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中考英语作文话题
求助指路问路
知识梳理
01
Catalogue
Words
Phrases
Sentences
Review
Writing
Teaching Goals
语言能力:能写有关礼貌地提出请求和咨询相关问题的作文;
文化意识:通过礼貌用语的书面表达,认识到中英语言上的相似性和差异性;
思维品质:通过写有关礼貌地提出请求和咨询相关问题的作文,思考如何组织语言礼貌地表达,培养学生的思维能力、表达能力;
学习能力:写有关礼貌地提出请求和咨询相关问题的作文,积累写作技巧和锻炼写作思维,培养写作能力。
本单元介绍如何指路,以及如何表达问路句型和感谢他人。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
(1) Let me tall you how to get there.
(2) You can walk along...
(3) Turn left/right to...
(4) Go straight along...
④Shall we/I do...?
表示委婉请求的句型
①Would you mind doing ... 你介意做……吗?
②Would you please...?请……可以吗?
③Would you like sth./ to do sth.?你需要/愿意做什么吗?
⑤What/How about doing ...
问路的常用句型
Excuse me, could you please tell me how to get to the bookstore
Excuse me, could you please tell me where the bookstore is
Excuse me
adj.
sb
其他
问路时表达要委婉,要先说excuse me或者pardon me
Excuse me, could you please if there’s a bookstore near here
加上please更委婉
问路的常用句型
④Excuse me, where is the nearest...
①Excuse me, would you please show me the way to...
②Excuse me, is there a/ an... near here
③Excuse me,could you help me get/go to...
指路的常用句型
④Keep straight on until you get to...
①It’s next to/beside/across from the bank.
②Walk along/down this road/street.
③It's about two hundred meters along on the left/ right.
⑤You can take the No. +数字+ bus and get off at...
⑥Walk on and turn left/right, and you'll see it.
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道简直了!
简单句变
复合句
1) I am sorry to tell you that I have hadtrouble/difficulties with...
抱歉的告诉你,我最近遇到了...的麻烦。
2) I am sorry to bother/interrupt you,but I have somethingimportant to tell you.
很抱歉打扰你,但是我有些重要的事情要和你说。
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道简直了!
简单句变
复合句
I’m eager to get your timely help. Mytrouble is that...
我渴望得到你及时的帮助。我的问题是...
I have been troubled by the problemthat...for a long time, so I’m writing to you hoping you can do me a favor.
...一直困扰我很长时间了,所以我写信希望你能帮助我。
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道简直了!
简单句变
复合句
Thankyou for your busy schedule to read my letter . I would appreciate it if yougive me some help.
感谢你繁忙之中读我的信。如果你能给我一些帮助我将不胜感激。
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道简直了!
简单句变
复合句
What worries me most is that...,so I’mwriting the letter to ask for your help.
最让我困扰的是...所以我写信向你寻求帮助。
I would be grateful if you could...
如果你...我将十分感激。
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道简直了!
简单句变
复合句
Facedwith the above problem, I’m anxious to get your help.
面对以上困难,我急切希望得到你的帮助。
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道简直了!
简单句变
复合句
How far is your hotel from the airport Could you tell me
Could you tell me how far your hotel is from the airport
I’m very happy. I jump up and down many times.
I’m so happy that I jump up and down many times.
食材加工
Pre-writing
这味道永生难忘!
名言谚语
(3)礼貌经常可以代替最高贵的感情。——梅里美
Good manners often can instead of the most noble feelings。
(1) 礼貌之于人性如同热量之于蜡烛。——叔本华
Politeness is to the human nature as the heat to a candle。
(2) 尊敬别人就是尊敬自己。——高尔斯华绥
Respect others is respect yourself。
假如你是Mike,国庆节期间你将和父母去北京旅游。你从网上获得了Summer Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节:
1.How far is the hotel from the airport
2.How can you get to the hotel
3.Do they offer free breakfast
4.Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay
Task:Writing
Pre-writing
Pre-writing
做法指导
写作指导:该文应主要使用第一人称来完成,时态以一般现在时为主,要覆盖文中所提及的所有要点,保证内容完整,结构清晰条理。
假如你是Mike,国庆节期间你将和父母去北京旅游。你从网上获得了Summer Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节:
1.How far is the hotel from the airport
2.How can you get to the hotel
3.Do they offer free breakfast
4.Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay
细节分析
Pre-writing
一般现在时
需要询问的一些内容
食材加工
写作体裁
应用文:书信类
Pre-writing
就我自己也很美味哦!
假如你是Mike,国庆节期间你将和父母去北京旅游。你从网上获得了Summer Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节:
第一步:确定写作体裁
Pre-writing
写作结构
食材加工
假如你是Mike,国庆节期间你将和父母去北京旅游。你从网上获得了Summer Hotel的部分信息。请你写一封电子邮件给该宾馆的经理,介绍你的行程并咨询如下相关细节:
1.How far is the hotel from the airport
2.How can you get to the hotel
3.Do they offer free breakfast
4.Is there a discount(折扣)for a long stay
开头已给出
正文
结尾
第二步:确定写作结构
多吃点!
署名
日期
食材加工
Pre-writing
have got some information
have some questions
reply to one’s e-mail
plan to do sth
主要活动
开头
正文
结尾
说明来由和请求
说明具体的问题
表示感谢和期望
单词、固定短语
这味道还不错!
would like to know
Last not but least
Thanks for
look forward to
a discount for a long stay
第三步:搭配单词固定短语
looking forward to
模拟练习
02
【典型例题】
你有两张红旗剧院的戏剧票,想要邀请Rob和你一起去看。请你给他写封信,邀请他并告诉他具体该怎么到达红旗剧院。
【优秀作文】
Dear Rob,
Are you free next Sunday There will be a concert in Hongqi Theater. I have two tickets and I hope you can go with me. Now let me tall you how to get there.
First , you can walk along Zhaowuda Road after you leave your home. Then turn left onto Third Street. Go straight along Third Street. When you get to Walking Street,turn right. Then go along the street until you see Hongqi Theater on your right.
I will meet you at the gate of Hongqi Theater.
假设你是李华,你的美国朋友 Tom 上个月来到北京学习。七月份你将去北京参加暑期中学生英语演讲比赛 (speech contest),你在资料搜集、语言运用等方面遇到了困难。请根据以下要点给 Tom 写一封电子邮件:(求助信)
1. 询问 Tom 的生活和学习情况;
2. 谈谈你的困难并请 Tom 帮忙;
3. 告诉 Tom 你打算赛后去看他。
注意:
1. 词数 120—150;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
How is it going these days I keep wondering how you feel about your school life in Beijing. Have you got used to the life in China Are you enjoying your life I hope you are.
Let me tell you a piece of good news:I’m going to take part in an English speechcontest of middle school students in July in the coming summer vacation. So I’m busy preparing for it. But now I have some difficulty in collecting useful information and using proper English word to express my thoughts. Besides, I really want to improve my spoken English, especially the pronunciation and intonation(语调). Of course, as a nativeEnglish speaker, you can give me some suggestions.
In addition, I’m going to visit you after the contest. I’m sure we will have a wonderfultime together in Beijing! I can hardly wait to see you! I am looking forward to your early reply.
我就要去北京了。虽然我还没开始出发,但是我已经制定好计划了。我有五天的旅行时间。但是我只能在北京呆三天,因为第一次和最后一天的时间我都要花在交通上。第一天,我会早早地坐车到广州,然后乘坐下午1:00的飞机。大约下午4点我就可以到达北京了。然后我会坐地铁去我姑姑家。经过一个晚上的休息 后,第二天我就会去爬长城。第三天,我会去参观天安门,故宫和颐和园。晚上,我要去参观国家体育场。第四天,我会参观一下北京的老城区,尝尝当地美食。第五天,我就得回家了。这是我的计划
I am going to Beijing. Although I haven’t set out, I have made my travel plan. There are five days for me to travel. But I only have three days to have a good look of Beijing, because the first and the last day I have to spend on the transportation. The first day, I will start early to Guangzhou by bus and then take the plane for 1:00pm. Then I can be Beijing about 4:00pm. Then I will take the subway to my aunt’s home. After a whole night rest, I will go to climb the Great Wall the second day. The third day, I will visit Tian An Men, the Imperial Palace and the Summer Palace. In the evening, I will visit national stadium. The fourth day I will visit some old town in Beijing and eat some local food. The fifth day, I have to go back home. This is my plan.
thanks