Module 8 Accidents
Unit 3
语法精讲细练
过去进行时
【语法感悟】
1.当交通灯变红时,一辆汽车突然出现在拐角处。
While the lights were changing to red, a car suddenly appeared round the corner.
2.当亨利正试图找到那条蛇时,他的手开始剧烈地疼痛。
When Henry was trying to find the snake, his hand began to hurt badly.
3.我正试图捡起它,这时它又咬了我。
I was trying to pick it up when it bit me again.
【语法解读】
1.定义:过去进行时表示过去某个时间点或某个时间段正在发生的事情或进行的动作。
结构 was/were+v.-ing
基本句式 肯/否定句:主语+was/were(not)+v.-ing +其他. 一般疑问句:Was/Were+主语+v.-ing +其他
2.过去进行时用法:
(1)表示在过去某一时间正在进行的动作,表示过去的时间状语有then, at that time,this time, yesterday 等。
*I was doing my homework when my mother came to home.
我母亲到家时我正在做作业。
(2)叙述在过去的同一时间都在进行的几个动作,通常用While。
*I was studying at college while my brother was teaching at university.
我在大学读书时我哥在大学教书。
(3)表示在过去某段时间内一直持续进行的动作。
*They were working yesterday, so they didn’t have dinner.
他们昨天一直工作,所以没吃晚饭。
3.when与while辨析
when和while引导的从句在用法上的区别
when while
when引导的时间状语既可以指时间点,也可以指时间段 while引导的时间状语只指时间段
when从句中的动词可以是延续性动词,也可以是终止性动词 while从句中的动词必须是延续性动词
when从句的动作和主句动作可以同时发生,也可以先后发生 while强调主句动作发生在从句动作发生的过程中或与从句动作同时发生
【语法精练】
Ⅰ.用所给单词的适当形式填空
1.At 4 o’clock yesterday afternoon, my father was waiting(wait) for me outside the school gate.
2.Mr Li was reading (read)a story to a student when I entered the classroom this morning.
3.My father was reading newspapers while my grandma was watching(watch) an opera.
4.(2023·石家庄期末)As the Chinese national flag was rising (rise), I was so happy that I cried.
Ⅱ.翻译句子
1.上星期六这个时间,他们也在踢足球。
They were playing football this time last Saturday, too.
2.昨天的这个时候我正在听音乐。
I was listening to music this time yesterday.
3.我在骑车时把腿摔伤了。
I hurt my leg when I was riding my bike.
写作素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
主题:本模块写作情境属于“人与社会”主题范畴中的“社会、历史与文化”,涉及子主题“公共秩序与法律法规”。
内容:描述事故发生的起因、经过和结果,强调安全的重要性。
要求:正确运用过去时或过去进行时描述突发事件或事故信息。思路要清晰,层次要分明。写作时抓住记叙文的六要素。
典例研磨——示范引领
假如你是学校英语报的记者,目睹了一起交通事故。请你根据下面的要点提示,以A Traffic Accident 为题写一篇80词左右的英语短文,报道一下这次交通事故的具体情况。
要点提示:
1.时间:昨天早晨
2.地点:新华路
3.原因:汽车司机疲劳驾驶,撞到了一个在等待过马路的女孩
4.结果:女孩受伤严重,被送到医院
5.你的感想……
Step 1 三定审题
1.定人称:以第三人称为主
2.定时态:以一般过去时为主
3.定核心:描述昨天发生的一起事故
Step 2 谋篇布局
Step 3 遣词造句
推敲词汇:
1.可怕的 terrible
2.交通事故 traffic accident
3.在新华路 on Xinhua Road
4.等待做某事 wait to
5.过马路 cross the road
6.变成 change to
7.及时 in time
8.有一点 a bit
9.在巨痛之中 in great pain
基础句式:
1.一个女孩正等待过马路。
A girl was waiting to cross the road.
2.交通灯正要变成红色。
The lights were changing to red.
3.她后面的汽车没有及时停下。
The car behind her didn’t stop in time.
4.司机有点疲劳。
The driver was a bit tired.
5.我希望像这样的事情永远不要再发生。
I hope things like this will never happen again.
升级句式:
1.将基础句式1&2用连词while升级
A girl was waiting to cross the road while the lights were changing to red.
2.将基础句式3&4用because合并成一句
The car behind her didn’t stop in time because the driver was a bit tired.
Step 4 润色成篇
A Traffic Accident Yesterday morning, I saw a terrible traffic accident on Xinhua Road. A girl was waiting to cross the road while the lights were changing to red①. The car behind her didn’t stop in time because the driver was a bit tired②. It hit the girl and she lay on the ground in great pain.Someone called the police and the girl was taken to the hospital. A few minutes later, two policemen came and asked the driver some questions about the accident. I hope things like this will never happen again③. ①恰当运用一般过去时以及while引导的时间状语从句,交代了事故发生的时间、地点、人物等背景。 ②because引导的原因状语从句交代了事故的起因。 ③运用I hope...表达了作者的愿望。
实战写作——迁移创新
根据提示写一篇80词左右的英语短文。
几个男孩在街上踢足球,一位老人提着篮子经过,被飞来的足球击中,老人的帽子和篮子掉落在地。孩子们向老人认错。老人原谅了他们,并嘱咐他们不要在街上踢足球。
英语提示:a few boys,play football,in the street,an old man,have a basket in his hand,pass by,stop playing,say sorry,tell them not to play,never play football,carry the basket
要求:
1.要点齐全,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2.合理想象,适当发挥;
3.词数:80 左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【参考范文】
Yesterday, I saw an accident on my way home.A few boys were playing football in the street.They had a good time.Suddenly an old man who had a basket in his hand was passing by.The ball hit him.His cap and basket fell onto the ground.
The boys stopped playing and ran over to the old man.They said,“Sorry! Sorry!”The old man told them not to play football in the street any more.The boys said they would never play football in the street again and they helped the old man to carry the basket.
I hope we should pay attention to the safety in the street.
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