2023-2024学年中考专项复习专题64：书面表达之咨询建议类（含解析）

英语中咨询建议类作文通常以书信的形式呈现，英语书信类作文的常用表达：
开头部分：
How nice to hear from you again.
Let me tell you something about the activity.
I’m glad to have received your letter.
I’m pleased to hear that you’re coming to China for a visit.
I’m writing to thank you for your help during my stay in America.
结尾部分：
With best wishes.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
I’d appreciate it if you could reply earlier.
We should take measures to control pollution in order to save the world.
We’d better take effective measures to prevent students from cheating on exams.
The government decided to take strong measures against drug abuse.
Urgent measures should be taken to prevent terrorists from carrying out further attacks.
Why not.../Why don’t you...
You can have a try.../Try to do...
Don’t be afraid of...
I believe you can do it. Good luck.
In one/a word/Generally speaking

（一）
请根据下面Frank在信中所提出的困惑，以Maria的名义给他写一封回信，帮助他解决问题。80词左右。
Dear Editor,
I am a middle school student. I have many hobbies. I like playing football very much. But I can’t do it. I want to join the football team. But my parents don’t allow it. So I often argue with my parents.
Should I be allowed to make my own decisions What should I do
Yours,
Frank
Dear Frank,
I read your problem from your letter.
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Maria
（二）
张燕是九年级学生。她父亲在一家公司工作，家里几乎天天来客人。他们在客厅高声谈笑，有时还一起打牌，弄出许多噪音。这种吵闹的环境使张燕无法集中精力学习。她不知道如何解决这个问题。请你帮她给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，谈谈她的烦恼并请王老师提出宝贵意见。
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（三）
你班Carl同学最近遇到了一些问题，希望得到一些建议和帮助。请你以Mr. Friend的身份给Car写封信，针对Carl的所有问题提出一些有益的建议。
Carl的问题 将来想当一名记者，但很安静，不喜欢与人交谈
喜欢穿红色衣服，但同学嘲笑他像个女生
喜欢篮球，并且经常打，作业花的时间较少，不知如何平衡自己 的学业和爱好
你的建议 ……(至少四条)
要求：1. 不能出现真实的个人身份信息；
2. 不得遗漏提示信息，条理清楚，字迹工整，语意连贯可适当发挥；
3. 词数：110词左右(信的开头和结尾已经给出，不计入总词数)。
Dear Carl,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. _______________________
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I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes,
Mr. Friend
（一）
中央电视台《经典咏流传》节目的播出，再次激发了人们对经典文学作品的阅读热情。读书可以成就更美好的自己，让读书伴随我们成长。请根据以下要点提示，以＂Growing up with Reading＂为题写一篇英语短文介绍你曾经读过的一本书或—首诗，并建议大家多读书，读好书。
要点提示：
读书的重要性 1. 获取知识，开阔眼界；
2. 提升自我，增强自信……
读过的一本书或 一首诗 1. 作品内容简介；
2. 读书感悟及对自己的影响。
多读书，读好书 1. 利用闲暇时间多读书，养成读书的好习惯；
2. 多读经典文学作品……
注意：
1. 短文应包括以上要点，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
2. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、学校及地名。
3. 词数：80—100（文章开头已给出，不计入总词数）。
参考词汇：classic 经典作品； open up one’s eyes 开阔眼界；improve oneself 提升自我； be more confident 更自信；responsibility 责任；cooperation 合作。
Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics.
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（二）
假如你是＂Kids Advice Magazine＂的编辑，请针对Evan的烦恼，用英语给他写一封80词以上的回信，对他进行开导。信的开头和落款已给出，不计入词数。
要点提示：
1. 陈述有兄弟姐妹的优势：弟妹的崇拜、不孤单、学会与人相处或分享……
2. 说明不同年龄段有不同的责任和义务：自己的，父母的，弟妹的……
3. 建议、鼓励：不比较、不抱怨，做好自己所能做的事
词汇提示（仅供参考）：complain抱怨（vi. & vt.），admire，compare
Dear Evan,
It’s not easy being in your situation. It’s normal to have these feelings. But every coin has two sides ________
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Yours truly,
Ron Todd
（三）
假定你是张华，你在外地学习的好朋友王伟发电子邮件向你请教如何学好英语。请你根据以下要点用英语给他回封电子邮件。
内容包括：
（1）看英语电影、听英语歌曲，猜测生词意思。
（2）与外教交谈。
（3）把单词写在纸条上，利用纸条记忆单词。
注意：
（1）词数：80左右；
（2）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Wang Wei，
I received your email yesterday. In the email, you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
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These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours,
Zhang Hua
（四）
假定你是苏华，你最近认识的英国笔友David给你发了一封电子邮件，想了解你初中三年来在学习和生活方而的一些收获、困惑和感受。请认真阅读下而的邮件，根据信中的内容及你的实际用英语回复。
To: suhua@
From: davidsmith@ britain.com
Subject: School life
Dear Su Hua, Glad to hear you’re graduating from junior high. I’m interested in how you feel about those three years of school life. Would you please tell me the following things ●What do you like best about your school life ●What’s the biggest problem as a junior student ●Who has helped you most And why ● Do you enjoy your school life Why or why not I look forward to hearing from you soon. All the best. David
注意：1. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
2. 回复须包括所有要点，可适当发挥，使全文连贯、通顺；
3. 文中不得提及真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life. ____________________
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How about your school life Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Su Hua
（一）
你叫James，是初三的一名学生，你的好朋友Joyce近期很烦恼，她上周日因为使用手机的问题与她父亲发生了争吵，她父亲把她手机都摔坏了。她这几天情绪很低落，学习不认真，你很担心她，所以你给她写了一封信。
要点：
1. 你非常理解她的感受。
2.对她的问题提出至少两点建议。
注意：
1. 词数：80词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
2. 文章必须包含所有提示内容，并可适当发挥；
3. 文中不得出现真实姓名和校名；
4. 条理清楚，语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范。
参考词汇：1. have a quarrel与……吵架 2. treat对待 3. affect影响
Dear Joyce,
I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone. _________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
James
（二）
张涛是一名九年级学生，面对繁重的学业和升学压力，他总是感到焦虑不安，晚上还经常失眠。请根据你所学的知识，针对他的问题，运用色彩疗法给他提些建议。
要求：1. 书写工整，语言连贯；
2. 词数：80词左右（信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）
Dear Zhang Tao,
I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.
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If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.
Yours,
John
跟踪训练
（一）
【参考范文】
Dear Frank,
I read your problem from your letter. Many teenagers have hobbies. Sometimes these hobbies get in the way of schoolwork and their parents may worry about their studies. Arguing is not useful. Try to talk with your parents in a friendly way. In my opinion, you can tell them it is good for your health to do sports. You should practice your hobbies after school or on weekends. But you can’t do it as much as you want. As a student，the most important thing is to study. We should have enough time to have fun but not too much. I’m sure you can do it well.
Maria
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【思路导航】
这是一篇材料作文。写作前一定要认真审题，考题要求考生帮助张燕给青少年辅导员王老师写一封信，因此人称要用第一人称来表达，时态为一般现在时，注意主谓一致，同时注意书信的格式。用到的词组或短语有：in a company，talk to each other，play cards together，make a lot of noise，focus on，how to deal with，offer sb. sth.等。写作中注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系。
【参考范文】
Dear Mr. Wang，
My name is Zhan Yan. I’m a Grade 9 student. I have some problems and I need your help.
My father works in a company. There are always many people coming to my home. They talk to each other loudly and sometimes they even play cards together. They make a lot of noise and this is really terrible. I can’t focus on my study. I don’t know how to deal with this problem. Can you offer me some suggestions They would be most valuable. Thanks a lot.
Best wishes！
Yours sincerely，
Zhang Yan
（三）
【参考范文】
Dear Carl,
Thank you very much for telling me about your problems. I hope I can help you. You want to be a reporter in the future, but you are too quiet and you don’t enjoy talking with others. You like wearing red clothes but your classmates think you are like a girl and often laugh at you. You are a student, so you are busy every day. You must have lots of homework, but you are crazy about basketball. You spend a lot of time playing basketball. Like this, you will find you are tired. You should give it up. You don’t stay up late. If you make low marks in exams, you will feel stressed. You should talk about this to your parents or your best friends. They can help you. Please work hard to get good marks. I believe you will go to high school. I hope you think my advice is valuable to you.
Best wishes.
Mr. Friend
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了Carl的问题，接下来介绍我的建议，最后我希望你认为我的建议有用。此处thank you for doing sth, want to do sth, enjoy doing sth, like doing sth, laugh at ,be crazy about, spend time doing sth, give up, stay up, work hard等这些词组的运用也给文章增色不少。
真题再现
（一）
Growing up with Reading
Have you watched the program Everlasting Classics on CCTV This program makes us more interested in reading books, especially classics. Reading is very important. We can get knowledge through reading. It can not only open our minds, but also make us cleverer and more confident. Our study can be improved if we read more good books.
These days I am reading a book whose title is Jane Eyre, which attracts me a lot. The book’s writer is called Charlotte Bronte, who was born in England in 1816. She had two sisters and one brother, but unfortunately their mother died when they were very young. Actually Jane Eyre is a book whose theme is of love. In the story, Jane Eyre lived a hard life, but she was self-confident and perseverant. In her heart, there is always a mind that if you hold a belief and stick to it, you will eventually achieve your dream.
（二）
【思路导航】
这是一篇针对所给材料而完成的一封回信。首先要读懂阅读理解，明确Evan的烦恼是什么，然后有针对性地进行开导。可根据要点提示所列举的几点去组织材料，要尽量运用不同的句式去表达，来增加文章的亮点。
【参考范文】
Dear Evan,
It’s not easy being in your situation. It’s normal to have these feelings. But every coin has two sides. Being the eldest child in the family surely has its advantages.
Firstly. you used to enjoy all the love from your parents. You’re loved and admired by your brother and sister. You won’t feel lonely with them around you and you can learn how to share and how to get on with others. Together with them you’ll grow up more quickly.
Secondly, people of different ages have different duties. Think of your parents how hard they are working! As you are growing older, you are supposed to do more and do better than your brother and sister. Everyone has to grow up and we all have to do what we should do. We have to be responsible for ourselves
So I think if you don’t compare with babies, just think of your duty, you will feel much better. Don’t complain about your situation. Try your best to do the things of your age.
Attitude is everything. You are sure to grow into an outstanding young man.
Yours truly,
Ron Todd
（三）
【思路导航】
本篇书面表达是一封书信，结合本题所给的写作信息，阐述＂如何学好英语＂建议。根据内容提示可知本文应运用一般现在时态，注意一些常见句式的应用。写作中注意连词、固定短语的交替使用，使文意连接紧密，还要注意使用丰富的语句，注意叙述顺序，符合逻辑关系，最后最好要表达出自己的感想和看法。
【参考范文】
Dear Wang Wei，
I received your email yesterday. In the email，you asked me how to improve your English. Now I’d like to give you some advice.
Watching English films and listening to English songs are great ways to learn English! Watch and listen several times，and guess the meaning of the new words.
Having a conversation with a foreign teacher is also a good way. You’d better start it with greetings or a question. Also，smile before you speak and do not feel shy. Write four or five words a day on pieces of paper and place them in your room. Read the words when you see them，and try to use them.
These are my suggestions. I hope they are useful to you.
Yours，
Zhang Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。文中great ways to do sth，having a conversation with, had better, start it with, place them in your room, try to, and等词（组）的恰当使用，使上下文意连接紧密；文中还多处使用了动名词作主语的句型，and并列句、时间状语从句等复合句，大大增加了信息的容量，使文章增色不少，值得学习。
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【参考范文】
Dear David,
Thank you so much for your email. I’m very happy to tell you about my school life.
I like the Football Club best because I’ve made quite a few friends by joining the club. Moreover, it’s an excellent chance to learn team spirit.
However, I’ve also met some problems over the three years. The biggest one is how to achieve a balance between my schoolwork and my hobbies. Whenever I am in great need, my English teacher always comes to me, so she is the person who has helped me most in the junior high.
In all, I enjoy my school life because it’s colourful and meaningful.
How about your school life Write to me soon.
Best wishes.
Su Hua
【亮点说明】
本文结构紧凑，语言简练。开头介绍了感谢David的来信，并要告诉David我的初中生活；接下来介绍在学习和生活方面的一些收获、困惑和感受；最后询问关于David的学校生活，并送上祝愿。此处thank sb for sth, tell sb about sth, over the three years, in great need, how about等这些短语的运用也让文章增色不少。
模拟检测
（一）
【参考范文】
Dear Joyce,
I am so sorry to hear that you had a quarrel with your father and he even broke your smart phone.
I can fully understand your feelings. We want to depend more on ourselves but sometimes our parents still treat us like a primary school student. You have different opinions on using a smart phone with your father. I think your father is worried that using a smart phone may affect your study. After all, we are in Grade 9 and we must try our best to study. Here I have two suggestions for you.
First, you should find a chance to communicate with your father when you both calm down. If you don’t want to talk to him, you can write a letter or an email to him.
Second, I think you should forget this unhappy thing and start to study hard again. Time is very valuable for us, so we can’t afford to waste it .Please raise your spirits!
Best wishes!
Yours,
James
【名师点睛】
首先认真审题，看清题目中的要求和要点；然后根据提示内容，列出写作要点及每个要点中可能要用到的表达；然后紧扣要点，动笔写作，在写作过程中，要注意句与句、段与段之间的过渡，必要时可适当运用表示转折、因果、并列、比较等关系的连词，使文章过渡平稳，自然流畅；最后要细心复核检查，确保正确无误。
（二）
【参考范文】
I know as a Grade 9 student, you have some problems now. As your close friend, I want to give you some advice.
Firstly, if you always feel stressed, I advise you to wear blue or white. The two colours can make you feel calm and peaceful. You can also try wearing green, because it can make you feel energetic.
Secondly, you may paint your bedroom blue if you can’t sleep well at night. Sleeping in a blue room is good for your mind and body, because blue can create a feeling of harmony.
Finally, perhaps you should use yellow stationery when you study for exams, because yellow can make you wise.
If these still do not work, please make a phone call to me.
Yours,
John