鲁教版八年级上册Unit 8 I’ve had this bike for three years. Section B (3a-3b) 学案

Unit 8　I’ve had this bike for three years.
Section B (3a-3b)
写作素养进阶
主题分析——指明方向
主题: 人与社会之社会服务与人际沟通, 涉及子主题“家乡和社会的变迁”
内容: 1. 描述身边的环境, 人和事物的变化;
2. 表达自己的感受。
指导: 1. 正确运用现在完成时;
2. 写作时要注意描述环境, 人和事物的变化, 在结尾处恰当表达出自己的感受。
典例研磨——示范引领
　　校英语报此次征文的主题是“家乡的变化”, 请你根据下面的提示完成短文, 并向校英语报投稿。
提示: 1. What did your hometown look like in the past
2. What does your hometown look like now
3. What do you think of these changes
要求: 1. 语句通顺, 符合逻辑, 可适当发挥;
2. 80词左右。
Step 1　三定审题
1. 定人称: 以第三人称为主
2. 定时态: 以一般过去时和现在完成时为主
3. 定核心: 描述家乡的变化。
Step 2　谋篇布局
Step 3　润色成篇
　　My hometown has changed a lot in recent years. ① In the past②, there weren’t many tall buildings in the city and the buildings were old. But now② many new and tall buildings have been built. In my memory② there was only one small park in the city. But now② I can find big and beautiful parks in different areas of the city. The roads were dirty and narrow in the past②, but now② they have become clean and wide. I think such developments are good, and I hope the future of my hometown will be better and better. ③ ①导入话题: 家乡发生了很大变化。 ②过去和现在的家乡情况对比: 大楼、公园、道路。 ③表达祝愿: 希望家乡越来越好。
实战写作——迁移创新
　　假如你是李华, 你所在的学校将举行一次英语演讲比赛。请你结合以下思维导图, 以“I’m proud of our country”为题写一篇80词左右的演讲稿, 简要阐述中国这些年在环境、传播中国文化以及太空工业等方面的发展与变化, 并谈谈你的感受。
内容包括:
参考词汇: be proud of为……感到自豪　industry工业　take place发生　launch发射
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【参考范文】
I’m proud of our country
　　Hi, everyone. It’s my great honor to give a speech here.
　　Obviously, great changes have taken place in China these years. For example, the environment has changed for the better since the government took some useful measures. Clear rivers and blue skies return to our life. At the same time, Chinese culture spreads quickly around the world, which makes more foreigners interested in it. What’s more, China has made great progress in its space industry. Many spaceships have been successfully launched, making China’s space dream a reality.
　　I’m proud of our country and I hope I’ll be the pride of our country in the future.
　　That’s all. Thanks for your listening.
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