2024年中考英语考前必练题型之书面表达（广州专用）（含答案）

2024年中考英语考前必练题型之书面表达（广州专用）
解题技巧
一、 中考作文评分标准
1. 评分标准： 内容6分，准确性6分，流畅性3分
A. 内容。是否切合题意；是否完整清晰准确地写出了题目所要求的全部内容要点；从内容的完整性、正确性与丰富度进行评价。
B: 准确性。指词汇和句法的复杂性与多样化、语言结构的准确性、语法的正确性和标点符号等；主要从语法、词汇、句型表达的准确性、丰富度与适恰度等方面进行评价。
意思基本表达清晰、可读；句子结构与拼写基本正确，及格水平(3-4分);
视语言表达的水平情况分别向上(优秀，4.5-6分)或向下(2-3分)归档；
只有简单1-3各个句子或少数短语或单词，酌情给0.5-1分
只写出个别句子或单词，词不达意，不成文，字迹不清(或中英文混杂),卷面混乱，给0分。
C: 流畅性。指短文的结构、上下文的整体性、连贯性、用词造句的流畅度、衔接、标达 的得体性。
短文结构组织严谨，应用了较复杂的语言结构，上下文连贯，给2.5-3分；
短文结构组织比较紧凑，应用了较简单的语言结构，上下文意思基本连贯，给1.5-2分；
短文结构组织很混乱，应用了较简单的语言结构，上下文意思不太连贯，表达不达流畅，只能描述部分的要点，给0.5-1分；
只写出个别句子或单词，缺乏语句之间的连接成分，语无伦次，不知所云，无法成文或传递完整的信息的，给0分。
缺结尾扣0.5分
二、解题技巧
1.审清题目要求,明确写作目的、内容和文体。
一审主题(写什么);二审人称(用什么人称写);三审体裁(记叙文、说明文、议论文、夹叙夹议、应用文);四审时态(主要时态);五审内容要点。
2.列要点、写提纲,理清思路。
3.巧用已知信息。
从信息归纳的阅读材料中提取有用的信息,灵活利用有用的短语和句子,但不能原封不动照抄内容。
4.扬长避短,发挥优势。
尽量使用自己熟练或熟悉的句式,适当使用感叹句、祈使句或疑问句等句式,切忌盲目追求难度较大的复杂句式,同时不要出现中式英语。
5.根据文章话题和体裁的不同选用合适的模板和句型结构,提升文章的档次。
6.篇章布局通常采用“总—分—总”的三段式。
第一段(开头):简单明了,开门见山,点明写作目的或中心思想,引出下文;
第二段(主体):分 2—3点阐述具体内容或要点;
第三段(结尾):总结提升或呼吁建议等。
7.成文多认真查看。
文章写完后，一定要回过头来认真检查，检查时注意以下几点:
(1)文章是否符合题意;
(2)要点有无遗漏;
(3)语言是否流畅;
(4)语法是否正确，包括动词时态、名词单复数、主谓一致、词语搭配、单词拼写、大小写和标点符号等
8.注意书写工整,卷面整洁。
专项训练
（1）
和谐是一种美德(virtue)，和谐社会由一个个和谐的家庭构成。构建和谐家庭是我们每个人的贵任。和谐的家庭给予我们精神支持，并使我们倍感幸福。假如你是李华，你的家被社区评为 ”和谐家庭”。请你用英语写一篇短文，给某英文网站投稿，谈谈你的和谐家庭是什么样子，以及为使家庭和谐你做了些什么。
提示：
1. What’s your harmonious family like
2. What did you do for your family
3. … (适当发挥)
要求：
1. 短文须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不要出现真实的人名、校名和地名；
3. 词数：80个左右 (开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Everyone wants to live in a harmonious family. __________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
（2）
青少年应勤于反思，在自我反思中正确认识自己、不断完善自己。请以“Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better”为题，结合自己的成长历程，从学习、运动、劳动等方面，用英语写一篇短文。
内容包括：
（1）结合实际，谈谈自我反思的重要性；
（2）列举自身存在的至少一个优点，并据此提出如何保持优点的方法；
（3）列举自身存在的至少一处不足，并据此提出如何改进不足的方法；
（4）发出自我反思的倡议。
写作要求：
（1）语言流畅，层次清晰，内容可以适当发挥；
（2）词数80以上，开头部分已经给出，不计入总词数；
（3）书写规范，卷面整洁；
（4）文中不能出现考生姓名和学校名称。
参考词汇：self-reflection n. 自我反思 reflect on sth. 反思（往事）
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better _____________
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(3)
假如你是李华，暑假将有一批英国交换生到你校开展文化交流活动，学校计划通过英语演讲比赛，选出学生代表参与组织活动，你有意竞选。请按照以下要求，结合你的特长设计对应的活动计划，用英语写一份演讲稿。
你的优点 具体表现 活动计划
英语水平好 阅读过大量的英语书籍； ……（请补充
能用英语进行日常交流 一项）
熟悉中国文化 掌握剪纸技巧； ……（请补充一点） ……（请补充一项）
注意：
1．请围绕所给的提示合理发挥；
2．词数80词左右（短文的开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3．不得透露学校、真实姓名及任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you____
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope you will vote for me. Thank you!
(4)
假设你校校报将举行 “An unforgettable experience” 的英文征文比赛，你打算参加比赛，请根据以下内容提示用英语写一篇短文参加比赛。
内容提示：
1. When and where did it happen
2. What happened during this experience
3. What have you learned through this experience
注意：
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2. 词数80词左右;
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
An Unforgettable Experience
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(5)
假如你是李华，你们小组参加学校“走进广州英文vlog”制作展评活动。请你根据以下比赛要求，选择一个景点或一条路线，为小组的vlog作品写一段英文解说词。
注意：
1.要求包含所给要点；
2.可选择一个或多个景点，景点可从“参考景点”选择，也可自行选择；
3.词数：不少于80单词（文章开头已给出，不计入词数）；
4.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Hello, today we are going to take you to explore and understand Guangzhou.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(6)
为了引导学生多读书读好书，提升英语阅读能力，学校准备在假期开展“读好一本英语书”活动。假如你是学生李华，你想在活动前写一封邮件，向外教George求教。内容包括：
1.说明活动背景，包括活动名称、时间及目；
2.介绍自己的阅读现状；
3.请教阅读技巧并推荐英文书。
注意：
1.可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息；
2.词数80词左右（开头与结尾已给出，不计入词数）；
3.不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear George,
I’m writing to ask for your help._______________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(7)
你校将举办主题为"青少年应该具备的生活技能"（Important life skills for teens）的英语征文比赛。请根据以下思维导图 ,用英语写一篇征文 ,描述青少年应具备的生活技能及如何提高这些技能。
要求：
1、80词左右 ,开头已给出 ,不计入总词数；
2、涵盖要求的内容并适当拓展。
Life skills are necessary for us.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(8)
假设你是李华，学校科技节将举办题为“AI in Our Life（生活中的AI）”的中英双语演讲比赛。请根据以下提示写一篇英文演讲稿，包含以下内容：
AI的好处 AI在生活中的应用，请举例说明。
AI的影响 人类对AI过度依赖带来的影响，请举例说明。
你的看法 ……
要求：1. 80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内）；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校名称；
3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯；
4. 书写规范，卷面整洁。
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
That’s all. Thank you!
参考答案：
（1）
Everyone wants to live in harmonious family. I live in a harmonious family full of laughter. Each of the family members gets on well with each other. We often sit together to share our problems and happiness and everyone feels supported and relaxed at home.
As for me, I respect and love my parents. When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. When I’m at home, I often help them with some housework, so they can have more time to do what they love. When my sister is in trouble, I usually try my best to help her.
I love my harmonious family and feel comfortable at home. I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family.
【参考句型】
①When I’m at school, I always study hard and try not to make my parents worried about my schoolwork. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think everyone should take responsibility to create a harmonious family. (宾语从句)
（2）
Self-reflection Makes Me Become Better
We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better. Through self-reflection, we can find out the advantages and disadvantages of what we did, and strive to do it perfectly the next time.
I like reading. It can not only increase my knowledge, but also open my eyes. If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading. But I sometimes read so inaccurately that some of the author’s intentions cannot be understood. In the future I will read sentence by sentence to get rid of this bad habit.
So let’s do some serious self-reflection together to make us better ourselves.
【参考句型】
①We teenagers should always reflect on the past because self-reflection makes us become better.（because引导原因状语从句）
②If you want to develop a good habit of reading, you must stick to the good habit of reading, and keep writing after reading to improve your interest in reading.（if引导的条件状语从句）
（3）
Dear fellow students,
My name is Li Hua. I’m honoured to introduce myself and my ideas on cultural exchange activities to you.
Firstly, I have an advantage in English. I’ve read plenty of English books so far and I have no problem
communicating with English speakers. As a result, we can have a discussion on “beauty of your own country” with the exchange students.
What’s more, I know a lot about Chinese culture. I can not only make paper-cuttings, but also play Erhu. We can hold an art show to show the traditional culture of the two countries. I think it’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.
I hope you will vote for me. Thank you.
【参考句型】
I can not only make paper-cuttings, but also play Erhu.
It’s everyone’s duty to popularize our traditional culture.
(4)
An Unforgettable Experience
Last summer, during a school trip to the Great Wall, I had an unforgettable experience.
We were hiking along the wall when a sudden storm hit. The strong wind and the rain made it difficult to see and we struggled to find our way back. It was scary, but our teachers and classmates supported each other. We managed to get back safely, soaked but relieved.
From this experience, I learned the importance of teamwork. Facing challenges together, we can overcome them. This lesson has stayed with me, encouraging me to face difficulties with courage and confidence. It also reminded me of the power of unity and cooperation, which are essential values in both personal growth and group success.
【参考句型】
1. It also reminded me of the power of unity and cooperation, which are essential values in both personal growth and group success.
它也让我想起团结和合作的力量，这是个人成长和团队成功的基本价值观。
2.I had an unforgettable experience. 我有一段难忘的经历。
3.I learned the importance of teamwork。 我学习到团队的重要性。
(5)
Hello, today we are going to take you to explore and understand Guangzhou. Anyone coming to Guangzhou is sure to have a good time. There are many places of interest to visit such as the Canton Tower, Baiyun Mountain and so on. We strongly recommend Canton Tower—a well-known scenic spot.
Canton Tower located in the center of Guangzhou, near the south bank of Pearl River. It is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can’t help being fascinated by it. When we arrived at the top of Canton Tower, we had such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of Guangzhou. We also took a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower. In addition, Beijing Road is also a good place to visit. It is a famous shopping street.
I believe that if you come to Guangzhou for tourism, you will definitely have a great time. Guangzhou is waiting for you.
【参考句型】
1.It is so grand and beautiful especially in the evening that you can’t help being fascinated by it.
它是如此的宏伟和美丽，尤其是在晚上，你忍不住被它迷住了。
2.When we arrived at the top of Canton Tower, we had such a valuable chance to look down at the full view of
Guangzhou.
当我们到达广州塔的顶部时，我们有这样一个宝贵的机会可以俯瞰广州的全景。
3.There are many places of interest to visit such as the Canton Tower, Baiyun Mountain and so on.
这里有很多名胜古迹可以参观，例如.....等等。）【不定式作宾补】
4.We also took a large number of nice photos in a setting of Canton Tower.
我们还以广州塔为背景拍了很多好看的照片。
5.In addition, Beijing Road is also a good place to visit.
此外，北京路也是一个游览的好地方。
(6)
Dear George,
I’m writing to ask for your help. Our school will organize an activity ——“Read a Good English Book” during the holidays. This activity aims to encourage students to read more and better books to enhance their English reading skills.
Currently, my reading habits are somewhat limited, and I believe I could benefit from some guidance on improving my reading skills. I am eager to enhance my English proficiency and broaden my literary horizons through this activity.
Could you please share some effective reading techniques and recommend some English books that would be suitable for me
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【参考句型】
I’m writing to ask for your help.
我写信请求你的帮助。
2.his activity aims to（本次活动的目标是） encourage students to read more and better books to enhance their English
reading skills.（encourage sb. to do sth.鼓励某人去做某事)
本活动目标是鼓励学生多读好书，提高英语阅读能力。
3. I am eager to enhance my English proficiency and broaden my literary horizons through this activity.
我渴望通过这次活动提高我的英语水平，拓宽我的文学视野。
4.Our school will organize an activity.
我们学校将举行一次活动。
5.I believe I could benefit from some guidance on improving my reading skills.（benefit from...从...中收益）
我相信我可以从一些提高阅读技能的指导中受益。
(7)
Life skills are necessary for us. What life skills should teenagers develop And how Here is my opinion.
First, it’s important for us to learn to keep healthy. Doing more exercise, keeping a healthy diet and having enough sleep are good ways to keep healthy. Second, working with others is also important because the more help we get, the more easily we will achieve our goals. We can learn to cooperate with others by taking part in some teamwork and try to put ourselves in other’s position. What’s more, time should be managed wisely. For example, we can make a list of things to do every morning so that we can use our time efficiently. Finally, let’s learn some basic skills such as cooking, tidying room and washing clothes. If we can do these housework, we can take good care of ourselves as well as others.
All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier and healthier life.
【参考句型】
Doing more exercise, keeping a healthy diet and having enough sleep are good ways to keep healthy.
多做运动，保持健康的饮食和充足的睡眠是保持健康的好方法。【3个动名词作并列主语】
we can make a list of things to do every morning so that we can use our time efficiently.
我们可以列出每天早上要做的事情，这样我们就可以有效地利用我们的时间【so that目的状从】
It’s important for us to learn to keep healthy.
对我们来说学会保持健康是重要的
4.All in all, if we try our best to improve these life skills, we will lead a happier and healthier life.
总而言之，如果我们尽最大努力提高这些生活技能，我们将过上更快乐、更健康的生活。
(8)
AI in Our Life
Dear teachers and fellow students,
As we all know, AI changes our lives greatly. With the development of science and technology, we can see all kinds of AI products in our daily life. For example, smartphones can make work and study more efficient while cleaning robots can help with housework. They all bring great convenience and progress to our society. However, with AI technology being widely used, many workers lost their jobs. Also, some students rely on AI too much so that they lose their ability to do things by themselves.
All in all, just as every coin has its two sides, AI products have both advantages and shortcomings. I believe that if we use AI correctly, it will bring us more convenient life in the future.
That’s all. Thank you!