Module 11 Photos
Unit 3
语法精讲细练
which和who引导的定语从句
【语法感悟】
用引导词which/who 完成定语从句
1.He’s the boy who won the photo competition last year!
2.The photo which we liked best in the City and People group was taken by Zhao Min.
3.A group of photos which show Beijing and Cambridge in England has won the prize.
【语法解读】
一、关系代词which和who/whom
which 引导的定语从句修饰无生命的东西 先行词必须是物。在句中作主语或宾语,作主语时不能省略,作宾语时可省略
who/whom 引导的定语从句修饰人 who用作主语,whom用作宾语。在口语中,有时用who代替whom,也可省略。当关系词紧接在介词之后时,必须用whom,即介词+whom
二、that, which, who, whom的区别
四者都用来引导定语从句,that引导的定语从句修饰的先行词既可以是“人”,也可以是“物”,一般情况下that既可以代替which,也可以代替who或whom;which引导的定语从句修饰的先行词是“物”,who,whom引导的定语从句修饰的先行词是“人”。下列情况需要注意:
【语法精练】
Ⅰ.用that, who或which填空
1.—Have you seen the game
—Sure.Daming,16,who studies at the same high school as my sister, is the winner.
2.A kind of shared bike which/that looks pretty is getting more and more popular in Chengdu.
3.I’ve lost the wallet which/that my mom bought for me.
4.We should look up to those scientists who/that sent Tianzhou-1 Cargo Spaceship (天舟一号货运飞船) to space.
5.Sara is the girl who/that has taught me how to use smart phone.
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.这个就是我们明天想去参观的动物园。
This is the zoo that/which we want to visit tomorrow.
2.昨天你遇到的那个女孩就是我的姐姐。
The girl who/that you met yesterday is my sister.
3.我喜欢的那本书很有趣。
The book that/which I like is very interesting.
4.他是一个不断与坏人作斗争的英雄。
He is a hero who/that keeps fighting against the bad men.
写作素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
主题:本模块写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“生活与学习”,涉及子主题“有意义的学校生活”
内容:描述照片的拍摄时间、内容及喜欢该照片的原因
要求:正确运用 which, that, who引导的定语从句对照片进行描述;从照片的拍摄时间、地点、内容和意义等方面进行描述
典例研磨——示范引领
请以My favourite photo为题,写一篇作文,简单介绍你最喜欢的照片,并阐述你的理由。
要求:1.句子连贯,避免单词错误;
2.词数80左右。
My favourite photo
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Step 1:三定审题
1.定人称:第一人称和第三人称为主
2.定时态:一般现在时为主
3.定核心:介绍最喜欢的照片
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1.在我家 at my house
2.在我13岁的生日聚会上at my thirteenth birthday
3.在……中间 in the middle of
4.帮忙插蜡烛 help put the candles
5.在蛋糕上 on the cake
6.站在我周围 stand around me
7.看上去很高兴 look very happy
8.来自 be/come from
9.一个愉快的生日 a pleasant birthday
基础句式:
1.我去年在家拍摄的它。
I took it at my house last year.
2.巧克力蛋糕在桌子中间。
The chocolate cake is in the middle of the table.
3.巧克力蛋糕是我妈妈制作的。
The chocolate cake was made by my mum.
4.这个女孩正帮助在蛋糕上插蜡烛。
The girl is helping put the candles on the cake.
5.这个女孩是我的朋友Susan。
The girl is my friend Susan.
6.我喜欢这张照片。
I like the photo.
7.它让我想起了一个愉快的生日。
It reminds me of a pleasant birthday.
升级句式:
1.将基础句式1升级为被动语态
It was taken at my house last year.
2.将基础句式2&3用定语从句升级
The chocolate cake that is in the middle of the table was made by my mum.
3.将基础句式4&5合并
The girl who is helping put the candles on the cake is my friend Susan.
4.将基础句式6&7用because合并
I like the photo because it reminds me of a pleasant birthday.
Step 4 润色成篇
My favourite photo This is my favourite photo. It was taken at my house last year.① It shows me and my friends at my thirteenth birthday party. The chocolate cake that is in the middle of the table② was made by my mum. The girl who is helping put the candles on the cake② is my friend Susan. I am sitting in the middle and wearing a blue blouse and a white skirt. My other friends are standing around me. We all look very happy③. The presents you see are from my friends and my parents. I like the photo because it reminds me of a pleasant birthday④. ①总述照片拍摄的时间和地点。 ②用定语从句描述照片中的人和物。 ③表达人物当时的心情。 ④再次点题,并点明喜欢这张照片的原因。
实战写作——迁移创新
去年夏天,你去云南旅游,拍了很多照片,其中有一张是你最喜欢的。请你就这张照片,以“My Favourite Photo”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文。
要点提示:
1.去年暑假,参观了云南。拍了很多照片,最喜欢在洱海边(edge)的这张。
2.洱海的形状像耳朵,故名“洱海”。这儿天蓝水清,鱼类很多。
3.洱海是最著名的风景名胜之一,每年吸引着许多人来到这儿。
My Favourite Photo
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【参考范文】
My Favourite Photo
Last summer I visited Yunnan. I stayed there for a week and took lots of photos. The photo that I like best was taken at the edge of Erhai.
Look at it! The water is clean and the sky is clear and blue. I am sitting on the bank and facing Erhai. Why is it called Erhai Because its shape is like an ear. It is one of the most famous places of interest in Yunnan. It attracts many people to come here every year. Erhai has good water quality and lots of fish.
Yunnan is so beautiful that I want to live there in the future.
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