外研八下期末作文复习--M9&M10话题作文——谈论友谊课件（希沃白板+PPT版）

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M9&M10话题作文
Module 9　Friendship
Module 9　话题写作——谈论友谊
【写作任务】
假如你是李玲，你的好友Mike刚转到一所新学校，他感
到很不适应。请你阅读以下邮件，并用英语给他回一封80～
100词的信，给他提供一些建议和解决问题的方法。
Dear Li Ling，
I have a problem in the new school. I often feel lonely and
worried. I have no close friends and I don’t know how to get
along well with my classmates. What should I do？
Yours，
Mike
【审题谋篇】
friendly　
trouble　
smile　
【句式升级】
1. 王老师总是鼓励我们多交朋友。（使用本模块所学的
encourage sb. to do sth. 结构来翻译）


2. 能成为你的好朋友，我感到很开心。（使用本模块所学的
be＋adj. ＋to do的结构来翻译）

　Miss / Mr Wang always encourages us to make more
friends.
I am very happy to be your good friend.
3. 当朋友有困难时，我们应该及时施以援手。（使用本模块
所学的由when引导的时间状语从句来翻译）


4. 李华想知道玛丽是否有一个很广泛的朋友圈。（使用本模
块所学的由if/whether引导的宾语从句来翻译）


　When our friends are in trouble，we should give them a
hand in time.
　Li Hua wants to know if/whether Mary has a wide circle of
friends.
佳句积累
1. A true friend is hard to find. 益友难得。
2. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。
3. I’m looking forward to a long-term friendship. 我期盼友
谊长存。
4. A life without a friend is a life without the sun. 人生没有了朋
友犹如生活失去了阳光。
5. The more friends you have，the happier you may be. 你拥有
越多的朋友，就有可能越开心。
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version：
Dear Mike，
I’m more than happy to hear from you. From your letter，I
know that you feel lonely and worried at the moment about how
to make more friends. Don’t worry about it. Here are some
suggestions for you.
Firstly，you should be friendly to others. Try to make
friends with your classmates，whether you are at school or not.
Secondly，you should try to help them when they are in trouble.
Thirdly，please give everyone a smile every day. In fact，
everyone likes a smiling face. As a saying goes，smile is the
most beautiful language.
If you follow my advice，I believe that you’ll have more
friends around you.
Best wishes！
Yours，
Li Ling
【写作加餐】
假如你是李华，你校英语报“Have Your Say”栏目正在
进行征文活动。请你选择其中一个话题，并结合具体事例，
用英语写一封信表达你对你的好朋友的谢意或歉意来参加此
次征文活动。
注意：1.信件必须包括你所选择话题的所有要点，并适当
拓展；
2. 词数80～100。
One possible version：








Dear Peter，　
　I’d like to say thanks to you for helping me with my
English in the past two years.
　When I was in Grade 7，I was not good at English. I
just hid behind my textbook and never said anything in class.
Once I did very badly in an English test，and I lost heart.
However，you had a patient talk with me and encouraged me
to be more active in class.






　With your help，I have worked harder and made
greater progress since then. How lucky I feel to be your
friend. And I’ve been so thankful to you in my deep heart.
Wish you good luck！　
Yours，　
Li Hua
Module 10　On the radio
Module 10　话题写作——经历与记忆
【写作任务】
假如你是中国歌手李明，上周刚结束了在杭州的演唱
会。有一家国外媒体邀请你以“My Experiences of Becoming
a Singer”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你自己在音乐道路
上的成长经历并和各位粉丝分享。
提示词： show interest in…at the age of five，music
school，thanks for… support and help
注意：1.短文必须包含以上所有提示词，语句通顺，语
意连贯；
2. 词数80～100；短文的标题和开头已给出，不计入总
词数。
【审题谋篇】
five/5　
music　
music　
grew　
music　
school　
singer　
support　
help　
续表
【句式升级】
1. 王先生在他27岁时成为一名医生。（使用本模块所学的at
the age of短语来翻译）

2. 我从我的第一位音乐老师那儿学会了如何唱歌。（使用本
模块所学的由how引导的宾语从句来翻译）


3. 继续保持练习，这样你就可以成为一名成功的歌手。（使
用本模块所学的keep doing结构来翻译）

Mr Wang became a doctor at the age of 27.
　I learnt how I could sing songs from my first music
teacher.
Keep practising，and you’ll become a successful singer.
4. 从我小的时候我就爱上了音乐。（使用本模块所学的由
since引导的时间状语从句来翻译）

I have loved music since I was young.
佳句积累
1. No pain，no gain.
不劳则无获。
2. I was glad to hear that there was a chance to start my dream.
我很高兴听到有一个机会可以开始我的梦想。
3. I couldn’t have gone this far without their support and help.
没有他们的支持和帮助，我就不可能走得这么远。
4. The harder you work，the more excellent you will be.
你越努力，就会越优秀。
5. Nothing is impossible if you put your heart into it.
世上无难事，只怕有心人。
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version：
My Experiences of Becoming a Singer
Last week，I had a concert in Hangzhou. It was my fifth
concert this year，and I’d like to say thanks to the support from all my fans.
At the age of five，I showed great interest in music. My
parents offered me the chance to learn how to sing songs from my
first music teacher. As I grew older，my interest in music grew
too. Later I attended a music school. Just as the saying goes，
“No pain，no gain.” So I studied really hard there and became
one of the top students. After leaving school，I never gave up my
dream of becoming an excellent singer. Although I met lots of
difficulties on the way，I could face them bravely and never
gave up.
I just want to show my thanks to my parents and all my
teachers. I can’t have gone this far without their support and help.
【写作加餐】
假如你是李华，上周参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得了
一等奖。你的英语老师让你以“My Experiences of Learning
English”为题，用英语写一篇短文，与大家分享你在英语学
习上的成长经历。
注意：1.语句通顺，语意连贯；
2. 词数80～100；短文的标题已给出，不计入总词数。
One possible version：
My Experiences of Learning English
　Last month，I took part in the National English
Speech Contest. And I won first prize. My teachers，parents
and friends were all proud of me.
　At the age of four，I started to learn English by
watching English cartoons and listening to English CDs every
day. As I grew older，my interest in English grew too. When
I became a pupil，my teacher，Miss Wang，taught me how
to read and write in English. And I kept on practising. With
her help，I learnt a lot. My spoken English also improved
very quickly.
　I got some gifts from my friends after the English
contest. But I really think those gifts should have been given
to Miss Wang！I can’t have gone this far without her support
and help.