2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(江苏专用)（含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(江苏专用)
1．（2024·江苏常州·二模）学会交流沟通是成长过程的一部分，有效的沟通可以帮助我们解决遇到的困难，增进人与人之间的感情。请你根据要点提示，以沟通为话题，用英语写一篇短文，向校英文报投稿。
要点：
1. 学习和生活中需要交流沟通的方面；
2. 自身有效交流沟通的经历以及它给你带来的影响。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 词数100左右；文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Communication is of great importance to our growth. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Communication is of great importance to our growth. It’s a basic skill for us teenagers in study and life. As we know, it’s common that people sometimes disagree with each other and communication may be the best choice to solve the disagreement. Also, when having difficulty dealing with some problems, we can get help and creative ideas by communicating with others.
Take me as an example. Last Friday I failed an important exam, which made me very sad and stressed. I was in such a low mood that I couldn’t pay attention to what the teacher taught in class. That made him very
angry. Realizing my fault, I communicated with my teacher and explained to him what happened after class. Finally he forgave me and offered me many useful suggestions as well.
This experience has a great influence on me. It is communication that helps me get along well with others. It is also a good way to get more knowledge and broaden our mind.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。引出沟通非常重要的话题及讲述了学习和生活中需要交流沟通的方面；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述上周五一次有效沟通的经历；
第三步，书写结语。总结有效沟通对作者的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①be important to对……很重要
②As we know正如我们所知
③communicate with与……沟通
④get along well with sb.与……相处融洽
⑤have a great influence on sb.对某人有很大影响
[高分句型]
①As we know, it’s common that people sometimes disagree with each other and communication may be the best choice to solve the disagreement. (主语从句)
②It is communication that helps me get along well with others. (定语从句)
③It is also a good way to get more knowledge and broaden our mind. (it作形式主语）
2．（2024·江苏南京·一模）Challenges are part of life. They push us to grow, to learn and to be better. During the three years of junior high school life, you’ll surely have such experiences to share. Please write a passage about your understanding of the challenge and a story behind it.
注意：
1. 词数 80左右；
2. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
3. 语言通顺, 意思连贯, 条理清楚, 书写规范。
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【答案】 I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents often encouraged me, which gave me great hope. I became more confident. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当增加细节，使表述内容更完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，总结上文，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be 过去常常
②took part in参加
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
①Practice makes perfect.(谚语)
②I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school.(when引导的时间状语从句)
③To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语)
3．（2024·江苏常州·一模）常州历史文化底蕴深厚、经济实力雄厚、自然风光秀丽、人文景观丰富。某报社正在征集主题为“你眼中的常州”的文章，请你写篇英语文章投稿，谈谈你的看法。
You shoud share your ideas about the topic:
1. What was Changzhou like 10 years ago
2. What is Changzhou like now
3. What do you think of the changes
注意：
1. 文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2. 要点齐全，语句通顺，表达清晰，书写规范；
3. 词数不少于100。文章的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Changzhou, my hometown, has changed a lot over the past ten years.
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【答案】Possible version:
Changzhou, my hometown, has changed a lot over the past ten years.
Ten years ago, Changzhou was a quiet and small city with fewer shops and cars. When going outside, people didn’t have many choices but to take a bus and it took them much time. There were only a few parks and people needed to pay for visiting them. Life was a little boring and hard.
Nowadays, Changzhou has become a modern place. More wide roads and undergrounds make it convenient/easy for us to go everywhere. Besides, so many different open parks have been built and we can enjoy
different views freely. More importantly, people here have become richer, and we are devoting ourselves to making the city more beautiful and the life better.
What great changes! As we know, changes mean not only power but also chances. I hope more changes will take place in Changzhou.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”，描写十年前的样子用“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍常州十年前的样子；
第二步，介绍常州现在的样子；
第三步，谈谈你对变化的看法。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to doing致力于做某事
②not only…but also…不仅……而且……
③take place发生
[高分句型]
①What great changes! (感叹句)
②I hope more changes will take place in Changzhou. (宾语从句)
4．（23-24九年级下·江苏镇江·期中）初中生活即将结束，你们即将开始新的征程，规划新的人生。请根据下列图示提示内容，以“My plan for the new life”为题，给你们学校英语角写一篇英语短文，介绍你的计划。
注意：（1）词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
（2）短文应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
（3）短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My plan for the new life
Our middle school life is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
My plan for the new life
School life is Middle school is coming to an end. A new life is on the way. I plan to do lots of things for the new life.
First, I’d like to have a healthy lifestyle. It’s good for me to exercise more and keep running every day. I also want to go travelling to enjoy the natural beauty. Second, I hope to read books to learn about different histories and cultures. I will also work harder on my weak subjects. And I hope to be more confident to speak in front of many people as well. Moreover, I’m going to help my parents do some housework when I’m free.
In a word, I’m looking forward to having a meaningful new life.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料类作文；
②时态：以一般将来时为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，考生注意不要遗漏“对未来的期待”这一部分内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出新的生活；
第二步，写出生活计划和学习计划；
第三步，表达对未来生活的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①on the way即将到来
②be good for有益于
③be going to do打算做某事
[高分句型]
Moreover, I’m going to help my parents do some housework when I’m free. (when引导的时间状语从句)
5．（2024·江苏泰州·一模）4月5日晚“2024泰州水城水乡旅游季”在凤城河畔、望海楼前盛大开幕，为了让你们学校来自英国的交换生能够感受到泰州的风光之美、人文之美、生活之美，清明假期间，你带着他们畅游泰州、感受泰州之美。请你用英语写一篇短文在你们的校刊上分享此次经历。
写作要点：
1. Places you visited;
2. Activities you did;
3. Your feelings.
写作要求：
1. 根据提示，内容自拟，要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然，可适当拓展；
2. 不得使用真实的班级、人名等相关信息；
3. 词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Editor,
I’m Liu Ke
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【答案】例文
Dear Editor,
I’m Liu Ke. I showed our school’s exchange students from the UK around Taizhou during the Qingming Festival. We visited many places, such as Fengcheng River, Qin Lake National Wetland Park and Qintong Ancient Town. On the first day, we rowed on Fengcheng River and enjoyed the beautiful natural scenery of Taizhou. We also rode bicycles along the river in Qin Lake National Wetland Park on the second day, which was really relaxing. On the last day, we went to the Qintong Ancient Town. We tasted all kinds of delicious food and experienced the traditional culture here.
We enjoyed ourselves on the holiday. We not only enjoyed the natural beauty of Taizhou, but also felt the humanistic beauty of Taizhou.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：根据写作要点分享此次畅游泰州的经历，可适当发挥，以使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，表达在清明节带来自英国的交换生一起游览泰州；
第二步，介绍游览的地方及进行的活动；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①such as例如
②show sb around sp带领某人参观某地
③all kinds of各种各样的
[高分句型]
①We also rode bicycles along the river in Qin Lake National Wetland Park on the second day, which was really relaxing. (which引导定语从句)
②We not only enjoyed the natural beauty of Taizhou, but also felt the humanistic beauty of Taizhou. (not only ... but also连接的并列句)
6．（2024·江苏常州·一模）在丰富多彩的初中学习生活中，你一定积累了很多学习方法和经验吧！现
校刊英文专栏以“Learning to learn”为题征稿。请你根据要求，用英语写一篇短文投稿。
Dear students, Learning to learn is more important than learning itself. What good methods do you have when you learn some subjects Please share your learning methods with us The following questions may help you. 1. What subject do you want to talk about 2. What good learning methods do you have about the subject 3. What are your feelings when you learn the subject We are looking forward to your sharing.
注意：
1.文中不得出现你的真实姓名和学校名称；
2.表达清楚，语言通顺，书写规范；
3.词数不少于100。文章的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all.
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【答案】例文
Learning to learn
Hello everyone! It’s my great honor to share my learning methods with you all. My name is Lily. Here are my methods of English learning. First, I usually watch English movies and listen to English songs. I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions. Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words. In this way, the new words can be repeated and I can understand their meanings better. What’s more, it’s a good habit to keep a diary in English. That helps me think in English and
improve my writing skills as well.
Hope my methods can be helpful. But please remember, find the ways that are best for you.
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
【写作步骤】
第一步，介绍自己想谈的科目；
第二步，具体介绍你学习这门学科的方法；
第三步，表达你的感受以及你从中学到什么。
①listen to听
②in this way以这种方式
③what’s more而且
【高分句型】①I think it’s a relaxing way to learn the correct pronunciation and proper expressions.（宾语从句）
②Second, reading passages on the same topic helps a lot in learning new words.（动名词短语作主语）
7．（2024·江苏常州·一模）热爱劳动是中华民族的传统美德，劳动建设美丽校园，劳动营造和谐家庭，劳动创建文明社区。作为一名中学生，要积极参加劳动实践。你校英语报发起了“Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life”主题征文活动。请根据以下提示，写一篇英文短文，谈谈你在不同的场合可以做哪些劳动，在劳动中你收获了什么，并发起倡议，呼吁更多的青少年热爱劳动，热爱生活。
要点如下：
1. What kind of labor can you do at school, at home or in the community
2. What can you learn from labor
3. What advice will you give to the teenagers
注意：
1.词数100左右（标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
2.可适当发挥，以使行文连贯；
3.文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love.
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Labor, Enjoy Life
It is well known that labor is the traditional Chinese virtue of love. However, some students are rarely given the opportunity to enjoy labor, while others are too busy with their studies to labor. There are also some students who are unwilling to labor because they are lazy.
As a middle school student, I often do some labor activities in everyday life. For example, I clean the classroom and playground with my classmates at school. I do some cooking, cook dishes, wash clothes and tidy rooms at home. And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled.
By doing these, I’ve learnt some basic life skills to take care of myself. Besides, I have not only got the strong feeling of satisfaction but also become more and more independent and responsible.
All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. Let’s take an active part in doing the daily labor.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示要点进行写作，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，根据介绍一些自己在学校、家中和社区的劳动实践；
第三步，介绍从劳动中的收获；
第四步，书写结语，给青少年一些建议。
[亮点词汇]
①help the old or disabled帮助老人或残疾人
②all in all总的来说
③take an active part in积极参加
④not only...but also...不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①And in the community, I do volunteer work to help the old or disabled. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②All in all, I believe that labor education is important for our development and I encourage all the teenagers to actively engage in labor activities. (and引导的并列句)
8．（2024·江苏苏州·一模）从生物的解构、科幻小说的涌现、太极奥秘的探索、“嫦娥四号与玉兔”的中国式太空浪漫再到智能家居的日益普及。从古至今，人类对科学的追求从未止步。科学的不断发展给你的生活带来了怎样的影响？请以“Science Shapes Our Life”为题写一篇英语文章。内容应包括：
1.你对该问题的理解；
2.你的一次亲身经历；
3.你对未来科学的畅想。
注意：
1.词数100；
2.内容涵盖要点，照抄本卷语篇不得分；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Science Shapes Our Life
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【答案】例文
Science Shapes Our Life
In the last few decades, science has developed at high speed, and played an important role in our daily lives. It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.
Recently, my family decided to embrace the future of transportation by purchasing a new energy vehicle. I
find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car. Furthermore, new energy vehicles use electric energy as a power source. Electricity can be obtained through a variety of ways, including renewable energy such as solar and wind energy, so the popularity of electric vehicles has a positive impact on the environment.
Looking ahead, the future of science appears promising, with endless possibilities waiting to be explored and discovered. Advances in fields such as artificial intelligence, biotechnology, and space exploration hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息，可适当补充细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体介绍科学发展带给生活什么样的影响；
第二步，讲述科学发展影响自身生活的经历；
第三步，表达对未来科学的畅想。
[亮点词汇]
①play an important role in在……中起重要作用
②allow sb. to do sth.允许某人做某事
③compared with与……相比
④have a positive impact on对……有积极的影响
[高分句型]
①It is the development of science that allows us to understand ourselves and the world around us better, create many inventions that help us live better.（强调句）
②I find the electric car seems to be faster and smoother compared with a petrol car.（省略that的宾语从句）
③…hold the potential to revolutionize the way we live, work, and interact with the world around us.（省略that的定语从句）
9．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）中华文化源远流长，博大精深。我校学生会特组织用英语讲好中国故事活动，邀请同学们分系列介绍中国文化。本期主题是“我最喜欢的城市”，请介绍你最喜欢的城市并陈述理由。
注意事项：
1. 短文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在100个左右，文章开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
My Favourite City
My favourite city is ___________________________________________________________
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I hope you can visit it some day.
【答案】例文
My Favourite City
My favourite city is Beijing. Beijing, the capital of China, has a long history and culture. This city is famous in the world for its spectacular historical sites, modern buildings and rich cultural activities.
Beijing is a city with multi-ethnic cultures, with colorful folk culture and delicious food, so that people can feel the charm of Chinese culture. Beijing has many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum, the Summer Palace and so on. If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square. You can enjoy some beautiful views in the Summer Palace. Also, you can try some delicious food like Beijing duck. If you want to learn more about Chinese art, don’t miss the opera shows there. I think Beijing is worth a visit.
I hope you can visit it some day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出“我最喜欢的城市”的话题；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“地理位置、景点、美食、文化”等方面进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①the capital of……的首都
②such as例如
③learn about了解
[高分句型]
①If you come to visit Beijing, you can watch the raising of the national flag at Tian’anmen Square.（if引导的条件状语从句）
②I think Beijing is worth a visit.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）母亲节即将到来，你校英语角将举行以“My plan for Mother’s Day”为题的征文比赛。假如你是李华，请你根据以下问题提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的计划，感恩母爱。
注意：(1)短文应包括所给问题提示，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
(2)词数90左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(3)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
My plan for Mother’s Day
Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother.
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【答案】例文
My plan for Mother’s Day
Mother’s day is coming. It is a day to express our thanks to our mother. I really want to say, “Mum, you are my hero. I love you. ”
I want to do something meaningful for my mother. I can cook a nice meal for her. My mother is very busy but she always makes delicious food for me. Also, I plan to make a beautiful card by myself. I can write what I want to say to her. Besides, I’ll have a short trip with her so that she can relax herself.
I think everyone should do something to show the love for our mother.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，引出本文主题；
第二步，介绍自己将为妈妈做的事及为什么要那样做；
第三步，介绍自己想对妈妈说的话。
[亮点词汇]
①something meaningful一些有意义的事
②have a short trip with her和她进行短途旅行
③besides除此之外
[高分句型]
①I can write what I want to say to her. （what引导宾语从句）
②I think everyone should do something to show the love for our mother.（think 后接省略引导词that的宾语从句）
11．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）学生更喜欢纸质书还是电子书 学生最喜欢什么类型的书籍 假如你是李华，就相关问题在班里做了调查，结果见下图。学校英语社团将举办“Reading Habits”主题活动，请你准备一份英文交流稿，包含以下内容： (1)基于以下图表，简要叙述你的调查结果； (2)陈述你自己的阅读喜好及原因； (3)分享一本你最喜欢的书籍。
注意事项：
1.词数在 100个左右，交流稿开头与结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3.交流稿中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.交流稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you.
Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits.
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Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world.
【答案】例文
Good morning, everyone!
I’m Li Hua, from Class 3, Grade 9. It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you.
Recently, I’ve done a survey about my classmates’ reading habits. Here are my findings. Most students like reading paper books. Only 24.4% students use eBooks to read articles. They like reading novels best. Next comes the history books, taking up 22%. About 14% students like reading science books. As far as I’m concerned, I like reading magazines. There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read. It can satisfy my desire to explore the world. My favourite magazine is Newboy. It is published every month. It’s really a good book to read.
Books are like a key to the door of a new world. Hope we all can enjoy exploring the new world.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为交流稿；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏提示的相关要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，问候并引入文章主题；
第二步，介绍调查结果及自身的阅读喜好；
第三步，进行总结。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某事
②like...best最喜欢
③take up占据
④as far as sb’s concerned就某人而言
[高分句型]
①It’s my honor to share something about reading habits with you. (It作形式主语)
②There are many kinds of article types in magazines, and I can choose whatever I like to read. (whatever引导的宾语从句)
12．（2024·江苏南通·一模）近来，安全问题备受关注。专家指出，提高青少年的自我保护能力可以避免80%的意外伤害。因此，自我保护是青少年必备的意识和能力之一。请你以“Self-protection”为题写 一篇演讲稿，选择或自拟两个方面，谈谈自我保护的重要性并提出具体建议。
要求：
词数90左右。短文的开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。
可以适当发挥，使条理清晰，内容完整，意思连贯。
文中不得出现真实的姓名与校名。
参考词汇：school-bullying校园欺凌
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently safety has been paid much attention to. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
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Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Self-protection
Good afternoon, everyone!
Recently, more and more people pay attention to safety problems. It is reported that 80% of the injuries can be prevented by improving our self-protection abilities. Self-protection is one of the most important skills to us.
We can avoid or reduce the possibility of being hurt if we know what to do in different situations. Fire is one of the most terrible accidents around us. If our building is on fire, the most important is to calm down first. Then, cover the mouth and nose with a wet towel to protect ourselves from thick smoke and try to get out as soon as possible.
School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us. If we meet with school-bullying, we must tell our teachers or parents about it. They will help us deal with it well. What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble. In a word, we should have some self-protection skills to live a safe and happy life.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇讲稿；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍自我保护”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍自我保护的重要性；
第二步，根据题干中的表格，具体介绍两种情况并给出建议；
第三步，收尾，并再次点评自我保护的重要性，与前文呼应。
[亮点词汇]
①calm down冷静
②in a word总而言之
[高分句型]
①School-bullying is another danger that may happen around us.（定语从句）
②What’s more, it’s necessary for us to help others if they are in trouble.（it is adj for sb to do句型）
13．（2024·江苏常州·一模）假定你是李华，最近你的朋友Tony在与父母相处的过程中出现了沟通不畅的问题。他心情不佳，来信寻求你的帮助和建议。请根据以下要点给他写一封回信，内容包括：
1、安慰你的朋友；
2、提出改善关系的建议；
注意：
1、词数100左右；
2、结尾已经给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tony,
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I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. I wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Tony,
I’m sorry to hear about your communication problems with your parents, but I know how you feel since I’ve had similar problems before. Here are my suggestions and I hope things can get better soon.
First, let’s put ourselves into their shoes. Parents love us and often try to prevent us from making mistakes, so understanding each other matters a lot in improving a family relationship. Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart instead of a method to solve problems. Therefore, what you need to do is telling them about this honestly and trust them.
I hope you can find these suggestions helpful. I wish you all the best.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作内容已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“内容”中的要点，务必写全，可适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，安慰朋友以及表明写信目的；
第二步，提出改善关系的建议；
第三步，总结全文，祝福对方。
[亮点词汇]
①put oneself into one’s shoes设身处地
②look for寻找
③instead of代替
[高分句型]
①Therefore, what you need to do is telling them about this honestly and trust them. （what引导主语从句）
②Besides, when we share our problems with them, we often look for a listening ear and an open heart instead of a method to solve problems.（when引导时间状语从句）
14．（2024·江苏连云港·一模）阅读，是与高尚的灵魂对话。阅读不仅能滋养人生，还能使人成为一个有温度、懂情趣、会思考的人，引领我们走向生命的诗和远方。校读书俱乐部正在举办征文活动。假设
你是Wendy，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍自己的阅读习惯。
要点：
1. What are your reading habits
2. Share some reading experiences;
3. What do you think of reading
注意：
1. 词数100 左右；
2. 文中应包括所给内容要点，可适当发挥，使文章连贯；
3. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息。
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【答案】例文
Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life
Reading is very important to us. Firstly, reading can help us get knowledge from books. Besides, it can open our minds and it is good for us to study. What’s more, reading can make us be confident and happy. I keep reading every day, because I think it is a good habit. I spend at least twenty minutes in reading every evening. I also watch some good programs such as Readers and then share some good books introduced by the readers with my friends. I take notes when I am reading. I keep writing down some beautiful sentences in the notebook after reading.
I strongly suggest that every one should read at least one or two good books every term. What’s more, we should read proper books, which can help us to improve ourselves. Let’s enjoy reading and enjoy our life.
【详解】
[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，围绕“阅读”展开；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍读书的益处；
第二步，介绍你是如何养成良好的阅读习惯的；
第三步，最后表达你的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①besides此外
②take notes记笔记
③at least至少
[高分句型]
①I keep reading every day, because I think it is a good habit.（because引导原因状语从句）
②I take notes when I am reading.（when引导的时间状语从句）
③I strongly suggest that every one should read at least one or two good books every term.（that引导的宾语从句）
15．（2024·江苏南通·一模）很多外国友人喜欢中国文化，David就是其中之一。他在抖音上发起Traditional Chinese Stories的话题，向中国网友征集中国传统故事。请你参与话题，介绍一个中国传统故事，传播中国声音。
提示：①What is the story about
②Why do you choose the story (至少两点)
※You can choose one from the following stories or any other one you like.
Yu Gong moves mountains. 愚公移山
The Rabbit and the Turtle. 龟兔赛跑
Look at the Sky from the Bottom of a Well. 坐井观天 ...
要求：①不得出现学校、老师和同学的真实姓名。
②语句连贯，字数90词左右。
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now I’d like to introduce
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【答案】例文
Traditional Chinese stories play an important role in Chinese culture. Now, I’d like to introduce a well-known story called the Rabbit and the Turtle.
One day a rabbit and a turtle had a race. At first, the rabbit ran so fast that he quickly left the turtle far behind. A moment of pride went through his mind, “if I have a sleep now, the turtle can’t catch up with me, either.” Then he followed what he thought.
However, the turtle insisted on pulling himself slowly to the end, though he was quite tired. At last, when the turtle reached the finishing line, the whole animal world was surprised. The rabbit regretted a lot.
The story reminds me that something which seems impossible can be achieved if someone puts all his effort into it. As the old saying goes, “Everything comes to him who waits.” And I think I should take each task seriously not only in my study, but also in my life in the future.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“提示信息”，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，引出要介绍的传统故事；
第二步，具体阐述传统故事内容；
第三步，阐述自己从这个故事中学到了什么。
[亮点词汇]
①catch up with赶上
②insist on坚持
③not only...but also...不但……而且……
[高分句型]
①At last, when the turtle reached the finishing line, the whole animal world was surprised.（when引导的时间状语从句）
②The story reminds me that something which seems impossible can be achieved if someone puts all his effort into it.（宾语从句）
16．（2024·江苏无锡·一模）成长对于青少年有着重大的意义。日前，学校公众号英语专栏以“Growing Up”为题，面向全体学生开展征文活动。请你参考下面提示图（图片为非限定性内容），从你对成长的认识出发，结合自己初中阶段的某个故事或某次经历，写一篇短文，谈谈你对成长的感受。
注意事项：
1.征文须自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在100个左右，征文标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.征文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.征文必须写在答题卡指定的位置上。
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【答案】One possible version:
Growing Up
Growing up is meaningful to teenagers. In my opinion, I grow up in changes. The biggest change I’ve ever made is that I am not afraid of speaking to others any more.
I used to be shy when I entered the middle school. It lasted for one year until I read the saying “It’s never too late to change” in my English book. I realized it’s time to change, so I began to communicate more with others and tried to speak louder when answering questions in class.
Now my life is much more meaningful and colourful. I should be brave to improve myself when growing up.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山提出自己的观点——成长对青少年来说很有意义；
第二步，介绍自己在初中阶段关于成长的故事；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①In my opinion依我之见
②be afraid of害怕……
③not…any more不再
④begin to do sth.开始做某事
[高分句型]
①Growing up is meaningful to teenagers.(动名词作主语)
②I used to be shy when I entered the middle school.(when引导的时间状语从句)
17．（2024·江苏南京·一模）劳逸结合，方能游刃有余。课间十分钟是一幅多彩的画卷。请根据学校的征稿要求，写一篇英语短文。
Now, more and more students are busy studying all day long. This week we want you to have your say about the ten-minute break. Why is it necessary to have the break What do you and your classmates do during the break What is your good advice on planning the break
注意：
1. 内容涵盖所有要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数 80左右（已给出的文章开头，不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
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【答案】例文
We have a ten-minute break between classes. In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. The ten-minute break is meant for us to relax and prepare for the next class. Only doing so can we have more energy to study effectively in class. My ten-minute break is always pleasing. Sometimes I do some simple exercise. Sometimes my classmates have a free chat with me happily or just take a walk outside. Therefore, I always feel energetic and listen carefully to teachers. You shouldn’t run too far from your classroom. Besides, don’t take some energetic exercise. I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“课间我们有十分钟的休息时间。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——课间休息重要的原因、你和同学所做的事、你的建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“我希望每个人都将有一个美好的课间10分钟”的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①prepare for为……做准备
②take a walk散步
③feel energetic 感到精力充沛
[高分句型]
①In my opinion, taking the ten-minute break is necessary, because it makes us relaxed both physically and mentally. (状语从句）
②I hope that everyone will have a wonderful ten-minute break. (宾语从句)
18．（2024·江苏扬州·一模）假定你是李华，接到笔友Tommy的邮件询问有关垃圾分类的情况。请根据邮件内容给他回复，词数100字左右。
To: Lihua 2024@
From: Tommy@
Subject: Waste sorting
Dear Li Hua, I hear that you are carrying out waste sorting in Yangzhou. Would you please share your ideas with me Why should you carry out waste sorting What do you do about waste sorting at school or at home What else can you do to protect the environment I’m looking forward to hearing from you soon. All the best, Tommy
要求：
（1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
（2）必须包括提示中的所有信息，并适当发挥；
（3）词数在100词左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数；
（4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
相关词汇：厨余垃圾kitchen waste；可回收垃圾recyclable waste；有害垃圾hazardous waste
Dear Tommy,
I’m happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now I’ll tell you something about it. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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All the best,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Tommy,
I’m happy to hear from you. In your mail, you asked about waste sorting here in Yangzhou. Now I’ll tell you something about it.
In order to make an effort to make our city more beautiful, we carry out waste sorting. We separate the wastes into different types, and then throw them into the rubbish bins. We will be able to save resources by making use of recyclable waste. Hazardous waste will not pollute our environment after special treatment.
Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. First, we can collect more information about waste sorting and prepare different rubbish bins for different wastes. Paper can be recycled, while kitchen waste especially leftovers can be collected as food for pigs or processed as fertilizer for plants. Above all, such harmful waste as plastics and used batteries should not be mixed with other wastes. What’s more, we can tell our parents and relatives about the importance of waste sorting.
As well as waste sorting, keeping power off while electricity equipment is not in use is also a good idea to protect our environment.
If everybody takes action, we can make a big difference to our environment.
All the best,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：文章应该包括邮件中所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，开门见山，介绍垃圾分类情况，从而引出话题；
第二步，阐述垃圾分类的意义；
第三步，介绍在家或在学校你是如何进行垃圾分类的？
第四步，介绍其他为了保护环境的做法；
第五步，书写总结，呼吁大家行动起来。
［亮点词汇］
① make an effort 作出努力
② carry out 执行
［高分句型］
① Here are some actions we can take to make the waste sorting better while we are at home. (定语从句)
② If everybody takes action, we can make a big difference to our environment. (if引导的条件状语从句)