2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(陕西专用)（含解析）

书面表达20篇
1．（2024·陕西渭南·二模）为了提高学生们的口语水平，你校英语俱乐部要举行一个“英语之夜（The English Evening）” 活动，请你根据以下具体信息写一个通知。
The English Evening
Time 6:00 p.m.—8:00 p.m., June 6
Place in the school hall
Activities 1. watch an English play; 2. learn to sing English songs; 3. tell Chinese stories in English; 4. …
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Notice
Dear students,
In order to improve students’ spoken English, our school will hold the activity of the English Evening. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The School English Club
【答案】例文
Notice
Dear students,
In order to improve students’ spoken English, our school will hold the activity of the English Evening. It will be held from 6:00 p.m. to 8:00 p.m., June 6 in the school hall. All the students are welcome to take part in.
We’ll have some wonderful activities. First, there will be an interesting English play. Then the foreign teacher Mark will teach us to sing English songs. Besides, we will tell Chinese stories in English. At last, every one will get a beautiful T-shirt. If you are interested in it, please contact your English teacher.
Let’s practice spoken English together. I’m sure we’ll have a good time.
The School English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一则通知；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动的时间、地点；
第二步，具体阐述活动内容；
第三步，表达祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①from...to...从……到……
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①If you are interested in it, please contact your English teacher.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I’m sure we’ll have a good time.（省略that的宾语从句）
2．（2024·陕西汉中·二模）假设你是李华，是你校英语俱乐部负责人，为了促进俱乐部成员之间的交流，你计划本周六组织一次野餐活动。请你根据以下具体信息用英文发一则通知。
A Picnic on Saturday
When and where to meet 3:00 p.m. at the school gate
Where to go the South Lake Park
Who all the members of the English club
What to take some bread; drinks; fruit salad; …
What to do fly kites; play games; sing songs; take photos, …
Rules protect the grass, flowers and trees; don’t litter, …
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥;
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整;
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等);
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Notice
Dear members,
We are going to have a picnic this Saturday.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
The English Club
【答案】参考范文：
Notice
Dear members,
We are going to have a picnic this Saturday. Please get to the school gate at 3:00 p.m. on Saturday. We will go to the South Lake Park together.
We can take some bread and drinks as well as some fruit to make a fruit salad. During the period, we can fly kites and play games together. If we are tired, we can chat with each other or sing songs together. At last, we will take a photo together to remember this meaningful day.
What’s more, we should remember to protect the grass, flowers and trees in the park. And don’t drop litter
carelessly.
Let’s have a good time together!
The English Club
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一则通知；
②时态：时态主要用“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍活动集合时间及地点；
第二步，介绍活动中的详细内容以及注意事项；
第三步，表达美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as 以及
②chat with each other 互相聊天
③drop litter carelessly 乱丢垃圾
[高分句型]
①If we are tired, we can chat with each other or sing songs together.（if引导的条件状语从句）
② Let’s have a good time together!（祈使句）
3．（2024·陕西宝鸡·二模）随着人们对传统文化的不断关注，越来越多的年轻人热衷于中华民族传统服饰。假如你是李华，你的外国笔友Bob发来邮件，想要了解 “中国华服日”。请你根据以下表格提示内容，用英文给Bob回复一封邮件，介绍 “中国华服日”。
Name Chinese National Costume Day
Time on March 3rd of the lunar calendar
Places (cities in China) Xi’an, Kaifeng, Macao, Beijing, …
Activities enjoy Chinese National Costume shows, sing songs, dance, play games, experience traditional hand-made crafts like paper cutting, clay art, …
Food Chinese traditional foods
要求：
1. 参考表格提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 邮件中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to receive your email. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If possible, welcome to celebrate Chinese National Costume Day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One Possible Version:
Dear Bob,
I’m glad to receive your email. Here is something about Chinese National Costume Day.
It’s on March 3rd of the lunar calendar. It is held in many cities in China like Xi’an, Kaifeng, Macao, Beijing and other places. We can enjoy Chinese National Costume shows at the festival. There are many activities people can do. We can sing songs, dance and play games. In addition, we can also experience traditional hand made crafts like paper cutting and clay art. Many different kinds of Chinese traditional foods are also served.
If possible, welcome to celebrate Chinese National Costume Day.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
② 时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍这个活动的名字，时间和地点；
第二步，具体阐述活动内容和中国传统食物。
[亮点词汇]
① in addition 此外
② different kinds of 不同种类的
[高分句型]
There are many activities people can do.（定语从句）
4．（2024·陕西西安·二模）为了提升学生的英语水平，丰富学生的日常生活，学校英语俱乐部决定举办一系列语言实践活动。请你根据以下具体信息，写一则通知，号召同学们积极参与活动。
English Practical Activities
Time 2:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m, May 15
Place in the school hall
Members all the students of our school
Activities 1. sing English songs 2. tell Chinese stories in English 3. perform short plays in English 4. …
要求：
1.所写内容应包含表格各栏目要点。活动 (Activities) 的具体信息词汇可选择使用，亦可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4.词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Notice
Dear students,
In order to improve your English, make you relaxed and have colorful school lives, our school will_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
For more information, please contact your head teacher. Welcome to take part in the activities.
School English Club
May 11, 2024
【答案】范文：
Notice
Dear students,
In order to improve your English, make you relaxed and have colorful school lives, our school will hold English Practical Activities in the school hall at 2:30 p.m.—5:30 p.m, May 15. And all the students of our school will be present on that day. We will have programs, such as singing English songs, telling Chinese stories in English, and performing short plays in English. I’m sure we will have a nice time. Each class should register at least 3 programs. And then the Students Union will choose the best ones to show. Furthermore, the content of each program must be healthy, active and educative. Please register at English teachers’ office as soon as possible.
For more information, please contact your head teacher. Welcome to take part in the activities.
School English Club
May 11, 2024
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇通知；
②时态：时态主要为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出英语实践活动的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。介绍英语实践活动的具体时间及内容等情况；
第三步，书写结语。呼吁同学们积极参加英语实践活动。
[亮点词汇]
①be present出席
②such as例如
③as soon as possible尽快
[高分句型]
I’m sure we will have a nice time. (省略that的宾语从句)
5．（2024·陕西西安·三模）国有国法，家有家规。在你的学校中一定有很多规章制度来规范中学生的行为，使学生们都能健康成长。假如你是Tom，请根据下表提示，以My School Rules为题写一篇短文，谈谈你们学校的校规，并谈谈你的看法。
Things we can do: Things we can’t do:
1)课上认真听讲 2)保持教室整洁 3)在校穿校服…… 1)课堂上不讲闲话 2)不带食物进教室 3)在校不打架
你的看法：……
要求：
1)语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯；
2)书写工整、规范；
3)根据所给内容，请做适当发挥；
4)词数80左右。文章的题目和开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My School Rules
Every school has rules for students. As a student, we must obey them.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My School Rules
Every school has rules for students. As a student, we must obey them. First of all, in class, we shouldn’t talk but listen to the teachers carefully. We are not supposed to take food and drinks into the classroom. We
should keep our classroom quiet and clean. Then, after class, we should finish our homework on time. One more thing, we should wear our school uniforms at school. Besides, we should protect trees, grass, and flowers there because they make our school more beautiful. At last, we should get on well with our teachers and classmates. Don’t fight with each other.
Although we have different views on the rules, I think everyone should obey the school rules.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态应用“一般现在时”；
③提示：题目已经给出行文思路，学生按照思路展开叙述即可，并可适当进行拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍校规中应该做的事情；
第二步，介绍校规中不应该做的事情；
第三步，谈谈自己对校规的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①first of all首先
②get on well with与……融洽相处
[高分句型]
①Besides, we should protect trees, grass, and flowers there because they make our school more beautiful.（because引导原因状语从句）
②Don’t fight with each other.（祈使句）
6．（2024·陕西西安·三模）为创造美好的生活，学习基本的生活技能（planting，fixing……）在青少年的成长过程中十分必要。某英语杂志特举办以“生活技能”为主题的英语征文活动。请你根据以下的提示问题，以“Little Life Skills Are a Big Help”为题，写一篇英语短文参与投稿。
提示：1. What life skill do you want to learn
2. Why do you want to learn this skill
3. How do you plan to learn this skill
要求：1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4. 词数：不少于70词（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
【答案】例文：
Little Life Skills Are a Big Help
Life skills are necessary for us teenagers. To live more healthily and happily, we are supposed to learn more new life skills.
As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life. It’s wonderful to create my own dishes. Besides, learning to look after my family is also my wish. In order to develop my cooking skill, I will first ask my mother for help. I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. And it’s also a
good idea to learn from the cooking videos online.
Little life skills are a big help. Let’s take action now.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的。开头已给出；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“想要学的生活技能、为什么、如何学”几个方面具体展开；
第三步，书写结语。结尾已给出。
[亮点词汇]
①would like to do想要做某事
②develop skill培养技能
③ask sb for help向某人求助
[高分句型]
①As for me, I would like to choose cooking, which is a basic skill in our daily life.（定语从句）
②I think the dishes she cooks are the most delicious in the world. （省略that的宾语从句）
7．（2024·陕西安康·一模）假如你是李菲，你的朋友Sarah 给你写信倾诉了她与她姐姐之间的矛盾。请你给她写一封英文回信，给她一些建议。
提示：
Dear Li Fei, I felt so terrible today. In the morning. I played volleyball with my sister Sally near our house. And I carelessly broke Sally’s glasses. She said I nearly hurt her eyes and she was very angry with me. I really don’t know what to do. Can you help me Looking forward to your reply! Yours, Sarah
提示词：know, suggestions, first, say sorry, then, talk with, at last, buy, glasses, important…
要求：
1. 参考提示信息，选择使用提示词，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文章不得出现你的任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70。(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Dear Sarah,
I have received your letter this morning. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope my suggestions will be useful to you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Fei
【答案】范文：
Dear Sarah,
I have received your letter this morning. I’m sorry to hear about your trouble. I know you’re upset about breaking your sister’s glasses. First, you should say sorry to her sincerely. Then, you need to talk with her and make an explanation that you didn’t mean to. At last, you can search for the similar style in spectacles stores nearby. If possible, buy her a new pair. I guess she will be happy to receive it. What’s more, communication is important, I’m sure you’ll work it out.
Hope my suggestions will be useful to you. Best wishes!
Yours,
Li Fei
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。得知Sarah遇到的问题以后表示抱歉；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。告诉Sarah面对这个问题具体应该怎么做；
第三步，书写结语。希望提的建议对Sarah有帮助。
[亮点词汇]
①hear about听说
②need to do sth.需要做某事
③make an explanation做出解释
④search for寻找
[高分句型]
①Then, you need to talk with her and make an explanation that you didn’t mean to. (并列句)
②I guess she will be happy to receive it. (省略that的宾语从句)
8．（2024·陕西商洛·一模）西安作为十三朝古都，历史悠久，文化璀璨，几千年来形成了特有的三秦文化，而美食更是三秦大地上最悠久的文化之一。假如你是李雪，你的英国朋友John对中国的美食很感兴趣。下面是John的一封电子邮件，请你根据邮件内容，给他回复一封英文邮件。
Hi Li Xue,
You know I like Chinese food very much because it’s really delicious. My mother’s birthday is coming and I plan to cook a Chinese dish named fried eggs with tomatoes for her as a gift. Can you teach me how to make the dish
Looking forward to your reply.
John
参考词汇：cut tomatoes into pieces; break and whip eggs; fry eggs; salt; pot
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
Hi John,
I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. ___________________________________________________________________________________________
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Li Xue
【答案】例文
Hi John,
I’m really glad to know that you are interested in Chinese food. China is very famous for its food in the world. There are many different kinds of traditional dishes.
As for cooking the dish for your mother, I think you made a good choice. The dish is easy to make and it’s delicious. First, wash two tomatoes and cut them into pieces. Next, break three eggs and whip them in a bowl. Third, pour some oil into the pot, put the eggs in and fry them for a while. Fourth, put the tomatoes in and mix them together. Last, put some salt and sugar, and it’s done. I’m sure your mother will love it.
Looking forward to hearing from you.
Li Xue
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：结合John的邮件以及参考词汇给John回复，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍中国美食；
第二步，详细介绍“西红柿炒鸡蛋”的做法；
第三步，期望得到对方的答复。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②different kinds of不同种类的
③as for至于
④pour…into…把……倒进……
⑤look forward to doing sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
①There are many different kinds of traditional dishes.（there be句型）
②I’m sure your mother will love it.（省略that的宾语从句）
9．（2024·陕西西安·二模）假如你是李华，下面是你的英国笔友 Frank 发来的邮件。请给他回复邮件，回答他关心的问题。
Dear Li Hua,
Mother’s Day is coming! It is a great time to thank mothers for their love and care. Do you have any plans to make your mother surprised on this day And how do you like this festival
Yours,
Frank
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息 (姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70词。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)
Dear Frank,
How is it going Mother’s Day is coming. I’m glad to share my ideas with you.
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Frank,
How is it going Mother’s Day is coming. I’m glad to share my ideas with you.
Mother’s Day is on the second Sunday in May. On that day, it’s excellent for us to celebrate it in many ways for our mums, like buying flowers, making special Mother’s Day cards.
As for me, I plan to give my mother a music box. I made it last week. It took me three hours to make it. I will stick a real rose to the cover of the box. I keep the secret because I want to give her a surprise. After mom opens it, she will hear a beautiful song. I’m sure my mom will like it.
Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. Our mothers have given us so much love and care, so we should give them more in return. We can help them do housework. A simple hug is also a perfect gift. What’s more, working hard and being good kids are also good ways to make our mothers happy. Let’s take action to express our love to our mothers faithfully.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括电子邮件中的两个方面的问题要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，分享自己关于母亲节的观点，从而引出话题；
第二步，总体介绍母亲节；
第三步，叙述自己特别的计划；
第四步，介绍自己对母亲的看法，呼吁行动起来。
［亮点词汇］
① take action 采取行动
② what’s more 另外
［高分句型］
① I keep the secret because I want to give her a surprise. (because引导原因状语从句)
② Whatever we do, thanksgiving is the most important. (whatever引导让步状语从句)
10．（2024·陕西榆林·二模）转眼间，初中三年的光阴就要画上句号了。在这期间，你肯定有过彷徨、难过、遇到困难的时候，你还记得是谁向你伸出来了援助之手吗？在即将毕业之际，请你根据以下提示，把这段经历描述出来，以表达你的感恩之心吧！
提示：
1. What difficulties (problems) did you meet and how did you feel
2. How did she/he help you
3. How did the situation become better
要求：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
How time flies! It has been more than two years since I went to middle school. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文 ：
How time flies! It has been more than two years since I went to middle school. Two years ago when I began to learn English, I found that it was hard for me to remember all the new words and understand the listening exercises. I didn’t know what to do. My teacher advised me to try to learn at least ten new words every day and listen to the tape and radio programs. So I kept on doing these and now I have made lots of progress in listening. Now I become more confident and I can speak English well.
In a word, when we face difficulties, we shouldn’t give up easily. Instead, we should do our best to deal with them, and then we will succeed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：根据实际情况灵活运用时态；
③提示：要点提示已给出，考生应按要求完成写作，可适当添加细节，完善写作内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，承接已给出的开头，讲述自己曾遇到的困难及当时的感受；
第二步，讲述“那个人”是如何帮助当时处在困境中的自己，以及情况是如何好转的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
① at least 至少
② keep on doing sth. 继续做某事
③ make lots of progress 取得很大进步
④ give up 放弃
⑤ in a word 总而言之
⑥ deal with 处理，应对
[高分句型]
① Two years ago when I began to learn English, I found that it was hard for me to remember all the new words and understand the listening exercises. (when引导时间状语从句，that引导宾语从句)
② In a word, when we face difficulties, we shouldn’t give up easily. (when引导时间状语从句)
11．（2024·陕西安康·一模）沟通，不仅仅是交流信息，更是互通心灵。某英文网站正在开展以“学会沟通”为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请你根据以下图示信息并结合自身的经历写一篇英文短文投稿。
参考词汇: respect (尊重), disagree, follow, understand, …
要求：
1. 短文必须包括所给要点，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺， 意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名等)；
4. 词数：不少于70 (开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
It’s important to learn to communicate well with others. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
It’s important to learn to communicate well with others. I think the most useful skill to communicate better is to respect others.
Last year I went travelling with my good friends. When I made the plan, he disagreed. We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice. Later, I thought about it and realized that his advice was actually pretty good. We should respect each other. I said sorry to him and then we had a good trip.
In my opinion, everyone should learn how to get on well with others. We should learn to listen to and understand others. We should also respect others politely.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：根据所给图示信息并结合自身的经历完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍良好沟通的方式以及最有用的沟通技巧；
第二步，介绍自身的经历；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①respect尊重
②go travelling去旅行
③argue争辩
④advice建议
⑤say sorry to sb.向某人道歉
⑥get on well with sb.与某人相处得很好
[高分句型]
①When I made the plan, he disagreed.(when引导时间状语从句)
②We argued about it because I thought he should follow my advice.(because引导原因状语从句)
12．（2024·陕西榆林·一模）劳动教育是青少年全面发展的重要组成部分，因此每个青少年都应该积极参加劳动。假如你是王明，最近你校英文社团开展了以“Take Part in Labor Activities”为题的征文活动。请你根据下表内容，写一篇英语短文投稿。
What Wang Ming Does What Wang Ming Learns
At school clean the classroom ▲ improve life skills ▲ … ▲ …
At home …
In the community …
要求：
1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4.词数：不少于70词。（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）
Take Part in Labor Activities
Labor education is very necessary and it’s good for students’ development. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Take Part in Labor Activities
Labor education is very necessary and it’s good for students’ development.
As for me, I have been actively taking part in labor activities. At school, my classmates and I clean the classroom every week. Through this experience, I have learned the importance of teamwork. At home, I help my parents with chores which have taught me to be more responsible. Besides, I have also visited the nursing homes and helped take care of the elderly in the community.
In a word, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all my classmates to take part in labor activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和现在完成时；
③提示：要求以“Take Part in Labor Activities”为题，根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍劳动教育的重要性；
第二步，具体介绍自己参加劳动的经历；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①As for 至于
②the importance of... ……的重要性
③take care of照顾
④take part in参加
[高分句型]
①At home, I help my parents with chores which have taught me to be more responsible.（which引导的定语从句）
②In a word, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all my classmates to take part in labor activities.（that引导的宾语从句；并列句）
13．（2024·陕西西安·三模）父母总是无偿地给我们付出，我们能为父母做什么？假如你是李文，你们班下周一要进行以What can we do for our parents 为题的英语演讲赛。请你根据思维导图写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1. 要求语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
2. 可使用参考词汇；也可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数70词左右。（开头、结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Good afternoon, boys and girls!
Today my topic is “What can we do for our parents ”
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you!
【答案】例文：
Good afternoon, boys and girls!
Today my topic is “What can we do for our parents ” We can start from the following aspects.
First, we should understand our parents. Although sometimes they don’t allow us to make our own decisions and give us too much pressure, it is because they really love us and want us to have a bright future. Second, we should share some housework. We should help clean the room, cook meals and so on. Third, we should help them lower the pressure. We should care for them, spend time with them, and have a talk with them. Last, show our love to our parents often.
That’s all for my speech. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏思维导图中的关键信息，写演讲稿谈谈我们应该为父母做些什么。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出演讲主题；
第二步，分条阐述可以为父母做些什么；
第三步，收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①allow sb. to do sth. 允许某人做某事
②too much 太多
③and so on 等等
[高分句型]
①Although sometimes they don’t allow us to make our own decisions and give us too much pressure, it is because they really love us and want us to have a bright future.（although引导让步状语从句；because引导表语从句）
②Last, show our love to our parents often.（祈使句的肯定形式）
14．（2024·陕西西安·三模）同学们，新一期的校园杂志要出版了，现特向广大学生们征稿。请同学们认真阅读征稿启事，请以“How to Keep Healthy”为题写一篇短文。具体内容和要点如下：
1. 短文必须包括提示内容，可适当发挥，使语句通顺、连贯、合乎逻辑，书写工整，语法正确；
2. 不得少于70词。
3. 所写文段中不得出现与你身份相关的真实个人信息及真实地名等。
参考词汇：healthy food, do exercise, eat well, do sports, have a good breakfast
CALL FOR PAPERS Hello, everyone! Our new school magazine will come out soon. We need your articles. Our topic is about health. You can start with a title “How to keep healthy”. These questions may help you: Do you eat well Do you usually do exercise Do you sleep well /Do you often stay up late If you are happy to share your article with us, please e-mail Ms. Smith at callforpapers@by this Friday. Look forward to hearing from you.
How to Keep Healthy
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
How to Keep Healthy
It’s important for us students to keep healthy. Here are some ways.
First, you should have good eating habits. Breakfast is very important, so make sure to have breakfast every morning. Don’t eat too much fast food and have enough fruit and vegetables. Second, you should get enough sleep. Don’t stay up late. Third, you should do sports. Doing sports makes you strong and healthy. Finally, learn to relax. You can listen to music and read storybooks when you are tired.
If we want to keep healthy, follow the ways, please.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据征稿启事内容写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。介绍保持健康的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从饮食、睡眠、运动等方面介绍保持健康的方法；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①eating habits饮食习惯
②make sure确保
[高分句型]
①It’s important for us students to keep healthy.（不定式作主语）
②You can listen to music and read storybooks when you are tired.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③If we want to keep healthy, follow the ways, please.（if引导的条件状语从句）
15．（2024·陕西西安·三模）五一劳动节来临之际，你校英语社团决定举办“Grow Up in Labor”的演讲
活动。请你根据以下具体信息，结合自己的劳动经历，写一篇简短的演讲稿。
Grow Up in Labor (劳动)
Opinion Be good for students’ development
Activities At home: do some housework, clean the living room... At school: make the school cleaner, plant trees... In the community: do volunteer work, help the old, ...
What I have learned life skills, team work, ...
Feelings ...
要求： 1. 所写内容应包含表格各栏目要点。具体信息词汇可选择使用，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70。（开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数）
Grow Up in Labor
Dear teachers and students,
Today I want to talk about labor. In my opinion, labor is good for students’ development.
_________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening.
【答案】例文：
Grow Up in Labor
Dear teachers and students,
Today I want to talk about labor. In my opinion, labor is good for students’ development.
First, I want to share my experience of taking part in labor practice with everyone. At home, I always help my mother do some housework and clean the living room. At school, I always try my best to make the school cleaner. And I always plant trees at school on Tree Planting Day. In the community, I often do some volunteer work, like helping the old and helping with community health services.
During labor practice, I have learned many life skills that I can’t learn from books. What’s more, we help each other and come up with many new ideas together when we join in labor practice, which helps form team work.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
② 时态：一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“今天我想谈谈劳动”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“劳动的意义、自己的劳动经历、在劳动中所学到的东西、自己的感受等”几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。对大家的倾听表示感谢。
[亮点词汇]
① share ... with ... 与……分享……
② taking part in 参加
③ try my best to 尽力去……
④ What’s more 另外
⑤ come up with 想出
[高分句型]
① During labor practice, I have learned many life skills that I can’t learn from books.（that引导定语从句）
② What’s more, we help each other and come up with many new ideas together when we join in labor practice, which helps form team work.（when引导时间状语从句，which引导非限制性定语从句）
16．（2024·陕西渭南·一模）6月6 日是全国爱眼日。你校英文报即将开设以“How to Protect Our Eyesight”为题的专栏。假如你是李华，请你根据以下提示内容，写一篇英语短文进行投稿。
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4.词数：不少于70词（开头已给出，但不计入总词数）。
How to Protect Our Eyesight
As we all know, eyes are very important to us. _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
How to Protect Our Eyesight
As we all know, eyes are very important to us. Without the eyes, one could not enjoy the beauty of the nature as well as the colorful life. As students, protecting our own eyes is especially important, because we need to read, to write and to learn.
To protect our eyes, we can start with developing good habits of using eyes. The first thing we should pay
attention to is that we should not read anything for a long time, and then escape the environment with too strong light or dim light while reading. Secondly, we should eat healthy food to protect our eyesight. Last but not least, we should keep doing eye exercises.
Hope all of you own the eyes that are both beautiful and healthy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“眼睛的重要性”来引出下文中对如何保护眼睛的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“养成好的用眼习惯、吃健康食物和做眼保健操”三方面入手，重点介绍如何保护眼睛；
③第三步，书写结语。希望大家都有一双健康的眼睛。
[亮点词汇]
①as well as 也
②start with 从……开始
③pay attention to 注意
④last but not least 最后但同样重要的一点
[高分句型]
①The first thing we should pay attention to is that we should not read anything for a long time, and then escape the environment with too strong light or dim light while reading.（省略连接词的定语从句+that引导的表语从句）
17．（2024·陕西西安·二模）假如你是李华，因为上个月你参加了一场乡村音乐派对(country music party)而喜欢上了乡村音乐。乡村音乐舒缓(gentle)，能够清净人的思想(clean one’s mind)，消除忧虑与不快(remove worries and unhappiness)，缓解疲劳(reduce the tiredness)。你打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐，尽可能多听乡村音乐。请给你的英国笔友 Peter写一封e-mail，介绍你的这种音乐爱好。提示：
1. 参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数。)
Dear Peter,
Last month I took part in a country music party. It interested me greatly. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I think you must be a music lover, too. What’s your favorite music
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Peter,
Last month I took part in a country music party. It interested me greatly. I fell in love with the country music at once. In my opinion, country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily. Sometimes, it can help to remove worries and unhappiness. After a day’s busy study or work, if you listen to some country music, it can reduce the tiredness amazingly.
I have decided to study country music in my spare time as much as possible. I’ll listen to more country
music, and make it part of my life.
I think you must be a music lover, too. What’s your favorite music
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍你对乡村音乐的喜好以及打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐，尽可能多听乡村音乐。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍对乡村音乐的看法；
第三步，介绍自己打算在业余时间学习乡村音乐，尽可能多听乡村音乐；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①fall in love with爱上
②in my spare time在我的空闲时间
③as much as possible尽可能多地
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, country music sounds so gentle and nice that it can clean my mind easily. (so...that...引导的结果状语从句)
②After a day’s busy study or work, if you listen to some country music, it can reduce the tiredness amazingly. (if引导的条件状语从句)
18．（2024·陕西宝鸡·二模）紧张的初三生活，使很多学生倍感焦虑，那如何克服焦虑，顺利地度过初三？请根据图片提示，写一篇短文，给出如何减轻焦虑的建议。
要求：
1．词数不少于70词。（开头已给出但不计入总数）；
2．可适当发挥，使行文连贯；
3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称等信息；
Facing the high school entrance exam, everyone feels nervous.
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Facing the high school entrance exam, everyone feels nervous. Here is some advice on how to reduce stress.
Be sure to tell others about your trouble. When encountering any difficulties, communicate with classmates, teachers and parents in time. Try to relax yourself by listening to music or doing sports whenever you can. What’s more, studying with a group can make it easier for you to study. The students in the group can help you when you have problems.
If you keep doing these, I think you will feel less nervous.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇看图作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据图片提示介绍如何减轻焦虑的建议，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细介绍如何减轻焦虑的建议；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①be sure to do sth.一定做某事
②in time及时
③keep doing继续做某事
[高分句型]
①The students in the group can help you when you have problems. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②If you keep doing these, I think you will feel less nervous. (if引导的条件状语从句)
19．（2024·陕西汉中·一模）假如你是李华，是光明中学初三年级的学生，近期你校英文报Campus Life正在举办以“The Habit that Influences Me Most”为题的征文活动， 请你仔细阅读征文要求，写一篇英语短文投稿。
要求：1.参考提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3.文中不得出现任何真实信息；
4.词数：不少于70词(开头已给出，但不计入总词数)。
The Habit that Influences Me Most
Good habits can change our whole life.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The Habit that Influences Me Most
Good habits can change our whole life. But the habit of setting a schedule before doing something really helps me a lot.
Last year, I had trouble managing my time. I couldn’t find the balance between my hobbies and schoolwork. And there was always disagreement between my parents and I. Now, I have a set schedule. I put my schoolwork in the first place. After that, I hang out with friends or enjoy my hobbies to relax. This routine has made a big difference.
With this habit, I successfully achieved the balance and improved time management. It has made me more organized and relaxed.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直切主题，说明影响你最深的习惯是什么；
第二步，介绍这个习惯形成了多长时间以及是如何形成的；
第三步，介绍这个习惯对你的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①have trouble doing sth.做某事有困难
②make a big difference产生很大影响
[高分句型]
Last year, I had trouble managing my time.（动名词作宾语）
20．（2024·陕西西安·一模）为了进一步增强中学生的安全意识，提高自我保护能力，你校英文网站开展了以“安全”为主的英语征文比赛，请你参考下列提示词，写一篇文章给你校英文网站投稿，介绍自己的想法和看法。
参考词汇：
eat healthily, make friends carefully, call for help, be carefull while doing sports, ...
要求：1. 可选择使用参考词汇，亦可适当发挥；
2. 语句通顺，意思连贯，书写工整；
3. 文中不得出现你的任何真实信息（姓名、校名和地名等）；
4. 词数：不少于70词。（开头已经给出，不计入总词数）
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
As teenagers, we should always keep safety in mind. But how can we keep safe Here are some of my suggestions. First, we should eat healthily and safely. Eating unhealthily is not good for us. Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe. Also, we should be careful when we make friends, especially online. Besides, summer is coming, and we must remember it’s dangerous to swim in the river.
In short, safety must come first!
【详解】①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：一般现在时；
③提示：写作提示已经给出，如何保持安全是本文的写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明安全的重要性；
第二步，具体阐述如何如何保持安全；
第三步，总结观点。
[亮点词汇]
① keep safe保持安全
② in danger在危险中
[高分句型]
①Second, if we are in danger, we must call the police for help in time so that we can keep ourselves safe（if引导的条件状语从句；so that引导的结果状语从句）