分类;②绿色出行
公益慈善 ①志愿服务;②……
人际交往 ①诚信友善;②……
要求:1.词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.必须包括以上全部要点,可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
提示词:分类 sort out　志愿者volunteer　贡献 contribution
Dear friends,
　 As we know,Shenzhen is working hard to win the title of China’s National Civilized City. _____________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　 All in all,Shenzhen is our home.It’s time to take action.
The Student Union
July 20,2020
And now it is a good opportunity for us to make our own contribution.　
　 Firstly,more changes in our daily life,such as sorting out the rubbish and travelling in a greener way can be made to protect the city environment.What’s more,to make Shenzhen a loving city,we are also supposed to help those in need by doing some voluntary work or raising donations.Last but not least,get along with others in an honest and friendly way.We’d better avoid talking about others’ privacy if we want to show our respect.　
　 I strongly believe that we will make Shenzhen a more civilized and beautiful city with our joint efforts.　
话题一　计划与成长
(一)
假如你是深圳的一名初中生李磊,你的英国笔友Lily给你发邮件表示对你校的劳动课程很感兴趣并想要进一步了解。请你根据以下提示,用英文给她回一封电子邮件。
要点:1.开设目的:劳动光荣、养成良好劳动习惯;
2.劳动课程内容:剪纸、做家务;
3.你认为劳动课程的益处。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:______________　　　　　　　　
文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
想要做某事__________________________
与某人分享某事__________________________
设立课程__________________________　
众所周知;正如我们所知__________________________
劳动光荣__________________________　　　　　　　　　　　
养成好的劳动习惯__________________________　
各种各样的__________________________
剪纸__________________________
学会做某事_________________________________
教某人做某事_______________________________
我认为 / 在我看来____________________________
获得一些生活技能____________________________　
学校生活____________________________________
多彩并且有意义______________________________
通过(做)某事_________________________________
Dear Lily,
　 How is everything going with you Since you are interested in our labour course,I would like to share something about it with you.　
　 As we know,the labour course is set to teach students to respect and honour hard work and form good working habits.In our school,we are offered various Chinese traditional manual training courses,such as paper-cutting.Besides,we learn to do housework in class.The teachers teach us to cook some simple dishes.
　 In my view,through the labour course,we students can acquire some life skills.Meanwhile,our school life will become more colourful and meaningful.　
Yours,
Li Lei
　
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(二) (2023·福田区二模)
为了发展学生兴趣爱好、丰富职业体验,你校成功举办了题为 “Experiencing Future Job” 的职业体验游园活动。学校英文报就此活动展开征文比赛。请你根据以下内容投稿。
要点:1.场景描写:① 多种职业;②……
2.体验描述:① 你的选择;②……
3.体验感悟。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
参考词汇:career职业;game tester游戏测试师;astronaut宇航员;fitness instructor健身教练
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
例如______________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　
等等______________________________　
选择成为___________________________
在活动中 __________________________
知识__________________________
大量的__________________________
交流 __________________________
多么有意义的一次体验! __________________________
下决心做某事__________________________
Last week,the activity “Experiencing Future Job” was held in our school._________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
There were many jobs for us to choose from in the activity,such as teachers,doctors,astronauts,fitness instructors and so on.　
　 With great interest,I chose teaching as my job because I wanted to be a teacher like my mother.I taught my students a lot of knowledge.I also talked with them about their dreams and future lives.It was great fun.　
　 What a meaning experience! When I was with many students,I realized teaching is a great profession.So I am now determined to become a teacher in the future.　
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话题二　环境与安全
(三) (2021·龙华区二模)
假如你是深圳的一名初中生李华,本周你们学校校报的主题是“保护环境,共建绿色家园”,请你根据以下提示写一篇关于环境保护的英语短文,向校报投稿。
要点:1.减少开车出行;
2.减少塑料袋的使用;
3.随手关闭水龙头;
4.你的建议(1~2条)。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.适当增加细节,使行文连贯,条理清晰;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
首先__________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
代替;而不是____________________________　
用这种方法____________________________
减少空气污染____________________________
和 _____________________________________
最好做某事 ____________________________
做某事最好的方法之一 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
为了节省能源____________________________
关水龙头/关灯____________________________
最后但同样重要的是 ____________________________
做某事是个好主意 ____________________________
As the environment becomes worse and worse,_________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　 Let’s build a green home together!
it’s important for us to protect it.What should we do to help solve the problem Here are my suggestions.　
　 First of all,we can travel around on foot or by bike instead of driving a car.In this way,we can reduce air pollution as well as avoid traffic jams.Second,we had better use cloth bags rather than plastic bags when we go shopping.This is one of the best ways to reduce plastic pollution.Third,to save energy,we should turn off the tap when it is not used.At the same time,remember to turn off the light when we leave the room.Last but not least,it is a good idea to plant more trees.Trees can make our earth greener and more beautiful.　
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(四)
假如你是深圳的一名初中生李华。你校决定组织一次安全教育主题班会,请根据以下要点提示,以 “How to Keep Safe” 为题写一篇英文发言稿。
要点:1.注意交通安全,遵守交通规则;
2.注意食品安全,不吃变质的食物;
3.上下楼梯靠右行;不擅自到江河游泳;
4.你对于交友安全的建议(1~2条)。
要求:1.结构完整,要点齐全,可适当发挥;
2.表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;
3.文中不能出现任何真实的人名、校名等信息;
4.词数80左右。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
保护自己　　　　　　　　　　
关于如何做某事的一些建议________________________　
首先______________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
遵守交通规则____________________________________
安全第一______________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　
食品安全______________________________________
垃圾食品　 ______________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　
对我们健康有害__________________________________
上下楼______________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
靠右走______________________________________
记得不要做某事_________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　
应该做某事______________________________________
How to Keep Safe
　 Hello,everyone.Safety is very important for us.We should learn to protect ourselves.Here are some suggestions about how to keep safe.
　 Firstly,we must follow the traffic rules.Remember that safety always comes first.Secondly,we should pay attention to food safety.Be sure not to eat junk food or food that goes bad,for they will do harm to our health.Thirdly,when we go upstairs or downstairs,we should keep to the right.Remember not to swim in the river alone without any permission.What’s more,we are supposed to be careful when making friends online,which may bring us unnecessary trouble.
　 If we get into trouble,we must keep calm and safe first and then call the police,our teachers or parents for help.　
　 In a word,as students,we must always keep safety in mind and value our lives.
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话题三　情感与态度
(五) (2021·福田区二模)
假如你是福田区某学校九年级(3)班学生赵福。你校正在与美国某中学进行线上“感恩文化”主题交流活动。美国学生Mike介绍完“感恩节”的由来后,请你就“我眼中的感恩文化”做一次主题发言。
“感恩”的含义 对帮助过自己的人表示感激、感谢。
地位 中国的感恩文化由来已久。
看法 你对“感恩文化”的看法。
做法 你在日常生活中是如何践行“感恩文化”的(对父母、老师、朋友……)。
要求:1.词数不少于80,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.可适当加入细节,使内容充实、行文连贯;
3.不可出现真实校名及姓名。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
想要做某事________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　
向……表达…… ________________________________
中国文化________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　
例如________________________________
总之　 ________________________________ 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
宝贵的美德 ________________________________
向某人表达谢意________________________________
在……中扮演重要角色________________________________
参考词汇:感恩节 Thanksgiving　感恩文化 a culture of gratitude
Hello,my dear fellows.I am Zhao Fu from Class 3,Grade 9.It’s my great honour to speak here._________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
First,I would like to express my thanks to Mike for his impressive introduction.　
　 In China,gratitude means being thankful to people who have helped us.A culture of gratitude,in fact,has played an important role in Chinese culture for ages.In my opinion,it is necessary for us to express our “thanks” through action.For example,I always listen to the teachers carefully in class as I know how hard my teachers work every day.Besides,I always share some housework in order to make my parents feel relaxed.　
　 In a word,we should remember that being thankful is a valuable virtue.　
　Thank you for listening.　
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(六)
随着人工智能的快速发展,很多传统行业将逐渐被取代。一些传统技艺在消失,同时也导致很多人失业。上周你们班开展了一次班会,讨论是否要保护传统技艺,大家纷纷阐述了自己的观点。请你为学校公众号写一篇英语活动总结。文章需包含以下内容:
时间 上周一早上
地点 班级教室
内容 是否保护传统技艺
各方观点 一些人认为不需要保护传统技艺 一些人认为需要保护传统技艺
原因 1.新事物取代旧事物是必然 2.……(至少补充一点) 1.传统技艺是文化的象征
2.……(至少补充一点)
你的观点 ……
要求:1.词数80左右(开头已经给出,不计入总词数);
2.必须包括以上全部要点,可以适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
4.条理清楚,语句通顺,意义连贯,书写规范。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
进行一场关于……的讨论　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
保护传统技能　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
各人观点不同　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
取代　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
现代工艺　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
有悠久的历史________________________　
历史文化的象征________________________
With the development of AI,some traditional industries are gone.We had a discussion about___________________________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
whether we should protect the traditional skills in our classroom last Monday.Different people have different opinions.　
　 Some classmates think we needn’t protect the traditional skills.It is certain that new skills will replace the old ones.Modern techniques make our life more convenient.But others think we should protect the traditional skills.They are symbols of our history and culture.They have a long history and many people are making a living by them now.　
　In my view,we should protect the typical traditional skills.Meanwhile,we should try our best to develop science and technology as well.　
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话题四　学习与健康
(七) (2021·宝安区二模)
3月底,14岁的深圳神童程大拙被清华大学录取。据了解,程大拙取得优异成绩的关键在于他学习高效。假如你是李华,你将参加学校举行的主题为 “How to Study Efficiently” 的英语演讲比赛。请根据下面的表格提示和要求完成演讲稿。
How to Study Efficiently
高效学习的做法 1.学习专注;
2.良好的自控力;
3.做计划的好习惯和极高的计划执行力;
4.……(至少补充1点)
你对即将中考同学的祝愿 ……
要求:1.必须包括以上提示内容,可适当发挥;
2.条理清楚、行文连贯、标点正确、书面整洁;
3.不得出现个人真实姓名和校名;
4.100词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:专注 fix one’s attention on　自控力 self-control　执行计划 follow the plans
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人称:　　　　　　　　　时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
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成功的秘决__________________________　　　　　　　　　　　
非常重要____________________________　
此外________________________________　
养成做某事的习惯________________________
制订学习计划________________________
进入某人理想的高中_______________________
How to Study Efficiently
Dear fellows,
　 In late March,14-year-old Cheng Dazhuo,a whiz-kid from Shenzhen,was admitted to Tsinghua University.People find that studying efficiently is the key to his success.
　 How can we study efficiently For one thing,we should focus ourselves on classes.If we can’t fix our attention on studies,it’s impossible to work well.For another,having self-control is of great importance.What’s more,we must form a habit of making study plans and follow them exactly.Last but not least,working hard and relaxing also play an important role in studying efficiently.
　 The big exam is drawing near,and I hope that everyone can study efficiently and enter their dream senior high schools.　
That’s all for my speech.Thank you for listening!
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(八)
据悉,我国青少年的近视率居全球第一,70%的学生有视力方面的问题。为引起全社会的重视,教育部于2021年春季已将近视防控纳入中小学日常行为规范,从控制读写时间、控制电子产品的使用、坚持户外运动、保证睡眠时间等方面做了明确规定。近日你校将举行一次以 “Saving Our Eyesight” 为主题的演讲活动。请你根据以下提示写一篇演讲稿,分析造成青少年近视的原因并提出保护视力的合理建议。
造成近视的原因 建议
1.错误的阅读姿势,如躺在床上看书 2.长时间玩电脑游戏或看电视 3. (自行补充) 1.坐直身子
2.休息、做眼保健操
3. (自行补充)
要求:1.短文应包括以上所有要点;
2.行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名;
4.词数:80-100。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
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人称:　　　　　　　　　时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
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视力不佳　　　　　　　　　　　
主要原因是……_____________________________
躺在床上看书_____________________________
花太多的时间玩电脑游戏　_____________________________
通过做某事_____________________________
少用电子产品_____________________________
做眼保健操_____________________________
做户外运动_____________________________
Boys and girls,
　 As the saying goes,“Eyes are the window to the soul.” However,70% of us have poor eyesight.
　 What has caused this problem The main reason is the bad habits that hurt our eyes.For example,many of us read in bed or keep our eyes too close to the book.Besides,some of us spend too much time playing computer games or watching TV.It’s bad for our eyes.So how can we protect our eyes Here is some advice.
　 First,we should take good care of our eyes.We should not keep our eyes working for too long.While reading,we should sit straight and keep the book about a foot away from us.After reading for an hour or two,we had better have a rest by looking at plants in the distance.Second,using electronic products less is a good way to protect our eyes.Finally,remember to do eye exercises or outdoor sports,which will help us keep good eyesight.　
　These are my opinions.Do you agree with me
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话题五　休闲与旅行
(九)
假设你是深圳的一名中学生王凯,随着“双减”政策的落实,同学们的课余时间增多了。你是如何利用你的课余时间呢 请你以“My Spare Time” 为题,写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的课余生活。
要点:1.放学后进行体育锻炼;
2.饭后看电视或网络新闻,了解世界;
3.周末活动(1~2项)。
要求:1.短文应包括以上所有要点;
2.行文连贯、条理清楚、语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范,可适当发挥;
3.文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名;
4.80词左右。短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
参考词汇:“双减”政策 the “double reduction” policy
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人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
与……分享……________________________________　　
众所周知________________________________
对……有好处________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
锻炼________________________________　
放学后　________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
享受做某事________________________________
对……非常感兴趣________________________________　　　　　　　　　　
旅游________________________________
亲近大自然　　　　　　　　　　　　
My Spare Time
　 With the coming of the “double reduction” policy,___________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I really enjoy myself in my spare time!
we students have more spare time.Here I’d like to share with you what I usually do in my spare time.　
　 As is known to all,exercise is good for our body and mind.I usually take exercise like running,swimming and playing volleyball after school.Besides,I enjoy watching news on TV or online after dinner because I have great interest in what’s going on around the world.In addition,I have fun helping with the housework and enjoying delicious food with my family on weekends.Sometimes,we take a trip to the countryside.How enjoyable it is to get close to nature!
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(十)(2021·泰安市中考)
暑假将近,很多人已经开始计划外出旅游了。假定你是李华,请根据以下图示,以 “To Be a Good Traveller” 为题,给校报专栏写一篇英语短文,倡导“绿色旅游”和“公益旅游”,呼吁同学们做有环保意识和社会责任感的旅行者。
要求:1.词数80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
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人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
为什么不……呢 _________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　
环保的_________________________　
交通运输　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
尽可能多地 _________________________
做义工　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
土特产_________________________
社会责任感　　　　　　　　　　　　　
To Be a Good Traveller
　 The summer holiday is coming.Many people have already started planning their travel.Why not choose green travel or voluntourism Why not choose a green travel plan
　 Whenever we go,use environmentally friendly means of transportation as much as possible,such as walking and riding a bicycle.Don’t throw litter everywhere so that we can protect the water and the environment.We can also do voluntary work,like serving others warm-heartedly during the trip.Before leaving,buying some local products is a good way to promote the development of local tourism.　
　 Let’s be a good traveller with awareness of environmental protection and social responsibility.
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话题六　传统与文化
(十一)
假如你是深圳一名中学生李华,你和你的英国朋友John已经分别几个月了。春节将至,他给你发来邮件,想了解中国的传统节日——春节,请根据下列要点给他回一封邮件,介绍这个节日并邀请他今年来你家共度春节。
要点:1.春节在中国人中的地位;
2.春节前,人们……
3.春节期间,人们……
4.邀请John来中国和你一起过春节,体验中国传统文化。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
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人称:　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
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愿意……;想要…… _______________________________　　　　　　　　　　　
春节___________________________________　
传统的　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
一年中最快乐的时光 ___________________________
早于…… 　　　　 　　　　　　　　　
在除夕___________________________
理发___________________________
习俗___________________________
用福字和剪纸来装饰门窗______________________
红灯笼_______________________________
迎新春　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
团聚_________________________________
团圆饭　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
燃放烟花爆竹_________________________
Dear John,
　 How time flies! Several months has passed since we saw each other.You asked me about Chinese Spring Festival in the email._________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would like to tell you something about it.　
　 Spring Festival,also known as the Chinese New Year,is a traditional and important festival in China.For kids,it may be the happiest time of the year.　
　 Preparations for Spring Festival in China start far ahead of New Year’s Day.We clean our houses,have our hair cut and buy new clothes.One common custom is to decorate doors and windows with the character Fu and paper cuttings.Red lanterns are put up to welcome the coming new year.On the eve of Chinese New Year,family members gather together and has a family reunion dinner.After the meal,we watch TV until the clock strikes twelve.Then,every family sets off firecrackers and fireworks to welcome the new year.　
　 As the Spring Festival is coming,I hope you can come to my home for the Chinese New Year and experience Chinese traditional culture! 　
Yours,
Li Hua
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(十二) (2021·光明区二模)
假设你是李华,你们学校将举行“中国传统文化节”(Chinese Traditional Culture Festival) 活动。届时活动会同步进行网络直播,你打算邀请你的外国朋友Peter观看。请你根据以下提示,用英文给他写一封电子邮件。
要点:1.时间:4月30日下午2-5点;
2.直播网址:https://www./ccf;
3.活动内容:京剧表演、武术表演、汉服秀等;
4.这次活动对他的好处是……
要求:1.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
在四月三十日_____________________________　　　　　　　　　　
从……持续到…… _____________________________ 　
京剧　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
表演_____________________________
上演　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
汉服秀___________________________
被放到网上　　　　　　　　　　　
对某人而言是个做某事的好机会　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
Dear Peter,
　How is everything going with you ____________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
　I hope you will enjoy it online then.
Yours,
Li Hua
There will be a “Chinese Traditional Culture Festival” in our school on April 30th.It will last from 2:00 pm to 5:00 pm.There will be Bejing Opera performances.A master will be invited to play Wushu,and I expect it very much.What’s more,some students will put on a Hanfu show.You can find more details from the picture below.All the activities will be put online at the same time.You can enjoy them at https://www./ccf.It’s a good chance for you to learn more about Chinese culture.
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话题七　名人与事件
(十三)
假设你是深圳的一名中学生李华,在班会上你将向你的同学介绍中国科学家屠呦呦女士,请写一篇发言稿。
要点:1.屠呦呦出生于1930年,21岁进入北京大学医学部实习,之后进入中国中医药研究院工作;
2.经过多年的努力工作,她终于发现了青蒿素(artemisinin),可用来治疗疟疾(malaria),拯救了百万人的生命。
3.你从她身上得到的启示。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
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人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
诺贝尔医学奖　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
北京大学医学部　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
中国中医研究院　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
对……的伟大贡献　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
数年艰苦工作之后　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
有效治愈某人的某疾病　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
数百万人的生命　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
被……深深打动___________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　
成功之路　_________________________
失败和挫折　　　　　　　　　　　　
使某人灰心_________________________
实现某人的目标　　　　　　　　　　
有决心的___________________________
Tu Youyou,a Chinese scientist,won the 2015 Nobel Prize in Medicine for her great contribution to the human race.________________________
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
She was born in 1930 and got into Beijing University Health Science Centre at the age of 21.Then she worked in Chinese Academy of TCM.After years of hard work,she discovered artemisinin,which can effectively cure people of malaria,saving millions of people’s lives.
　 Ms Tu is my role model,and I am deeply touched by her hard work and perseverance.From her story,I realize that it is never easy to become successful.On the road to success,failure and setbacks would discourage us and prevent us from achieving our goals.Only those who are determined and never give up will succeed at last.
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(十四)
假设上周五在去上体育课的路上,你的同学李华受伤了。请就此写一篇文章记录当时的情形和你的感想。
要点:1.从楼梯上掉下来,左腿受伤;
2.老师、同学和你是如何帮助他的;
3.人和人之间的相互关爱带给你的感受。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　时态:　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
冲下楼梯____________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　
摔下楼梯____________________________ 　
受伤严重____________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　
毫不犹豫____________________________
班主任 _____________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　
班长________________________________
救护车______________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　
给某人做X光检查______________________
早日康复　　　　　　　　　　　　
At about 3 o’clock last Friday,our class had a PE lesson.___________
_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Before class,we rushed downstairs happily.But Li Hua,one of my classmates,was so excited and careless that he suddenly fell down the stairs.His left leg was hurt.　
　 Without hesitation,the monitor told Mr Yang,our head teacher.Mr Yang dialed 120 at once.I carried Li Hua on my back and two other students helped him get into the ambulance.In the hospital,the doctor carefully examined him and gave him an X-ray.Luckily,he didn’t break his bones.But he had to stay in bed for two weeks so that he could recover soon.　
　 I feel happy that I helped Li Hua.And I am also proud to have such friendly classmates who care about each other.　
　 And it is because of this care that we have a beautiful world.
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话题八　建议与图表
(十五)
假如你是深圳一名中学生李华,昨天你收到了英国笔友Alice的电子邮件。邮件中,她抱怨她妈妈不经允许就看她的日记,而且还认为自己这样做没错。对此,她感到非常苦恼。请你给她回一封电子邮件,给出你的看法及建议。
要点:1.已了解情况;
2.平时多跟妈妈沟通,让她了解你的想法;　　
3.告诉妈妈隐私空间的重要性;
4.问清楚妈妈为什么要看你的日记;
5.相信她会尽早解决问题。
要求:1.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
【写作分析】
人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
看日记 _______________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
未经允许看日记　__________________________
表列举:首先 ______________________________
其次______________________________________
最后 ____________________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
更为糟糕的是_____________________________
建议:你应该做…… ____________________________
你需要做…… _________________________
你最好……　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
你最好____________________________________
对某人而言做某事是必不可少的/重要的/必要的_____________________　
做某事是个好主意/ 好选择_______________________________________　
尽快去做某事　　　　　　　　　　　　　
尽力去做某事___________________________
帮助你解决这一问题___________________________
……的原因___________________________
更好地了解彼此 　 　　　　　　　　　　
更好了解彼此 ___________________________
克服困难 　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　
Dear Alice,
　 I have received your email.____________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
You tell me that your mum read your diary without your permission.What’s worse,she thinks it’s not wrong of her to do so.You are very annoyed.I am sorry that you are having trouble communicating with your mum.Here are some suggestions to help you deal with this problem.　
　 In the first place,you should talk with your mum more often in your daily life.You’d better let her know about your ideas.In this way,she may understand your feelings better.What’s more,you need to tell her the importance of private space.It might also be helpful to know why your mum wants to read your diary.Maybe she is too worried about you.If this is the case,you can promise her that your will ask her for help when you are in trouble.　
　 To sum up,I am greatly convinced that your will be able to solve this problem.Meanwhile,I think that your mum is worried.Just have a talk with her now.　
Yours,
Li Hua
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(十六)
某中学对初三学生进行了英语口语能力问卷调查,以下是其中两个问题的调查数据。 假如你是该校初三学生李华,请结合下图数据,给你的英语老师写一篇短文。

要点:1.描述问卷调查结果:学生练习口语的频率;
2.描述问卷调查结果:学生练习口语的方法;
3.你的想法或建议(至少3点);
要求:1.词数80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名和校名;
3.可适当增加细节,以使条理清晰、行文连贯;
4.标点正确,书面整洁。
人称:　　　　　　　　　 时态:　　　　　　　　文体:　　　　　　
【词汇及句型】
调查的结果___________________________　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
几乎不_______________________________　
练习做某事　　　　　　　　　　　　　
与之相比_____________________________　
达到……的数量 　　　 　　　　　　　
其余的学生___________________________　
根据调查　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
多于 _______________________________
在课堂上　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
然而;在……的时候______________________________　
五分之二　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
用英语与朋友交谈 ______________________________
多达;最多至　　　　　　　　　　　　
……的一半 ____________________________________
我认为　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
用其他方法____________________________________
用这种方法____________________________________
尽可能多地____________________________________
总之　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
永远不要害怕____________________________________
在他人面前　　　　　　　　　　　　　
We did a survey about the English speaking ability among the ninth-graders.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________In this way,we will be good English speakers.
The results of the survey show that 17% of the students hardly ever practise speaking English.In comparison,the number of students who often practise speaking English usually reaches 45%.The rest of the students practise speaking English sometimes.　
　 How do they practise speaking English According to the survey,more than 50% of the students practise speaking English in class,while over 30% of the students talk with their friends in English after class.Up to two fifths of students practise speaking English in other ways.
　 In my opinion,we should talk with our partners in English as much as we can.Never be afraid of speaking English in front of others! Besides,we should learn more English words.
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