Unit 4 What’s the best movie theater?
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”,涉及子主题“社区生活”和“公共服务”。
内容:用形容词和副词的比较等级来描述社区中的地方或事物,表达自己的偏好,并说明理由。
要求:能正确使用形容词和副词的比较等级及相关句型。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
假设上周你对你家周围的几家服装店进行了一次调查,调查结果如表所示。请根据表格内容,写一篇调查报告。要求不少于70词。
Name Quality(质量) Price Service
Red Star best highest good
Sunshine Clothes Store good low worst
Blue Sky not very good lowest best
Step 1 三定审题
1.定人称:以第三人称为主
2.定时态:以一般现在时为主
3.定核心:对比介绍三家服装店的质量、价格和服务
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1.在我们社区 in my neighborhood
2.让我介绍一下…… let me introduce...
3.最好的衣服 the best clothes
4.最好的服务 the best service
5.最高/低的价格 the highest/lowest price
6.又好又便宜 good and cheap
7.服务最差劲 the worst service
8.质量一般 not very good
9.这些信息 the information
10.能帮到你 can help you
基础句式:
1.红星服装店里有最好的衣服。
Red Star has the best clothes.
2.红星服装店里的衣服价格最高。
The prices of the clothes in Red Star are the highest.
3.阳光服装店里的衣服又好又便宜。
The clothes in Sunshine Clothes Store are good and cheap.
4.阳光服装店服务最差。
Sunshine Clothes Store has the worst service.
5.蓝天服装店的衣服不是很好。
The clothes in Blue Sky are not very good.
6.它的价格最低,服务也最周到。
The prices are the lowest and it has the best service.
7.希望这些信息能对你有所帮助。
I hope the information can help you.
升级句式:
1.将基础句式1&2用连词but升级
Red Star has the best clothes,but the prices are the highest.
2.将基础句式3&4用although升级
Although the clothes in Sunshine Clothes Store are good and cheap, it has the worst service.
3.将基础句式5&6合并
The clothes in Blue Sky are not very good, but the prices are the lowest and it has the best service.
Step 4 润色成篇
There are three clothes stores in my neighborhood: Red Star, Sunshine Clothes Store and Blue Sky.① Let me introduce them to you. Red Star has the best clothes, but the prices are the highest.② It has good service. Although the clothes in Sunshine Clothes Store are good and cheap, it has the worst service.③ The clothes in Blue Sky are not very good, but the prices are the lowest and it has the best service. I hope the information can help you.④ ①开篇点题,点明调查对象。 ②灵活恰当地运用表示转折的连词but。 ③运用Although引导的让步状语从句表示转折,提升作文档次。 ④运用“hope+宾语从句”表达希望,收篇结尾,体现对高级句式的熟练掌握。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
你校围绕“爱家乡,说特色”进行了讨论。请根据下表信息,写一篇80词左右的短文。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
The best Name Reason
Clothes store Xinmate 你可以很便宜地买到衣服
Movie theater New Century Theater 有最舒服的座位和最好的服务
School Xinhua High School 有最有才能的老师和最大的校园(campus)
Radio station 97.0 FM 它播放最优美的音乐
Yesterday our school had a big discussion about which place we think is the most special in our hometown.Here are the results.
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【实战写作】
Yesterday our school had a big discussion about which place we think is the most special in our hometown.Here are the results.
The best clothes store is Xinmate.You can buy clothes very cheaply there.The best movie theater is New Century Theater.It has the most comfortable seats and the best service.The best school is Xinhua High School.It has the most talented teachers and the biggest campus.The best radio station is 97.0 FM, and it plays the most beautiful songs.
If you come to our hometown, I’m sure that you will have a wonderful time.
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