求助信写作示范
一、开头部分常用语
1. My name is ... I'm writing to you for some help.
我叫……,我写信向你寻求一些帮助。
2.I'm writing a letter to you to ask you to do me a favor.
我给你写信想请你帮我一个忙。
二、寻求帮助常用语
1.Faced with so much difficulty, I have to ask you for help.
面对这么多的困难,我不得不向你求助。
2. In the meanwhile/At the same time, I beg you to ...so that ... Also, I would like you to ...同时,我恳求你……以便……我也想让你……
3. I would like you to introduce some good ways to learn grammar.
我想让你给我介绍一些学习语法的好方法。
4. 1 have met with many difficulties in learning English.
学习英语的过程中我遇到许多困难。
5.I wonder whether you could do me a favor ...
我想知道你是否能帮我一个忙……
三、结尾部分常用语
1.I'm sure with your help I can make great progress.
我相信在你的帮助下我会取得很大的进步。
2.l would greatly appreciate your timely help. 我将非常感谢你及时的帮助。
四、写作示范
【题目要求】
假定你是李华,在光明中学读书。在高中学习英语的过程中遇到一些问题,想得到老师的帮助,以帮助自己学好英语。下面表格中只给了简单的提示,请你结合自己的实际情况给英语老师写一封求助信,内容如下:
学习英语时遇到的问题 生词多,记忆有难度
向英语老师提出的建议 介绍一些学习英语的好方法,慢点授课
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear teacher,
My name is Li Hua.
Yours,
Li Hua
【写作步骤】
Step1 结构布局合理
第一段:遇到的问题(生词多,记忆有难度);
第二段:寻求帮助并提出建议(学习英语的方法,慢点授课);
第三段:希望有所进步;
Step 2 语言规范美观
我给你写信寻求一些帮助。
I‘m writing to you for some help.
我在学习英语方面遇到了许多困难。
I have met many difficulties in learning English.
我发现我们的课文满是生词。
I find that our textbooks are full of unfamiliar words.
对我来说记住这些生词很难。(memorize)
It is very difficult for me to memorize all these words.
课文太长,我难以背诵。
The text is too long for me to recite.
我面临着这么多的困难。
I am face with so many obstacles.
我不得不向您寻求一些帮助。
I have no choice but to ask you for some help.
您能给我们介绍一些学习新单词的好方法吗 (Would you like…)
Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words
我请求您讲课文更慢一点,以便我们能轻松地跟上您。
I beg you to slow down when you explain the text so that we could all keep up with you easier.
有你的帮助,我确信我能在英语学习上取得很大的进步。
I firmly believe that I will make great progress in English learning with your help.
Step 3 句间过渡自然
用非限制性定语从句连接句3、句4
I find that our textbooks are full of unfamiliar words, which are difficult for me to memorize.
2.用因果关系结构连接句6、句7
Since I am faced with so many obstacles, I have no choice but to ask you for some help.
Step 4 誊写
Dear teacher,
My name is Lihua. I am writing to you for help. Recently, I have met many difficulties in learning English. For example, I find that our textbooks are full of unfamiliar words, which are very difficult for me to memorize. Besides, the texts are too long for me to recite.
Since I am faced with many obstacles, I have no choice but to ask you for some help. Would you like to introduce to us some good ways to learn new words In addition, I beg you to slow down when you explain the text so that we can keep up with you more easily.
I firmly believe that I will make great progress in English learning with your help.
Yours,
Lihua