Unit 2 How often do you exercise?
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”,涉及子主题 “丰富、充实、积极向上的生活”“多彩、有意义的学校生活”和“身心健康,珍爱生命的意识”
内容:调查日常活动频率并介绍调查结果
要求:1.能利用频度副词和百分数介绍调查结果。
2.能够正确使用一般现在时。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
请根据表格内容介绍两个人的生活习惯,并简要发表自己的观点。80个词左右。
活动 Bill Tina
锻炼 一周两次 每天
上网 每天 一周两次
吃垃圾食品 经常 几乎从不
看电视 每天 有时
Step 1 三定审题
1.定人称:以第三人称为主
2.定时态:以一般现在时为主
3.定核心:介绍两个人的生活习惯
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1.生活习惯 living habits
2.每周两次 twice a week
3.上网 go online
4.每天 every day
5.垃圾食品 junk food
6.看电视 watch TV
7.几乎从不 hardly ever
8.蔬菜和水果 vegetables and fruit
9.多做锻炼 do more exercise
10.少吃垃圾食品 eat less junk food
基础句式:
1.他每天都上网。
He goes online every day.
2.他在网上花费很多时间。
He spends lots of time on the Internet.
3.它对他的健康有害。
It’s bad for his health.
4.比尔应该多做锻炼。
Bill should do more exercise.
5.比尔应该少吃垃圾食品。
Bill should eat less junk food.
6.他应该向蒂娜学习。
He should learn from Tina.
升级句式:
1.将基础句式1&2用连词so连接。
He goes online every day, so he spends lots of time on the Internet.
2.将基础句式4&5合并。
Bill should do more exercise and eat less junk food.
Step 4 润色成篇
Bill and Tina have different living habits.① Bill exercises twice a week.He goes online every day, so he spends lots of time on the Internet.② He often eats junk food.It’s bad for his health.He watches TV every day. Tina exercises every day.It makes her healthy.③ She goes online twice a week.She hardly ever eats junk food.She likes vegetables and fruit.She sometimes watches TV. I think Tina is healthier.Bill should do more exercise and eat less junk food.④He should learn from Tina. ①开篇点题。 ②运用句型sb.spend(s) time on sth.描述比尔在网络上花费大量时间。 ③运用make sb.+adj.说明锻炼的好处。 ④运用more和less,通过对比说明比尔应该改变生活方式,很好地表达了个人观点。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
假如你有一个朋友叫汤姆,请你根据以下表格内容介绍一下他的情况,同时就汤姆的生活习惯给出你自己的一些看法。
ride his bike to school every day
exercise twice a week
watch TV never
eat fruit and vegetables always
eat junk food only once a month
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【实战写作】
I have a friend named Tom.He rides his bike to school every day.He sometimes takes exercise.He exercises twice a week.He never watches TV because he doesn’t like watching TV.And he always eats fruit and vegetables.He hardly ever eats junk food.He only eats it once a month.I think having healthy living habits is very important.We should eat a balanced diet and take exercise just like Tom.
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