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中考英语作文话题
个人变化类
知识梳理
01
“我们怎样变化的”,主要围绕人或事物从过去到现在所发生的变化展开描述。写作时首先要理清写作的逻辑顺序,注意过去与现在的对比。在句式的使用上,既可用used to do/be…,but now…,也可以直接用一般过去时描述过去的情况,用一般现在时描写现在的情况,各种句式交替使用,以免文章显得呆板。
写作此类话题作文的常用表达有:
(1) …used to do/be
(2) How/what about you
(3) …has/have changed a lot in the last few years.
appearance
personality
enviroment
hobbies
n. 外表,外观
n. 人物,名人
n.兴趣爱好
n.环境,周围状况
从哪些方面描述个人变化呢?
apperance
height
of meduim height
build
heavy/fat
thin/slim
of meduim build
build
long/short hair
blond/black/red hair
straigh/curly hair
个人生活中的变化。可以从学习、工作、家庭、兴趣爱好等方面入手,描述自己在这些方面所经历的变化,并谈谈对这些变化的感受和影响。
Changes in My Life
In the past few years, my life has undergone many changes. First of all, I have completed my studies and started working. This has given me a sense of independence and responsibility that I never had before. Secondly, I got married and started a family. This has brought new challenges and joys into my life. Lastly, I have developed new interests and hobbies, such as hiking and photography. These activities have allowed me to explore new places and meet new people.
Overall, these changes have been positive and have helped me grow as a person. I have learned to adapt to new situations and embrace new experiences. While some of these changes were difficult at first, they have ultimately made me a stronger and more well-rounded individual.
难词解释:
independence [ nd p nd ns] n. 独立,自主
responsibility [r sp ns b l ti] n. 责任
challenges [ t l nd z] n. 挑战
joys [d z] n. 快乐
hiking [ ha k ] n. 徒步旅行
photography [f t gr fi] n. 摄影
adapt [ d pt] v. 适应
well-rounded [w l ra nd d] adj. 全面的,多才多艺的
我生活中的变化
我的生活在过去几年里发生了很多变化。首先,我完成了学业并开始工作。这给了我一种以前从未有过的独立和责任感。其次,我结婚并成立了家庭。这为我的生活带来了新的挑战和快乐。最后,我培养了新的兴趣爱好,比如徒步旅行和摄影。这些活动让我探索了新的地方并认识了新的人。
总的来说,这些变化都是积极的,并帮助我成长为一个更好的人。我学会了适应新的情况和接受新的经验。虽然有些变化起初很困难,但最终它们使我变得更加坚强、全面。
句型归纳
1:描述人的体型:
2:描述人的发型:
3:描述人的五官:
4:描述戴眼镜/帽子的人:
5:描述穿什么颜色衣服的人:
主语+be+形容词
主语+have/has+发型
主语+have/has+五官
主+wear/wears+glasses/hat
sb.+in+颜色
Try to write two paragraphs.
Paragraph 1: General introduction about the changes in your life
Paragraph 2: The most important change and how it happened
审题
1.审主题:
2. 审体裁:
3.审人称:
4.审时态:
5. 审要点:
我的变化
说明文
第一人称
一般过去时,一般现在时
过去与现在的对比
Follow the prompts to write an article to talk about your change.
My
change
1. Beginning
2. used to do
3. but now
4. Ending 结尾总结句
My life has changed a lot in the last few years.
I used to be____ .
I used to _______.
but now I am______
but now I _________
In a word(总之). I have become much better than before. I will keep improving myself.
外向的outgoing
有创造力的 creative
自信的 confident
善良的 kind
积极的 active
愚蠢的silly
不诚实的dishonest
沉默的 silent
孤独的 lonely
懒惰的lazy
严格的strict
吝啬的mean
安静的quiet
勇敢的 brave
聪明的smart/clever
诚实的 honest
幽默的humorous
勤奋的hard-working
personality
used to
but now
She used to hang out with friends, but now it is almost impossible.
Use “used to” and “but now” to describe the following picture.
Use “used to” and “but now” to describe the following picture.
used to
but now
She didn’t used to be popular in school, but now she gets lots of attention.
根据汉语提示完成句子。
1.他过去真的很矮。
He really short.
2.我以前在学校不受欢迎。
I to be popular in school.
3.她过去从来不敢问问题。
She was never to ask questions.
句型过关
didn’t use
used to be
brave enough
模拟练习
02
【典型例题】
请你以Changes in people’s life 为题描述最近几年人们生活上的变化。词数80词左右。
提示:1. 人们的联系方式、娱乐方式的改变
2. 人们的出行方式及居住环境的改变
【优秀范文】
Changes in people’s life
Great changes have taken place in people’s life in the last few years.
In the past people kept in touch with relatives or friends mainly by sending letters. They would listen to the radio for news and other information. Children used to go to school by bike. Big families had to share small rooms.
Now people can talk to others by telephone or on the internet at home. When they are free, they watch the news and other programs on TV. Some families are rich enough to send their children to school in their own cars. More and more people live in big and bright apartment with several rooms.
In a word, people live better than before.
俗话说,“女大十八变“。我刚刚过完我的十八岁生日。我肯定是变得更美了。(笑)我最大的改变不是在外貌上而是在思想上。我变得更加的成熟。我不再总是想着去玩而是把注意力放在学习上。我开始思考我的未来。我尽量不和父母吵架,因为我知道他们所做的都是为了我。我懂得了要孝顺父母。更重要的是,我不再欺负我的弟弟和妹妹了。我变了很多,因为我已经长大了。
There is a saying,”A girl changes fast in physical appearance from childhood to adulthood”. I just had my eighteen years birthday. It’s certain that I have grown much more beautiful now.(laugh) My biggest change is not the appearance but in mind. I have become much more mature. I don’t always think about going out to play instead of focusing my attention on study. I start considering my future. I try my best not to quarel with my parents as I know what they do is for me. I know I should filial my parents. What’s more, I don’t bully my younger sister and brother any more. I have changed a lot, because I have grown up.
现在,我是一个九年级的中学生。这也是去年的中学。因此,我必须更加努力地工作,因为我想在高中入学考试中取得好成绩。从这个学期开始,我比以前起得早,因为我想做一些更多的阅读。午饭后,我也花了一些时间在学习上。我通常在早上复习我所学的知识。晚饭后,我班在学校直到21:30。它是为学生自主学习。如果我们有什么问题我们可以问他们,我们的老师会来教室的。放学后,我不在家学习。我认为一个好的休息对我来说很重要,所以我很早就上床睡觉了。此外,由于考试,我花了少得多的时间在娱乐。我认为这对我来说不好,因为一个好的高中是我现在的首要任务。我必须最关注它。
Now, I am a middle school student in grade nine. It’s also the last year of middle school. Therefore, I must work harder this year because I want to get good scores in the senior school entrance exam. From this semester, I get up earlier than before because I want to do some more readings. After lunch, I also spend some time in study. I usually review the knowledge I learn in the morning. After dinner, I have class in school until 21:30. It’s for students to autonomous learning. Our teachers would come to the classroom, if we have any questions we could ask them. After school, I do not study at home. I think a good rest is important for me, so I go to bed early at night. Besides, due to the exam, I spend much less time in entertainment. I don’t think it’s bad for me, because a good senior school is my priority now. I must pay my most attention to it.
转眼间,你已经是一名九年级学生了。你还记得刚升入初中时的自己是什么样子吗?这两年在你身上发生了哪些变化?请以“My changes”为题写一篇英语作文,请你根据下面的要求完成这篇作文。
要求:
1. 写你三个方面的变化,用上used to结构;
2. 紧扣作文题目、语言表达准确、语意通顺连贯;
3. 词数80左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
My Changes
I’m in Grade 9 and I have changed a lot. First, I used to be thin, but now I am a little fatter. I used to have curly hair, but now I have short straight hair, because I am busy with my study. Second, I have made much progress in English. I wasn’t good at it at the beginning. But with my English teacher’s help, now I often get good scores on my English exams. What’s more, I’m more outgoing than I used to be. I was so afraid of speaking in front of people in the past, however, now I can give a speech in public confidently. Last but not least, I have made lots of friends as well.
These are my changes. What about yours
thanks