2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(上海专用)（含解析）

2024年中考英语（书面表达）模拟真题速递(上海专用)
1．（2024·上海静安·二模）Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “A problem I solved”. （以“我解决的一个问题”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格）
在日常生活中，我们时常面临各种挑战和问题。请分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。
（注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其他相关信息。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
A problem I solved
A famous saying goes “Whatever difficulties you meet with, never give up half way”.
I remember I had difficulty improving my English when I entered junior high school. Though I tried my best to recite the passages, it was still difficult for me to communicate with the native speakers. I couldn’t understand some long sentences in newspaper articles, either. With the tips from my English teacher, I was determined to listen to the English programs over the radio every day and follow it to practice my spoken English. Meanwhile, I picked up some key words to guess the meanings according to the context. “Practice makes perfect”. I made great progress at last. I felt very excited about that.
Now I think if a good way is mastered, it will not difficult for anyone to improve English.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般过去时；
③提示：本文主要是分享一次你的亲身经历，谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，详细分享一次你的亲身经历，并谈谈你是如何运用具体的策略或方法，成功解决问题或找到答案的；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①have difficulty doing sth.做某事有困难
②communicate with和某人交流
③be determined to do sth.下定决心做某事
[高分句型]
①I remember I had difficulty improving my English when I entered junior high school. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②Though I tried my best to recite the passages, it was still difficult for me to communicate with the native speakers. (though引导的让步状语从句)
③Now I think if a good way is mastered, it will not difficult for anyone to improve English. (if引导的条件状语从句)
2．（2024·上海宝山·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given. (请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。)
你的学校近期拟开展一次校园艺术节活动 (School Art Festival)，本次活动旨在发挥同学们的艺术特长，营造良好的校园艺术氛围。目前学校德育处正就活动方案征求意见。
假如你是初三学生毕华，请阅读以下活动方案，给德育处王老师写一封信。
信件必须包括以下内容：
1. 你是否会报名参加校园艺术节活动，并简述理由；
2. 针对活动方案中的1-2项内容，提出修改建议。
校园艺术节活动方案
活动主题 “艺术让校园生活更美好” (Art makes school life better)
活动时间 5月6日至5月8日 下午3:30-4:30
活动地点 学校艺术教室 (Art Room)
活动对象 6至8年级学生
活动形式 艺术讲座、学生作品展示 (Art lectures &Students’ works display)
(注意：1. 信中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇内容不得分。)
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【答案】例文：
Dear Mr. Wang,
I am very happy to learn that our school will have an art festival. The theme of the festival is “Art makes school life better”. I want to take part in it because I can enjoy the beauty of art.
This activity will be held in the Art Room from May 6th to 8th. It will start at 3:30 pm and last for an hour. I think we should begin earlier so that we can have enough time to enjoy ourselves. Students from Grade 6 to 8 can take part in this activity. They can go to the art lectures and enjoy art works from students. I think we can also watch traditional plays and play interesting games.
I’m looking forward to it.
Yours sincerely,
Bi Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为一封书信；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。很高兴得知学校要开展校园艺术节；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。一是简述自己是否会参加并给出理由，二是针对活动方案提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。期待艺术节的到来。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②last for持续
③enjoy oneself尽情享受
[高分句型]
①I want to take part in it because I can enjoy the beauty of art.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I think we should begin earlier so that we can have enough time to enjoy ourselves.（so that引导的目的状语从句）
3．（2024九年级·上海·专题练习）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
你所在的社区计划举办名为“时间管理 (time management)”的培训，现就培训方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下培训方案，写一封邮件给社区负责人王先生，邮件须包含以下内容：
(1) 你是否会参加此培训，并简述理由；
(2) 针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。
培训方案 (training plan)
目的 教授时间管理的方法
对象 (participant) 13~17岁的学生
形式 (way of training) 阅读
时间 七月每周六上午7~10点
地点 社区广场
注意：
1.邮件中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2.照抄本卷语篇不得分。
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【答案】
例文：
Dear Mr Wang,
I want to participate in this activity very much, because time is very important for all of us. As for the activity form, I think it should be improved. For example, we can find some experienced celebrities to share their stories. Of course, we can also ask classmates or teachers around us to share their stories. Because I think only reading form is too simple and boring. I hope my advice is helpful to you.
I look forward to attending this training and gaining valuable insights that will help me manage my time more efficiently. Thank you for considering my feedback.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封邮件；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，想参加此次培训；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。简述自己参加培训的理由，并针对活动方案提出建议；
第三步，书写结语。期待此次培训。
[亮点词汇]
①improve提高
②share分享
③ask ab. to do sth.请某人做某事
④helpful有用的
⑤look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I want to participate in this activity very much, because time is very important for all of us. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②Because I think only reading form is too simple and boring. (宾语从句)
4．（2024·上海金山·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given information.（以“My suggestion for social practice”为题，写一篇至少60个单词的短文。要求紧扣题意，语句正确通顺，内容连贯。）
社会实践活动是课堂教学的延伸，它能够丰富我们的生活经历，帮助我们认识社会、开拓视野、锻炼能力。你的学校正在开展“我为社会实践献一计”（My suggestion for social practice）的活动，即将初中毕业的你针对这个活动有何建议？请介绍你所希望进行的社会实践活动并阐述理由。
以下活动仅供参考。
参观类（Visit）：科技馆（Science Museum）、博物馆……
实践类（Practice）：田间劳作（Working in the fields）、志愿者、厨艺……
娱乐类（Entertainment）：演出（Performance）……
比赛类（Match）：摄影（Taking photos）……
……
（注意：1.短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。）
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【答案】例文
My Suggestion for Social Practice Social practice activities are important for students’ personal growth and development. I would like to share my suggestion for social practice. Visiting the science museum can improve
students’ understanding of science and technology. Working in the fields is also a good way to make students know where food comes from and how it is grown. Participating in performances can help students build confidence. Different matches can enrich students’ lives and allow them find their interests. So, it is necessary for students to have some social practice activities.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开门见山，说明社会实践活动的重要性；
第二步，具体阐社会实践活动的工作内容及选择原因；
第三步，总结。
[亮点词汇]
① personal growth and development个人成长和发展
② participate in参加
③ build confidence建立自信
[高分句型]
① Working in the fields is also a good way to make students know where food comes from and how it is grown. (where和when引导的宾语从句)
② So, it is necessary for students to have some social practice activities. (it is+形容词+for sb.+to do sth.句型)
5．（2024·上海闵行·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
今年“青少年心理健康周” (Teenagers’ Mental Health Week) 活动期间，校园英文电台就同学们眼中“最合适的倾诉对象”进行了问卷调查，下图为调查结果的饼状图 (the pie chart)。请阅读下图，谈谈你对此结果的看法，并结合自身实际，说说你眼中最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
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【答案】例文：
During the “Teenagers’ Mental Health Week”, our English Radio did a questionnaire survey on the “the most suitable person to talk to” among students. The result shows that about half of the students would rather talk to friends than parents and teachers when they have problems. I think for most students, friends know them better.
However, as for me, parents are the most suitable persons to talk to. For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents. They can give me some advice through their experiences. They can make me relaxed and have confidence in myself.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：这是一篇材料作文。
②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点包括对问卷调查结果的看法，以及结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍调查结果和对此的看法；
第二步，结合自身实际，说明最合适的倾诉对象及理由。
[亮点词汇]
①would rather ... than ... 比起……更愿意……
②as for me 至于我
③communicate with sb 和某人交谈
④through their experiences 通过他们的经历
⑤have confidence in myself 相信自己
[高分句型]
①I think for most students, friends know them better.（宾语从句）
②For example, when I feel stressed about my lessons and exams, I often communicate with my parents.（when引导时间状语从句）
6．（2024·上海松江·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given information. (根据以下信息写一篇不少于60个词的短文， 标点符号不占格。)
短文中的主人公Luke用日复一日的苦练和不言放弃的信念战胜了先天性疾病引发的障碍，取得了看似不可能的成功，体验到克服困难之后的喜悦。
你在生活或学习中遭遇过什么困难，请结合自身经历，谈谈你是如何克服困难，并取得了何种收获或成功。
注意：
1. 文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
I used to be really shy and was afraid of speaking in public. I was always a listener every time when there was a speech contest in our school. I admired others’ confidence and was ashamed of my shyness.
To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. I became more confident than I used to be. With my parents’ encouragement, I took part in an English speech contest. Imagining there was a mirror in front of me, I finished my speech fluently. With exciting tears in my eyes, I hugged my parents tightly. Teachers and other students also cheered me on.
Practice makes perfect. Believe ourselves and don’t give up, and we will win.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。以第一人称为主。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山说出自己曾经遇到的困难；
第二步，具体阐述为此做出的努力和改变；
第三步，表达自己的收获和感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①used to be过去常常
②took part in参加
③give up放弃
④deal with解决
⑤practice makes perfect熟能生巧
[高分句型]
①To deal with the situation, I began to read aloud at home, practicing in front of a mirror again and again. (动词不定式作目的状语)
②My parents encouraged me and often worked as the listeners, which gave me great hope. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
7．（2024·上海徐汇·一模）假如你是Joe，你所在学校将在学期结束前举办开放日，邀请家长了解校园文化生活。下面是一份活动安排。请给校方写一封邮件，针对方案中的一项你认为需要修改或完善的内容，谈谈你的想法和建议。
Open Day Program
Parents arrive; look at notice board 2:00 p.m.
Visit classroom and observe one lesson 2:20 p.m.
Watch art performance 3:00 p.m.
Meet the teachers 3: 30 p.m.
Look at display board for high schools 4:00 p.m.
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【答案】例文：
Dear School,
I’m Joe. I think the Open Day is great for parents to see our school. But I have a small suggestion. The part where parents look at the display board for high schools could be better.
Instead of just looking, we can have a small talk or game about high school. That way, parents will learn more and have fun too! Or we can invite some high school students to come and talk about their school life.
I think this would make the Open Day even more exciting for everyone. Thank you for listening!
Best regards,
Joe
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：活动安排已给出，针对其中一项给出修改或完善的想法和建议，需适当补充细节，并注意邮件的格式。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作目的——对开放日的安排有建议，并指出需要修改或完善之处；
第二步，具体阐述至少两点需要修改或完善的建议；
第三步，总结自己建议的好处，并表达感谢。
[亮点词汇]
①instead of而不是，代替
②invite sb. to do sth.邀请某人做某事
③talk about谈论
[高分句型]
①The part where parents look at the display board for high schools could be better.（where引导的定语从句）
②I think this would make the Open Day even more exciting for everyone.（省略that的宾语从句）
8．（2024·上海徐汇·二模）初中的学习即将结束。你所在的学校正在筹备毕业典礼(graduation ceremony)，部分学生将有机会在毕业典礼上演讲，演讲的主题是“我和我的校园”。假如你是Joe，请从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等中选择一项内容，结合自己的经历，写一篇演讲稿，谈谈你的感受，给出你的建议。演讲稿开头已经写好。
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【答案】例文
My dear teachers and classmates,
I’m very glad to make a speech on the graduation ceremony. It has been three great years for us to study in this beautiful schoool. The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life.
I still remember when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult. No matter how hard I tried, I still couldn’t do well in it and almost gave it up. As soon as my English teacher found my problem, she had a talk with me about how to learn English well. Since then, she has kept helping me. Little by little, I’ve become interested in English and I’m good at it. Here I want to say, thank you, my best teacher. Finally, I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是演讲稿；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“我很荣幸在毕业典礼上发言”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——从“课程、校园文化、场馆设施”等选一项内容、结合经历、谈感受、给建议等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达感谢您的聆听”的谢意。
[亮点词汇]
①make a speech做演讲
②Little by little一点一点地
③a precious treasure一个珍贵的财富
[高分句型]
①The school life is full of happiness and sadness, which is a precious treasure in my life. (定语从句）
②I hope that all the students will have a good future and our school will become better and better. (宾语从句)
9．（2024·上海奉贤·二模）Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation. (根据以下情境，请补全标题“ will make my summer holiday meaningful”后，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)
中考结束后的暑假，你有机会去参加各类社会实践活动。如去当一回社区志愿者，奉献一份爱心；如来一场 citywalk，感受城市的脉搏，又如去找一份part-time job，积累工作的经验，又如…… 你最想参加哪一类社会实践活动？请陈述你的理由。

注意：
1. 写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。
2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。
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【答案】例文
Volunteering will make my summer holiday meaningful
Summer holiday is coming and I plan to do some volunteer work.
I want to be a volunteer, because helping other people makes me feel good. It’s also a good chance for me to improve myself. I can do many things. For example, I can help clean up the city parks. I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s Home. At the same time, I can help the elderly wash their clothes. I can also hand out leaflets and put up notices.
I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：本文时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己暑期打算做什么社会实践活动，注意要点衔接自然顺畅。
［写作步骤］
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍想成为志愿者的原因，具体能做的工作；
第三步，表达希望。
［亮点词汇］
①at the same time同时
②the elderly老人
③hand out分发
［高分句型］
①I am good at singing, so I can sing lots of songs and tell some stories for the old people at the Old People’s
Home. （含有so的并列句）
②I sincerely hope I can work as a volunteer and do something helpful.（宾语从句）
10．（2024·上海杨浦·二模）Write a paragraph in at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据所给情境，写一段不少于60个单词的文字)
近日，由于电动自行车引发的火灾屡屡发生。今年2月23日，南京市雨花区一处住宅小区因电动自行车引发整栋楼大火，造成15人遇难。2月26日至3月4日，上海接连发生因造规停放电动自行车和在非指定地点充电引发的火灾，3名车主被拘留。 你是玫瑰花园小区 (Rose Garden Estate) 的居民张磊 (Zhang Lei)。你的小区有不少外国友人租住，他们中也有不少人是电动自行车的使用者。小区物业请你协助参与对这些外国友人的安宣传工作。任务1：撰写一份演讲稿，对他们进行安全宣传和教育。 任务2：设计一份告居民书，张贴在电梯中，起到警示告诫的作用。 请选其中的一项任务完成。
提示：
① 参考词汇： electric scooter电动自行车， non-motor vehicle park非机动车停车场，charge the battery给电瓶充电。
② 若选择任务一，请在答题纸写作部分的首行书写 Dear friends；若选择任务二，请在写作部分答题纸的首行书写To all electric scooter owners。以上内容不计入总词数。
③ 写作内容中不得出现姓名、校名等真实信息。
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【答案】参考范文：
Dear Friends,
I’m Zhang Lei who lives in the Rose Garden estate. Due to the severe fires caused by inappropriate charging and illegal parking of the electric bicycles in Nanjing and Shanghai recently, I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events. First and foremost, parking your e-bikes in the corridor is definitely not allowed, which means that you should park them in the designated places. In addition, charging the battery of e-bikes at home is likely to result in uncontrollable fires, which is why you can only do it in the open-air areas. Moreover, it is illegal behavior for people to use the elevators with their e-bikes. If there is a fire in an elevator, people will have no chance to escape from it. Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. Hopefully, we can create a safe living environment.
Thank you for listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，阐述演讲稿的目的。
第二步，提出需要注意的内容。
第三步，最后结束文章。
[亮点词汇]
①due to因为，由于
②recommend推荐，提醒
③potential潜在的
[高分句型]
① I would like to recommend you a couple of measures that can be taken to avoid the recurrence of similar events.（that引导的定语从句，动词不定式用作目的状语）
②Therefore, when you see people riding e-bikes into the elevator, it is necessary for you to warn them about the potential consequences. （it is+adj.+to do 句型）