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2025人教版高中英语选择性必修第二册
Part 4 Writing
关于日常饮食的写作
写作题目
假定你是李华,你的美国网友Jack来信说他的家人都很喜欢吃中餐,向你寻求在中餐馆点餐的建议。请你用英语给他写一封回信,内容主要包括:
1.点餐要适量,避免浪费;
2.蔬菜为主,少油少盐。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Jack,
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.菜肴;烹饪
2. n.餐厅
3. n.卡路里(热量单位)
4. n.厨师
5. 减少
6. 停止做(或使用、食用)
答案 1.cuisine 2.canteen 3.calorie
4.chef 5.cut down on 6.cut out
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:表明写信的目的
(1)I'm very glad (收到你的来信).
(2)I know that your family are attracted to Chinese cuisine and wonder (如何点餐) in Chinese canteens.
第二段:根据提示给出建议
(3) (众所周知), Chinese (餐) is one of the most popular diets.
(4)It can (含……多) oil and salt.
(5)You (应该尽量避免)the dishes such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork.
(6)The dishes have (高卡路里).
答案 (1)to receive your letter (2)how to order dishes (3)As we all know; cuisine (4)be high in (5)should try to avoid
(6)high calories
2.句式升级
(7)用现在分词作状语合并句(1)和句(2)
(8)用让步状语从句连接句(3)和句(4)
(9)用定语从句合并句(5)和句(6)
答案 (7)I'm very glad to receive your letter, knowing that your family are attracted to Chinese cuisine and wonder how to order dishes in Chinese canteens.
(8)As we all know, even if Chinese cuisine is one of the most popular diets, it can be high in oil and salt.
(9)You should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork.
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
I'm very glad to receive your letter, knowing that your family are attracted to Chinese cuisine and wonder how to order dishes in Chinese canteens.
As we all know, even if Chinese cuisine is one of the most popular diets, it can be high in oil and salt. In addition, main dish portions are often quite large, so you'd better order fewer dishes.Besides, you should try to avoid the dishes which have high calories, such as lamb kebabs and red braised pork.
I sincerely hope that you have a good appetite and enjoy Chinese food.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
关于建议信的增分佳句
1.开头:寒暄问候,写作目的
Learning that you are worried about your health, I'd like to write to tell you something about how to keep healthy.得知你担心自己的健康,我想写信告诉你关于如何保持健康的事情。
2.主体:提出建议,分条罗列
①Eating lots of fresh vegetables and fruit means a lot to our body.多吃新鲜蔬菜和水果对我们的身体意义重大。
②To keep healthy, we should try to be in a good mood each day.为了保持健康,我们应该尽量每天保持好心情。
3.结尾:总结全文,表达祝愿
I hope that my advice will be of great help to you.希望我的建议对你能很有帮助。
实战演练
(2024湖南联考)
假定你是李华,你校英文报的Health and Food栏目正在开展有关健康饮食的活动,向全体同学征稿,请你以“Be a Wise Eater”为题目,用英语写一篇短文,向该栏目投稿。内容包括:
1.健康饮食的重要性;
2.健康饮食的建议;
3.发出倡议。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Be a Wise Eater
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答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 3 FOOD AND CULTURE
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Be a Wise Eater
As the saying goes, “You are what you eat.” Healthy eating is of great importance, because it ensures that our bodies function well.
Firstly, keep a balanced and varied diet by consuming different categories of fresh foods which provide various essential nutrients for our health. Moreover, consistent eating habits are recommended. In addition, eating slowly with a modest amount of food each time is fundamental to healthy eating.
Let's have a healthy diet and be a wise eater from now on. Only in this way will we lead a healthy life.
1.重点词汇
①ensure v.确保
②various adj.各种各样的
③essential adj.十分必要的
④moreover adv.此外
⑤lead a(n)...life 过上……生活
2.亮点句型
①Firstly, keep a balanced and varied diet by consuming different categories of fresh foods which provide various essential nutrients for our health.(which引导限制性定语从句)首先,通过食用不同种类的新鲜食物来保持均衡和多样化的饮食,这些食物为我们的健康提供了各种十分必要的营养。
②Only in this way will we lead a healthy life.(“only+状语”位于句首的部分倒装)只有这样,我们才能过上健康的生活。
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