10 书面表达满分冲刺20篇-2023-2024年七年级英语下期期末高频考点专练（牛津译林版）（带答案详解）

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2023-2024年七年级英语下期期末高频考点专练（牛津译林版）
10 书面表达满分冲刺20篇
1．尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德，上周六我们去了养老院(the Old People’s Home) 和那里的老人一起过了一个有意义的周末。请根据英文提示，以日记的形式记录下这次活动。
要求：
1. 80~100词，日记开头已给出，不计入总词数；
2. 文章中不得出现真实姓名、班级和学校；
3. 语句通顺，字迹工整。
内容提示：
Saturday, June 23rd Sunny
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2．假如你是李华，你的英国好友 Eric计划暑假来花都，他想邀请你做向导。请你写一封邮件向他推荐花都的好去处。内容包括：
1. 花都的基本情况 （地理位置和气候）；
2. 推荐两个好去处及相应的理由；
3. 表达你的期待。
注意：
1. 地名、特色美食和地方传统节日名可用拼音；
2. 词数：不少于 60词（文章的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）；
3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。
Dear Eric,
I am glad that you are coming to Huadu for your holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
3．假如你是李华，你得知滨海新区图书馆暑期要招募“一日小志愿者”为小朋友讲名家名篇。请你根据以下要点写一封电子邮件应聘。
内容要点：
（1）你来自“于响中学”七年级，你非常喜欢读书，并乐于助人；
（2）你们家在图书馆附近，只有15分钟的步行路程，所以你经常去；
（3）你恰巧在学校学习了①马克·吐温的《汤姆索亚历险记》；②吴承恩的《西游记》；（两本书选其中一本即可，简单介绍一下书的内容）
（4）去年寒假，你在社区做了一次志愿者，给小朋友们讲故事，还教他们唱歌，你非常受小朋友们的欢迎；
（5）你认为……
参考词汇：志愿者volunteer；滨海新区图书馆Binhai Library；社区community；马克·吐温Mark Twain；《西游记》 Journey to the West；《汤姆索亚历险记》The Adventures of Tom Sawyer
要求：
（1）词数：80~100个。
（2）开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
（3）要点齐全，行文连贯，可适当发挥。
Dear Sir/Madam,
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
4．重庆因其独特的山水人文吸引了各地的游客。你的朋友Watson发来一封邮件，计划暑假来你家乡重庆游玩。假定你是李华，请根据来信内容写封回信。
要求：
1、必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥；
2、80词左右。已给出的词语不计入总词数；
3、文中不能出现自己的真实姓名和所在学校的名称。
4、参考词汇：hotpot（火锅）
To: Lihua2023@
From: Watson@
Dear Li Hua,
How is everything I’m very happy that the summer holidays are coming. I want to go to your hometown—Chongqing this year. Can you tell me something about your hometown
What’s the weather like What delicious food can I have What should I take with me there
I’m looking forward to your letter.
Give my best wishes to your parents!
Yours,
Watson
Dear Watson,
I’m glad to hear from you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
5．假如你叫李华，你的好朋友张伟暑假期间要来你的家乡福州游玩。请根据以下要点和要求，给他写一封电子邮件。
要点：
1. 你家乡的天气状况；
2. 他需要带的衣服等；
3. 你和你的朋友要做什么。
要求：
1. 必须包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 词数 60左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
Dear Zhang Wei,
I’m glad that you will come to my hometown in the coming summer holiday.
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Yours,
Li Hua
6．你一定有过难忘的旅行，请根据表格中提供的信息，以My Trip to ________为题，用英语写一篇短文分享自己的旅行经历。
一起去旅行吧
Time
weather
With friends…
By plane…
Places of interest
Food
要求: 1）文中必须包含表格中的所有信息，可适当发挥；
2）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称；
3）词数80词左右。
My Trip to____________
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7．假如你是Jack，你在某网站上看到一家志愿者组织招聘志愿者。你对此很感兴趣，请你根据下面的提示，写一封邮件申请一项志愿者工作。
志愿者工作：1. To work in an old people’s house
2. To help kids in an after-school program
提示问题：
1. Which volunteer job do you want to do (二选一)
2. What are your hobbies
3. What can you do to help people
4. Why do you want to do the volunteer job
5. When are you free to do the job
要求：
1. 大小写，标点书写规范，语句通顺，内容全面，适当发挥，卷面整洁。
2. 70 词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to volunteer to___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Jack
8．假如你校近期评选了一批2022年“新时代好少年”，你的同学李华获得了这项称号。
请根据下表内容，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍一下他的基本情况。
性 格 友好，乐于助人
学习情况 喜欢英语，擅长历史，爱好读书。
主要事迹 上周，他帮助一个迷路的小男孩找到了父母，其父母非常感谢他。
你能从李华身上学到什么
要求：
1. 内容须包含以上提示内容，可适当发挥；
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名与校名；
3. 卷面整洁，书写美观，可适当加2—3 分;
4. 80词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear teachers and friends,
I am very happy to talk about the Good Boy—Li Hua in our class.
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9．地球是人类共同的家园，我们只有—个地球。“低碳、环保” 已成为当今时代主题。目前，我校准备开展以“Save our Earth” 为主题的英语征文活动。现请你根据以下的提示，写—篇短文投稿。
主题 Save our Earth
重要性 地球是我们唯—的家园。
建议 1. 善待动物，动物是我们的朋友。
2. 多种树木，树木在很多方面帮助我们。
3. 节约用电，离开课室时要关灯。
4. ……(补充至少1条建议)
注意：词数70个左右(文章开头已给出，不计入总词数)。
Save Our Earth
The Earth is a beautiful place,
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10．旅行是一种享受，江河湖海，名胜古迹，让人领略到祖国山河的美好。暑假就要到了，假如你计划去北京旅游，请根据表格提示，制定你的旅游计划。
My Trip Plan to Beijing
Whom will you go with Go with my…
How will you go By car/high-speed train…
What will you do Visit places of interest; watch animals…
How do you feel …
要求：
（1）短文须包含所有提示要点，可适当发挥；
（2）文中不得出现真实的校名和人名；
（3）词数70词左右。
My Trip Plan to Beijing
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11．每周六你都会和爸爸妈妈一起打扫小区，今天邻居Kelly也加入了你们的活动。请你根据以下表格内容写一篇日记。
时间 周六上午
地点 小区
志愿者 爸爸、妈妈、你和Kelly
活动内容 清扫小区路上的落叶(fallen leaves)；捡草丛中的垃圾(rubbish)；把共享单车(shared bikes)摆放整齐(put...in order)…
活动感受 ……
要求：
1.包括所有提示内容，可适当发挥；
2.条理清楚，意思连贯；
3.80词左右。
Saturday April 21st Sunny
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12．假设你是学校志愿者队伍中的一员。今天你要在英语课上做一次演讲，向同学们介绍你们团队参与过的志愿服务，并号召更多的同学加入你们。
要求：
1. 不少于80词（开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。
2. 不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校等信息。
Good morning, everyone!
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That’s all. Thank you!
13．假如你是Eric，暑假即将到来，你和你的好朋友们打算利用假期时间去做志愿者，你们的计划如下：
Name Places Things to do
Jack 医院 看望生病的孩子们，为他们唱歌、跳舞，让他们振作起来……
Mary 儿童之家 给孩子们讲故事，帮助孩子们学习阅读和他们做游戏……
Eric 敬老院 给老人读报纸，与他们交流，倾听他们，照顾他们……
请根据表格提示内容，以“Our volunteer plans in summer holidays”为题，写一篇不少于 70 字的英语短文描述你们的暑假计划，可以根据需要适当扩展。
Our volunteer plans in summer holidays
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14．假如你是李华，上周你们学校组织了一场慈善义卖活动（a charity sale）来帮助有困难的儿童。请你根据下表提示，用英语写一篇短文向某英文网站投稿，介绍此次活动。
Time last Sunday morning
Place on the school playground
Items (物品) for sale model planes, old toys, ...
Activities 1. begin at 8:00; many teacher and students take part2. buy things with a lower price3. raise 2,000 yuan for the children in poor areas
Feelings ...
要求：1. 词数：不少于 80词，开头已写好，不计入总词数；
2. 稿件内容必须包括以上要点，活动感受必须写 2-3句；
3. 段落分明，语意通顺，书写规范；
4. 不得出现真实姓名、校名及地名等信息。
At my school, we had a charity sale last week.
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15．威海是中国第一个国家卫生城市和“联合国人居奖”城市，是国家园林城市、全国环保模范城市、首批中国优秀旅游城市、国家文明城市、改善人居环境全球最佳范例，是避暑、修疗、度假和观光旅游的胜地。假如你叫李琳，你作为威海的一份子，经常为威海的美丽做志愿活动，请根据以下提示，给你想要去做志愿活动的地方写封信。
词数100左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。
1. Which volunteer job do you want to do
2. What are your interests and hobbies
3. How can these help you to do the job
4. Why do you want to do the volunteer job
5. When are you free to do the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
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Yours Truly,
Li Lin
16．请以Welcome to my hometown for a visit为题，写一篇英语作文，从气候、景色、美食和人等方面介绍你的家乡。
要求：
1. 语言表达准确，文章通顺连贯，书写规范整洁；
2. 不得出现真实姓名和学校名称，80词左右。
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17．请以My House in Quincy为题目根据以下提示写一篇文章。
1. 我出生在昆西。
2. 我们在昆西的房子很大而且舒适。有一间大的客厅，里面有台电视机，有一间厨房、三间卧室和一个洗澡间。
3. 在房子的后面有一个大大的花园，花园里有很多树和花。还有一个有鱼的小湖。
4. 我上次去那儿是在2019年。我期望再次回到我的家。
要求:
1. 词数80左右。
2. 文章要包含所有要点。不能有遗漏。
3. 要使用第一人称。
My House in Quincy
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18．我们的家乡台山市有“全国第一侨乡”、 “排球之乡”等诸多美誉，同时也有名胜古迹和很多美丽的风景区。现在请你给你的新朋友写一封电子邮件，简单介绍如何在我们台山进行两日游。 内容包括：
（1）the most important places to see
（2）where they are
（3）how to get there
（4）what to see/do there
作文要求:
（1）不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和考生的真实姓名。
（2）两日游，需要有个游玩计划（路线），并至少列出3个地方。
（3）语句连贯，词数80个左右。题目已经给出，不计入总词数。
A two-day trip in Taishan
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19．根据提供的信息，写一段文字，不少于80字。题目为“An amazing animal”。
camel :
1. go without water for a long time
2.store food in its hump(驼峰)
3. change the food into fat
4. live in the desert(沙漠)
5. not store the fat all over its body just in its hump
6. not want to be warm during the day
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20．你和朋友打算这个星期天下午2：00去野营。地点设在公园。你想让你的朋友Bob也参加。请按照下面的路线，写信告诉Bob：沿着幸福路往前走，在第二个拐弯处向右拐，走过桥进入人民路，在你到达第一个十字路口时往左转进入公园路，一直往前走，你就会看见公园的入口就在你右边。（80词左右）
Dear Bob,
I am happy to invite you to a picnic. Here is the route to it.
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I hope you can come. We look forward to seeing you.
Yours faithfully
参考答案：
1．例文
Saturday, June 23rd Sunny
Respecting the elderly is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation. Last Saturday, we went to the Old People’s Home and spent a meaningful weekend with the elderly there. We played games with them in the morning. They also taught us some of the games of their time. We had never played it before, so we found it very interesting. At noon, we cooked lunch together and shared lunch with them. In the afternoon we told them some interesting stories. We also sang and danced for them. Although we were tired this day, we were very happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇日记；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：日记要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，说明尊老敬老是中华民族的传统美德；
第二步，根据提示的要点讲述在养老院里所做的事情，要列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发活动带来的感悟并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①share sth with sb和某人分享某物
②tell sb stories给某人讲故事
[高分句型]
①Respecting the elderly is the traditional virtue of the Chinese nation.（动名词作主语）
②Although we were tired this day, we were very happy.（although引导的让步状语从句）
2．例文：
Dear Eric,
I am glad that you are coming to Huadu for your holiday. Huadu lies in the south of China. It is famous for the beautiful flowers and delicious food. So it is called Flower City. It’s very hot here in summer.
There are lots of famous places of interest such as the Canton Tower and the Baiyun Mountain. Baiyun Mountain attracts many visitors every day. The Yuexiu Park is one of the most famous parks in Guangzhou. It is cheerful to visit this park. Also, you will be excited to visit the Pearl River at night. If you are interested in delicious food, the most famous street in Guangzhou is the Beijing Road. This is the best place to go if you want to visit some shop and department stores. You can also enjoy Guangzhou’s traditional food there. In the evening, you can go singing in some KTV shops. It is wonderful to sing with friends. What’s more, Guangzhou has something for everyone.
Welcome to visit Guangzhou. I hope you have a good time.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，先介绍花都的基本情况，例如它的地理位置和气候；
第二步，具体介绍几个好玩的地方，以及推荐的理由，例如广州塔、白云山、越秀公园、珠江、北京路等；
第三步，书写结束语，表达希望对方玩得开心。
[亮点词汇]
①lies in 位于
②is famous for 因……而闻名
③places of interest 名胜古迹
④cheerful 令人愉快的
⑤traditional 传统的
⑥what’s more 而且
[高分句型]
①There are lots of famous places of interest such as the Canton Tower and the Baiyun Mountain.（there be句型）
② If you are interested in delicious food, the most famous street in Guangzhou is the Beijing Road.（if引导的条件状语从句）
3．例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Li Hua, a Grade Seven student from Yuxiang Middle School. I like reading very much and I’m always ready to help others. I would like to be a volunteer to tell children stories in the library.
My home is near Binhai Library. It only takes me 15 minutes to walk there, and I go there very often. So, don’t worry, I won’t get lost.
This term, we happened to learn The Adventures of Tom Sawyer at school. The famous American writer Mark Twain wrote it. Tom was a poor boy. He left school and began work at the age of twelve. I can tell many Tom Sawyer’s interesting stories. I’m sure children will like them very much.
Last winter holiday, I volunteered in our community, telling stories and singing songs for children. I was very popular with them.
I think I will be more than pleased if I can be a volunteer in the library. Helping is fun!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏内容要点，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“个人信息”来引出下文中自荐信的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“路程、书籍内容和志愿经历”三方面入手，重点介绍自己有哪些优势；
第三步，书写结语。希望能被录用。
[亮点词汇]
①get lost 迷路
②at the age of 在……岁时
③be popular with 受……欢迎
[高分句型]
①I think I will be more than pleased if I can be a volunteer in the library.（if引导的条件状语从句）
4．例文：
Dear Watson,
I’m glad to hear from you. You want to travel to Chongqing during the summer vacation, and I would be happy to introduce this beautiful city to you.
Chongqing is located in the southwest of China. The weather is very hot in summer, so you can bring some cool clothes. Chongqing is famous for its cuisine, especially the spiciness of Sichuan cuisine. You can try hot pot, Dandan noodles and Mapo tofu, which are local specialties. In addition, there are many tourist attractions in Chongqing, such as the Three Gorges, Yuzhong Bridge and Monument to the people’s Liberation Pedestrian Street. You can also enjoy the night view of the city from the top of Mount Huangshan Park.
I hope you have a pleasant time in Chongqing. If you need any help, please feel free to contact me at any time.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应根据提示中的信息，介绍重庆这座城市，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍重庆这座城市；
第二步，具体阐述，从城市的天气、美食、风景及注意事项进行介绍；
第三步，书写结语，表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be famous for因……而出名
②be located in坐落于
③cuisine美食
④in addition除此之外
[高分句型]
①You can try hot pot, Dandan noodles and Mapo tofu, which are local specialties. (非限制性定语从句)
②If you need any help, please feel free to contact me at any time. (if条件状语从句)
5．例文
Dear Zhang Wei,
I’m glad that you will come to my hometown in the coming summer holiday.
Fuzhou is a beautiful and clean city. You know, Fuzhou is very hot in summer. The sun always shines brightly, so you had better take sunglasses and shorts. There are many places of interest for you to visit, such as the Three Lanes and Seven Alleys, Mount Gu and so on. We can enjoy different kinds of delicious food like fish balls. I am looking forward to meeting you.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】［总体分析］
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：本文的时态以一般现在时为主；
③提示：本文的要点已给出，要注意详细阐述所给的要点。
［写作步骤］
第一步，介绍福州的天气；
第二步，介绍要带的衣服，和朋友能做的事；
第三步，结束语，期待见到彼此。
［亮点词汇］
had better最好
［高分句型］
The sun always shines brightly, so you had better take sunglasses and shorts.（结果状语从句）
6．例文
My Trip to Beijing
During the summer holiday, I went to Beijing with my friends. We went there by plane. It took us about two hours to get there. The weather there was very hot.
We visited many places of interest, such as the Great Wall, the Palace Museum and the Summer Palace. Besides, we enjoyed some delicious food like Beijing Duck. And we went shopping on the Wangfujing Street. We bought some small gifts for our friends and parents.
How happy we were!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍暑假去了哪里旅行；
第二步，介绍北京的情况以及自己的所见所闻；
第三步，表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①place of interest名胜古迹
②such as例如
③buy sth for sb给某人买某物
[高分句型]
①It took us about two hours to get there. （动词不定式作主语）
②How happy we were!（感叹句）
7．例文：
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to volunteer to work in an old people’s home.
In my free time, I like to dance and sing songs. And I’m also good at playing chess. I can play chess or sing songs to cheer the old people up. I can also wash clothes or clean their rooms. I think when I do something for them, I feel happy. I can do the volunteer job on Friday evening or at the weekends.
I look forward to your reply.
Yours,
Jack
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件，申请志愿者工作；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要做哪个志愿者工作；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍了你的爱好，你能做什么及可以做志愿者的时间；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望成功入选的美好愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②cheer the old people up让老人振作起来
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①I can play chess or sing songs to cheer the old people up.（to do表目的）
②I think when I do something for them, I feel happy.（宾语从句）
8．例文
Dear teachers and friends,
I am very happy to talk about the Good Boy—Li Hua in our class.
He is good at English and he likes history very much. He often reads books about history when he is free. You can always see him in the library.
He is friendly and likes to help other people. Last week, he met a little boy. The boy got lost. Li Hua helped him find his parents. The boy’s parents said, “You are a kind boy. Thank you very much.”
I think Li Hua is a good boy. He did a right thing. I want to learn from him.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇演讲稿；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：根据题干中的提示介绍同学李华的基本情况，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍他的性格、学习情况和主要事迹；
第三步，介绍你能从李华身上学到什么。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②get lost迷路
[高分句型]
①He often reads books about history when he is free. (when引导的时间状语从句)
②I think Li Hua is a good boy.(宾语从句)
9．例文：
Save Our Earth
The Earth is a beautiful place, it is our only home but it is in great danger now. So we must do something to save it.
First, we should be good with animals because they are humans’ friends. Planting trees more is also important. Trees help us in many ways. What’s more, we must save electricity. For example, we need to remember to turn off the lights when we leave the classrooms. Of course, saving water and walking or riding instead of driving are necessary as well.
In a word, we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中“补充至少1条建议”一项，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。开门见山说明地球是重要的且处于危险的，我们应该拯救它；
第二步，具体阐述拯救地球的建议；
第三步，书写结语，表达自己的感受，升华主题。
[亮点词汇]
① is in great danger 处在极大的危险中
② be good with 和……好好相处
③ What’s more 而且
④ instead of 代替
[高分句型]
① we should be good with animals because they are humans’ friends. (because引导原因状语从句)
② we everyone should take action to do what we can to save our earth. (what引导宾语从句)
10．例文
My Trip Plan to Beijing
The summer holiday is coming. I want to go on a trip to Beijing with my parents. Beijing is a beautiful city with a long history. It’s the capital of China. We will go there by high-speed train. We will stay there for 3 days. We are going to visit some places of interests, such as Tian’anmen Square and the Great Wall. We will go to Tian’anmen Square to watch the raising of the national flag and we will take a lot of photos on the Great Wall. We will see the animals in the zoo. I am longing to see the lovely pandas there. I hope we’ll have a great time and I think our trip will be very meaningful.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作；
②时态：时态为“一般将来时”；
③提示：文章标题及写作要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，开篇引出话题，说明要去北京旅游；
第二步，根据要点介绍旅游计划，包括同行的人、交通方式、打算做的事情等，可列举具体的事例；
第三步，抒发感受并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①with a long history有着悠长的历史
②such as比如
③long to do sth渴望做某事
[高分句型]
I hope we’ll have a great time and I think our trip will be very meaningful.（and连接两个并列分句，两个并列分句中都含有省略引导词that引导的宾语从句）
11．例文:
Saturday April 21st Sunny
Every Saturday, my parents and I clean up our neighborhood. Today Kelly volunteered to join us. This cheered us up.
We started doing some cleaning in the morning. First, we cleaned the fallen leaves on the road. Then we picked up all the rubbish in the grass. After that, I found that shared bikes were here and there. So we put them in order.
We spent two hours cleaning our neighborhood. I felt very tired but happy. I also got a feeling of satisfaction.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为日记；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中每一项内容，介绍本次活动的详情，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，直入主题，介绍本次活动的时间、地点、人物；
第二步，具体介绍本次活动的内容；
第三步，最后表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①clean up打扫
②cheer sb up使某人振奋
③pick up捡起
④spend time doing sth花费时间做某事
[高分句型]
I found that shared bikes were here and there.（that引导的宾语从句）
12．例文：
Good morning, everyone!
I’m glad to be here today to share my experience with you.
When I was a child, my parents always told me to help those in need. So when I grew up, I joined the school volunteer team. I am still a member of school volunteer team now. The purpose of our team is to make contributions to our society.
Last year, we did a lot of meaningful things to help people. For example, we went to the nursing home to visit the elderly. We cleaned the window and told stories to them to cheer them up. We had a really unforgettable time. If you are willing to help others, then come and join us!
That’s all. Thank you!
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总体指出要分享自己的经历；
第二步，介绍自己加入的组织的原因及组织的情况；
第三步，介绍去年自己的经历；
第四步，结束演讲。
[亮点词汇]
① grow up成长；
② tell sb to do sth告诉某人做某事；
③ for example例如；
[高分句型]
① when I grew up, I joined the school volunteer team.（when引导的时间状语从句）
② If you are willing to help others, then come and join us!（if引导的条件状语从句）
13．例文:
Our volunteer plans in summer holidays The summer vacation is coming. I’m going to do some volunteer work with my good friends during it.
Jack plans to go to the hospital. He is going to see the sick children, sing and dance for them, cheer them up, and recover their health as soon as possible. Mary plans to go to the children’s home, tell stories to the children, help them read, and play games with them. I am going to the old people’s home to read newspapers to the elderly, communicate with them, listen to them, take care of them, and make them feel happy.
I believe we will have a very meaningful summer vacation.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；
③ 提示：所给材料提示较多，不要遗漏，可适当进行拓展。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明暑假去做志愿者的计划；
第二步，分别阐述每个人计划的目的地和具体工作内容；
第三步，表达自己对此计划的期待和愿景。
[亮点词汇]
① plan to do sth. 计划做某事
② cheer up 振作起来
③ as soon as possible 尽快；尽早
[高分句型]
① The summer vacation is coming.（现在进行时表将来）
② I am going to the old people’s home to read newspapers to the elderly...（不定式作目的状语）
③ I believe we will have a very meaningful summer vacation.（宾语从句）
14．例文
At my school, we had a charity sale last week. The charity sale was held on our school playground last Sunday morning. We prepared many things which we made by hand in our spare time such as kites, model planes and so on. We also brought old toys and second-handbooks to sell on the sale. At 8:00, the activity started. Many teachers and students came to take part in it. Everyone chose their favorite items and paid for them at a much lower price. In the end, the money we made added up to 2,000. We sent the money to help the children who can’t attend school in poor areas.
I had a wonderful experience. I’m proud of what we have done. If everyone makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，根据已给出开头，介绍活动的详情；
第二步，总结活动的感受。
[亮点词汇]
①in one’s spare time在某人的空闲时间
②and so on等等
③take part in参加
④add up to合计达
⑤be proud of为……而自豪
[高分句型]
①We prepared many things which we made by hand in our spare time such as kites, model planes and so on.（which引导的定语从句）
②I’m proud of what we have done.（what引导的宾语从句）
③If everyone makes a contribution to the charity, the world will become much better.（if引导的条件状语从句）
15．例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’d like to help left-behind children in this project. Because I think they are very lonely and we should talk to them and care for them. I am interested in talking with people and I can tell stories and read newspapers to them.
I believe I can cheer them up by doing this. When I see the look of joy on their faces, I will get a strong feeling of satisfaction. I am free to visit them every Monday and Saturday. I believe I can make a difference to their lives. I think you can trust me.
Yours Truly,
Li Lin
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己想参加什么志愿者工作，介绍自己的兴趣和爱好；
第二步，介绍对这份工作有什么帮助，想做这份工作的原因；
第三步，介绍自己什么时候可以做这份工作。
[亮点词汇]
①care for关心
②be interested in对……感兴趣
③cheer sb up使某人振作起来
[高分句型]
①I believe I can cheer them up by doing this.（宾语从句）
②When I see the look of joy on their faces, I will get a strong feeling of satisfaction.（when引导时间状语从句）
16．例文
Welcome to my hometown for a visit
Welcome to my hometown Henan for a visit, I’m sure you’ll have a good time.
Henan is in the center of China. In summer, the weather is hot and the sun shines brightly. In winter, it’s cold and sometimes there is ice and snow. The weather is always fine in spring and autumn. There are many places of interest like Yellow River and Shaolin Temple. If you come here, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food. And people in Henan are very friendly, they welcome visitors warmly and always help them.
Henan is waiting for you.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步，欢迎大家来自己的家乡；
第二步，从气候、景色、美食和人等方面介绍你的家乡；
第三步，最后表达期待。
[亮点词汇]
①have a good time玩得开心
②places of interest名胜古迹
③different kinds of不同种类的
[高分句型]
If you come here, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food.（if引导的条件状语从句）
17．例文：
My House in Quincy
I was born in Quincy.
Our house there was big and comfortable. There was a big living room with a TV, a kitchen, three bedrooms and a bathroom. Behind the house there was a big garden. A lot of trees and flowers were in it. And there was a small lake with fish in it.
I went there in 2019. I’m looking forward to returning to my house again.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题干中给出的关键信息，短文以第一人称来介绍。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己出生在昆西；
第二步，介绍自己家的的房子；
第三步，期待将来某一天回到自己的家。
[亮点词汇]
①living room 客厅
②a lot of 许多
③look forward to doing sth.期待做某事
[高分句型]
①There was a big living room with a TV, a kitchen, three bedrooms and a bathroom.(There be句型)
18．例文
A two-day trip in Taishan
Dear Sarah,
Here is a two-day trip suggestion in Taishan for you.
On the first day, the most important places to see is Beifengshan Forest Park. It’s in the southeast of Taishan City. You can enjoy Jigong Hall, and Water Park there. You can go to Fudu Hot Spring Resort in Dashi Ancient Mountain next day. The green trees and the clean water will make you feel relaxed. There is a Golden Beach in Shangchuan island. You can swim in the sea.
By the way, you can go all of the places by bus. I hope you can enjoy yourself.
Yours,
David
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中介绍三处景点、位置和交通方式的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。借用“两天的游玩计划”来引出重点介绍的内容；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“三处景点、位置和交通方式”等几个方面重点介绍；
第三步，书写结语。表达“希望对方玩的开心”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
① the most important最重要的
② enjoy yourself玩得开心
③ by bus乘公交车
[高分句型]
Here is a two-day trip suggestion in Taishan for you.（“Here is”倒装句）
19．范文：
An amazing animal
Camel is a kind of amazing animal. It is very strong and has brown fur. It lives in the desert. I found it very interesting because it can go without water for a long time. Each camel has two humps on its back. It usually stores its food in its hump. It changes the food into fat and stores it in its hump too. It doesn’t store the fat all over its body because it doesn’t want to be too warm during the day in the desert.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍神奇的动物是什么；
第二步，具体介绍骆驼的一些知识以及特征等；
[亮点词汇]
① a kind of一种
② for a long time很长时间
③ all over遍及
[高分句型]
① It doesn’t store the fat all over its body because it doesn’t want to be too warm during the day in the desert.（because引导的原因状语从句）
② It changes the food into fat and stores it in its hump too.（and连接并列的两部分）
20．范文：
Dear Bob,
I am happy to invite you to a picnic. Here is the route to it. We are going to have the picnic in the park at two p.m. this Sunday.
Walk down Xingfu Road, turn right at the second turning. Walk across the bridge into Renming Road, turn left when you come to the crossroads. Go straight on, you’ll see the entrance of the park on your right.
I hope you can come. We look forward to seeing you.
Yours faithfully
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写信的意图；
第二步，具体介绍去公园的路线；
第三步，最后希望朋友能参加。
[亮点词汇]
① invite sb to do sth邀请某人做某事
② walk down沿着……走
③ on your right在你的右边
[高分句型]
① I hope you can come.（宾语从句）
② Walk down Xingfu Road, turn right at the second turning.（祈使句）
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