Unit 5　What’s the highest mountain in the world？Section B (3a-3b) 学案 （含答案）2024-2025学年英语鲁教版八年级上册

Unit 5　What’s the highest mountain in the world？
Section B (3a-3b)
写作素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
主题: 人与自然之自然生态, 涉及子主题“地理位置与自然景观”
内容: 介绍自然奇观、著名的景点或者是保护环境和濒危动物
要求: 1. 正确使用一般现在时;
2. 正确使用形容词和副词的比较等级;
3. 正确运用情态动词
典例研磨——示范引领
　　大熊猫是生存在我国的珍贵的(valuable)野生动物, 但它们正面临灭绝的危险。你认为我们应采取哪些措施来保护它们 根据所给提示写一篇70词左右的短文陈述你的观点。
　　提示: 过度砍伐森林以建农田或盖房子; 竹子越来越少; 猎人(hunter)为皮毛(fur)而捕杀它们。
采取措施: 建立自然保护区(reserve); 不买皮毛制的衣服。
最后结果: 大熊猫将越来越多。
Step 1　三定审题
1. 定人称: 第一或第三人称为主
2. 定时态: 一般现在时为主
3. 定核心: 陈述大熊猫濒危的原因和应采取的保护措施
Step 2　谋篇布局
Step 3　润色成篇
　　Pandas are valuable but endangered animals. They are in great danger today. ① 　　Why are pandas in danger ② Many years ago, people cut down too many forests to make farmland or build houses. Bamboo forests are getting fewer and fewer. Also, hunters kill pandas for their fur. ③ 　　Now, it’s time to take action to protect pandas. ② We should build more panda reserves, and teach people not to buy clothes made of animal fur. 　　If we follow these rules, we will have more and more pandas in the near future. ④ ①连词but和形容词great的运用使导入简练直接 ②第二、三段主题句的运用, 使文章结构、内容清晰有条理 ③副词Also的运用使陈述简洁、连贯 ④结尾句运用“主将从现”句型, 号召大家落实到行动中去
实战写作——迁移创新
你听说过某些濒临灭绝的动物吗 请以“Why should we protect wild animals ”为题, 用英语写一篇短文, 说明为什么要保护野生动物。词数不少于100。
写作提示: 1. 为什么有些野生动物处于危险之中;
2. 为什么保护野生动物很重要;
3. 我们应该采取什么措施来保护野生动物。
提示词汇: endangered, tiger, panda, destroy(破坏), fur, plant, tree, build a birdhouse
Why should we protect wild animals
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【参考范文】
Why should we protect wild animals
　　Do you know of any endangered animals Why are they in danger
　　I think there are many endangered animals in the world, such as tigers and pandas. When farmers cut down trees, tigers can no longer hide. Many tigers are killed by people who want to sell their fur for money. And there are few places where pandas can live.
　　We could not live without plants and animals around us. So protecting wild animals is very important. We must keep plants from being destroyed and stop animals from being killed. If each of us can plant a tree and build a birdhouse, the world will be more beautiful. It is very easy and useful.
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