Unit 3 I’m more outgoing than my sister.
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“人际沟通”, 涉及子主题“良好的人际关系和人际交往”。
内容:描述人物在外表、性格和爱好等方面的相同点和不同点。
要求:1. 用 both, as. . . as. . . , the same as, be similar to等描述相同之处;
2. 用 not as/so. . . as. . . 和比较级等描述不同之处。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
假设你是Jack, 请根据表格内容, 介绍你和好朋友Mike之间的相同点和不同点。80词左右。
姓名 Jack Mike
外表 175 cm; 60 kg 175 cm; 70 kg
性格 友好; 更外向 友好; 更严肃
爱好 更擅长踢足球 跑得更快
学习 努力 努力; 成绩更好
I am Jack and Mike is my good friend.
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Step 1 三定审题
1. 定人称:以第一、三人称为主
2. 定时态:以一般现在时为主
3. 定核心:介绍自己和朋友的相同点和不同点
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1. 在一些方面 in some ways
2. 相同 (be) the same
3. 在另一些方面 in other ways
4. 和……一样…… as. . . as. . .
5. 我们两人都 both of us
6. 擅长 be good at
7. 取得好成绩 get good grades
8. (在……方面)帮助某人 help sb. (with sth. )
9. 相互帮助 help each other
10. 向……学习 learn from
11. 只要 as long as
12. 关心 care about
基础句式:
1. 在一些方面我们相同。
In some ways, we are the same.
2. 在另一些方面我们不同。
In other ways, we are different.
3. 迈克和我一样高。
Mike is as tall as me.
4. 迈克更重。
Mike is heavier.
5. 我更擅长踢足球。
I am better at playing soccer.
6. 他跑得更快。
He runs faster.
7. 我认为朋友应该彼此帮助。
I think friends should help each other.
8. 朋友应该相互学习。
Friends should learn from each other.
9. 我们相互关心。
We care about each other.
10. 我们能成为永远的朋友。
We can be friends forever.
升级句式:
1. 将基础句式1&2用连词but升级
In some ways we are the same, but in other ways we are different.
2. 将基础句式3&4用连词but升级
Mike is as tall as me, but he is heavier.
3. 将基础句式5&6用连词and升级
I am better at playing soccer and he runs faster.
4. 将基础句式7&8用连词and升级
I think friends should help each other and learn from each other.
5. 将基础句式9&10用as long as改成条件状语从句
As long as we care about each other, we can be friends forever.
Step 4 润色成篇
I am Jack and Mike is my good friend. In some ways we are the same, but in other ways we are different. ① Mike is as tall as me, but he is heavier. ② Both of us are friendly. ③But I am more outgoing and Mike is more serious. We both like sports. ③ I am better at playing soccer and he runs faster. I work as hard as Mike, but he gets better grades than me. He often helps me with my study. ①开篇点题, 我和朋友有相同点和不同点。 ②分别运用as. . . as和比较级描述相同点、不同点。 ③变换表达方式, 用both描述相同点。
续表
I think friends should help each other and learn from each other. ④As long as we care about each other, we can be friends forever. ⑤ ④运用should表达观点。 ⑤灵活运用as long as引导的条件状语从句。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
请根据以下提示信息, 写一篇70词左右的英语短文, 介绍你的好友Jack, 可适当发挥。
1. Jack是你们班最高的男孩, 他性格外向, 饮食健康, 几乎不吃垃圾食品。
2. 他热爱运动, 每周至少运动四次。他擅长打篮球。
3. 他学习比你努力。
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【实战写作】
I have a good friend. His name is Jack. He is taller than any other boy in our class. He is very outgoing. He always tells me jokes to make me laugh. He has good eating habits, and he hardly ever eats junk food. He loves all kinds of sports. He plays sports at least four times a week. He is good at playing basketball, and he plays it best in our class. And he is more hard-working than me.
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