Unit 1 Where did you go on vacation?
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与自然”主题范畴中的“自然生态”,涉及子主题“不同地区的自然景观”和“热爱与敬畏自然,与自然和谐共生”。
内容:记叙假期之旅的活动和感受
要求:1.运用与旅行活动相关的词汇描述假期活动;
2.正确使用一般过去时。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
假设你是李明,今年暑假(7月11日,星期二)你和父母去青岛度假了,请展开合理想象,用日记记录你的青岛之旅。要点包括天气、活动、食物、感受等。80个词左右。
Step 1 三定审题
1.定人称:以第一人称为主
2.定时态:以一般过去时为主
3.定核心:介绍去青岛旅行的活动和感受
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1.度过一个美好的假期 have a great vacation
2.晴朗炎热 sunny and hot
3.去海滩 go to the beach
4.玩得开心 have a good time
5.去商店 go to the shops
6.一些特别的东西 something special
7.去崂山 go to Laoshan Mountain
8.拍照 take photos
9.相当多的 quite a few
10.累但是开心 tired but happy
基础句式:
1.天气晴朗炎热。
It was sunny and hot.
2.我们决定去海滩。
We decided to go to the beach.
3.然后我们去了商店。
Then we went to the shops.
4.我给朋友买了一些特别的东西。
I bought something special for my friends.
5.太棒了。
It was wonderful.
6.我们拍了很多照片。
We took quite a few photos.
7.今天我很累,但是很开心。
Today I was tired but happy.
8.明年我希望再去青岛。
I hope to go to Qingdao again next year.
升级句式:
1.将基础句式1&2用连词so升级
It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach.
2.将基础句式3&4用并列连词and 升级
Then we went to the shops and I bought something special for my friends.
3.将基础句式5&6用so...that结构升级为复合句
It was so wonderful that we took quite a few photos.
Step 4 润色成篇
Tuesday, July 11th Today I had a great vacation in Qingdao with my parents.① It was sunny and hot, so we decided to go to the beach.I had a good time swimming in the sea.②Then we went to the shops and I bought something special③ for my friends. For lunch, we ate something delicious③—seafood.After that we went to Laoshan Mountain.It was so wonderful that we took quite a few photos.③ Today I was tired but happy.I hope to go to Qingdao again next year.④ ①开篇点题,介绍时间、地点、人物。 ②运用短语have a good time doing sth.描述游泳的快乐。 ③灵活运用本单元所学的形容词和短语,学以致用。 ④表达愿望,首尾呼应,自然收篇结尾。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
世界是一本书,蜗居家中只能读到其中的一页。旅行可以让我们开阔眼界、增长见识,还可以放松心情、释放自我。你一定也有很多的旅行经历 (travel experiences) 想和大家分享吧!
请根据以下内容提示,写一篇关于你的旅行经历的英语短文,80词左右。
内容提示:
·How often do you travel
·Tell us one of your travel experiences.
·What do you think of traveling
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【实战写作】
Nowadays traveling is popular.I usually travel twice a year because traveling is a good way for me to relax.
I still remember I had a vacation on the beach with my parents last summer.In the morning, we went to the beach by bus.It was a sunny day, so we enjoyed lying on the beach.How relaxed I felt!
After lunch, we played beach volleyball with another family.It made us excited.My parents also took many photos.What a wonderful day!
I think traveling is really great for all of us.We can enjoy beautiful scenery, relax ourselves and learn much from traveling.
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