2024届高三江苏省镇海市5月模拟试题读后续写人与自然类 自然治愈的力量 讲义
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| 名称 | 2024届高三江苏省镇海市5月模拟试题读后续写人与自然类 自然治愈的力量 讲义 |  | |
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读后续写原题目的分析：
It was a cold, snowy evening.（环境描写，为后文铺垫） Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination （动作描写突出主人公急切的心理）---the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago，he saw figurines of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to realize his little dream.（故事背景） He was so excited and hardly noticing the world around him.（心理描写） Maybe that’s why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the sidewalk, her back against the wall.（配角出现，对配角的描写包括所在位置，所处状态为后文作了铺垫） He murmured (低语) “sorry” and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop, he went straight to （动作描写突出急切的心理）the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more --- all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy （心理描写）he reached for Spiderman.
“You like these, true believer ”
Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.（第二个配角出现，让主人公思考并点醒主人公的智者） “Y-yes ... Yes, they're awesome!” answered Tommy. “They're strong and fast and help other people a lot ...” the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“Then become one!” said the old man.
“How ” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don't have any superpowers.”
“And why would you need them ” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy’s face, he squatted (蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy’s arms. “Did you know, that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person” --- he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He’s a firefighter; he’s saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be.”（两个例子给了主人公暗示，爱、责任心、耐心、勇敢、助人这些品质让他明白如何成为生活中的超级英雄）
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don’t need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart.”（语言描写，通过对话让主人公在心里对超级英雄的认识发生了转变。对后文进行了铺垫）
Para 1: Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
Para 2: The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
续写情节发展：
Para 1: Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
根据首句中的lower one’s head可知主人公因为知道了身边的英雄之后，也许带带有些许羞愧而低下头，意识到自己只看到了这些具有超能力的虚构的超级英雄，而忽略了身边的英雄们。Thinking intensely给我们的续写的第一个衔接处提示了接下去写的内容。主人公在想什么？衔接上文，他应该在想：我也没有超能力，我怎么成为像这位女店主，这位消防员这样的英雄呢？从思考中明白到底什么是真正的英雄。根据这两位英雄的品质联想到自己如果能成为英雄。根据第二段首句出现的homeless woman可知，续写第一段中肯定会提及，而她是需要被帮助的人。由此可见，主人公成为英雄的方式就是帮助这位无家可归的女子。所以在第一段中还需要写主人公想到了什么，以及做了什么。要帮助她需要钱，所以主人公放弃了购买手办，决定用这些钱去助人。
Para 2: The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
根据首句提示，此处衔接句可以描写这位女子在雪夜的状态——坐、靠、雪、发抖。当主人公看到这样的女子之后，他做了什么？当然，她最需要的是食物，或者是钱。但是主人公通过帮助邻居遛狗得来的钱肯定只够提供一些吃的东西。所以可以描写主人公购买食物并送给她的情节。再写她对主人公表示感激。在此时，主人公一是感受到帮助别人获得别人的感激时的心情，二是描写主人公在助人后充满力量，人物变得高大——就如具有超能力的超级英雄一般。
It was a cold, snowy evening.（环境描写，为后文铺垫） Tommy was running as fast as he could, focused on nothing but his destination （动作描写突出主人公急切的心理）---the shop on the street corner. Two weeks ago，he saw figurines of Marvel superheroes on the shelves and felt he had to have one. He's been walking the neighbor's dog ever since then to earn money to realize his little dream.（故事背景） He was so excited and hardly noticing the world around him.（心理描写） Maybe that’s why he tripped over the legs of a homeless woman, who was sitting on the sidewalk, her back against the wall.（配角出现，对配角的描写包括所在位置，所处状态为后文作了铺垫） He murmured (低语) “sorry” and moved on to his destination.
Once he entered the shop, he went straight to （动作描写突出急切的心理）the shelves with figurines. Hulk, Thor, Captain America, Iron Man, and many more --- all of his admired heroes. With his heart pounding like crazy （心理描写）he reached for Spiderman.
“You like these, true believer ”
Tommy turned around. An old man was standing behind him with a wide smile on his face.（第二个配角出现，让主人公思考并点醒主人公的智者） “Y-yes ... Yes, they're awesome!” answered Tommy. “They're strong and fast and help other people a lot ...” the boy looked at figurines in admiration. “I wish I could be a superhero too.”
“Then become one!” said the old man.
“How ” Tommy asked in surprise. “I don't have any superpowers.”
“And why would you need them ” the old man smiled. Seeing the confusion on the boy’s face, he squatted (蹲下) and put his hands on Tommy’s arms. “Did you know, that shopkeeper lady over there has a disabled husband She's been working hard and taking care of him for years. I've never heard a word of complaint from her. And this person” --- he pointed at a redhead man, who just entered the shop. “He’s a firefighter; he’s saved countless lives. He never gives up, no matter how dangerous the situation seems to be.”（两个例子给了主人公暗示，爱、责任心、耐心、勇敢、助人这些品质让他明白如何成为生活中的超级英雄）
The old man looked Tommy in the eyes and smiled. “You don’t need a superpower to be a hero for someone else. The path of a superhero starts not in the mind, not in the muscles, but in the heart.”（语言描写，通过对话让主人公在心里对超级英雄的认识发生了转变。对后文进行了铺垫）
Para 1: Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
Para 2: The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
续写情节发展：
Para 1: Tommy lowered his head and looked at his shoes thinking intensely.
根据首句中的lower one’s head可知主人公因为知道了身边的英雄之后，也许带带有些许羞愧而低下头，意识到自己只看到了这些具有超能力的虚构的超级英雄，而忽略了身边的英雄们。Thinking intensely给我们的续写的第一个衔接处提示了接下去写的内容。主人公在想什么？衔接上文，他应该在想：我也没有超能力，我怎么成为像这位女店主，这位消防员这样的英雄呢？从思考中明白到底什么是真正的英雄。根据这两位英雄的品质联想到自己如果能成为英雄。根据第二段首句出现的homeless woman可知，续写第一段中肯定会提及，而她是需要被帮助的人。由此可见，主人公成为英雄的方式就是帮助这位无家可归的女子。所以在第一段中还需要写主人公想到了什么，以及做了什么。要帮助她需要钱，所以主人公放弃了购买手办，决定用这些钱去助人。
Para 2: The homeless woman was right there, where he saw her last time.
根据首句提示，此处衔接句可以描写这位女子在雪夜的状态——坐、靠、雪、发抖。当主人公看到这样的女子之后，他做了什么？当然，她最需要的是食物，或者是钱。但是主人公通过帮助邻居遛狗得来的钱肯定只够提供一些吃的东西。所以可以描写主人公购买食物并送给她的情节。再写她对主人公表示感激。在此时，主人公一是感受到帮助别人获得别人的感激时的心情，二是描写主人公在助人后充满力量，人物变得高大——就如具有超能力的超级英雄一般。