Unit 8 How do you make a banana milk shake?
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与自我”主题范畴中的“做人与做事”,涉及子主题“勤于动手,乐于实践”。
内容:用祈使句来描述如何制作食物,并谈论具体的制作步骤。
要求:能正确使用表示顺序的词first, then, next, finally等以及可数名词和不可数名词。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
今天是6月16日父亲节。假设你是李明,你早起为爸爸做了早餐,煮了一碗面。请你根据以下提示内容,用英语写一篇日记。
1.煮面的过程;
2.爸爸吃面后的感受;
3.你的想法和打算。
Step 1 三定审题
1.定人称:第一、三人称为主
2.定时态:一般过去时为主
3.定核心:描述如何煮面
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1.起床 get up
2.切碎 cut up
3.之后 after that
4.把……放进去 put...into...
5.以……而骄傲/自豪 (be/feel) proud of
6.决定做…… decide to do...
7.在未来 in the future
基础句式:
1.我早早地起床了。
I got up early.
2.我为爸爸做了早餐。
I cooked breakfast for my father.
3.首先,我洗了一些蔬菜并把它们切碎。
First, I washed some vegetables and cut them up.
4.接下来我把蔬菜放进锅里。
Next, I put the vegetables into the pot.
5.最后,我加了一些盐。
Finally, I added some salt.
6.我把所有东西搅拌在一起。
I mixed everything together.
7.我以自己而自豪。
I was proud of myself.
升级句式:
1.将基础句式1&2用连词and升级
I got up early and cooked breakfast for my father.
2.将基础句式5 &6用连词and升级
Finally, I added some salt and mixed everything together.
Step 4 润色成篇
Sunday,June 16 Sunny Today is Father’s Day.I got up early and cooked breakfast for my father.First①,I washed some vegetables② and cut them up②.Then①, I boiled some water② in the pot for several minutes.After that①, I put an egg and noodles into the pot②.Next①,I put the vegetables into the pot②.Finally①, I added some salt and mixed everything together②.The breakfast was ready to serve.My father was happy and said it tasted delicious. Feeling very happy and proud of myself③, I decide to help my parents do more housework in the future. ①使用了表示先后顺序的词语,使文章更有逻辑。 ②使用了一系列动词短语来详细描述煮面的过程。 ③动名词短语作状语,为文章增色,表达了作者的感受。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
你知道如何制作火鸡三明治吗 根据表格中所提供的信息, 写一篇关于如何制作火鸡三明治的英语短文。
Ingredients (原料) Amount (数量)
bread 2 pieces
butter 2 spoons
onion 1
tomato 1
turkey 3 pieces
relish (佐料) 1 spoon
要求:1.短文须包含表格中所提供的内容;
2.词数: 60左右(标题和开头已给出, 不计入总词数)。
A Great Way to Make a Turkey Sandwich
Do you like sandwiches I like them very much.Do you know how to make a turkey sandwich Let’s have a try.
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【实战写作】
A Great Way to Make a Turkey Sandwich
Do you like sandwiches I like them very much.Do you know how to make a turkey sandwich Let’s have a try.
To make the sandwich, we need two pieces of bread, two spoons of butter and an onion.We also need a tomato, three pieces of turkey and one spoon of relish.
First, cut up the onion and the tomato.Then, put the butter on one piece of bread.Next, put the turkey pieces on the butter.After that, put the onion and tomato on it and add the relish.Finally, put the other piece of bread on the top.
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