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2025人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册
Part 4 Writing
关于科学精神的写作
写作题目
假设你校下个月要举行科技节,现面向全体学生征文,请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,谈谈你对科学精神的见解。要点包括:
1.你认为科学精神包括哪些品质;
2.列举两个相关的科学家;
3.作为学生,我们应该怎样对待科学精神。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词填空
1. vt.处理;操纵
2. n.导弹
3. vt.& vi.减少;降低
4. adv.此外;再者
5. adj.生动的;鲜明的;丰富的
答案 1.handle 2.missile 3.decrease
4.furthermore 5.vivid
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:阐述对科学精神的理解
As far as I'm concerned, the scientific spirit includes some
(基本的品质).
(2)Scientists should (投入并且有创造力).
(3)Scientists must (有丰富的想象力).
第二段:列举伟大的科学家
(4)Because of Qian Xuesen's devoted work on missiles and rockets, China (成为一个如此强大的国家) in the world in a short time.
(5)The hybrid rice Yuan Longping developed has (减少了……的数量) the hungry people around the world greatly.
第三段:学生应该怎样对待科学精神
As students, we should apply the scientific spirit to our study,
(以便) we can handle the difficulties and problems we meet with.
答案 (1)essential qualities (2)be devoted and creative (3)have a vivid imagination (4)became such a powerful country
(5)decreased the number of (6)so that
2.句式升级
(7)用without短语把句(4)变为使用含蓄虚拟语气的句子,表示“如果没有……的话,中国就不会……”
(8)把句(5)变为强调句,强调主语
答案 (7)Without Qian Xuesen's devoted work on missiles and rockets, China wouldn't have become such a powerful country in the world in a short time. (8)It is the hybrid rice Yuan Longping developed that has decreased the number of the hungry people around the world greatly.
连句成篇
As far as I'm concerned,the scientific spirit includes some essential qualities. Scientists should be devoted and creative. Furthermore, they must have a vivid imagination.
For instance,without Qian Xuesen's devoted work on missiles and rockets, China wouldn't have become such a powerful country in the world in a short time. Similarly, it is the hybrid rice Yuan Longping developed that has decreased the number of the hungry people around the world greatly.
As students, we should apply the scientific spirit to our study, so that we can handle the difficulties and problems we meet with.
写作积累
关于议论文的增分佳句
1.开头:引出话题,提出论点
①There is no doubt that positive attitudes and values are bound to make a big difference to everyone.毫无疑问,积极的态度和价值观必然会对每个人产生巨大的影响。
②There is a widespread concern over the issue that... But it is well known that the opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person.人们普遍担忧……的问题。但是众所周知,关于这个热门话题的观点因人而异。
2.主体:分层论述,阐明观点
①A majority of people approve of the opinion that... From their point of view, there are two factors contributing to this attitude, which are as follows: in the first place...; furthermore...大多数人都赞同这种观点……从他们的角度来看,有两个因素促成了这种态度,如下:首先……;此外……。
②On the contrary, some people differ in their opinions on this matter. They hold the view that... On the one hand...On the other hand...相反,有些人在这件事上意见不一。他们认为……。一方面……。另一方面……。
3.结尾:总结全文,亮明己见
①These scientists who made excellent contributions to human beings set good examples to us students.这些为人类做出卓越贡献的科学家为我们学生树立了良好的榜样。
②Not only should we show respect for the great scientists, but we also should learn the scientific spirit from them.我们不仅要尊重伟大的科学家,而且要向他们学习科学精神。
实战演练
(2022河北保定期末)
假设你是李华。为了响应国家“了解中国科技发展的伟大成就,坚定文化自信”的号召,你校计划举办一场主题为“What Makes a Great Scientist ”的演讲比赛,请你写一篇英语演讲稿参赛。内容包括:
1.列举一位伟大的科学家并介绍其伟大之处;
2.你的感想。
注意:写作词数应为80个左右。
读后续写
写作题目
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Emily White was born seventeen years ago with so many birth problems in her body. Some of her organs, bones and muscles were out of shape. No one expected her to survive. She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
In Emily White's hometown, there was a yearly performance in the school auditorium(礼堂). It had been performed for so many years and actually had become one of the most important events of the Christmas season for many of the town's people. Many people tried out for it each year but so many were turned away. It could only include the most excellent people in the field.
Emily had a beautiful singing voice. Last year she went to Mrs. Owens—her music teacher to ask to join in the performance. Without letting her sing, Mrs. Owens took a look at Emily's body and said, “Child, you are not suitable. Everyone would stare at you and that would make you uncomfortable. It would make them uncomfortable, too.”
Without singing a single note, Emily was sent back through the door of the choral(合唱的)room. Hurt and upset, she decided never to try out again. But Mrs. Owens then retired.
This year, there came a new music teacher, Mr. Butler. He heard about Emily and suggested that she have a try.
Emily didn't want to be rejected again, so she hesitated a little about it. As Emily struggled, the door was pushed open and Mr. Butler called, “Emily, you're next.” Although kind of nervous, Emily did as Mr. Butler told her. Mr. Butler sat at the piano to accompany Emily. When Emily finished her trial performance, she thanked Mr. Butler and knew the result would be posted on the door of the choral room the next day.
Emily couldn't sleep that night. She was suffering from the feelings that she was not suitable and the great need to be accepted. By the next morning, her stomach was even in pain because of stress.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room.
Finally, the day of the performance came.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.out of shape变形的;不健康,身体不好
2.make it幸免于难,渡过难关
3.recognize v.认出
4.performance n.表演
5.try out for...参加……选拔(或试演)
6.turn away把……拒之门外
7.reject vt.拒绝接受,不予考虑
8.hesitate v.犹豫,迟疑不决
9.struggle v.挣扎;斗争
10.suffer from...受……之苦;遭受……
11.in pain疼痛;在痛苦中
障碍词汇
accompany vt.为……伴奏
长难句
原句 She did make it but with her strange body figure, everyone could recognize her, even from a distance.
分析 本句为并列复合句,but连接两个并列分句。第二个分句中,with her strange body figure作原因状语。
译文 她的确活了下来,但由于她奇怪的体形,每个人甚至从远处都能认出她。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:第二天,Emily紧张地浏览合唱室门上的名单(首句)→Emily被选上→Emily心情复杂,兴奋之余流露出不自信→Mr. Butler对Emily说了一番话,引导Emily接下来坚定信心,刻苦训练
第二段:终于到了演出那天(首句)→Emily走上舞台后观众因她的外表而作出不好的回应→Emily不受影响,全身心投入表演→Emily演出成功,观众的态度发生转变→Emily战胜自己,完成蜕变
遣词造句
1.在横线上填入适当的单词
(1)to one's 让某人惊讶的是
(2) adj.神秘的
(3)remain 保持冷静
(4)with all one's 全心全意地
(5)come 遇到
(6)be used sth.习惯于某事
(7) one's breath 屏息
(8)break 突然开始
答案 (1)surprise (2)mysterious (3)calm
(4)heart (5)across (6)to (7)hold (8)into
2.完成句子
(9)She was (喜出望外) but (心存疑虑).
(10)She hit her hand hard (却发现) she wasn't dreaming.
(11)Then Mr. Butler walked out of the room (面带微笑).
(12)Emily was (深受鼓舞), and she (坚定地点点头) and promised to practice hard for the performance.
(13) (一……就)appearing on the stage, she was (迎接) scornful eyes.
(14)Suddenly, the audience (爆发出) thunderous applause.
(15)Mr. Butler was moved, and he gave Emily (一个大大的拥抱).
(16)Then he knew that Emily had (战胜她自己).
答案 (9)overjoyed; doubtful (10)only to find (11)with a smile (12)greatly encouraged; nodded determinedly (13)Upon/On; greeted with (14)broke into (15)a big hug (16)overcome herself
3.句式升级
(17)用形容词作状语合并句(9)和句(10)
(18)用倒装句改写句(11)
(19)用过去分词作状语改写句(12)
(20)用so...that...结构改写句(15)
(21)用强调句改写句(16),强调时间状语
答案 (17)Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn't dreaming. (18)Then out of the room walked Mr. Butler with a smile. (19)Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance. (20)Mr. Butler was so moved that he gave Emily a big hug.
(21)It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself.
连句成篇
The next day, Emily nervously glanced at the list on the door of the choral room. To her surprise, on top of the list was her name! Overjoyed but doubtful, she hit her hand hard only to find she wasn't dreaming. Then out of the room walked Mr. Butler with a smile. “Emily, we have another piece of good news for you,” he said in a mysterious voice. “We choose you to be the lead singer. Do you believe in yourself ” Greatly encouraged, Emily nodded determinedly and promised to practice hard for the performance.
Finally, the day of the performance came. Upon appearing on the stage, she was greeted with scornful eyes. But remaining calm, she began to sing with all her heart. Who knew how many such situations she had come across She was really used to it. When she finished her song, there was a moment of silence, as if the world were holding its breath. Suddenly, the audience broke into thunderous applause. Mr. Butler was so moved that he gave her a big hug. It was then that he knew that Emily had overcome herself.
写作积累
与“神态描写”相关的表达
1.脸上激动的表情:an expression of excitement on one's face
2.坚定的眼神:a determined look
3.满意的微笑/神情:a smile/look of satisfaction
4.灿烂的微笑:a brilliant smile
5.拉着长脸:draw a long face
6.怒视某人:glare at sb.
7.怒火燃烧的眼神:a look of burning anger
8.因愤怒而颤抖:tremble with anger
9.她的脸上浮现一丝微笑。A smile floated on her face.
10.她的眼里满含泪水。Her eyes were filled with tears.
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 1 SCIENCE AND SCIENTISTS
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Ladies and gentlemen,
I'm Li Hua. It's my privilege to make a speech whose theme is “What Makes a Great Scientist ”
Everyone has an idol. Mine is Qian Xuesen, who is known as the father of China's aerospace. Personally, he was a pioneer who was determined to pursue his dreams. More importantly, he was patriotic and served our country with effort, achievement and devotion. All of this makes him a great scientist.
Undoubtedly, as teenagers, we should learn and pass on his scientific spirit as well as his perseverance in the face of difficulties.
1.重点词汇
①privilege n.荣幸
②be known as...被称为……
③determined adj.下定决心的
④pursue v.追求
⑤pass on传递
2.亮点句型
①It's my privilege to make a speech whose theme is “What Makes a Great Scientist ”(It是形式主语,不定式短语to make...作真正的主语;whose引导限制性定语从句)我很荣幸能发表一篇主题为“什么造就了伟大的科学家 ”的演讲。
②Personally, he was a pioneer who was determined to pursue his dreams.(who引导限制性定语从句)就我个人而言,他是一个决心追求梦想的先驱。
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