2024年中考英语二轮题型专题学案 英语写作解题技巧

中考英语写作解题技巧
问题1：中考作文考什么？
【题型分析】
（1）以提示性作文为主
题目中已为考生提供了写作内容, 考生需适当地展开合理的想象,围绕主题准确、精炼、清楚、连贯地表达自己的思想
（2）话题贴近生活，富有生活化
常常涉及校园、人际交往、美食等话题，让考生能“有话可说”
问题2：高分作文长啥样？
高分标准1：卷面整洁、美观
【错误示范】 【正确示范】
【正确示范】 【正确示范】
实现卷面整洁的技巧：
（1）写错单词、句子不要涂鸦，用/划掉
（2）保持单词间距，不要过于密集
（3）字迹不要潦草，尽可能要一笔一画得写，不要连笔
（4）尽量模仿衡水字体
衡水字体特征：
1、直线和弧线运用有特色
2、笔画清晰简洁，无勾挑，不连带
衡水字体26字母：（见右图）
高分标准2： 语言准确无误
【问】有哪些常见的语言错误？
1.拼写错误
2.词性错误
3.顺序错误
4.语法错误（动词、名词、形容词、副词、介词、冠词、连词、代词）
【错误1】拼写错误
1.At frist ,my English is very bad.
2.I hope my dream can come ture .
3.I deside to study English hard.
4. My teacher was prond of me.
5.I am not good at English ,beacaue my poor pronunciation.
6.I am going to prectice basketball every day.
7. I’ll get more exersice.
【错误2】词性错误
1.When our learn English ,we often meet some difficults.
2.Here are some advises for you.
3.It is importance for eveyone for learn English .
4.I afraid to talk with my friends in English.
5.My English communicate is so bad.
6.My English is very badly.
【错误3】顺序错误
1.I very like sports.
2.I carefully do my homework.
【错误4】语法错误
（动词、名词、形容词、副词、介词、冠词、连词、代词）
1.I very happy . （动词）
2.I like play basketball. （动词）
3.I have some problems ,such as talk with teachers. （动词）
4.He said he wants to have a good rest. （动词）
5.Many peoples hope to get some advices. （名词）
6.I study English very hardly and listen careful.（形容词/副词）
7. listen English songs . （介词）
8. My pen is as good as you .(代词)
9.Although I like English ,but I can’t get good grades. (连词)
【问】怎样才算语言准确无误？
原则1：一个句子有且只有一个动词
I am very happy . ( )
I am good at playing basketball.( )
原则2：连词数=动词数-1
He said he wants to have a good rest.( )
原则3：英语顺序——主谓宾正常顺序，定状后置
高分标准3：表达高级、句式丰富
【问】什么是高级表达？
原则1：越不常用的表达越高级，越常用的表达越低级。
happy＜glad＜pleased
very＜more than
【低分表达】I am very happy .
【高分表达】I am more than pleased.
原则2：单词＜短语＜句子
should ＜ be supposed to ＜ it can’t be better if ...
important＜ of importance ＜which is of importance
【低级句型】You should drink hot water.
【中级句型】You are supposed to drink hot water.
【高级句型】It can’t be better if you drink hot water.
【低级句型】There is a important meeting.
【中级句型】There is a meeting of importance .
【高级句型】There is a meeting which is of importance.
提分锦囊1：高分亮点词汇
pleased = happy
be fond of =like/love
more than =very
a number of = many
plenty of=much
hold the idea/belief that=think
deal with =solve
eye-catching=beautiful
come to realize=know
make full use of=use
of importance=important
fantastic=good
提分锦囊2：高分亮点句型
1.用来提建议/呼吁的句型：
I suggest / advise that you should do 我建议你做…
It can’t be better if …如果…就再好不过了。
It’s best to do 最好做…
You had better (not) do 最好(不)做
It’s time (for sb) to do sth. 该干某事了。
We are supposed to do ... 我们应该做...
Let's do sth , shall we 让我们做...，好吗？
2.用于书信结尾的句型：
I’m looking forward to your early reply! 期待你今早回复我
3.常用高分句型：
(1)It’s +adj +for sb to do sth 对某人来说… 做某事是…
(2)There is no doubt that + 句子 毫无疑问…
(3)As we all know, +句子 据我们所知
(4)How 、What引导的感叹句
(5)There is no need to do 没必要做…
(6)状语从句（重点：时间、条件、让步、结果、目的）
so … that … 如此… 以至于… such … that … 如此… 以至于…
(7). 宾语从句
(8). 定语从句
(9). The +比较级...,the+ 比较级...
提分锦囊3：万能好处（理由/原因/好处/结果）
（1）enrich one’s life 丰富某人的生活
（2）have a better understanding of ... 对...有一个更好的理解
（3）develop friendships with ... 和......交朋友
（4）develop one’s interest in sth 培养某人在......的兴趣
高分标准4： 要点齐全，符合要求
注意：
1.写作要点缺1点，扣1~2分
2.要求：不照抄原文+语句连贯+词数80字左右
（1）不照抄原文
六、读写综合（本大题分为A、B两部分，共25分）
A. 回答问题（本题共5小题，每小题2分，共10分）
B.书面表达（本题15分）
●原文=回答问题的阅读原文
●照抄=原本不动搬过来≠借鉴
【回答问题原句】
When he heard the shout, he jumped into the water without a second thought.
【作文要点】
1.我们应该如何防止此类事故发生？（两点建议）
【原文借鉴】
When we heard the shout, we shouldn’t jump into the water without a second thought.
（2）语句连贯
●语句连贯=有衔接词
【错误示范】
You should drink hot water.You should have a rest . You should take some medicine .
【正确示范】
First ,you should drink hot water.Second,you should have a rest . Finally,you should take some medicine .
提分锦囊2：常见衔接词
1.表时间先后关系
首先：first of all, at first, to begin with
其次：secondly/second ，then
接下来：next , after that
最后：finally，in the end
2.表逻辑先后关系：（关键词：至少2/3 条）
first of all =to begin with
what’s more
besides
in addition
in the end
3. 表转折对比关系：
however, but, although,while
4.用来陈述正反方的不同观点（用于议论文章中)：
On the one hand... On the other hand... 一方面...,另一方面;
Some...,while others... 一些人认为...而另一些人认为...
Some people hold the idea that .….while the others prefer the idea that .….
（一些人坚持这种观点，而另一些人更喜欢另一种观点)
5.表因果关系：
because,as（由于,因为）,so,as a result(结果）,thanks to（多亏）
6.表进行举例说明（用于作文中间举例）：
for example(+句子），such as（+短语），including
7.表陈述事实（用于作文尾段）：
In fact 事实上 as a matter of fact,事实上
8.表达自己观点：
as far as I know （据我所知）; in my opinion（在我看来）
9.表总结（用于作文尾段）：
in a word（总之）, all in all （总之）
（3）词数80字左右
【问】80字左右是多少字？
【问】如何判断为80字左右？
●80字左右=80±20(60-80字)
●80字左右=6-10行（每行8~15字）
问题3：怎么样写出高分作文？
【写作步骤】
【写作示范】
读写综合(本大题分为A、B两部分，共20分)
A.回答问题(共5小题,每小题1分,共5分)
Reading an English newspaper is a good way to improve a student’s language ability. As there are many useful and common words in an English newspaper, it may help students increase their vocabulary as well as improve their reading skills. They can get new knowledge from newspapers. But what is the proper way to read an English newspaper Do students need to look over all the articles of the newspaper
The first step is to choose a right newspaper with good language. Then turn to the front page and read the headlines (标题) to know what has happened. As the most important things are put on the front page, it’s easy to find out what you’re interested in and then turn to the page to read it completely. There is no need to look through all the articles.
The second step is to read newspapers every day. Remember words through context (上下文) in which these words may appear repeatedly. Once they appear several times, you will remember them easily. Don’t look up every unknown word in your dictionary. You can try to guess the meaning between sentences. Don’t give up even if your guess is wrong. Keep reading, and you will know the words very well after reading them several times in different texts.
Reading English newspapers makes us knowledgeable. It can not only help us know what is happening in the world but also improve our language ability.
1. Why may reading an English newspaper help students increase their vocabulary
_________________________________________________________________
2. Where are the most important things put
_________________________________________________________________
3. How often should we read newspapers according to the passage
_________________________________________________________________
4. How many pieces of advice does the writer give us
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5. What does reading newspapers make us
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B.书面表达(本题15分 )
读英文报纸是提高英语水平的一种方式。 你有没有其他方法提高英语水平 请你以“How Can We Improve Our English” 为题写一篇文章, 介绍你学习英语的方法。词数80 左右。
内容包括:
你提高英语水平的方法是什么;
就你的方法给出提高英语水平的中肯建议 (至少两条);
3. 呼吁大家好好学习英语, 找到好的方法学英语。
注意:
1. 可在内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息;
2. 不能照抄原文, 不得在作文中出现真实校名、 地名和学生的真实姓名;
3. 语句连贯, 词数80左右。
【写作指导】
第一步:审题
1.文章三要素
体裁:______________　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　
时态:______________　　　　　　　　 　　　　　　　　　
人称:______________　　　　　　　　
2.要点
（1）提高英语水平的方法
（2）提高英语水平的中肯建议
（3）呼吁大家好好学习英语, 找到好的方法学英语
3.要求
不能照抄原文，语句连贯，词数80个左右
第二步：列提纲，写出重点句子
开头: 提高英语水平的方法
主体: 提高英语水平的中肯建议(至少两条);
结尾: 呼吁大家好好学习英语, 找到好的方法学英语
参考句型：
方法：I learn English by listening to English songs.
建议1：It can’t be better if we can listen to English songs
建议2：We are supposed to watch English movies
呼吁：Let’s try to get our own ways and learn English well,shall we
第三步：连词成句， 连句成文
运用适当的连接词将以上要点连成一篇语句通顺、连贯的文章。
本文可能使用的连接词有：
first of all，what's more , in the end, in my opinion等。
满分范文参考：
How Can We Improve Our English
　　As we all know, it is not easy learn English. We are supposed to have our own way to learn it. As for me,I learn English by listening to English songs,which is not only useful but also relaxing.
In my opinion, I hold the idea that there are many excellent ways to improve our English . First of all,it can’t be better if we can listen to English songs ,which will develop our interest in English.What’s more, we are supposed to watch English movies,which can make us have a better understanding of English culture.
Different people have different ways to learn English. No matter what way it is, just keep it. Let’s try to get our own ways and learn English well,shall we