杭州学军中学2024届高三模拟英语科目试卷英语应用文
01试题原题
第四部分写作(共两节,满分40分)
第一节 (满分15分)
假定你是高中生李华,将在假期和你校的英国交换生Jack共同完成一项研究性学习任务。请给 Jack写一封邮件,提议研究偶像对高中生成长的影响。
内容包括:
1.选题理由;
2.实施方案;
3.征询意见。
参考词汇: 偶像idol
注意:
1. 词数80 左右;
2. 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。
Dear Jack,
_____________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
02试题分析
1.这是一封建议信,提议研究偶像对高中生成长的影响。
2.内容:
①选题理由:高中生极易受到偶像的影响
②实施方案:前期讨论好计划和步骤,然后通过问卷、访谈等方式收集素材,最后进行数据分析
③征询意见:是否同意此选题和实施方式,有没有更好的想法等
03下水作文1
Dear Jack,
Glad to work together on a research project in the coming holiday. I’m writing to share my thoughts.
After a sound consideration, I’d like to make the proposal to do some research on the influence of idols on the growth of high school students. The reason why I choose this theme is that idols play an important part in our teenagers’ life, which is really worthy of some researches. Before our research, we’d better work out a plan and then conduct it. As for the methods, our project could involve conducting questionnaires, interviewing peers, teachers and parents, and lastly, we’ll analyze data we collect and launch our research.
Any other topics are welcome. Please let me know your thoughts as early as possible. (123 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
下水文2
Dear Jack,
I hope this email finds you well! I am more than happy to learn that I will be working with you on a research project during the holiday.
The influence of idols on the growth of high school students, I believe, is a good option. As we all know, idols ranging from stars and scientists, to heroes, play a significant role in shaping the values and cultivating the quality of students of our age. We can design and distribute questionnaires to carry out our research, organize a debate competition to give students a deep insight into the influence of idols, followed by the comments on it from the judges in the competition.
I’m wondering if my proposal works. Looking forward to your early reply. (124 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
本文的亮点:
(1)I hope this email finds you well运用无灵主语结构;
(2)be more than happy to do sth做某事很高兴;
(3)learn that得知,听说;
(4)I believe用作插入语,意为“我认为”;
(5)ranging from ... and ... to ...从...到...到...;
(6)play a significant role in在...起着至关重要的左右;
(7)of our age我们同龄人;
(8)design and distribute运用头韵表达法;
(9)give sb a deep insight into使某人深入理解某事;
(10)..., followed by ...紧接着...。
下水文3
Dear Jack,
How’s everything going I’m delighted to conduct the research-based learning project with you in the approaching holidays.
Various factors taken into account, I suggest that our project focus on the influences idols have on high school students. Idols, as role models, can profoundly shape teenagers’ growth and values.We hope to find out how idols influence students, dig into possible reasons behind and offer constructive proposals to lead students in the right direction. To carry out the project, we will do surveys and interviews in both our countries, and analyze the data collected. Based on these, we can offer suggestions accordingly.
What’s your opinion of my proposal Please let me know at your earliest convenience and looking forward to our cooperation.
Yours,
Li Hua
下水文4
Dear Jack,
How's everything going I'm excited to propose a research topic for our holiday research project- the influence of idols on high school students’ growth.
Nowadays idolizing is a pervasive trend among our fellows, so this topic should be a practical one that many relate to. Besides, the meaning of idols can vary from celebrities to everyday people, which provides us with a wealth of content to study the impact on our fellows’ mindsets, values, and behavior. To complete it, we can start by designing online questionnaires, and then analyze the data and craft a report.
Does this intrigue you Or do you have any other suggestions I'm eager to hear your ideas!
Yours,
Li Hua
04参考范文
Possible version 1:
Dear Jack,
I hope this email finds you well. I am excited that we are to work together on a research project during the upcoming holidays.
After giving it some thought, I would like to propose a project that explores the influence of idols on the growth of high school students. That's because idols, ranging from celebrities to common people who inspire them, often serve as role models and can have a profound impact on teenager's values and behaviors. Our approach would involve surveying peers, analyzing data, and perhaps interviewing educators to gain deeper insights.
Would this be something you're interested in Please let me know your thoughts at your earliest convenience, as I am eager to embark on this research journey with you. (122 words)
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Jack,
How's everything going I have an intriguing topic in mind for our research project in the upcoming holidays that I believe might interest you —The Influence of Idols on High School Students’Growth.
My inspiration stems from observing how idols can significantly shape young people's values, self-identity, and behaviors. The project will involve conducting surveys and interview s with a diverse group of high school students to gather data on their perspectives regarding idols and write a comprehensive report detailing our conclusions and insights.
What do you think of it I'm really keen to get your perspective on this. (99 words)
Yours,
Li Hua