2024届山西省太原三模英语读后续写个人成长类 帮助老人实现去丰收节的愿望 讲义
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阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
On a sunny afternoon, my friend Ollie and I were enjoying skateboarding at our local park. Our mood was light until Ollie spotted a poster for the upcoming Harvest Fair. The idea of attending it was thrilling, but the ticket price of $50 quickly iced our enthusiasm.
While we were thinking over the cost, our attention was drawn to the list of attractions. Among the various activities, we noticed that our favorite band - Eagles was going to perform. We couldn't help but break into singing our favorite song by them. What added to our excitement was the pie contest in the poster, a delightful reminder of our shared memory. It used to be the most popular event in our community. But thinking of the expensive tickets, which seemed to be a shadow over our excitement, we all sighed. Then I suggested going to my parents' store to see if they could help.
Upon arriving, my dad told us he had some good news, showing some tickets to us. They were the very ones we had seen in the poster! My dad explained that his old partner had made a request to hang a poster here for the Harvest Fair, and in return, he offered us free passes. Much to my delight, there were six tickets for five people in our family and an extra one for my friend! The news was like a breath of fresh air, bringing unexpected joy into our day. We could all set out to experience the fair together, no one missing out.
Just then, Mrs. Smith, an awesome 80-year-old neighbor, walked unsteadily towards us. "I just saw the poster in your window. How I used to love going to fairs!" She paused, with her eyes dropping before she continued. "But it's hard for me to get around now, and tickets cost so much these days..."
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1. Ollie approached me, seemingly to say something.
Para2. After the fair, I came up with a pl an to make up for Ollie's absence.
原文译文:
在一个阳光明媚的下午，我和我的朋友奥利在我们当地的公园里享受滑板运动。我们原本心情愉悦，直到奥利看到了一张即将举行的丰收节的海报。参加丰收节的念头令人兴奋，但50美元的票价迅速冷却了我们的热情。
在我们考虑票价的时候，我们的注意力被海报上的一系列活动吸引了。在众多活动中，我们注意到我们最喜欢的乐队——老鹰乐队将会进行表演。我们忍不住开始哼唱他们的一首我们最喜欢的歌曲。而海报上的馅饼比赛更是增添了我们的兴奋感，这唤起了我们共同的回忆。它曾经是我们社区最受欢迎的活动。但想到昂贵的票价，它似乎给我们的兴奋蒙上了一层阴影，我们都叹了口气。然后我建议去我父母的店看看他们是否能帮忙。
到达后，我父亲告诉我们他有一个好消息，并向我们展示了一些门票。它们正是我们在海报上看到的那种！我父亲解释说，他的老朋友请求在这里张贴一张丰收节的海报，作为回报，他给我们提供了免费通行证。令我高兴的是，我们家五个人有六张票，还给我的朋友多了一张！这个消息就像一股清新的空气，给我们的一天带来了意外的喜悦。我们可以一起去体验丰收节，一个都不会错过。
就在这时，一位了不起的80岁邻居史密斯夫人摇摇晃晃地向我们走来。“我刚在你家窗户上看到那张海报。我以前是多么喜欢去集市啊！”她停顿了一下，眼睛垂下，然后继续说。“但现在我行动不便，而且现在的票价这么贵……”
续写写作提纲：
续写第一段：丰收节邀请
奥利---邀请史密斯夫人
带有安慰的微笑
提供多余的票
史密斯夫人----感到惊喜
感激地接受邀请
多年来的愿望
狂欢节体验---进入节日场地
神奇的世界
馅饼的香气
现场音乐的旋律
悲伤感觉无法摆脱奥利不在的感觉
续写第二段：奥利的派对
计划派对--弥补奥利的缺席
召集朋友
派对准备---奥利最喜欢的零食和饮料
美丽的灯光和鲜花
丰收节上的短视频
派对活动---奥利眼中的喜悦泪水唱歌、欢笑、分享故事珍贵回忆
美好的夜晚永远珍藏的回忆
参考范文1：
Para1. Ollie approached me, seemingly to say something. “Mrs. Smith,”she said with a comforting smile, “Would you like to join us for the Harvest Festival I happen to have an extra ticket.” Upon hearing my invitation, Mrs. Smith's face lit up in great surprise. She gratefully accepted Ollie's invitation and said it had been a wish of hers for many years. That evening, we stepped into the festival grounds like children entering a magical land. The air was filled with the scent of freshly baked pies and the melodies of live music. Nevertheless, I couldn't shake the feeling of sadness knowing that Ollie wasn't with us.
Para2. After the fair, I came up with a plan to make up for Ollie's absence. The next day, I gathered a few friends and we decided to organize a small party specifically for Ollie. We prepared her favorite snacks and drinks, decorated the space with beautiful lights and flowers, and even put together a short video of our best moments at the Harvest Festival. When Ollie walked in, her eyes were filled with tears of joy, because she was deeply touched by our thoughtful arrangement. we spent a wonderful evening singing, laughing, and sharing stories. With the clock striking midnight, we all knew that this night had become a memory we would cherish forever.
参考范文2
Para 1: Ollie approached me, seemingly to say something.
His eyes shone with a mix of excitement and hesitation. "Hey, why don't I give my ticket to Mrs. Smith " he whispered, glancing at the elderly woman. A warm feeling spread through me as I realized the thoughtfulness behind his suggestion. Despite our initial disappointment over the ticket cost, the opportunity to bring joy to someone else's life outweighed his personal desires. Gently patting Ollie’s back, I nodded. Then, he turned to Mrs. Smith and extending the precious offer with a bright smile.
Para 2: After the fair, I came up with a plan to make up for Ollie's absence.
I decided to organize a small gathering at the park, inviting our families and friends, including Mrs. Smith. We gathered around a cozy bonfire, sharing stories and laughter. While Mrs. Smith recounted her cherished memories of attending the fair, Ollie’s face glowed in the dancing fire. Looking at him, I suddenly realized that true happiness lies not in material possessions but in the connections we forge with others. True, Ollie had missed the fair, but in my heart, his selfless gesture felt warmer than the fire and purer than the moonlight.
On a sunny afternoon, my friend Ollie and I were enjoying skateboarding at our local park. Our mood was light until Ollie spotted a poster for the upcoming Harvest Fair. The idea of attending it was thrilling, but the ticket price of $50 quickly iced our enthusiasm.
While we were thinking over the cost, our attention was drawn to the list of attractions. Among the various activities, we noticed that our favorite band - Eagles was going to perform. We couldn't help but break into singing our favorite song by them. What added to our excitement was the pie contest in the poster, a delightful reminder of our shared memory. It used to be the most popular event in our community. But thinking of the expensive tickets, which seemed to be a shadow over our excitement, we all sighed. Then I suggested going to my parents' store to see if they could help.
Upon arriving, my dad told us he had some good news, showing some tickets to us. They were the very ones we had seen in the poster! My dad explained that his old partner had made a request to hang a poster here for the Harvest Fair, and in return, he offered us free passes. Much to my delight, there were six tickets for five people in our family and an extra one for my friend! The news was like a breath of fresh air, bringing unexpected joy into our day. We could all set out to experience the fair together, no one missing out.
Just then, Mrs. Smith, an awesome 80-year-old neighbor, walked unsteadily towards us. "I just saw the poster in your window. How I used to love going to fairs!" She paused, with her eyes dropping before she continued. "But it's hard for me to get around now, and tickets cost so much these days..."
注意:
1.续写词数应为150个左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Para1. Ollie approached me, seemingly to say something.
Para2. After the fair, I came up with a pl an to make up for Ollie's absence.
原文译文:
在一个阳光明媚的下午，我和我的朋友奥利在我们当地的公园里享受滑板运动。我们原本心情愉悦，直到奥利看到了一张即将举行的丰收节的海报。参加丰收节的念头令人兴奋，但50美元的票价迅速冷却了我们的热情。
在我们考虑票价的时候，我们的注意力被海报上的一系列活动吸引了。在众多活动中，我们注意到我们最喜欢的乐队——老鹰乐队将会进行表演。我们忍不住开始哼唱他们的一首我们最喜欢的歌曲。而海报上的馅饼比赛更是增添了我们的兴奋感，这唤起了我们共同的回忆。它曾经是我们社区最受欢迎的活动。但想到昂贵的票价，它似乎给我们的兴奋蒙上了一层阴影，我们都叹了口气。然后我建议去我父母的店看看他们是否能帮忙。
到达后，我父亲告诉我们他有一个好消息，并向我们展示了一些门票。它们正是我们在海报上看到的那种！我父亲解释说，他的老朋友请求在这里张贴一张丰收节的海报，作为回报，他给我们提供了免费通行证。令我高兴的是，我们家五个人有六张票，还给我的朋友多了一张！这个消息就像一股清新的空气，给我们的一天带来了意外的喜悦。我们可以一起去体验丰收节，一个都不会错过。
就在这时，一位了不起的80岁邻居史密斯夫人摇摇晃晃地向我们走来。“我刚在你家窗户上看到那张海报。我以前是多么喜欢去集市啊！”她停顿了一下，眼睛垂下，然后继续说。“但现在我行动不便，而且现在的票价这么贵……”
续写写作提纲：
续写第一段：丰收节邀请
奥利---邀请史密斯夫人
带有安慰的微笑
提供多余的票
史密斯夫人----感到惊喜
感激地接受邀请
多年来的愿望
狂欢节体验---进入节日场地
神奇的世界
馅饼的香气
现场音乐的旋律
悲伤感觉无法摆脱奥利不在的感觉
续写第二段：奥利的派对
计划派对--弥补奥利的缺席
召集朋友
派对准备---奥利最喜欢的零食和饮料
美丽的灯光和鲜花
丰收节上的短视频
派对活动---奥利眼中的喜悦泪水唱歌、欢笑、分享故事珍贵回忆
美好的夜晚永远珍藏的回忆
参考范文1：
Para1. Ollie approached me, seemingly to say something. “Mrs. Smith,”she said with a comforting smile, “Would you like to join us for the Harvest Festival I happen to have an extra ticket.” Upon hearing my invitation, Mrs. Smith's face lit up in great surprise. She gratefully accepted Ollie's invitation and said it had been a wish of hers for many years. That evening, we stepped into the festival grounds like children entering a magical land. The air was filled with the scent of freshly baked pies and the melodies of live music. Nevertheless, I couldn't shake the feeling of sadness knowing that Ollie wasn't with us.
Para2. After the fair, I came up with a plan to make up for Ollie's absence. The next day, I gathered a few friends and we decided to organize a small party specifically for Ollie. We prepared her favorite snacks and drinks, decorated the space with beautiful lights and flowers, and even put together a short video of our best moments at the Harvest Festival. When Ollie walked in, her eyes were filled with tears of joy, because she was deeply touched by our thoughtful arrangement. we spent a wonderful evening singing, laughing, and sharing stories. With the clock striking midnight, we all knew that this night had become a memory we would cherish forever.
参考范文2
Para 1: Ollie approached me, seemingly to say something.
His eyes shone with a mix of excitement and hesitation. "Hey, why don't I give my ticket to Mrs. Smith " he whispered, glancing at the elderly woman. A warm feeling spread through me as I realized the thoughtfulness behind his suggestion. Despite our initial disappointment over the ticket cost, the opportunity to bring joy to someone else's life outweighed his personal desires. Gently patting Ollie’s back, I nodded. Then, he turned to Mrs. Smith and extending the precious offer with a bright smile.
Para 2: After the fair, I came up with a plan to make up for Ollie's absence.
I decided to organize a small gathering at the park, inviting our families and friends, including Mrs. Smith. We gathered around a cozy bonfire, sharing stories and laughter. While Mrs. Smith recounted her cherished memories of attending the fair, Ollie’s face glowed in the dancing fire. Looking at him, I suddenly realized that true happiness lies not in material possessions but in the connections we forge with others. True, Ollie had missed the fair, but in my heart, his selfless gesture felt warmer than the fire and purer than the moonlight.