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Vivid Writing
-abundant sentence patterns
英语写作如何打磨润色
Ways to polish your story:
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4. proverbs and sayings
abundant sentence patterns and structures:
I.简单句如何不简单
II.并列句、复合句(三大从句)、
并列复合句一起来帮忙
I want to have a pen friend, hopefully _______________________
______________________________________ .
我想有一个笔友, 希望是一个兴趣相投的女孩子。
1. 同位语
a girl with
interests similar to mine.
We must do something to improve our handwriting.
-- _______________________________________ to our handwriting.
2. 被动句(更强调动作的对象而非动作的执行者时常用)
Something must be done
Her only son finally came back __________________________ .
安然无恙。
safe and sound
3. 形容词短语做主补或定语
All the scientists _________________________ (出席会议的) have
signed their names.
present at the meeting
1) ____________________________________________ , he encourages us to think by ourselves.
他鼓励我们独立思考, 而不是马上告诉我们答案。
2)He looked at his son __________________________________ (满意地) .
4. 介宾结构或副词
Instead of giving us answers immediately
with satisfaction/ satisfiedly
3)_____________________________________ (一到达), we began to work immediately.
Upon arrival/On arriving
6. with /without sb/sth. + object complement /absolute structure
1) We are sure that everything will be better ____________________
(随着时间的推移).
2) _______________________________ (因为摩托被偷), they had to walk home.
3) ____________________________ (无事可做), a person can be dispirited.
4)She was weeping in the dark _______________________ (关了灯)
5) He came over _______________________________ (手里捧着花).
6) He turned to me, ________________________________ (眼中充满开心).
7) _________________________ (由汤姆当我们的领导),we are happy.
with time passing by
With the motorcycle stolen
With nothing to do
/Without anything to do
with the lights off
with some flowers in his hands
with his eyes full of joy
With Tom our leader
1)____________________ , we need to do sports.
为了学习好, 我们需要做体育运动。
In order to /To study well
5. 非谓语结构
2) In this picture, a mother bird stays in her nest in a big tree, ________________________________________________.
在这幅图中, 一个鸟妈妈呆在一棵大树的鸟巢里, 观看她的鸟仔飞走。
3) ______________________________________________ , mobile phones and the Internet are faster and much more convenient.
与信件和公用电话相比, 手机和网络更快也更方便。
watching her babies flying away
Compared with letters and public phones
7. There be +主语结构+(...)+(介宾结构)的多样化形式
1)各种时态:There is/are/was/were/is,was,are,were going to be/
will be/would be/has been/have been/...等等
2)There +may/might/must/...等情态动词+be+主语
3) There happens to be +主语+... “碰巧有”
4)There seems /appears to be +主语+...“似乎有”
5)There used to be +主语+... “曾经有”
6)There is/are likely to be+主语+... “很可能有……”
7)There lives/lies/stands/exists/comes/goes/remains/...+主语
8)There be +主语+非谓语动词结构/定语从句/同位语从句
7. There be 的常见固定句式
1)There is no denying that ...“不可否认……”
2)There is no doubt that ...“毫无疑问……”
3)There is no need to do ...“没有必要做……”
4)There is no sense/point in doing ...“做……是没有意义的/道理的”
5)There is no use doing ...“做……是没用的”
1)有大约15%的学生认为学习成绩不重要。
There are about 15% of the students _____________________
_______________________________ .
2)似乎每有天都有这样的故事被报道出来。
____________________ such a story _______ (report) every day.
3)有如此多的作业要做以至于我不能早睡。
____________________________________________ I can't go to bed early.
thinking/ who think that exam results are not important.
There seems to be
7. There be +主语结构+(...)+(介宾结构)的多样化形式
reported
There is so much homework to do that
8. 强调句
1) We should be thankful to our parents ___________________
___________________________________ .
(因为正是他们把我们带到这个世界).
2) He didn't realize the mistake until then.
-- ___________________________________________________________ .
-- ___________________________________________________________ .
3) 他不知道外面在发生什么。
Never _______________________ what was happening outside.
4) ____________________________(只有用这种方法我才能) gain
more confidence.
9.倒装句
because it was they that brought us into this world.
It was not until then that he realized the mistake.
Not until then did he realize the mistake.
did he know
Only in this way can I
10. 省略
1) If it is possible, please do me a favor.
-- If ______________ , please do me a favor.
2) The exhibition is more interesting than it was expected.
-- The exhibition is more interesting than ______________ .
3) While you are cycling, don't forget the traffic lights.
--While _____________ , don't forget the traffic lights.
4) We've been having terrible weather these days.
--_______ __________ _____________ we've been having these days .
5) It's wise to stop loss in time.
--______ _________ it is to stop loss in time .
if/when/whenever/where/wherever possible/necessary
/convenient; if not/if so/if any
possible
expected
cycling
时间,条件,让步,方式,比较状语从句中的省略
What terrible weather
How wise
11.感叹句
12. 双重否定
1)没有你的帮助,我不会取得这么大的进步。
---________________________________________________________________ .
2) 不可否认,中国的伟大成就是有目共睹的。
-- __________________________________________________________________ .
Without your help, I wouldn't have made such great progress.
There is no denying that China's achievements are obvious to all.
双重否定形式:
1. no/not/never/nothing...+否定的词
2. never/not fail to do sth
3. never /not miss sth
4. There is no denying that...
5. It can't be denied that...
13. 无灵主语句
1)The following months saw my constant progress and my efforts eventually paid off.
2)Grief and sorrow hit me like a bolt(闪电) from the blue.
3) 这个城市刚下过一场大雨。
-- _________________________________________________________ .
悲痛如晴天霹雳一般击中了我。
接下来的几个月见证了我不断的进步,我的努力最终有了回报。
无灵主语句,即作主语的是无生命的事物:
1.表示时间、地点等的名词。这类无灵主语句常用see, find, witness等动词作谓语,往往带有比喻或拟人的修辞手法。2.表示生理、心理状态的名词。3.表示行为、动作意义的名词。4.表示情景、自然现象的名词。
A heavy rain visited the city.
14. 虚拟语气
1)如果我当时听了你的建议,我就已经考上大学了。
________________________________________________________________
_____________________ .
2)如果岁月可以倒流就好了。
_________________________________________________________ .
3) 要不是你的帮助,我不可能在演讲比赛中获得一等奖。
--
_________________________________________________________________ .
If only the years could turn back.
If I had followed your advice, I would have been admitted to university.
But for/Without your help, I couldn't have got the first prize in the speech competition.
1)He lost his way. His wallet was stolen.
-- ______________________________________________________ .
2)What he says doesn't matter. What he does matters.
-- ______________________________________________________ .
3)You must hurry. You'll miss the plane.
-- _______________________________________________________ .
15.使用并列连词
1) 最常见并列连词:and/but/or/so/while
2)其他并列连词词组 not only ...but also, both ...and, either ...or, neither ...nor, not... but..., whether... or...
Not only did he lose the way but also his wallet was stolen.
Not what he says but what he does matters
You must hurry or you'll miss the plane.
1) The other day we had an English speech contest.
I won the first prize in the contest.
-- The other day we had an English speech contest ____ ______ I won the first prize. .
2)He was happy. He jumped with joy.
_______________________________________________________________ .
16.复合句(定语、名词性从句、状语从句)
in which
He was so happy that he jumped with joy.
1) I want to stress that everyone should focus on the class.
-- ______________________________________ is that everyone should focus in class.
2) ___________________________(使我印象最深的)is his famous saying. “Genius is one percent inspiration and ninety-nine percent perspiration”.
17.what引导的名词性从句
What I want to stress
What impresses me most
如: I guess, I think, I believe, in my opinion, in other words, that is to say, generally speaking, believe me, believe it or not, to tell you the truth, to be sure, to be frank, to be honest, as we know, what's worse, worse still, sure enough, strangely, by the way, most important of all 等。
18.适当使用插入语
奇怪,教室里没有人。
Strangely, there is nobody in the classroom.
19. 其他句型,如it做形式主语或形式宾语等等许多固定搭配
It took me one day to remember these English words.
1) 记下这些单词花了我一天时间。
2)As we haven't mastered enough English words,
sometimes we may ________________(觉得困难) to follow the teacher.
find it difficult
19. 其他句型,和许多固定搭配
She was walking along the street when she heard someone calling her.
3) 她正走在大街上,这时她听到有人叫她。
4)When our teacher told us the good news ,we all cheered
up.
_______ ____________ our teacher told us the good news ,we all cheered up.
The moment
3) was/were doing when...
was/were about to do when...
had just done when...
4) the moment/the instant/
the minute/immedialtely/
instantly/directly
20.结合使用长句与短句,合理使用主动和被动句
交替使用长句与短句,合理使用主动和被动句,使文章错落有致,形式上增加美感,而且读起来铿锵有力。
Practice
Translate and polish your sentences as much as possible.
他是李华,郴州市二中一名高三学生。随着高考临近,没有做好准备的李华感到越来越紧张。回想过去。他多么后悔浪费了大量时间在无用的事情上。如果当初听了父母和老师的话,他已经取得很大的进步了。有一句谚语说“有志者事竟成”。为了考上好大学,他决定从今以后努力学习。只有这样他才能实现他的梦想。他坚定地相信这所美丽的学校将会见证他的成功。
参考词汇:the College Entrance Examination
Translate and polish your sentences as much as possible.
He is Li Hua, a Senior 3 student from No. 2 High School of Chen Zhou.With the College Entrance Examination approaching,Lihua, who hasn't made good preparations for it, feels more and more nervous. Looking back, how he regrets having wasted so much time on many useless things. If he had listened to his parents and teachers, he would have made great progress. There is a saying that goes "where there is a will, there is a way". In order to be admitted to a good university, he has decided to study hard from now on. Only in this way can he realize his dream. He holds the firm belief that this beautiful school will see his success.