Unit 9 Can you come to my party?
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”, 涉及子主题“良好的人际关系与人际交往”。
内容:如何发出邀请, 以及如何接受邀请和拒绝邀请。
要求:能正确使用情态动词 can, must, have to等以及注意邀请函的写作格式。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
假如你是Jane, 下面是Alice发给你的邀请函。请根据以下提示给Alice回复一封电子邮件。
Dear Jane,
Can you come to my birthday party this Sunday It will start at 6 p. m. I would be very happy if you could come. Please tell me if you are coming by this Friday.
Yours,
Alice
要求:80词左右, 可适当发挥。电子邮件的格式已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
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Yours,
Jane
Step 1 三定审题
1. 定人称:第一人称为主
2. 定时态:一般将来时为主
3. 定核心:接受或拒绝邀请
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1. 照顾; 照看 look after
2. 有空 be available
3. 看医生 see the doctor
4. 生病 be ill
5. 其他时间; 别的时间 another time
基础句式:
1. 非常感谢你的邀请。
Thank you very much for your invitation.
2. 我愿意去参加你的聚会。
I’d love to go to your party.
3. 我会没有空。
I won’t be available.
4. 我的父母很忙。
My parents are very busy.
5. 星期日我必须帮忙照看我的小妹妹。
I have to help to look after my little sister on Sunday.
6. 另外, 我祖母生病了, 我必须带她去看医生。
Also, my grandmother is ill and I must take her to see the doctor.
7. 我真的很抱歉。
I am really sorry.
8. 我不能去你的聚会。
I can’t go to your party.
升级句式:
1. 将基础句式2&3用连词but升级
I’d love to go to your party but I won’t be available.
2. 将基础句式4&5用连词so升级
My parents are very busy, so I have to help to look after my little sister on Sunday.
3. 将基础句式7 &8合并
I am really sorry that I can’t go to your party.
Step 4 润色成篇
Dear Alice, Thank you very much for your invitation. ① I’d love to go to your party but I won’t be available. My parents are very busy, so I have to help to look after my little sister on Sunday. Also, my grandmother is ill and I must take her to see the doctor. ② I am really sorry that I can’t go to your party. ③ I will visit you another time and give you a gift. For now I’ll just say “Happy birthday!”④ Yours, Jane ①运用Thank you for. . . 句式对邀请表示感谢。 ②运用have to, must说明不能去的原因, 理由充分。 ③运用I am really sorry that. . . 真诚地表达自己的歉意。 ④表达自己的祝福, 首尾呼应, 自然收尾。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
假如你叫李磊, 你的好朋友杰克邀请你这周末参观他的农场, 但是你不能接受邀请。请你根据表格内容提示, 给他发一封电子邮件说明原因。
Saturday 上午 看望爷爷奶奶
下午 在花园里帮爸爸干活
晚上 和妈妈一起去购物
Sunday 上午 为语文考试而学习
下午 上钢琴课
晚上 去看电影
词数:60词左右。开头和结尾已给出, 不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
Thank you for asking me to visit your farm. I’d love to, but I’m afraid I can’t.
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Yours,
Li Lei
Dear Jack,
Thank you for asking me to visit your farm. I’d love to, but I’m afraid I can’t. Today is Saturday. I’m going to visit my grandparents this morning. In the afternoon I have to help my father work in the garden, and in the evening I am going shopping with my mother. On Sunday morning I have to study for the Chinese test. I must have piano lessons in the afternoon. In the evening I’m going to the movies with my family. Maybe another time.
Write soon.
Yours,
Li Lei
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