Unit 3　What were you doing when the rainstorm came？ Section B (3a-3b) 学案（含答案） 2024-2025学年英语鲁教版八年级上册

Unit 3　What were you doing when the rainstorm came？
Section B (3a-3b)
写作素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
主题: 人与自我之生活与学习, 涉及子主题“勤学善思”
内容: 记叙过去的活动或发生的事件
指导: 1. 正确使用一般过去时和过去进行时。
2. 写人时, 关注人物的身份、经历和事迹。
3. 叙事时, 关注事情发生的前因后果及发展过程。
典例研磨——示范引领
　　在你的生活中有哪些经历是难以忘怀的 当事情发生的时候你又在做什么呢 请你根据自己的亲身体会以及下面的提示, 写一篇短文描述一件你最难忘的经历, 然后发表在某英文论坛上。不少于70词。
提示: 1. When and where did it happen
2. What were you doing when it happened
3. How do you feel about it
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Step 1　三定审题
1. 定人称: 第一人称为主
2. 定时态: 一般过去时和过去进行时为主
3. 定核心: 描述难忘的事情发生时正在做的事情
Step 2　谋篇布局
Step 3　润色成篇
　　Last Saturday afternoon, I took a walk in a nearby park. ①② When I came back③, a dog was walking③ after me. It followed③ me until I got to the door of my house. 　　While I was opening③ the door, it was sitting③ on the ground and looking at me, as if it was saying, “I got lost. Would you please help me ”“What a poor dog! ” I thought. Then I let it in and fed it with some food and water. ② After that, I put up a Dog-Found-Notice at the gate of our neighborhood. 　　The next day, the owner of the dog came to my house and picked it up. He thanked me a lot before leaving. ④ I was very happy to see the little dog go home with its owner, and I felt proud that I was able to give others a helping hand. ②④ ①开篇点题, 用确切的时间引入。 ②结构层次分明。话题引入→如何帮助小狗→感想。 ③一般过去时、过去进行时以及各种从句等使用正确、规范, 无语法错误, 彰显了作者深厚的英语语言功底。 ④结尾感情真挚。
实战写作——迁移创新
假如你是林海, 昨天下午5点, 你在放学回家的路上目睹了一场可怕的交通事故。请根据下列提示, 用英语写一篇80词左右的短文, 描述事故的经过。可适当发挥。
Weather Snowy
What happened A red car ran fast and hit a big tree.
What you did Called the police.
What you learned from it . . .
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【参考范文】
It was snowing heavily at 5 o’clock yesterday afternoon. At that time, I was on the way home from school. Suddenly, a red car appeared at a street corner. It was running very fast, and the road was icy. Unluckily, it hit a big tree. The driver tried to get out of the car, but he couldn’t open the door of the car. Seeing that, I called the police for help at once. A few minutes later, some policemen came and saved the driver. I think drivers should always drive carefully and that they should be more careful on snowy days.
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