Unit 4　An old man tried to move the mountains. 　Section B (3a-3b) 学案（含答案） 2024-2025学年英语鲁教版八年级上册

Unit 4　An old man tried to move the mountains.
Section B (3a-3b)
写作素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
主题: 人与社会之文学、艺术与体育, 涉及子主题“文化自信”。
内容: 从故事发生的时间、地点、人物和故事情节入手, 叙述故事的发展、结局和影响。
指导: 1. 正确使用一般过去时;
2. 写作时注意故事“六要素”。
典例研磨——示范引领
　　同学们都听说过神话故事《后羿射日》吧! 请根据下面提示词及图片用英语来描述这个小故事。
　　提示词: heat热, 热量; prevent阻止; creature动物; die of死于; human beings人类; protection保护
Step 1　三定审题
1. 定人称: 第三人称为主;
2. 定时态: 一般过去时为主;
3. 定核心: 故事发生的时间、地点、人物、情节等。
Step 2　谋篇布局
Step 3　润色成篇
　　Once upon a time, there were ten suns in the sky. The weather was so dry that no food would grow. ① People lived a sad life. 　　A brave man, Hou Yi, decided to save people. ② He was good at shooting, so he began to shoot the suns. ③ After shooting down nine suns, the last sun begged Hou Yi to leave him. He promised to give the earth sunshine and warmth. As soon as Hou Yi heard this, he stopped shooting. 　　From then on, the earth was better and better and people enjoyed a happy life. ④ ①灵活运用所学知识, 描述了十个太阳带来的危害。 ②运用短语decide to do sth. 描述后羿的决心。 ③运用短语be good at和连词so, 使文章更生动。 ④运用比较级句型, 描述后羿射日的影响。
实战写作——迁移创新
　　童话故事是世界文学宝库里的瑰宝, 深受全世界儿童的喜爱。你读过哪些童话故事 请把印象最深的一篇介绍给大家。
提示: 1. What’s the name of it
2. Who is in it
3. What’s the story
4. What do you think of it
要求: 1. 语言通顺, 没有语法错误。
2. 80词左右。
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【参考范文】
My favorite story
　　I love reading and I have read many books. My favorite story is The Three Little Pigs.
　　There are three little pigs in the story. They built their own houses. The first built a straw house. The second built a wooden house. The third built a house with bricks. Then a wolf came, he was hungry and he wanted to eat the pigs. He blew down the straw house, and the first little pig ran to the second little pig’s house. But the wolf blew down the wooden house, too. The two little pigs ran to the third little pig’s house. The wolf blew the house, but he couldn’t blow it down, because the third little pig’s house was very strong. At last the third little pig killed the wolf and the three little pigs lived happily together in the brick house.
　　This is my favorite story because it is interesting and it teaches us to be hard-working. There’re also many colorful pictures in it.
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