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高考英语续写
万能句型
知识梳理
01
在改变中成长,是读后续写的一个重要主题。而改变的表达,可以从以下几个方面来进行升华。
升华技巧 : 学习知识促成长
It's never too late to learn. Each individual has the right to accept more challenges and make more attempts.
学习永远为时不晚。每个人都有权利去接受更多的挑战,做更多的尝试。
【点评】individual 这里表示“个人,个体”;make more attempts“做更多尝试”。
正是这种独特的经历,让我明白,无论我们面临什么困难,主要团结一致,就能战胜它。
It is this unique experience that(it is...that强调句)made me understand whatever difficulties
we are faced with,as long as we work together/ stay united, we can conquer it.
我永远忘不了那种帮助需要帮助的人的好感觉。
I would never forget the good feeling of helping someone in need.
我突然想到,帮助别人是无价的,每个人都应该是一个救生员。
It occurred to me that helping others was priceless and everyone should be a lifeguard.
升华技巧 : 发挥天赋促成长
Actually, every individual possesses talent.Be brave when you find it and also make efforts. You can create miracles in the end.
事实上,每个人都有天赋。当你发现它的时候你要勇敢,也要努力。你能最终创造奇迹。
【点评】 possess“拥有”;create miracles 表示“创造奇迹”。
In class, I tried my best to seize every opportunity to improve myself. Gradually, I began to have normal conversations with my classmates and got along well with them. Everything in life was becoming more and more beautiful.
在课堂上,我尽力抓住一切机会来提高自己。渐渐地,我开始和我的同学们进行正常的交谈,并和他们相处得很好。生活中的一切都在变得越来越美好了。
升华技巧: 克服困难促成长
The journey to success is not smooth. It is full of challenges and difficulties. We should be brave to face them. As long as we don't give up hope and make every effort to overcome all the difficulties, we will surely achieve our goa success) finally.
通往成功的路不会平坦,它会充满挑战和艰辛。我们要勇敢面对。只要不放弃希望并竭尽全力克服所有困难,
们最终会实现我们的目标。
【点评】 smooth 表示“平坦的"; 短语彰显高级overcome all the difficulties;make every effort; as long as。
升华高级句
内心暖意
I felt a coursing current of warmth deep inside as the old memories of mail flooded into my mind,arousing endless ripples.
我感到内心深处有一股暖流涌动,邮件的旧记忆涌入我的脑海,激起无尽的涟漪。
自然邂逅
The encounter with the little creature was like aneverlasting flower, blossoming in the river of my memory and reminding me of the value of caring those adorable creatures in our life.
与小生物的相遇就像我的记忆之河一朵绽放的永恒之花,提醒着我在生活中关爱这些可爱的生物的价值。
生命感悟
As the setting sunpainted the sky in a breathtaking tapestry of hues, a profound realization washed over me, elevating my perspective and leaving me with an indelible sense of awe and gratitude for the beauty of life's journey.
当夕阳将天空点缀成一幅令人惊叹的色彩织锦时,一种深刻的领悟涌上心头,升华了我的视野,使我对生命旅程的美丽产生了难以磨灭的敬畏和感激之情。
升华技巧 : 经历+感悟
1.That day was so unforgettable that it would stay in my memory forever.
那天是如此难忘,它将永远留在我的记忆中。
2.Finally, we went out of the forest that trapped us. What an unforgettable experience! It turns out that there’s always a way out of any plight as long as we stay calm.
Attitude is more important than facts for us. We can- not change our past; we cannot change the fact. However, the only thing we can do is hold a positive attitude.
态度对我们来说比事实更重要。我们不能改变我们的过去;我们不能改变事实。然而,我们唯一能做的就是保持积极的态度。
【点评】 Attitude 表示“态度”;positive attitude 就是“积极的态度”。“积极”思维,最终让我们成长改变,这种主题,是读后续写中比较常见的正能量的升华。
【例句】I remember the day was cold and grey, with a light rain falling slowly but constantly.
我记得那天很冷,灰蒙蒙的,下着小雨,缓慢而持续。
No sooner had we arrived where the child was trapped than the man started to scan the surroundings.Then he inched toward the hole and stretched out to seize the child's hands, pulling him out without reserve.(动作链)
我们一到孩子被困的地方,那个男人就开始观察周国的环境,然后慢慢向洞口走去,仲手抓住孩子的手,把他完全拉了出来。
升华技巧:情绪类
A buzz of excitement filled the air as he finally made it.
Peter was so thrilled in that he succeeded in delivering the speech and convincing the judges.
He thought to himself that he would do whatever he could whenever needed. Shedding tears of joy, he was in high spirits the whole day!
空气中弥漫着一阵热烈的兴奋,他最终做到了。
Peter非常激动,因为他成功地发表了演讲并说服了评委们。他内心想到,只要有需要,他会尽其所能。
他流下了喜悦的泪水,整天都兴高采烈!
Heart racing and palms sweating, he dragged his trembling legs forward.
Taking a deep breath, he murmured to himself firmly, “Everything will be great. I’ll make it!"
(成功后) Hearing the inspiring news, he leaped into the air with joy.
心跳加速,手心出汗,他拖着颤抖的双腿向前走。
深吸一口气,他坚定地喃喃自语道,“- -切都会很好的。我能做到!”听到这个鼓舞人心的消息,他高兴地跳到了空中。
模拟练习
02
After dinner, Mrs. Quimby told the family that Grandma, who lived on a farm, had sent in a lot of pumpkins for jack-o- lanterns(空心南瓜灯) for the neighborhood children. “There was one in the basement waiting to be carved,” she added. Ramona sprang to her feet and dashed down to bring it up,but it was too heavy for a second-grader. Finally Mr. Quimby gave a hand.
“Let's make it smile like last year,” exclaimed Ramona.
“Hmm. Let’s see.” Mr. Quimby studied the pumpkin, turning it to find the best side for the face.
With a pencil he sketched (素描) a nose-shaped nose, not a triangle. Then the mouth turned up on both sides. “smiling!” Ramona clapped her hands.
Mr. Quimby nodded with a smile, cut a circle around the top of the pumpkin and lifted it off for a lid. Without being asked, Ramona found a big spoon for scooping out the seeds. Picky- picky, the Quimbys' shabby old cat, came into the kitchen to see if something had been put in his dish. When he found that it had not, he paused, sniffed the pumpkin smell and angrily walked out with his tail twitching.
Mr. Quimby began to whistle as he carved with skill and care, first a mouthful of teeth, each one neat and square, then eyes and eyebrows. He was working on two ears shaped like question marks when Mrs. Quimby announced it was bedtime for Ramona. Unwillingly Ramona ran, took a shower and quickly returned. Now, Mr Quimby had just carved a few C-shaped curls(卷发) around the hole in the top of the pumpkin. He reached inside and dug a candle holder in the bottom.
“There,” he said, putting down his knife. “A work of art.” Mrs. Quimby found a candle stub(残根) inserted it in the pumpkin, lit it and set the lid in place. Ramona turned off the light. The jack-o'-lantern was smiling with a flickering flame, “Wow!” Ramona threw her arms around her father before going to bed with great satisfaction.
Paragraph 1. In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise.___________
Paragraph 2. On the table their jack-o-lantern no longer had a whole face._______
In the middle of the night Ramona awoke to a noise. Tense, she listened hard. There it was again,a sort of thumping noise. Silence. Then again in the kitchen, Something was moving. All the ghost stories she had ever heard flew through her mind. Ramona sat up in bed, shrieking. “Daddy!” Within seconds, Mr. Quimby rushed in, asking what was the matter, Pointing to the kitchen, Ramona sobbed something was moving there. Mr. Quimby smiled, assured her calmly and they went to have a look.
On the table their jack-o-lantern no longer had a whole face. Part of its forehead and one eye were gone. Picky-picky was crouched in guilt under the kitchen table. “Bad cat! Bad cat!” shrieked Ramona, angrily stamping her bare foot on the floor. The old cat cat flew out of the kitchen. Mr. Quimby laughed a small laugh, “Maybe he’s starving.” He put his arms around Ramona, who now burst into tears. “Don’t worry. We’ll get another pumpkin and make another cool jack-o-lantern.”
半夜,雷蒙娜被一阵喧闹声惊醒。紧张,她认真地听着。它又来了,一种砰砰声。安静。然后又在厨房里,有东西在动。她听过的所有鬼故事都在她的脑海里飞来飞去。雷蒙娜坐在床上,尖叫着。“爸爸!” 几秒钟后,昆比先生冲了进来,问出了什么事,雷蒙娜指着厨房,抽泣着说那里有什么东西在移动。昆比先生微笑着,平静地向她保证,然后他们去看了看。
在桌子上他们的南瓜灯不再有整张脸。它的前额和一只眼睛的一部分不见了。挑剔的挑剔蹲在厨房的桌子底下。“坏猫!坏猫!” 雷蒙娜尖叫着,愤怒地赤脚跺着地板。老猫猫飞出了厨房。昆比先生微微一笑,“可能是饿了。” 他搂着雷蒙娜,她现在泪流满面。“别担心。我们再买一个南瓜,再做一个很酷的南瓜灯。”
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