10 书面表达满分冲刺20篇-2023-2024年八年级英语下期期末高频考点专练（牛津译林版）（带答案详解）

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2023-2024年八年级英语下期期末高频考点专练（牛津译林版）
10 书面表达满分冲刺20篇
1．请根据中文和英文提示，完成一篇不少于 50 词的文段写作。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
旅行使人增长见识、丰富阅历。在旅途中，会遇到很多美好，可能是一件事、一个人、一道美食或者一处风景。假如你是初二学生李华，你们学校英语公众号正在开展主题为“A Wonderful Trip”的征文活动，请你根据下面的提示问题，用英文写一篇征文。
提示词语：
visit, friendly, delicious, beautiful
提示问题：
● Where did you go and when did you go there
● What made the trip so wonderful
A Wonderful Trip
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2．进入初中生活两年来，想必你们的生活在很多方面都有所不同。现某中学生英文报开展关于生活变化的征文活动，请你以Changes in our life为题，用英语为该报写一篇稿件。简述家乡风貌、家庭生活、学校生活中的若干变化，并展望未来生活及如何为此努力。
注意：
（1）表达中必须包含所给的要点；
（2）词数100左右。开头已经写好，不计入总词数。
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
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3．假设你是李华，你的笔友 Bob来信询问你的暑假旅行经历，请你给他写一封回信，要点如下：
（1）你去了三亚旅行，该地以美丽的海滩而闻名；
（2）你乘坐飞机和父母一起去三亚，在那游玩儿了两周的时间；
（3）在那儿你们游泳，享受阳光，吃当地美食，购物；
（4）很多人都喜欢到这里旅行，你希望……
要求：
（1）词数为 80—100 词。
（2）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥，不可逐字翻译。
Dear Bob,
How are you I spent a wonderful holiday. Now I tell you something about the experience.
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How did you spend your holiday
Best wishes for you!
Love,
Li Hua
4．地球是人类的家园，动物是人类的好朋友。请你根据下面的思维导图，以“Protect the earth and love animals”为题写一篇英语演讲稿，呼吁全体师生积极行动，构建人类与自然命运共同体。
参考词汇：disaster 灾害； law 法律；appeal 号召
写作要求：1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯，不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息。
Protect the earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the earth and loving animals..
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
5．地球是我们的家园，如果每个人都在生活方式上做出小小的改变，就会对我们的地球和后代有着不同的意义。请根据下表内容提示，以“What Can We Do to Go Green”为题，用英语写一篇倡议书，呼吁人们走进环保生活。
环境现状 1. 地球的污染越来越严重，水和空气被污染。2. 森林被砍伐。
环保措施 1. 节约用水，刷牙时候关掉水龙头，淋浴少于十分钟；2. 保护树木，使用纸的两面；3. 节约用电，离开房间要关灯，电视或电脑不用的时候要关掉电源……（补充一点）
环保倡议 培养绿色的生活方式对我们很重要……（补充一点）
要求：
1. 短文内容必须包含所给要点，并适当发挥；2. 语句通顺、语法正确、书写规范； 3. 文中不能出现考生的真实姓名、校名和地名；4. 词数80左右。开头已给出，但不计入总词数。参考词汇：electricity电
What Can We Do to Go Green
The earth is our home. It’s our duty to protect it. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
6．为培养青少年责任意识，提高青少年综合素养，学校英语俱乐部发起题为“Let’s take action!”的倡议活动。请根据下列提示，选择其中两个方面，写一份倡议书投稿。
Manners Volunteering Going green
●While travelling●While eating●... ●In the community●In some charities●... ●To save water●To reduce pollution●...
注意事项：
1. 词数：90词左右文章开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
3. 文章必须包含所选两个方面的全部要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
Let’s take action!
We teenagers are the master of the future.
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7．你们学校一直倡导“环保生活，从我做起”，准备成立学校志愿服务队(voluntary team)，招募学生环保志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英语给服务队的负责人写一封电子邮件，申请成为其中一员。
内容包括：
1. What do you think of going green
2. What action do you usually take to go green
3. What will you do to spread（传播）the idea of going green if your are in the team
注意：
1.词数100左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
2.内容需涵盖所有要点，可适当发挥；
3.文中不得出现与考生相关的真实校名和姓名等信息。
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to
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I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
8．每年6月12日为盱眙国际龙虾节。为了笑拥八方来客，盱眙县政府倡导市民做力所能及的事，让盱眙更有烟火气更具人情味。作为盱眙的一份子，请你根据以下要点提示写一篇英语短文，谈谈自己的看法。
提示：
1. 盱眙是一座拥有悠久历史的城市，70万人口；
2. 保护环境方面：…… （不少于2点）
3. 好市民方面：…… （不少于2点）
4. 做志愿者方面：…… （不少于2点）
5. …… （不少于2点）
要求:
1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点，可以适当发挥1—2点；
2. 80~100词，开头与结尾已给出，不计算在总词数内；
3. 文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息。
参考词汇： Xuyi Lobster Festival 盱眙龙虾节 opening ceremony 开幕式
Xuyi Lobster Festival has become more and more popular all over the world. Lots of visitors come to our city.
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Welcome to our city!
9．在八年级即将结束之际，八 (1) 班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份100字左右的英语演讲稿，具体内容如下：
过去 现在
学习 做作业粗心，功课不好 认真听讲，对课程越来越喜欢了
业余生活 大部分业余时间听音乐，玩游戏 现在用来阅读，因为……
礼仪 乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗 通过做……来保护环境，有礼貌……
展望未来 相信自己在九年级会……
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways. _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
10．假如你叫李华，是你们学校的学生会主席，为了配合城市环保主题活动，请拟写一封倡议书， 向大家发出倡议。
要求：1. 倡议书至少包含三条以上的环保措施，同时提出自己的希望。
2. 开头结尾已经给出，内容可增加，适当补充细节。
3. 短文词数80 词左右。
Dear schoolmates,
In order to make our school and our city more beautiful, we can do a lot.
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Thank you for your listening!
Li Hua
11．有人说，人与自然的交流才能开启生命的智慧。人要像保护眼睛一样保护自然环境，要像对待生命一样对待自然环境。作为中学生，我们也可以做出自己的努力。请你用英语写一篇以Going green为题的演讲稿，文章必须包括以下要点。
要求：
1.内容须包含所有要点，语句通顺，意思连贯，可适当发挥；
2.词数90个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3.表达中请勿提及真实校名及姓名。
Going green
Dear ladies and gentlemen,
As we all know, our hometown Sihong has become more and more beautiful than before. However, there are many things we can do to protect the environment and build a green home.
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That’s all. Thanks a lot for your attention.
12．八（9）班将举行一次主题班会，畅谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Tom 准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下表：
过去 现在
学习 读书少，花时间在…… 喜欢读书，原因……
礼仪 插队、喧哗 举止文明……
爱心 不知道关心他人 参加慈善活动
展望未来
要求：
1）表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯
2）必须包括提示中所有要点内容，并适当发挥；
3）词数：100词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
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Thanks for listening!
13．每个人在旅行中都有很多的收获和不同的体会。某英文网站正在开展主题为“My Favourite Place”的征文活动。请用英语为该网站写一篇短文，谈谈你旅游过的一个你最喜欢的地方，你在那里做了什么，以及最喜欢它的原因。
提示词语：enjoy, taste, beauty, culture, special, unforgettable（难忘的）
提示问题：● What is the favourite place you have been to
● What did you do there
●Why is it unforgettable
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14．在八年级即将结束之际, 八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请根据下表信息提示，为David准备一份演讲稿，具体内容如下：
过去 现在
学习 很少阅读…… 勤读书放松自己……
环保 浪费水电…… 意识到环保的重要性……
礼仪 大声喧哗…… 举止礼貌……
爱心 不会关心他人…… 为贫困地区……
展望未来
注意：
1、词数90词左右。（文章首尾已给，不计入总词数。）
2、省略号部分适当发挥，增加细节，以使行文连贯。
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and have made great progress in many ways.
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Thanks for listening!
15．在八年级即将结束之际，八（1）班将举行一次主题班会，要求同学们谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。请为Simon准备一份100字左右的英语演讲稿，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。具体内容如下：
过去 现在
学习 做作业粗心，功课不好 认真听讲，对课程越来越喜欢了
业余生活 大部分业余时间听音乐，玩游戏 现在用来阅读，因为……
礼仪 乱扔垃圾，在公共场所大声喧哗 通过做……来保护环境，有礼貌……
展望未来 ……
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and achieved much in some ways.
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Thanks for your listening!
16．假设你是阳光中学的八年级学生李华。值此暑假来临之际，你收到了远在英国的笔友Tom的来信，询问你的暑期计划。请根据以下要点提示，回信给Tom，告知他你的安排。
1. Spend 7 to 10 days travelling;
2. Spend at least a week doing voluntary work in the community;
3. While staying at home: spend at least 30 minutes exercising every day, help with housework, go over the lessons and do homework; do some reading
注意：1. 所写内容必须覆盖以上所列要点，并适当发挥，使内容充实、行文连贯；
2.文章不少于90词，开头已经给出，不计入总词数；
3.文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share with you my plan for the coming summer holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
17．近期你参加了学校组织的题为“What can we do for our city”主题演讲比赛，请根据以下材料写一篇英文演讲稿。
在学校学习时 1.走路或骑车上学，代替家长用小轿车接送
2.尽可能多地再利用使用过的书本
3. ……
在日常生活中 1.购物时使用布袋子(cloth bag)，不使用塑料袋
2.节约用水，保护水源
3.垃圾分类，循环利用
4. ……
要求：
1）必须包括表格中的所有信息，并按要求适当发挥；
2）词数：100词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数；
3）不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
What can we do for our city
Dear teachers and students,
The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city ” As we all know, to make the environment of our city better, it’s our duty to do something.
As students, we can do something to help.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
In our daily life, we can do more. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
18．为建美好社区，阳光社区的工作人员请你以“Work together to make a difference”为题写一篇面向社区外籍居民的英文倡议书，要点如下，词数不少于80。
要点：1.爱护环境(具体做法2点)；
2.节约资源(具体做法2点)；
3.邻里互助。
注意：要点齐全、可适当发挥。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Work together to make a difference
Dear members of Sunshine Community,
We are writing this letter to call on everyone to make our community a better place.
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Best regards,
Sunshine Community
19．假设你是Wendy, 本周你们班将以“How to go green”为题举行一次演讲比赛, 请你根据表格中的提示内容, 用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要求：
1) 要点完整, 可适当发挥, 使句子通顺、连贯。
2) 正确使用时态, 语法正确, 书写整洁。
3) 90词左右, 开头已给出, 不计入总词数。
How to go green
Our environment is changing for the worse, so it’s time for us to go green.
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That’s all. Thanks a lot for your attention!
20．假如你是Li Hua，曾在你校交流学习的Daniel给你写了一封邮件。请你根据Daniel的邮件内容及下面所给的关于Project Hope的相关信息，用英语回一封电子邮件。
Dear Li Hua,
I’m sorry for not replying to your email. I’m busy with my volunteer work for UNICEF. I remember that you are a Project Hope volunteer. Would you please tell me something about it And what have you done for Project Hope Also, I’d like to know your feelings about your volunteer work.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Best wishes,
Daniel
Project Hope
Time set up in 1989
Purpose help children in poor areas...
注意:
1. 内容涵盖要点，全文连贯通顺。
2. 词数80左右（已给出的邮件开头和结尾不计入总词数）。
3. 文中不得提及有关考生个人身份的任何信息，如校名、人名等。
Dear Daniel,
I’m glad to hear from you.
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Yours
Li Hua
参考答案：
1．例文
A Wonderful Trip
During last summer vacation, I went to Zhangjiajie with my parents and we had a great time.
Among all the experiences I had during the trip, climbing the beautiful mountains was the most unforgettable one. Zhangjiajie’s mountains and forests showed me the real meaning of “beauty of nature”. The strangely shaped rocks were so amazing that I could hardly believe I was in the real world. What’s more, I could even see the mountain tops above the clouds.
I’m very glad to have taken this wonderful trip.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己一次美妙的旅行；
第二步，介绍这次旅行的美妙之处；
第三步，总结这次美妙旅行后好心情。
[亮点词汇]
① had a great time 玩得开心
② What’s more 而且
[高分句型]
① During last summer vacation, I went to Zhangjiajie with my parents and we had a great time.（and引导并列句）
② The strangely shaped rocks were so amazing that I could hardly believe I was in the real world.（so ... that ... 引导结果状语从句；that引导宾语从句，that省略）
③ I’m very glad to have taken this wonderful trip.（动词不定式作原因状语）
2．例文
Changes in our life
With the rapid development of China’s economy, great changes have taken place in our life in the past few years.
In my hometown, many paths have been turned into wide roads. As a result, it is easier for us to travel. People used to walk or ride bikes to work, but now they often take buses and many even drive their own cars. In schools, students sit in new teaching buildings instead of old houses. Today they can not only learn from books but also through computers.
I hope we will live a better life in the future. I will study much harder now so that I can realize my dream.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的“介绍生活中发生的变化”并适当补充，使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点题，介绍生活中发生了很多变化；
第二步，根据题干中的要点，介绍家乡，家庭以及学校的变化；
第三步，展望未来生活并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①as a result因此
②instead of而不是
[高分句型]
①As a result, it is easier for us to travel.（it is adj for sb to do sth句型）
②I hope we will live a better life in the future.（宾语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Bob,
How are you I spent a wonderful holiday. Now I tell you something about the experience.
I went to Sanya on vacation. Sanya is famous for its beautiful beaches. I went there by plane with my parents. We swam in the sea and enjoyed the sunshine on the beach. We felt the nice wind. Besides, we ate the delicious food there and bought some nice gifts for my friends and relatives. We stayed there for two weeks. We had a great time there.
I thinks it’s a good place to travel. I hope I will travel there again. I look forward to taking a trip with you.
How did you spend your holiday
Best wishes for you!
Love,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：结合写作要点，介绍你的三亚之旅，可适当加入细节，不要遗漏要点，确保行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步：引出主题，介绍三亚之旅；
第二步：介绍旅行途中你们的活动；
第三步：希望下次还会来三亚旅行。
[亮点词汇]
① be famous for 以……而闻名
② have a great time 玩得开心
③ look forward to doing sth. 期待做某事
[高分句型]
① I hope I will travel there again. (宾语从句)
② I look forward to taking a trip with you. (动名词作宾语)
4．One possible version:
Protect the earth and love animals
Good morning, everyone! Today I am very happy to be here to give a talk about protecting the earth and loving animals.
The earth is our home, and animals are our friends. We share the same home with nature. However, we are facing many different serious problems. People cut down trees and forests, so lots of animals have nowhere to live. Moreover, some hunters kill animals for their bones and furs to make money. Some natural disasters happen more often than before. We should take action right away. The government should make laws to protect some wild animals. As students, we should also plant more trees to provide them with more living areas.
In my opinion, it is important for everyone to play a part in protecting our earth. If we do nothing, there may be few animals left. So let’s act together to protect the earth and love animals as well.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据所给的思维导图完成写作，注意包含所有要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，引出演讲的主题是什么；
第二步，具体例举地球现在面临的问题，并给出具体的保护方法；
第三步，表达自己的观点；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb与某人分享某物
②cut down trees砍伐树木
③make money赚钱
④take action right away立即采取行动
⑤provide sb with sth为某人提供某物
[高分句型]
①Some natural disasters happen more often than before (比较级句型)
②In my opinion, it is important for everyone to play a part in protecting our earth. (it固定句型)
③If we do nothing, there may be few animals left.(if引导条件状语从句)
5．
例文
What Can We Do to Go Green
The earth is our home. It’s our duty to protect it. However, it is increasingly polluted at present, especially air and water. Also, forests are cut down all over the world. So we must take quick actions to protect the environment.
Firstly, we should save water by turning off the tap while brushing teeth and finishing a shower within ten minutes. Secondly, we are supposed to use two sides of paper in order to protect trees. Thirdly, we must save electricity by turning off lights before leaving our rooms and turning off TVs or computers when we are not using them. Finally, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus or taxi.
All in all, I think it important for us to develop a green life style and do whatever we can to protect our planet.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为一般现在时；
③ 提示：写作内容提示已给出，考生要注意不要遗漏内容提示中的信息，并且要在内容提示的基础上按照要求，补充要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步：陈述环境现状。
第二步：陈述环保的措施，包括节约用水、保护树木、节约用电等，并在提示的基础上，增加一点。
第三步：发出倡议，指出培养绿色的生活方式很重要，并在此基础上，增加要点。
[亮点词汇]
① take quick actions to do sth.快速采取行动做某事
② be supposed to do sth.应该做某事
③ in order to do sth. 为了做某事
④ by doing sth.通过做某事
[高分句型]
I think it important for us to develop a green life style and do whatever we can to protect our planet.（it作形式宾语，to do sth.作真正的宾语；whatever引导的宾语从句）
6．例文
Let’s take action!
We teenagers are the master of the future. On the one hand, we need to pay attention to manners. When traveling, you should shake hands with the person you first met. It is impolite to point your chopsticks at others while eating with them. And don’t make noise when you have your soup. What’s more, you should bring a gift when you are invited to a party and be sure to arrive on time or a few minutes earlier. On the other hand, our environment is changing for the worse, so it is time for us to go green! First of all, water is the source of life and every one of us should play a part in saving water. Secondly, we should use plastic bags less to reduce pollution. When we go to the supermarket, we should take a cloth bag with us. Last but not least, when we go out or travel, we should choose public transport as often as possible, because this will make less pollution.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总起引出话题；
第二步，介绍在礼仪方面应该怎么做；
第三步，介绍在绿色环保方面应该怎么做。
[亮点词汇]
①pay attention to注意
②shake hands with sb与某人握手
③be sure to do sth一定要做某事
④play a part in doing sth在做某事中发挥作用
[高分句型]
①It is impolite to point your chopsticks at others while eating with them.（It固定句型）
②When we go to the supermarket, we should take a cloth bag with us.（时间状语从句）
7．例文
Dear Chairperson,
Thank you for reading my letter. I would like to join the school voluntary team to help protect our environment. In my opinion, going green plays a very important role in our life.
In my daily life, I often try my best to reduce pollution. For example, I always remember to take my own bags when shopping instead of plastic bags. As we all know, it may take a plastic bag hundreds of years to break down. What’s more, I know the importance of saving energy, so I always turn off the tap when brushing my teeth and turn off the lights when I leave a room. I also plant flowers at home to live a green life.
If I am lucky enough to join the team, I will help hand out leaflets, teach young children ways to recycle things and take part in all kinds of activities.
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely，
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。说明准备学校成立志愿服务队，招募学生环保志愿者。
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“自己的看法、自己的做法以及怎样传播绿色环保理念”三方面来叙述；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的期待。
[亮点词汇]
①environment环境
②pollution污染
③as well all know众所周知
④hundreds of成百的
[高分句型]
①If I am lucky enough to join the team, I will help hand out leaflets, teach young children ways to recycle things and take part in all kinds of activities.(if引导的条件状语从句)
②What’s more, I know the importance of saving energy, so I always turn off the tap when brushing my teeth and turn off the lights when I leave a room.（when引导的时间状语从句）
8．例文：
Xuyi Lobster Festival has become more and more popular all over the world. Lots of visitors come to our city. Xuyi is a city with a long history and a population of 700,000.
First of all, we keep the environment clean and follow the traffic rules when in public. Next, it’s a good choice to live green. For example, we choose public transport, ride bicycles to get around or recycle water at home. At the same time, there are some things that we can’t do. Firstly, it’s not right to drop litter everywhere. Secondly, we behave politely instead of saying bad words. As a good citizen, we can also be volunteers or social workers to help others in need. What’s more, we learn to separate waste into different groups to help reduce the pollution.
Welcome to our city!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出主题，介绍这座城市的背景；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“保护环境、做好市民以及做志愿者”方面来介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己的希望。
[亮点词汇]
①traffic rules交通规则
②instead of代替
③separate…into…把……分到……
[高分句型]
①At the same time, there are some things that we can’t do.(that引导定语从句)
②Firstly, it’s not right to drop litter everywhere.(it作形式主语)
9．例文
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in some ways.
First, I used to be careless with my study and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons. Second, I spent most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can open up my eyes and make me relaxed. Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I can behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍在学习、生活、礼仪上过去和现在的不同；
第二步，展望未来。
[亮点词汇]
①used to do过去常常
②more and more越来越
③spend time doing sth.花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
①But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can open up my eyes and make me relaxed.（because引导的原因状语从句）
②I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.（省略that的宾语从句）
10．例文
Dear schoolmates,
In order to make our school and our city more beautiful, we can do a lot.
First, we can ride a bike or take a bus to school every day. It’s helpful to the air. Next, we should plant more trees and flowers in our school or along the streets. This will make our school and our city more beautiful. What’s more, learning to recycle is also very important. We can recycle many things, such as paper, bottles, plastics. Last but not least, it’s necessary to tell others the importance of protecting the environment, everyone needs to take actions to make a beautiful world!
Thank you for your listening!
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，要求写一篇倡议书；
② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：需要写出至少三条以上的环保措施及自己的希望。
[写作步骤]
第一步：文章开头题目已经给出，开篇点题，为了使我们的城市变得更美丽，并引出下文；
第二步：按照题目要求写出3条环境保护的建议及自己的希望；
第三步：最后进行结尾，题目也已经给出。
[亮点词汇]
① be helpful to 对……有帮助的
② What’s more 而且
③ the importance of ……的重要性
④ take actions 采取行动
[高分句型]
① First…Next…What’s more…Last but not least...（这些表顺序的词的使用使文章层次鲜明，条理清晰）
② What’s more, learning to recycle is also very important.（用动名词learning to recycle作主语）
11．例文
Dear ladies and gentlemen,
As we all know, our hometown Sihong has become more and more beautiful than before. However, there are many things we can do to protect the environment and build a green home.
First of all, we can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth. Secondly, in order to save power, we should turn off the lights when we leave a room. Then, we are starting to use energy from the sun, wind and water. These new types of energy cost very little and will never run out. If we want to keep our home clean and tidy, we shouldn’t drop litter everywhere. Lastly, the air pollution is a serious problem, too. I call on you and your parents to take the bus more and drive less.
If we try our best to build a green home, our home will become a better place to live in.
That’s all. Thanks a lot for your attention.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：本文主题是保护环境，需要介绍保护环境的重要性，以及如何保护环境。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开头已给出，然后分条介绍应该如何保护环境；
第二步，号召人们保护环境；
第三步，以感谢结尾。
[亮点词汇]
First of all首先
run out用光
call on号召
[高分句型]
First of all, we can save water by taking shorter showers and turning off the tap when we brush our teeth.（When引导的时间状语从句）
If we want to keep our home clean and tidy, we shouldn’t drop litter everywhere.（if引导的条件状语从句）
12．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Tom from Class 9, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past, I seldom read books. I used to spend most of time playing computer games. Now I find it interesting to read because good books help me relax after a busy day. Second, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others. Now I behave politely in public. I always queue and keep my voice down. Finally, I used to care little about others. But now I take part in charity activities and help more people in need. I often work as a volunteer and donate money to the children in poor areas.
I am sure I will do much better in the future.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。针对一年来自己的变化进行写作，包括自己过去和现在的对比，从学习、礼仪、爱心三方面进行叙述。具体的内容要包含所给的提示。
2. 写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时，人称以第一人称为主。第一段已给出；第二段介绍自己过去和现在的变化情况；第三段表达自己的希望。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
13．例文
My Favourite Place
I have been to many famous places. My favourite place is Guangzhou.
Last year, I went to Guangzhou in the summer vacation. When we got there, we started to hangout on the street. The first thing was to find something to eat. There were so many delicious snacks. It is hard for us to choose what to eat, so we planned to eat as much as we can. After we finishing eating, we went to go shopping. Guangzhou is famous trade and its clothes are fashionable and cheap.
This trip is so unforgettable to me because Guangzhou is the paradise of food and shopping. I hope to go there again.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求根据问题提示以“My Favourite Place”为题写一篇短文，谈谈你最喜欢的地方，以及原因。注意要点齐全。
2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时和一般过去时。分为三段式：第一段引出主题；第二段介绍自己去广州的经历；最后一段介绍自己喜欢广州的原因。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。
14．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m David from Class 1, Grade 8. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and I have made great progress in many ways.
First, in the past I seldom read books. I used to spend most of my time playing computers games. Now I find it interesting to do some reading because good books help me relax after a busy day. They also open up a whole new world to me.
Second, I always forgot to turn off the tap and the power when they were not in use. Sometimes I left the tap running after I washed my hands. I always dropped litter carelessly in the park. But now I have realized the importance of protecting the environment. I always throw the litter into the rubbish bins.
Third, I was impolite before. I sometimes shouted loudly or pushed in before others in public places. But now, I can behave politely in public and I often give my seat to someone in need on the bus.
Fourth, I cared little about others. But now I offer to help my blind neighbors and donate all my pocket money to Project Hope.
I’m sure I will do better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求为David准备一份演讲稿，介绍其一年来的收获与变化，需从学习、环保、礼仪、爱心以及展望未来六方面介绍过去与现在的表现。
2.写作指导：写作时注意演讲稿的基本形式，按照要点分段叙述，可使用First、Second等词汇增加文章的条理性；介绍过去事情，采用一般过去时，介绍现在的事情，主要用一般现在时，注意人称和数的变化，保持主谓一致性。
15．例文：
Hello, everyone. I’m Simon. Back to the life in the last year, I think I have changed a lot and achieved much in some ways. First, I used to be careless with my study and was bad at my lessons. But now I listen carefully in class. I am more and more interested in all my lessons.
Second, I spent most of my free time listening to music and playing computer games. But now I try to spend my free time reading because it can open up my eyes and make me relaxed.
Third, in the past I often dropped litter everywhere and shouted loudly in public places. Now, I can behave politely. I always recycle the waste to protect the environment.
I believe I will be better and better in Grade 9.
Thanks for your listening!
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿，谈谈一年来自己的收获与变化。根据表格提示，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。
2.写作指导：本文用到的一般过去时态和一般现在时态，人称用第一人称。分别从学习；生活；礼仪方面介绍了自己过去和现在的不同，并展望未来，写作中注意表达观点时的常用句式，注意连词的使用。全文要点明确，结构严谨，语法运用准确，上下文注意连接的流畅度。
16．Dear Tom,
Thank you for your letter. I’m glad to share with you my plan for the coming summer holiday.
First of all, I will spend 7 to 10 days travelling in Sanya, Hainan Province in July. I’m going to take a plane there with my parents. I think I will have a wonderful time playing and relaxing on the beautiful beach there. Then, in August, I plan to spend at least a week doing voluntary work in the community. I can help the children with their English because I am good at English. What’s more, I can also teach kids to play soccer since I play it very well. While I am staying at home, I also have many things to do. Every day, I will spend at least 30 minutes in the morning exercising in order to keep healthy. In the afternoon, I will help my mother with housework. I will not forget to go over the lessons and do homework in the evening. On weekends, I think I will do some reading about Chinese history and culture.
I am sure I will have a wonderful and meaningful summer holiday. What about yours Do you have any plans for your holiday
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1. 题干解读：本文属于书信作文写作，按书信的格式给Tom写回信，根据提示的三个要点谈谈暑假计划，包括旅行安排、志愿者活动以及在家的活动。
2. 写作指导：本文主要采用第一人称单数来写，时态采用一般将来时为主。写作时承接已写开头，接着第一部分介绍旅游安排，可包括旅游目的地、时间、出行方式以及旅游中的活动安排；第二部分介绍在社区里当志愿者的活动安排，包括活动项目具体内容；第三部分介绍在家的活动安排，可根据早、中、晚和周末等几个时段描述具体的活动。第二段总结暑假计划的意义并结尾。在各个部分表达的过程中，要巧妙运用衔接词或短语，让内容的表达更有条理性。
17． What can we do for our city
Dear teachers and students,
The topic of my speech is “What can we do for our city ” As we all know, to make the environment of our city better, it’s our duty to do something.
As students, we can do something to help. First of all, we should walk or ride to school when we study at school, instead of parents picking us up in cars. Second, we should reuse used books as much as possible. Finally, we must not waste food.
In our daily life, we can do more. First, we use cloth bags instead of plastic bags when we shop. Second, we must save water and protect water resources. Third, we need to sort and recycle waste.
If we take action, I’m sure our city will become more and more beautiful.
That’s all. Thanks for listening.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇演讲稿。根据表格提示信息，以“What can we do for our city”为主题，写一篇作文。
2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称采用第一人称。叙述要点时，可使用first，second，third，finally等过渡词连接，使文章通畅。最后检查作文，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。
18．例文
Work together to make a difference
Dear members of Sunshine Community,
We are writing this letter to call on everyone to make our community a better place.
Firstly, it’s important for everyone to take care of the environment. For example, it’s good manners not to drop litter everywhere. We should also remember not to pick flowers.
Secondly, everyone should do something to save natural resources, such as taking shorter showers and turning off the lights when leaving a room. Otherwise, our natural resources will soon run out.
Finally, all the members are encouraged to help each other. Chinese people believe that it’s luckier to have helpful neighbors than relatives living far away. We can live through difficult times more easily by helping our community members.
Best regards,
Sunshine Community
【详解】1.题干解读：本文以“Work together to make a difference”为题，并根据题干中的提示要点写一封倡议书。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主。第一段已给出；第二段至第四段分别从爱护环境、节约资源和邻里互助三个方面发出倡议。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
19．例文：
How to go green
Our environment is changing for the worse, so it’s time for us to go green.
First of all, we should save energy. We can take shorter showers and reuse water if possible. We should not forget to turn off the power when our TV or computer is not in use. Also, in order to reduce pollution. We should choose public transport to reduce harmful gas. We can take our own bags when shopping instead of using plastic bags. Moreover, it’s very important for us to develop a green lifestyle. We should do more exercise and watch less TV.
In my opinion, we should try our best to protect the environment. Follow these small steps and you can make a big difference to the earth.
That’s all. Thanks a lot for your attention.
【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求以“How to go green”为题，结合提示内容写一篇演讲稿。可适当增加细节。
2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时为主，人称以第一人称为主。应该承接开头叙述，第一段说我们的环境正在变得越来越糟，所以我们应该环保；第二段针对问题提出具体的建议；第三段讲遵循这些建议就能给地球带来很大的改变；最后一段表达感谢。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。
20．例文
Dear Daniel,
I’m glad to hear from you. I do volunteer for project Hope. Now let me tell you something about it. First of all, Project Hope was established in 1989. It aims at helping children in poor areas. Keep them in school, feed them, clothes them. My work is mainly to select children from poor areas and record them. In addition, I sometimes distribute supplies to the children. I like this job very much, because I think it is very happy and meaningful to help those children.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。根据Daniel的邮件内容及所给的关于Project Hope的相关信息，写一篇邮件回复Daniel。
2.写作指导：本文时态使用一般现在时；人称以第一人称为主。写作时首先涵盖要点，针对希望工程的目的可适当发挥，围绕主题内容，不偏题。文章语句确保通顺，无单词语法错误。
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