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中考英语作文积累
个人变化
知识梳理
01
外表
性格
爱好
People sure change!
our appearance
our personality
Time can change
our interest
谈谈自己的变化
I have changed
Appearances
外貌
Short, tall,
heavy thin
hair…
Personalities性格
funny ,outgoing ,serious
quiet , kind shy…
Hobbies爱好
like, enjoy…
When time goes by, we all have changed.
时光流逝,我们都在改变!
I used to ________ but now I ____________.
How I have changed
outgoing & friendly
used to have a small number of friends
hang out with friends
take up teaching
after finishing college.
used to be shy
used to stay at home alone
have lots of friends
take up doing =start doing
=a few
used to be a student
I want to be a good teacher.
He used to be____,to deal with his_______,
He took up __________after finishing college.
But now he is ____________ .
He dares to speak___________________.
has changed
in the past
shy
shyness
teaching .
not shy any more
in front of crowds
How he has changed
tons of attention
guards around him
He doesn’t have much ______time.
private
私人的
It s a lot of talent and hard work.
need
a small number of
The road to success is so difficult.
require
Only________________ people can be successful.
He used to be short, but now he is tall.
He was short when he was a child, but he is tall now.
in the past
Change in appearance
now
She had short hair when she was a child,
but she has long hair now.
She used to have short hair, but now she has long hair.
now
in the past
Jenny used to play the piano.
用used to句型说出与图片情景相符的句子。
Jenny
Mike used to wear glasses.
Mike, glasses
Peter used to play soccer.
Peter, soccer
Amy, long hair
Amy used to have long hair.
Mark used to like swimming.
Mark, like swim
but not any more, but not any longer
but now …,
Changes
话题写作
Did she use to like…
She used to like dancing.
What did he/she use to like when he/she was children
Guess:
He used to like playing soccer.
Did he use to like…
They used to like riding bikes.
Did they use to like…
变化(个人、环境)
写作时首先要理清写作的逻辑顺序,注意过去与现在的对比。在句式的使用上,既可用 used to do/be…,but now…,也可以直接用一般过去时描述过去的情况,用一般现在时描写现在的情况,各种句式交替使用,以免文章显得呆板。
话题分析
一、话题分析
本单元的话题是“谈论生活变化”。主要描述过去经常做的事,以及自己或他人过去的外貌、性格、爱好等等;描述生活中发生的变化,以及发生变化的原因。此话题主要从以下三方面设题:
①介绍自己现在和过去的变化;
②介绍家人、同学、朋友等发生的变化;
③对于身边发生的变化给出一些评论等。
写作步骤
用“总分法”描述变化
1. 总述变化。
2.分述过去和现在。
3.提出希望。
Useful expressions:
1. There have been great changes in my life in the last few years.
2. Many things have changed since I was a child.
3. How greatly I have changed in the last few years!
4. People sure have changed, and so have I.
5. It seems that I have changed a lot.
6. These years, I’m not who I used to be.
Beginning
Body
Ending
General introduction about your changes
Your biggest change and how it happened
Summary
【谋篇布局】
【审清题目】
内容:关于自己过去与现在情况的对比,重点介绍一个最主要的变化
文体:说明文
人称:以第一人称为主
时态:一般过去时(可用本单元的used to结构表示“过去常常……”)和一般现在时
【头脑风暴】
How I’ve changed!
Beginning
( topic )
Body
( changes )
Ending
(sum-up and call up )
My life has changed a lot in the past few years.
General changes (appearence,personality,hobbies ...)
The most important change,
how it happened
I hope I will ----
I will study much harder---
How I have changed!
一般过去时
一般现在时
总述观点
分述过去与现在的
生活情况
收尾
模拟练习
02
比尔 过去 现在
外貌 个子矮,短发 个子高了,长发
爱好 打篮球、看电视、网上聊天 弹钢琴、看书、散步
性格 内向 外向
写作任务
写前指导:
1.人称:第三人称
2.时态:一般现在时和一般过去时
3.结构提纲:1)开篇点题:引出谈论的话题
2)对比陈述:对比比尔过去与现在的不同之处并逐一陈述。
3)得出结论:人一定会变的。
4.语句储备: (1)…has changed a lot in the past few years.
(2) …used to…, but now…
Bill is my good friend. He has changed a lot in the last few years.
Bill used to be short and have short hair, but now he is much taller and has long hair. He used to play basketball a lot. He liked watching TV and often chatted with me on the Internet. But now he plays the piano and he likes reading books. Sometimes he often takes a walk. He used to be silent, but now he is outgoing.
People sure change.
thanks