2024年中考英语复习拔高特训之书面表达（山西省）
A
为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力，希望中学初三(1)班围绕校园欺凌问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以“How to Protect Ourselves in School Bullying”为标题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
(1)须包含思维导图内容提示的所有信息，并将所缺措施补充完整；
(2)不得在作文中出现真实人名、校名等；
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： bullying n. 恃强凌弱的行为； bully v. 欺负/n. 恶霸
How to Protect Ourselves in School Bullying
Dear classmates,
Recently, the problem of school bullying has been brought into focus.
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Dear classmates,
Recently, the problem of school bullying has been brought into focus. To ensure our safety and well-being, it’s important to learn how to protect ourselves.
Firstly, we should learn about bullying. We need to know what it is and how it can hurt people.
Secondly, we need to strengthen our self-defense skills. This includes learning how to communicate effectively and building up our bodies.
When faced with bullying, it’s essential to remain calm. Panic can often make the situation worse. We should also seek help from teachers, parents, or trusted friends.
Lastly, let’s all strive to be civilized students. Don’t be the ones who bully others. Together, let’s build a safe and harmonious school environment.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，需适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，强调自我保护的重要性；
第二步，介绍面对欺凌时每个人都应具备的知识和能力；
第三步，介绍遇到欺凌时要采取的措施；
第四步，呼吁大家做文明学生，共建安全校园。
[亮点词汇]
①build up one’s body强身健体
②strive to力图，力求
[高分句型]
①it’s important to learn how to protect ourselves.（it固定句型）
②We need to know what it is and how it can hurt people.（what和how引导的宾语从句）
③Don’t be the ones who bully others.（who引导的定语从句）
B
时光飞逝，初中生活已接近尾声。回顾初中生涯，你一定经历了成长的烦恼，也成就
了更好的自己。假设《中学生英文报》正在举办以“成长”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示，以“Growing Pains and Gains”为题写篇短文投稿。
What problem did you have
How did you solve it
Who/What either encouraged or helped you (friends/teachers/heroes/music/films/books…)
What have you learned from it
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 全文不少于 80词。
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Growing Pains and Gains
How time flies! My junior school life is coming to an end. Looking back, I had not only pains but also gains.
I faced the biggest problem when I entered Grade Nine. I always hated running, but I had no choice because of the sports exam. Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam. I just wanted to give up.
At that moment, the story about Spud Webb encouraged me. Through hard work, Spud Webb became the shortest player in the NBA. His story gave me courage to solve all kind of problems.
Now, I’m not afraid of 800-meter running any more. I have learned that nothing is impossible if we don’t give up easily.
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”；
③提示：文章应该包括四个问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，回顾初中生活，有痛苦也有收获，从而引出话题；
第二步，介绍自己遇到的最大困难；
第三步，介绍如何解决这一问题，描述激励自己的人或事；
第四步，书写结语，表明自己成长的收获。
［亮点词汇］
① not only…but also…不但……而且……
② because of 因为
［高分句型］
① Although I practised hard every day, I couldn’t run fast enough to pass the exam. (although引导让步状语从句)
② I faced the biggest problem when I entered Grade Nine. (when引导时间状语从句)
C
“吾日三省吾身”。作为21世纪的青少年，我们应该勇敢面对自己的缺点，在生活和学习中提升自己。请你以“How to be a better ___________.”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英语短文，向学校的校刊投稿。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）词数100左右。
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How to be a better Reader
Nowadays, reading is important for our teenagers. So I want to be a better reader. Now let me share my ideas about how to be a better reader with you.
To be a good reader, I should develop several habits. Firstly, I will choose books that interest me. They will help me read for longer time. Secondly, I will read actively, asking questions and sharing ideas with my friends and parents. Thirdly, I would like to take notes while reading to better understand and remember the things I learn. Lastly, I will share my thoughts and discuss with others to get different opinions.
By following these steps, I believe I can become a better reader and gain more from reading.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文。
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”。
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据所给材料，补全题目；
第二步，介绍自己的建议；
第三步，表达自己的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①want to be想成为
②share sth. with sb.与某人分享某物
③would like to do sth.想做某事
④discuss with与讨论
[高分句型]
①Now let me share my ideas about how to be a better reader with you.（how+动词不定式结构）
②Thirdly, I would like to take notes while reading to better understand and remember the things I learn.（定语从句）
③By following these steps, I believe I can become a better reader and gain more from reading.（宾语从句）
D
你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 补充内容至少各一条；
3. 词数：80—100；
4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice.
I usually help with housework, such as doing the dishes, cleaning my bedroom, sweeping the floor and so on. Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life skills. Also, sharing housework can help our parents free from heavy chores after work. And then they can relax themselves.
For the coming Labor Education Theme Activity, I have some suggestions. I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. We can encourage students to clean up and decorate our school as well. Students will learn about the importance of hard work and the value of labor.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括思维导图中的要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开篇点题，介绍劳动很重要性，并引入自己的经验和建议；
第二步，介绍自己所做的家务劳动及收获；
第三步，对主题活动提出建议并总结。
［亮点词汇］
① clean up 打扫干净
② form good habits 养成好习惯
［高分句型］
① Helping with chores not only helps me form good habits, but also helps to develop my life
skills. (动名词作主语，not only … but also…连接并列成分)
② I think holding competitions about labor skills is an excellent idea. (宾语从句)
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2023年12月22日， 第78届联合国大会协商一致通过决议，将中国春节确定为联合国假日。假如你是刘华，欣喜之间，很想你的英国笔友Tony来跟你一起过春节。请你写一封信邀请他。
内容要点：
1. 发出邀请；
2. 根据图片内容介绍春节；
3. 表达期许与愿景。
要求：
1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
How is everything I’m happy that last month the UN officially listed the Spring Festival as one of its holidays. _______________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Liu Hua
【答案】
Dear Tony,
How is everything I’m happy that last month the UN officially listed the Spring Festival as one of its holidays. I’m writing to invite you to come to celebrate the Lunar New Year with me this year.
Chinese Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is usually in January or February. People often do some cleaning and buy new clothes before the festival. On the eve of the festival, they often have a big dinner with families and they usually eat dumplings and chicken, duck and fish. They also watch the Spring Festival Gala and stay up till midnight. On the first day of the festival, people usually put on new clothes and visit relatives and friends with some nice presents. They wish each other a happy year and good luck. Kids can get lucky money from older people and it is called hongbao. Children can also set off firecrackers.
I hope you can come and spend the Spring Festival with me. I think if you come here, you will have a good time.
Yours,
Liu Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据图片内容介绍中国春节，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，邀请对方来跟你一起过春节；
第二步，详细介绍春节的传统；
第三步，表达期许与愿景。
[亮点词汇]
①invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
②stay up熬夜
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①On the eve of the festival, they often have a big dinner with families and they usually eat dumplings and chicken, duck and fish.（and连接的并列句）
②I think if you come here, you will have a good time.（省略that的宾语从句；if引导的条件状语从句）
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生活是一位睿智的长者，生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对，无论是美好还是意外，我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Life is full of”为题写一篇短文，分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
内容包括：1. 请先将标题填写完整；
2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历；
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注 意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出部分，请填写完整，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Life is full of ________
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of ________. It is the ________ that make me stronger.
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【答案】
Life is full of challenges
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of challenges. It is the challenges that make me stronger.
I moved to the city when I entered the middle school. But my problem was that no one cooked for me because my parents came home late, so I made up my mind to learn how to cook. I must challenge myself. Then one day I watched my parents cooking dinner carefully. They taught me how to cook. A few days later, I learned to cook for myself. Now I am happy I can cook delicious food. My parents are satisfied with me. I am also proud of myself.
I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and are good at learning, everything will be better. I am so eager to meet the coming difficulties, I won’t give up no matter how hard they will be.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇议论文；
②时态：论点部分为“一般现在时”，事例论证部分用“一般过去时”；
③提示：标题与开头需补充完整，补充内容即为本文关键词，写作要点已给出，考生应适当添加细节，并突出论点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，确立中心论点。借用“生活因挑战而精彩，挑战使我变得更强大”引出论点；
第二步，用事例论证论点。通过“自己上初中时没有人做饭这一难题”与“自己学习做饭，学会做饭对现在的影响以及父母和自己的看法”来论证中心论点；
第三步，结尾呼应开头，加强论证力度。表达自己在生活中遇到挑战时的态度。
[亮点词汇]
①make up one’s mind to do sth.下定决心去做某事
②be satisfied with sb.对某人感到满意
③be eager to do sth.渴望做某事
[高分句型]
①I moved to the city when I entered the middle school.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②I learned from it that we may meet some difficulties in our life, but if we have confidence and
are good at learning, everything will be better.（that引导的宾语从句和if引导的条件状语从句）
G
习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人，学校教育要落实立德树人根本任务。滨江中学准备开展“做一个有责任感的中学生”的活动。请根据以下内容提示及要求，以“How to Be a Responsible Student”为题写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
（1）爱国爱党，有理想，诚实守信，善良感恩；
（2）努力学习，树立节约意识，不要浪费（如：食物，纸张，水电等）；
（3）保持身心健康，多参加课外活动和体育锻炼：
（4）热爱自然，保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，爱护动植物：
（5）积极参加劳动，如打扫教室，帮助父母做家务等。
参考词汇： keep one’s promise, be thankful to sb, set the mind of saving
要求：
（1）80-120词，开头结尾已给，不计入总词数：
（2）句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑：
（3）包含所有提示内容，但不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥：
（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
Boys and girls,
As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland.
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Thanks for listening!
【答案】
Boys and girls,
As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland. We have a sense of duty to make our country more and more powerful. What should we do to be a responsible student
First of all, we love our country and the Party. We also need to have ideals, keep our promise. We are thankful to those who helped us. Secondly, we should study hard, set the mind of saving, don’t waste food, paper, water and electricity, etc. Third, we should keep our body and mind healthy and take part in more extracurricular activities and physical exercise. Finally, we should love nature, protect the environment, do not litter, love animals and plants. We should also actively participate in labor, such as cleaning the classroom and helping our parents do housework.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿作文；
②时态：因为本文是描述做法，故用一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文要求以“How to Be a Responsible Student”为题写一篇演讲稿，提示要点已给出，写作内容需要包含提示要点，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出话题“如何做一个有责任感的学生”；
第二步，具体给出做一个有责任感的学生的做法；
第三步，由于本文是演讲稿，故在第三段需要书写结语，表达对大家聆听的感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①a sense of……感
②need to do sth需要做某事
③take part in参加
[高分句型]
①We are thankful to those who helped us. （who引导的定语从句）
②We should also actively participate in labor, such as cleaning the classroom and helping our parents do housework.（such as后接具体事例）
H
毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
内容要点 参考词汇
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3)词数80～100。
My dream job
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【答案】
My dream job
We all have dream jobs. As for me, I dream to be a scientist. I have always been interested
in science. I want to invent new products to improve people’s life and I also hope to discover the mysteries of the world.
To be a scientist, I need to take actions right now. First, I’m going to study science really hard. Second, I plan to do scientific research. And most importantly, I’ll read as many books as possible. If I become a scientist, I will live in Beijing where I can communicate with more experts. I believe my dream will come true if I work hard.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。以“我梦想的工作”为题写一篇短文。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时，人称以第一人称为主。分为两段式：第一段介绍自己梦想的工作是什么；第二段介绍自己如何让自己的梦想实现。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
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为适应时代发展，很多同学从小开始勤学苦练，培养各种技能。在这些技能中，你认为哪些是重要的 请根据提示选择或自拟2—3种技能，以 “Core（核心）skills”为主题写一篇英语短文，并阐述你的理由。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Core skills
To keep pace with the development of times, everyone must learn various skills.
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【答案】
Core skills
To keep pace with the development of times, everyone must learn various skills. Among these skills, I think communicating skills and learning skills are the most important.
Communication plays an important role in our social lives. On the one hand, it is the communication that spreads information, making us know different kinds of knowledge. On the other hand, communication builds personal relationship, which connects different people together. Learning skills are also important in our lives. We should not only work hard, but also we should have learning skills. If we have learning skills, we can learn different kinds of things easily.
If we want to have a better life, we should try our best develop these two skills.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Core skills”为题介绍自己认为哪些技能是重要的，并说明理由，可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。第一段引入话题；第二段重点介绍认为这两种技能重要的理由；最后一段进行总结。写作时可运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
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阅读使人充实，阅读使人明智。某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况，开展了以“Reading Outside Class”为题的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息，就阅读的好处、你的阅读现状、阅读计划写一篇短文，向该英文报投稿。
要求：
（1）短文须包含图中所有信息，详略自行处理，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages.
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Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages. For one thing, it can help us know more about the world because books are full of knowledge, and it makes us wiser and richer in life. For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.
I like reading newspapers and magazines, from which I get lots of fun and learn about what’s going on around the world. I also read storybooks and novels in my spare time, which makes me relaxed and happy. I seldom read e-books because it’s bad for eyes. On weekends, I usually spend a whole afternoon reading in the library. And I also read for about half an hour before going to bed every night.
Summer vacation is coming, and I plan to do more reading. I am going to read more classics and more English books to improve my language skills. I’m sure reading can make a difference to my life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，按题目要求写读书的好处。
第二步，叙述自己的读书现状。
第三步，写出自己的读书计划等。
[亮点词汇]
①spare time 空闲时间
②plan to do 计划做某事
③make a difference to 对……产生影响
[高分句型]
①For another, it’s of great importance to do some reading because reading helps us have a better understanding of history.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I also read storybooks and novels in my spare time, which makes me relaxed and happy.（which引导的非限制性定语从句）
K
“立德树人，五育融合”的教育理念深入人心。假如你是李华，在即将毕业的日子里，回首过去的三年时光，从“德，智，体，美，劳”几个方面谈谈自己这三年来的进步，给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。请根据下表提示完成一篇英语短文。
make progress in… 德 爱国爱家，诚实守信，……。
智 努力学习，热爱阅读，……。
体 坚持锻炼，健康饮食，……。
美 善于发现生活中的美好，热爱自然，……。
劳 热爱劳动，掌握生活必备技能，……。
注意事项：
1．从表格中选择三项，其中“劳”必写。表格中的提示只是作为参考，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇：劳动教育labor education
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways. _______________________________
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In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
【答案】
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways.
First of all, I think we must love our country and our family. To be honest is very important, so I can keep my promise all the time. I have been thankful to my parents and friends. Second, I know the importance of knowledge, so I work hard and enjoy reading. In my free time, I read many books because reading can open up a new world to me. Third, labor education is necessary for us to receive, and I have taken an active part in all kinds of labor, such as doing housework and cleaning up the classroom. In this way, I have learnt many necessary life skills.
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据提示和要求，从“德，智，体，美，劳”几个方面中谈谈自己这三年来的进步，给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，表明自己在过去三年里进步很大；
第二步，具体从“德，智，体，美，劳”说明自己的进步；
第三步，总结，自己为这些年的进步感到骄傲并致谢。
[亮点词汇]
①To be honest老实说
②In one’s free time在某人业余时光
③take an active part in积极参加
[高分句型]
To be honest is very important, so I can keep my promise all the time.（不定式作主语）
L
为了更好地适应高中的学习和生活，英语课上，大家要对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，请你根据下面的表格内容准备好发言稿，简要补充选择这些活动安排的原因。
内容要点 参考词汇
What are you going to learn English…
What are you going to do for fun read books…
How often are you going to exercise every day…
Where are you going with your friends or family …
注意：
(1) 必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3) 词数 80~100 。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I’m happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with, ____
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【答案】
Hello everyone! I’m happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with, I am going to learn English because English is my weakness. I will improve my English by reading English stories and listening to English radio. After studying, I plan to read some books. I think reading can not only increase my knowledge, but also relax me. In addition, I also plan to exercise every day. After all, a healthy body is the most important thing. Finally, I plan to travel to Beijing with my family. There, we will climb the Great Wall and visit the Forbidden City. I think we will have a good time.
What’s your summer vacation plan Can you tell me
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般将来时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“描述自己的暑假计划”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图；
第二步，根据题干表格，详细描述暑假的安排和原因；
第三步，肯定自己将度过一个有意义的暑假，提出问题，并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①listen to听
②not only…but also不仅……而且
[高分句型]
①To start with, I am going to learn English because English is my weakness. （because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think we will have a good time. （宾语从句）
L
读书，可以通理、明志、修身。假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍对你影响最大的 一本书， 以及书的内容和对你的影响。
提示词语：the Little Prince, experience, story, courage, friendship
提示问题：
● Which book has influenced you most
● What is the book mainly about
● How has it influenced you
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【答案】One possible version:
During my junior high school years, The Little Prince has influenced me most and it deeply touched my heart.
This book tells the story about the Little Prince’s experiences of visiting different planets as well as the love between him and his red rose. It contains deep meanings in very simple words, which makes it inspiring.
Whenever I feel confused or frustrated, the words from this book always give me courage to find my way to go through difficult times. Moreover, the book has taught me the true meaning of friendship, which makes me cherish every moment I have with my friends.
So, if you have some time, consider reading this book, and you might gain a lot from it, just as I have done.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍哪本书对你影响最大；
第二步，介绍这本书的主要内容；
第三步，最后描述这本书对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
① as well as 以及
② go through 经历
③ consider doing sth 考虑做某事
[高分句型]
①It contains deep meanings in very simple words, which makes it inspiring.（定语从句）
②So, if you have some time, consider reading this book, and you might gain a lot from it, just as I have done.（条件状语从句）2024年中考英语复习拔高特训之书面表达（山西省）
A
为了提高青少年的自我防范意识和保护能力，希望中学初三(1)班围绕校园欺凌问题召开主题班会。假定你是班长李华，以“How to Protect Ourselves in School Bullying”为标题写一篇发言稿。
注意：
(1)须包含思维导图内容提示的所有信息，并将所缺措施补充完整；
(2)不得在作文中出现真实人名、校名等；
(3)语句连贯，词数80左右。（开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇： bullying n. 恃强凌弱的行为； bully v. 欺负/n. 恶霸
How to Protect Ourselves in School Bullying
Dear classmates,
Recently, the problem of school bullying has been brought into focus.
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B
时光飞逝，初中生活已接近尾声。回顾初中生涯，你一定经历了成长的烦恼，也成就了更好的自己。假设《中学生英文报》正在举办以“成长”为主题的征文活动，请根据以下提示，以“Growing Pains and Gains”为题写篇短文投稿。
What problem did you have
How did you solve it
Who/What either encouraged or helped you (friends/teachers/heroes/music/films/books…)
What have you learned from it
要求：
1. 短文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分；
2. 全文不少于 80词。
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C
“吾日三省吾身”。作为21世纪的青少年，我们应该勇敢面对自己的缺点，在生活和学习中提升自己。请你以“How to be a better ___________.”为题，根据写作要求，写一篇英语短文，向学校的校刊投稿。
要求：
（1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
（2）词数100左右。
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D
你校英语俱乐部将举行“劳动教育”主题活动，现向全校学生征求活动建议。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容用英语给负责人写一封书信，谈谈自己的劳动经历并提供建议。
注意：
1. 短文必须包括上图所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 补充内容至少各一条；
3. 词数：80—100；
4. 文章的开头仅供选择使用，不计入总词数。
Dear sir,
Labor is a very important part of our life. Here is my experience and some advice.
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Yours,
Li Hua
E
2023年12月22日， 第78届联合国大会协商一致通过决议，将中国春节确定为联合国假日。假如你是刘华，欣喜之间，很想你的英国笔友Tony来跟你一起过春节。请你写一封信邀请他。
内容要点：
1. 发出邀请；
2. 根据图片内容介绍春节；
3. 表达期许与愿景。
要求：
1. 内容须包括所提示的信息，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 80词左右，信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
How is everything I’m happy that last month the UN officially listed the Spring Festival as
one of its holidays. _______________________________________________________________
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Yours,
Liu Hua
F
生活是一位睿智的长者，生活是一位博学的老师。生活需要我们用心面对，无论是美好还是意外，我们都要记得微笑和感恩。请以“Life is full of”为题写一篇短文，分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历。
内容包括：1. 请先将标题填写完整；
2. 分享一次对你有特殊意义的经历；
3. 谈谈你的感悟。
注 意：1. 词数100，短文开头已给出部分，请填写完整，不计入总词数；
2. 内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Life is full of ________
Life will be wonderful with all kinds of ________. It is the ________ that make me stronger.
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G
习近平主席在全国教育大会上强调，中学生要做德智体美劳全面发展的社会主义建设者和接班人，学校教育要落实立德树人根本任务。滨江中学准备开展“做一个有责任感的中学生”的活动。请根据以下内容提示及要求，以“How to Be a Responsible Student”为题写一篇演讲稿。
提示：
（1）爱国爱党，有理想，诚实守信，善良感恩；
（2）努力学习，树立节约意识，不要浪费（如：食物，纸张，水电等）；
（3）保持身心健康，多参加课外活动和体育锻炼：
（4）热爱自然，保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，爱护动植物：
（5）积极参加劳动，如打扫教室，帮助父母做家务等。
参考词汇： keep one’s promise, be thankful to sb, set the mind of saving
要求：
（1）80-120词，开头结尾已给，不计入总词数：
（2）句子通顺，语意连贯，符合逻辑：
（3）包含所有提示内容，但不要逐句翻译，可适当发挥：
（4）书写正确规范，卷面整洁。
Boys and girls,
As teenagers, we are the future of our motherland.
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Thanks for listening!
H
毕业之际，学校英文报将举行以“My dream job”为题的征文比赛。请你根据自己的理想，选择下表中一个职业或自行确定另一个职业写一篇英语短文，向校英文报投稿。
内容要点 参考词汇
What do you want to be when you grow up a teacher a scientist
Why do you want to be a(n)… ●be good at communicating ●work with children ●be interested in science ●invent new products
How are you going to do that ●get a good education ●learn how to teach children ●study science hard ●do scientific research
Where are you going to work ●… ●…
When are you going to start ●… ●…
注意：(1)文中必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥，参考词汇仅供选择使用；
(2)文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3)词数80～100。
My dream job
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I
为适应时代发展，很多同学从小开始勤学苦练，培养各种技能。在这些技能中，你认
为哪些是重要的 请根据提示选择或自拟2—3种技能，以 “Core（核心）skills”为主题写一篇英语短文，并阐述你的理由。
注意：
1. 词数90左右，短文开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
2. 表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Core skills
To keep pace with the development of times, everyone must learn various skills.
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J
阅读使人充实，阅读使人明智。某英文报为了了解中学生的课外阅读情况，开展了以“Reading Outside Class”为题的征文活动。请结合下面图示信息，就阅读的好处、你的阅读现状、阅读计划写一篇短文，向该英文报投稿。
要求：
（1）短文须包含图中所有信息，详略自行处理，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现个人真实的姓名和校名；
（3）词数80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Reading Outside Class
As we all know, reading has a lot of advantages.
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K
“立德树人，五育融合”的教育理念深入人心。假如你是李华，在即将毕业的日子里，回首过去的三年时光，从“德，智，体，美，劳”几个方面谈谈自己这三年来的进步，给自己的初中生涯做一个总结。请根据下表提示完成一篇英语短文。
make progress in… 德 爱国爱家，诚实守信，……。
智 努力学习，热爱阅读，……。
体 坚持锻炼，健康饮食，……。
美 善于发现生活中的美好，热爱自然，……。
劳 热爱劳动，掌握生活必备技能，……。
注意事项：
1．从表格中选择三项，其中“劳”必写。表格中的提示只是作为参考，要求语句通顺，意思连贯，适当发挥。
2．词数90左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3．文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。
参考词汇：劳动教育labor education
How time flies! We’re leaving junior high school and entering senior high school. In the past three years, I have made great progress in many ways. _______________________________
__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In a word, I’m very proud that I can make such great progress in the past three years.
L
为了更好地适应高中的学习和生活，英语课上，大家要对即将到来的暑假安排进行讨论，请你根据下面的表格内容准备好发言稿，简要补充选择这些活动安排的原因。
内容要点 参考词汇
What are you going to learn English…
What are you going to do for fun read books…
How often are you going to exercise every day…
Where are you going with your friends or family …
注意：
(1) 必须包括所给的内容要点，可适当发挥；
(2) 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息；
(3) 词数 80~100 。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! I’m happy to share my summer vacation plan with you. To start with, ____
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L
读书，可以通理、明志、修身。假如你是李华。请你用英文写一篇短文给学校英文网站投稿，介绍对你影响最大的 一本书， 以及书的内容和对你的影响。
提示词语：the Little Prince, experience, story, courage, friendship
提示问题：
● Which book has influenced you most
● What is the book mainly about
● How has it influenced you
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