人教版八年级上册Unit 10 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!　Section B (3a-Self Check)学案

Unit 10　 If you go to the party, you’ll have a great time!
Section B (3a-Self Check)
写作素养进阶
【主题分析——指明方向】
主题:本单元写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会服务与人际沟通”, 涉及子主题“交流与合作、团队精神”。
内容:描述生活中遇到的问题和烦恼, 并根据问题和烦恼提出合理化的建议。
要求:能正确使用if条件从句做出假设, 并用should等情态动词给出合理化建议。
【典例研磨——示范引领】
　　假如你是李华, 你校英语报“大家来帮忙”栏目收到一位叫Grace的同学的来信, 信中她诉说了自己的两个烦恼:1. 刷短视频上瘾; 2. 总是熬夜, 导致上课犯困。你作为该报实习小编辑, 请你写一篇英语短文, 帮助她解决烦恼。
Step 1　三定审题
1. 定人称:介绍对方的烦恼以及给对方建议时用 第二人称; 介绍自己的观点时用第一人称。
2. 定时态:一般现在时为主。
3. 定核心:针对他人的烦恼提出建议。
Step 2　谋篇布局
Step 3　遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1. 对……疯狂　　　　be crazy about
2. 最好 had better
3. 参加 take part in
4. 熬夜 stay up
5. 一……就…… as soon as
基础句式:
1. 我愿意给你一些建议。
I’d like to give you some advice.
2. 你的第一个问题是你对看短视频上瘾。
The first problem is that you are crazy about watching short videos.
3. 对人们来说通过看它们(短视频)来放松很正常。
It’s normal for people to relax by watching them.
4. 对它们上瘾就不好了。
It’s not good to be crazy about them.
5. 你可以多参加户外活动。
You can take part in more outdoor activities.
6. 如果你熬夜是为了完成作业, 我认为你应该回到家先做作业。
If you stay up to finish your homework, I think you should do your homework first when you get home.
7. 阅读可以使你放松。
Reading can make you relaxed.
8. 阅读可以帮你睡得更好。
Reading can help you sleep better.
升级句式:
1. 将基础句式3和4用连词but升级
It’s normal for people to relax by watching them but it’s not good to be crazy about them.
2. 将基础句式5用had better升级
You’d better take part in more outdoor activities.
3. 将基础句式6用as soon as升级
If you stay up to finish your homework, I think you should do your homework as soon as you get home.
4. 将基础句式7和8合并
Reading can make you relaxed and help you sleep better.
Step 4　润色成篇
Hi, Grace I’ve learned about your problems. I’d like to give you some advice. ① 　　Your first problem is that you are crazy about② watching short videos. ①用would like句式引出愿意提些建议。
续表
It’s normal for people to relax by watching them. But it’s not good to be crazy about it③. Why not④set your screen time limits for yourself And you’d better⑤ take part in more outdoor activities. 　　The second problem is that you always stay up. If you stay up to finish your homework, I think you should do your homework as soon as you get home. If you stay up to play games, I advise that you should read before bedtime. Reading can make you relaxed and help you sleep better. 　　I hope my advice would be helpful to you. Yours, Li Hua ②用be crazy about来表达对某事上瘾。 ③灵活运用it 作形式主语的句式, 彰显深厚功底。 ④用Why not. . . 句式提出建议, 语言地道。 ⑤运用you’d better提出建议, 句式富于变化。
【实战写作——迁移创新】
　　李磊是一名八年级学生, 他沉迷于玩电脑游戏, 并因此影响了他的学习。作为李磊的好朋友, 你打算怎么帮助他呢 请根据下面所给的提示, 写一篇短文。要求:70词左右。 (开头和结尾不计入总词数)。
提示:give up, waste time, be interested in, have a great time
Dear Li Lei,
　　Thanks for your letter. I am sorry to hear that you are in trouble now.
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Yours,
Jack
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