外研八下期末作文复习--M3&M4话题作文——太空畅想课件（希沃白板版+PPT版）

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M3&M4话题作文
Module 3　Journey to space
Module 3　话题写作——太空畅想
【写作任务】
假如你是2300年的一名初中生李晓。你去过很多地方旅
游，其中最让你念念不忘的是你班的火星之旅。请你用英语
写一篇80～100词的短文，描述此次旅行经历。短文内容须
包含以下表格的所有要点，可适当发挥。
【审题谋篇】
spaceship
enjoyed　
talked　
party　
excited　
续表
【句式升级】
1. 火星上的生活比地球上的生活更舒服、更有趣。（使用本
模块所学的比较级结构来翻译）


2. 宇航员们已经去过月球，但是还没有去过火星。（使用本
模块所学的现在完成时和already，yet来翻译）


　Life on Mars is more comfortable and more interesting
than that on the earth.
　Astronauts have already been to the moon but they haven’t
been to Mars yet.
3. 火星上有各种各样美味的食物。（使用本模块所学的there
be句型来翻译）

There are different kinds of delicious foods on Mars.
佳句积累
1. The life on Mars must be very different from that on the earth.
火星上的生活一定和地球上的生活大不相同。
2. I have a dream of making friends with other beings in the
universe.
我有一个和宇宙中其他生命交朋友的梦想。
3. Walking on Mars must be a very interesting experience.
在火星上漫步一定是一次非常有趣的经历。
4. It was a trip that enriched my life and that’s why it was so
special.
这一次旅行丰富了我的生活，这也是它如此特别的原因。
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version：
I have been to many beautiful places so far，but the most
unforgettable trip is the journey to Mars.
My class has just organised a great trip to Mars. We went to
Mars by spaceship. On Mars，we looked everywhere and found
a lot of things that were different from those on the earth. The
scenery on Mars was so beautiful that we fell in love with it as
soon as we got there. We also had a talk with some aliens who
had only one eye but four arms. After that，we celebrated our
meeting by having a party which lasted for two hours.
We all had a good time and all of us felt excited about the
unforgettable experience. I’m looking forward to visiting it again.
【写作加餐】
假如你是李华，现在是2300年，由于人口剧增，部分人
类选择移民去了月球，你也随你的父母一起搬去了月球生
活。你的好朋友Peter还居住在地球上，他在信中询问你现在
的生活，请你用英语给他写一封回信，简要介绍一下你在月
球上的生活，如月球上的交通、环境、食物等。
注意：1.回信必须包含以上信息，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80～100。
One possible version：









Dear Peter，　
　I’m happy to hear from you and I’m glad to share my
life on the moon with you.
　The spaceship has become the main way for people to go
out. It’s so fast that people can go anywhere in a short time.
There has been no pollution on the moon and the
environment has become very clean. What’s more，the food
here has been fresh and natural，so people can eat it without
any worries.




　I’m satisfied with the life on the moon and I’m looking
forward to your visit.
Yours，　
Li Hua
Module 4　　Seeing the doctor
Module 4　话题写作——健康生活
【写作任务】
假如你是李红，你的美国笔友Jack给你发来一封电子邮
件，说他总是感觉很疲惫，以至于不能集中精力听课。请你
根据以下提示词，用英语给Jack回一封电子邮件。
提示词： breakfast，exercise，sleep，keep healthy
注意：1.内容必须包含以上所有提示词，语句通顺，行文
连贯；
2. 词数80～100。
【审题谋篇】
eat /have
exercise　
eight　
or　
healthy/good　
【句式升级】
1. 看太多的电视对我们的眼睛是有害的。（使用本模块所学
的be harmful to短语来翻译）

2. 你应该停止喝各种各样的饮料，多喝水。（使用本模块所
学的stop doing sth.结构来翻译）


Watching too much TV is harmful to our eyes.
　You should stop having different kinds of drinks and drink
more water.
3. 为了保持健康，玛丽几乎不吃垃圾食品，比如汉堡和薯
条。（使用本模块所学的动词不定式表目的的结构及such as
短语来翻译）


　To keep healthy/fit，Mary hardly eats junk food，such as
hamburgers and French fries.
佳句积累
1. An apple a day keeps the doctor away.
一日一苹果，医生远离我。
2. More and more people realise how important it is to keep
healthy.
越来越多的人意识到保持健康有多么重要。
3. Stop eating fast food and remember to have breakfast every
day.
停止吃快餐并记得每天吃早饭。
4. Early to bed and early to rise makes a man healthy，wealthy
and clever.
早睡早起使人健康、富有和聪明。
5. Laughter is the best medicine.
笑是最好的药剂。
【妙笔成篇】
One possible version：
Dear Jack，
I’m sorry to hear that you always feel tired. Let me give you
some advice.
First of all，you should have breakfast every morning.
Having breakfast can help you study well. Then，you should do
exercise as much as possible after school. Doing exercise can
make you keep healthy. It’s also important to have eight or nine
hours’ sleep every night. Good sleep can make you feel well. Try
to have a healthy lifestyle and then you can study well.
I hope these can be helpful to you.
Yours，
Li Hong
【写作加餐】
假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Bill来信说他最近视力下
降，为此感到担心，他在信中向你请教保护视力的方法。请
你根据下图提示，用英语给他写一封回信。
注意：1.内容必须包含以上所有要点，可适当发挥；
2. 词数80～100。
One possible version：




Dear Bill，　
　I’m sorry to hear that your eyesight is getting weaker.
I’d like to give you some advice about how to protect your
eyesight.











　First，when you are at school，do more exercise
outside during the breaks. You can just take a walk outside or
look at some green trees or leaves. Second，you should stop
playing computer games for a long time. It’s harmful to your
health and the light of the computer may hurt your eyes.
Third，doing eye exercises is also helpful in protecting your
eyesight. Lastly， try to eat more healthy food， such as fish
and carrots.
I hope my advice can help you.　
Yours，　
Li Hua