人教版八年级下册Unit 8 Have you read Treasure Island yet? 写作课件(共16张PPT)

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Unit8 Have you read Treasure Island yet
By Summer Li
Section B Writing
[话题分析]
本单元的话题是“文学与音乐”的文章。通常要求学生用一般现在时或现在完成时来介绍或谈论自己最喜欢的一本书，一部电影，一位作家或歌手等。
写这类作文时，多用第一或第三人称。要注意文章层次分明，感情真切。
话题分析
Revision
Sarah's favorite singer is ____________---one of the most successful ________ in American history. He palys country music. He has already sold more than 120 million ______ . Sarah is a ___ of country music. Because country music _______ her that the best things in life are free. It also made Sarah _________ her family and friends. Sarah's dream is to go to Nashville because Garth Brooks is there. She hopes to see him _______ one day.
Garth Brooks
musicians
records
fan
reminds
think about
sing live
Who is my favorite singer
My favorite singer is __________ ---one of the most famous singers in China. She was born in June 2nd,1970. She plays pop music and. She has already made many CDs and enjoyed success in music.
I like her because of her _______ voice. Listening to her music is a good way to ____ myself. It makes me feel ______________________.
I hope to be as successful as she one day!
Mo Wenwei
beautiful
relax
peaceful/happy/excited ...
3a
Think of a singer or writer you know well. Make a list of facts about him/her. Think of the following:
1. Who is the singer/writer
2. When did the singer/writer first became famous
3. How and why did she/he became famous
4. What famous songs/books has she/he recorded/written When
3a
Think of a singer or writer you know well. Make a list of facts about him/her. Think of the following:
5. How many books/CDs has he/she sold
6. How did you find out about him/her
7. Is he/she still popular today
8. Have you introduced this singer/writer to others
9. How do you feel about his/her songs/books
10. Have you played/sung his/her songs
3b
Write an article about the singer or wroter. Here are some words and phrases you can use.
the first line in the song/book
the book/song was written/recorded by
enjoyed success in
I listen to this song/ read this book when
successful song/book/CD
The song/book make me feel
审题
体裁
话题
时态
人称
说明文
喜欢的作家或歌手
一般现在时；
现在完成时
第一或第三人称
谋篇布局
介绍歌手或作 家个人信息
Beginning
1. My favorite ... is ...
2. He/She was born in ...
3. He/She came from ...
4. He/She recorded/written ...
5. He/She sold ... books/CDs.
说明喜欢的原因
Body
1. I listen to his/her songs/read books when I ...
2. I like he/she because ...
阐述自己的感受或希望 Ending
1. The song/book makes me feel ...
2. I learn .... from ...
3. I hope to ...
An example
Everyone has his own idol, and I am no exception. My favorite singer is Liu yaowen. He is a popular singer in recent years in China. He has made several famous CDs and has enjoyed great success in music.
I like him because he is a talented person. And his songs are exciting and inspiring. I listen to this song when I am upset. I think listening to his songs is a good way to remind me to study hard and never to give up.
He is successful today because of his hard work. I think I'll try my best to learn from him.
Beginning
Facts about
the singerg
Body
Reasonsg
Ending
Feelingsg
写作任务：
请以“My favorite book”为题，根据下面的信息，介绍你喜欢的书籍和其作者，间接书的主要内容，并且写出自己喜欢的原因和读这本书的感受，不少于80词。
内容提要：
1. 书名：Harry Potter
2. 作者：J. K. Rowling
3. 书的内容是讲述哈利波特这个勇敢善良的魔法少年(Wilzard student)，在魔法学校结识了一帮好友，并在朋友的帮助下打败了敌人。
4. 它教会我要勇敢战胜生活中的困难。
It's time to write!
My favorite book
Introduction
Reasons
Feelings
I enjoy reading ...
My favorite book is ...
The writer is ...
The book is full of ...
It is amazing ...
The main character is ...
I have learned a lot from ...
You will find a wonderful...
My Favorite Book
My favorite book is the Harry Potter series by J.K.Rowling. This magical story is not just a tale, but a journey through a world of imagination and fantasy.
What I love about it is the perfect mix of fantasy and reality. It takes readers into an exciting world of magic, it also deals with real human emotions and experiences. The characters are well- developed, each with their own strengths and weaknesses, which makes them relatable and real.
The reason why I like it is that it teaches us about friendship, bravery, and the importance of making the right choices. Moreover, reading these books really helps to develop my imagination .
It is an amazing experience by reading J.K.Rowling's books. Have you read them yet If not, I think you can have a try!
A possible version
Post-writing
Assessment(评价标准)
Structure(结构) 2分 Does the artical has several parts
Conten(内容) 5分 Are all the details stated (细节是否描述？)
If not, add the missing detail.(若没有，补充细节)
Language（语言）6分 Any mistakes (是否有拼写或语法错误)
Any linking words (是否有连接词)
Any good vocaburary or sentences (是否有好词好句)
Handwriting （书写）2分 Is it clean and tidy (是否干净整洁)
Thanks！