2025年高考英语一轮复习读后续写：游泳忘带包公开课课件(共19张PPT)
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(共19张PPT)
continuation writing
Have you ever grabbed a wrong bag What if you may lose an important swimming competition without the right bag
Jenny had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. This particular swimming competition was crucial(至关重要的) that she had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her ____________ (teammate) down.
___________ (sleep) so poorly, she was _________ (terrible) anxious about the competition, ___ much that she couldn‘t even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach(感到非常紧张).
Jenny _______ (pick)at her eggs with a fork and all she could think about was facing the competition. Jenny’s mom sensed her daughter’s worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back(赞许；鼓励). Jenny felt a bit of relief but by the time she got to the athletic club _____ the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort_______________ (disappear).
She went to the locker room and opened her gym bag, only to find she had grabbed the wrong bag…
teammates
Having slept
terribly
so
picked
where
had disappeared
Read for the main idea
Beginning
Development
Climax
Later Development+ Ending to be continued
Read for the basic information
who Characters
when where Settings
what why how Main plots
tense /
Jenny; mother; teammates; coach
In the morning
In the locker room（衣帽间）
Jenny grabbed the wrong bag
Worry about losing the important competition/letting her teammates down .
Too nervous to sleep well/eat breakfast
Simple past
Plot organization
contrast
Solution
Jenny mother
teammates coach
Theme
Without the right bag, Jenny might lose the crucial competition
The passage is a story to praise mother’s love/friendships/team’s power/inner strength.
Draw a Mind map(思维导图) together
Appeared in the former article for several times
(most probably)
Jenny was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Jenny was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soccer team, as well. She even won a soccer championship with her teammates last year. But this particular swimming competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her teammates down.
When her alarm went off at 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button(闹钟的延时按钮) and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poorly, Jenny was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned before throwing her covers back（把被子扔回去） and climbing out of bed.
She was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldn't even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach. Jenny's mother looked concerned. “You have to eat something,” she said. “It's important to keep your strength up.”
“I know, I'm just not hungry this morning,” Jenny replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poorly What if she disappointed her coach and teammates She wouldn't be able to forgive herself. Jenny's mom sensed her daughter's worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back. “You'll be great, dear. Just do your best. That's all that matters.”
Jenny felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mother's kind words. Mother’s words were useful. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had disappeared. She went to the locker room to prepare for the competition.
Echos & Contrasts
Hints foreshadowing the later developments echos&useful expressions
Jenny was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Jenny was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soccer team, as well. She even won a soccer championship with her teammates last year. But this particular swimming competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her teammates down.
When her alarm went off at 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button(闹钟的延时按钮) and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poorly, Jenny was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned（打哈欠） before throwing her covers back（把被子扔回去） and climbing out of bed.
She was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldn't even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach. Jenny's mother looked concerned. “You have to eat something,” she said. “It's important to keep your strength up.”
“I know, I'm just not hungry this morning,” Jenny replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poorly What if she disappointed her coach and teammates She wouldn't be able to forgive herself.
Jenny's mom sensed her daughter's worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back. “You'll be great, dear. Just do your best. That's all that matters.”
Jenny felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mother's kind words. Mother’s words were useful. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had disappeared. She went to the locker room to prepare for the competition.
Echos & Contrasts
maybe some snacks were in the bag.
Maybe before competition, she was still anxious.
Maybe later on, mom’s words still worked.
Hints foreshadowing the later developments 伏笔
Para1: When she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised to see her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag.
Para 2: Jenny headed for the swimming pool with a bright smile.
Q1 __________________________________________（与首句衔接）
Q2___________________________________________ (情节推动1)
Q3_______________________________________________ ( 情节推动2)
Q4____________________________________________(与第二段首句衔接)
Q1 __________________________________________（与首句衔接）
Q2_____________________________________________(情节推动)
Q3_____________________________________________(情节推动2)
Q4_____________________________________________ (主题点拨)
What was Jenny’s reaction(反应)
Did Jenny come up with any solutions
Who came to help Jenny How Add anything in the bag
What was Jenny’s response (gather up her courage)
How did Jenny feel
How did she performed in the competition
What was the result of the competition (win)
Design the plot--Discussion
What was the ending
Para1: When she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised to see her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag.
Weave the story
Dumbfounded with an empty mind, Jenny was radically/ thoroughly/completely dragged into a swamp of despair.
Time fleeting/ Time flying like an arrow and tension mounting second by second, the atmosphere in the locker room began to freeze(气氛变得紧张起来), forcing Jenny to think about chickening out.
呆滞着，脑袋一片空白，珍妮彻底被拖入了绝望的沼泽(swamp)。
目瞪口呆地？
dumbfounded
时间转瞬即逝(fleet)，紧张感一秒一秒地逐步增加(mount)，更衣室里的气氛开始冻结，迫使珍妮想到了退缩（chicken out）。
What’s Jenny’s reaction(反应)
Weave the story
Helpless and hopeless, she was phoning/about to phone the coach when, suddenly, a knock on the door came to her rescue.
Imitate it
饶有兴趣且放松的， 当我正在享受令人叹为观止的美景时，令人不快的事物出现在我眼前。
无助且无望的，她正准备给教练打电话，突然,一阵敲门声传来，救了她(rescue)。
Did Jenny come up with any solutions
A was doing sth when B did sth/A was about to do sth when B did sth
A正在做某事时，B突然…
Heartbroken but fearless, he decided to turn this around.（艺术家卖画）
Helpless and hopeless, …
Interested and relaxed, I was enjoying the breath-taking scenery around when something unpleasant caught my eye.
Weave the story
Behind the door stood her mom with the right bag in her hands.
门后站着她的母亲，手里拿着对的那只包。（with）
Who came to help Jenny How
人物（惊讶）：让我感到惊讶的是…
It took Jenny by surprise that
让珍妮吃惊的是，她的包就在队友/母亲的手中。
It took Jenny by surprise that the right bag was grabbed by her teammate/ mother.
It took Jenny by surprise that the bag was right there, tightly grabbed by her mother，who was out of breath.
(+非谓+定从+details--description for mom)
All of a sudden/ At the very moment，the sound of heavy breathing intruded, Jenny then turned around, only to find the bag was right there, tightly grabbed in her mother’s hand.
More to add:（+时间状语+only to find）
突然/就在这时，沉重的呼吸声闯了进来(intrude)，珍妮随即转过身来，才发现袋子就在那里，紧紧抓在她母亲的手里。
陈思雅
Teammates
Version2(team spirit): Her teammates spotted her worry and cast a comforting glance at her. They told her that it was their joint efforts that made the team and they wouldn’t blame her even though she lost the game.
Swimming with all her might, she was in the first place. Her teammates applauded and yelled and eventually she won the first medal. Although Jenny was too exhausted to move an inch, she felt much proud and pleased keeping calm and confident when in trouble.
Version 3(solve by Jenny)："How careless I am! "she whispered, then she rushed to phone her mam, Fortunately, her mom didn't go far away and told her the right bag was on the car. Getting this news , the heavy stone in Jenny’s heart was put down.
Weave the story
The moment Jenny opened the bag, she was greeted with her swimsuit along with a note saying “You won’t let anyone down. --Mom.”
What was Jenny’s response (gather up her courage)
She was shivering with determination now. Feeling extraordinarily relaxed, the worry in her heart was turned into bubbles!
Appreciate great works from our classmates!
With heartfelt courage possessing her , she took a deep breath , gathering up all her strength and going to a great lengths to jump, and then swim.
Para2: Jenny headed for the swimming pool with a bright smile.
Weave the story
How did Jenny feel
尽管筋疲力尽，我们没有放弃。
Fatigued as we were, we didn’t give up.
Nervous as she was, she was no longer afraid or discouraged.
= Although she was nervous, she was no longer afraid or discouraged.
尽管她很紧张，她不再害怕或气馁。
Exhausted as she was, she still kept yelling at the top of her lungs（扯破喉咙，特别大声地）.
尽管筋疲力尽，她仍然拼命呼喊（lung）。
Weave the story
How did she performed in the competition
In a split of second, the starting gun firing, she was the fastest arrow in the air.
The next few minutes saw her waving the arms swiftly and cutting through the water smoothly like a flying fish.
When swimming, she felt the world outside the water seemed to have vanished, with only her mom’s words hovering（盘旋；萦绕） in her mind.
as+情绪形容词＋as+意象”
喜：as happy as a king;
怒：as angry as a bull(公牛);
as furious as a raging storm
哀：as sad as a homeless dog
累：as tired as the wings of a bird
as fatigued as an ox
紧张不安：as nervous as an ant on a hot pan
害怕：sb's face turned as pale as a sheet
Make more sentences
She was just like a knife , cutting through the surface of water to show how sharp she could be.
She leapt and slip into the water like a fish as soon as the whistle blew.
Picturing the scene in her mind where she won a championship and her coach together with her teammates was extraordinarily joyful, …
Metaphor
What’s the figure of speech
Weave the story
What was the result of the competition (win)
It was proved that sweat never lied and eventually, she was the champion! Wild cheers and thunderous（雷鸣般的） applause erupted from the audience, among whom Jenny surprisingly spotted her mother.
事实证明，汗水从来没有说谎，最终，她是冠军！全场爆发（erupt）出热烈的欢呼声（wild cheers）和雷鸣般的掌声，珍妮在其中意外地发现了她的母亲（定从）。
珍妮激动得不知所措（overwhelm充满），感激地看了她一眼，做了个胜利的手势。
Overwhelmed with excitement, Jenny cast a glance of gratitude at her and made a gesture of victory.
Weave the story
What was the ending
Brilliant sunshine filtering（透过） through the window of the athletic club, the mom and the daughter smiled at each other, with warmth flowing in their eyes.
Possible Ending—Environment:灿烂的阳光透过运动俱乐部的窗户洒进来，母女俩相视一笑，眼中流淌着温暖。
Jenny blinked to(眨眼) mom, as if clusters of（一簇簇） shining stars were dancing in her eyes.
Use Metaphor
Use Personification
Jenny looked at her mother, happiness dancing in her eyes.
Assignment
1. Recite and appreciate the sample essay
2. Polish your writing
continuation writing
Have you ever grabbed a wrong bag What if you may lose an important swimming competition without the right bag
Jenny had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. This particular swimming competition was crucial(至关重要的) that she had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her ____________ (teammate) down.
___________ (sleep) so poorly, she was _________ (terrible) anxious about the competition, ___ much that she couldn‘t even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach(感到非常紧张).
Jenny _______ (pick)at her eggs with a fork and all she could think about was facing the competition. Jenny’s mom sensed her daughter’s worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back(赞许；鼓励). Jenny felt a bit of relief but by the time she got to the athletic club _____ the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort_______________ (disappear).
She went to the locker room and opened her gym bag, only to find she had grabbed the wrong bag…
teammates
Having slept
terribly
so
picked
where
had disappeared
Read for the main idea
Beginning
Development
Climax
Later Development+ Ending to be continued
Read for the basic information
who Characters
when where Settings
what why how Main plots
tense /
Jenny; mother; teammates; coach
In the morning
In the locker room（衣帽间）
Jenny grabbed the wrong bag
Worry about losing the important competition/letting her teammates down .
Too nervous to sleep well/eat breakfast
Simple past
Plot organization
contrast
Solution
Jenny mother
teammates coach
Theme
Without the right bag, Jenny might lose the crucial competition
The passage is a story to praise mother’s love/friendships/team’s power/inner strength.
Draw a Mind map(思维导图) together
Appeared in the former article for several times
(most probably)
Jenny was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Jenny was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soccer team, as well. She even won a soccer championship with her teammates last year. But this particular swimming competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her teammates down.
When her alarm went off at 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button(闹钟的延时按钮) and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poorly, Jenny was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned before throwing her covers back（把被子扔回去） and climbing out of bed.
She was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldn't even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach. Jenny's mother looked concerned. “You have to eat something,” she said. “It's important to keep your strength up.”
“I know, I'm just not hungry this morning,” Jenny replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poorly What if she disappointed her coach and teammates She wouldn't be able to forgive herself. Jenny's mom sensed her daughter's worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back. “You'll be great, dear. Just do your best. That's all that matters.”
Jenny felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mother's kind words. Mother’s words were useful. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had disappeared. She went to the locker room to prepare for the competition.
Echos & Contrasts
Hints foreshadowing the later developments echos&useful expressions
Jenny was very nervous. She had a swimming competition in the morning and could not sleep. She tossed and turned all night. She was no stranger to competition. In fact, she loved it. Jenny was very athletic and was not only part of a swim team, but a soccer team, as well. She even won a soccer championship with her teammates last year. But this particular swimming competition was important. She had made it all the way to the finals and didn't want to let her teammates down.
When her alarm went off at 6: 00 am, she hit the snooze button(闹钟的延时按钮) and rolled onto her side, wishing she could just stay in bed all day. Having slept so poorly, Jenny was not at all ready for the day. After a few minutes, she stretched her arms above her head and yawned（打哈欠） before throwing her covers back（把被子扔回去） and climbing out of bed.
She was terribly anxious about the competition, so much that she couldn't even eat breakfast. It felt as though she got butterflies in her stomach. Jenny's mother looked concerned. “You have to eat something,” she said. “It's important to keep your strength up.”
“I know, I'm just not hungry this morning,” Jenny replied, picking at her eggs with a fork. All she could think about was facing the competition. What if she performed poorly What if she disappointed her coach and teammates She wouldn't be able to forgive herself.
Jenny's mom sensed her daughter's worry and gave her a comforting pat on the back. “You'll be great, dear. Just do your best. That's all that matters.”
Jenny felt a bit of relief and appreciated her mother's kind words. Mother’s words were useful. But by the time she got to the athletic club where the swim meet was being held, that feeling of comfort had disappeared. She went to the locker room to prepare for the competition.
Echos & Contrasts
maybe some snacks were in the bag.
Maybe before competition, she was still anxious.
Maybe later on, mom’s words still worked.
Hints foreshadowing the later developments 伏笔
Para1: When she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised to see her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag.
Para 2: Jenny headed for the swimming pool with a bright smile.
Q1 __________________________________________（与首句衔接）
Q2___________________________________________ (情节推动1)
Q3_______________________________________________ ( 情节推动2)
Q4____________________________________________(与第二段首句衔接)
Q1 __________________________________________（与首句衔接）
Q2_____________________________________________(情节推动)
Q3_____________________________________________(情节推动2)
Q4_____________________________________________ (主题点拨)
What was Jenny’s reaction(反应)
Did Jenny come up with any solutions
Who came to help Jenny How Add anything in the bag
What was Jenny’s response (gather up her courage)
How did Jenny feel
How did she performed in the competition
What was the result of the competition (win)
Design the plot--Discussion
What was the ending
Para1: When she opened her gym bag, she was quite surprised to see her soccer uniform and realized she had grabbed the wrong bag.
Weave the story
Dumbfounded with an empty mind, Jenny was radically/ thoroughly/completely dragged into a swamp of despair.
Time fleeting/ Time flying like an arrow and tension mounting second by second, the atmosphere in the locker room began to freeze(气氛变得紧张起来), forcing Jenny to think about chickening out.
呆滞着，脑袋一片空白，珍妮彻底被拖入了绝望的沼泽(swamp)。
目瞪口呆地？
dumbfounded
时间转瞬即逝(fleet)，紧张感一秒一秒地逐步增加(mount)，更衣室里的气氛开始冻结，迫使珍妮想到了退缩（chicken out）。
What’s Jenny’s reaction(反应)
Weave the story
Helpless and hopeless, she was phoning/about to phone the coach when, suddenly, a knock on the door came to her rescue.
Imitate it
饶有兴趣且放松的， 当我正在享受令人叹为观止的美景时，令人不快的事物出现在我眼前。
无助且无望的，她正准备给教练打电话，突然,一阵敲门声传来，救了她(rescue)。
Did Jenny come up with any solutions
A was doing sth when B did sth/A was about to do sth when B did sth
A正在做某事时，B突然…
Heartbroken but fearless, he decided to turn this around.（艺术家卖画）
Helpless and hopeless, …
Interested and relaxed, I was enjoying the breath-taking scenery around when something unpleasant caught my eye.
Weave the story
Behind the door stood her mom with the right bag in her hands.
门后站着她的母亲，手里拿着对的那只包。（with）
Who came to help Jenny How
人物（惊讶）：让我感到惊讶的是…
It took Jenny by surprise that
让珍妮吃惊的是，她的包就在队友/母亲的手中。
It took Jenny by surprise that the right bag was grabbed by her teammate/ mother.
It took Jenny by surprise that the bag was right there, tightly grabbed by her mother，who was out of breath.
(+非谓+定从+details--description for mom)
All of a sudden/ At the very moment，the sound of heavy breathing intruded, Jenny then turned around, only to find the bag was right there, tightly grabbed in her mother’s hand.
More to add:（+时间状语+only to find）
突然/就在这时，沉重的呼吸声闯了进来(intrude)，珍妮随即转过身来，才发现袋子就在那里，紧紧抓在她母亲的手里。
陈思雅
Teammates
Version2(team spirit): Her teammates spotted her worry and cast a comforting glance at her. They told her that it was their joint efforts that made the team and they wouldn’t blame her even though she lost the game.
Swimming with all her might, she was in the first place. Her teammates applauded and yelled and eventually she won the first medal. Although Jenny was too exhausted to move an inch, she felt much proud and pleased keeping calm and confident when in trouble.
Version 3(solve by Jenny)："How careless I am! "she whispered, then she rushed to phone her mam, Fortunately, her mom didn't go far away and told her the right bag was on the car. Getting this news , the heavy stone in Jenny’s heart was put down.
Weave the story
The moment Jenny opened the bag, she was greeted with her swimsuit along with a note saying “You won’t let anyone down. --Mom.”
What was Jenny’s response (gather up her courage)
She was shivering with determination now. Feeling extraordinarily relaxed, the worry in her heart was turned into bubbles!
Appreciate great works from our classmates!
With heartfelt courage possessing her , she took a deep breath , gathering up all her strength and going to a great lengths to jump, and then swim.
Para2: Jenny headed for the swimming pool with a bright smile.
Weave the story
How did Jenny feel
尽管筋疲力尽，我们没有放弃。
Fatigued as we were, we didn’t give up.
Nervous as she was, she was no longer afraid or discouraged.
= Although she was nervous, she was no longer afraid or discouraged.
尽管她很紧张，她不再害怕或气馁。
Exhausted as she was, she still kept yelling at the top of her lungs（扯破喉咙，特别大声地）.
尽管筋疲力尽，她仍然拼命呼喊（lung）。
Weave the story
How did she performed in the competition
In a split of second, the starting gun firing, she was the fastest arrow in the air.
The next few minutes saw her waving the arms swiftly and cutting through the water smoothly like a flying fish.
When swimming, she felt the world outside the water seemed to have vanished, with only her mom’s words hovering（盘旋；萦绕） in her mind.
as+情绪形容词＋as+意象”
喜：as happy as a king;
怒：as angry as a bull(公牛);
as furious as a raging storm
哀：as sad as a homeless dog
累：as tired as the wings of a bird
as fatigued as an ox
紧张不安：as nervous as an ant on a hot pan
害怕：sb's face turned as pale as a sheet
Make more sentences
She was just like a knife , cutting through the surface of water to show how sharp she could be.
She leapt and slip into the water like a fish as soon as the whistle blew.
Picturing the scene in her mind where she won a championship and her coach together with her teammates was extraordinarily joyful, …
Metaphor
What’s the figure of speech
Weave the story
What was the result of the competition (win)
It was proved that sweat never lied and eventually, she was the champion! Wild cheers and thunderous（雷鸣般的） applause erupted from the audience, among whom Jenny surprisingly spotted her mother.
事实证明，汗水从来没有说谎，最终，她是冠军！全场爆发（erupt）出热烈的欢呼声（wild cheers）和雷鸣般的掌声，珍妮在其中意外地发现了她的母亲（定从）。
珍妮激动得不知所措（overwhelm充满），感激地看了她一眼，做了个胜利的手势。
Overwhelmed with excitement, Jenny cast a glance of gratitude at her and made a gesture of victory.
Weave the story
What was the ending
Brilliant sunshine filtering（透过） through the window of the athletic club, the mom and the daughter smiled at each other, with warmth flowing in their eyes.
Possible Ending—Environment:灿烂的阳光透过运动俱乐部的窗户洒进来，母女俩相视一笑，眼中流淌着温暖。
Jenny blinked to(眨眼) mom, as if clusters of（一簇簇） shining stars were dancing in her eyes.
Use Metaphor
Use Personification
Jenny looked at her mother, happiness dancing in her eyes.
Assignment
1. Recite and appreciate the sample essay
2. Polish your writing