2024年中考英语模拟真题速递：书面表达(江苏专用)（含解析）

书面表达16篇
1．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）心若芬芳花自开。生活中总有一些瞬间让我们心生欢喜，一杯热茶、一次偶遇、亦或是一次成功……
某英文网站正在开展以“我的小欢喜”为主题的征文活动。请你根据提示问题，用英语写一篇短文投稿，分享一次让你心生欢喜的经历。谈一谈为什么让你欢喜以及你的收获。
注意：
1. 内容自拟，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 词数在 100个左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
3. 短文中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4. 短文必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
提示问题：
* What happened
* Why were you happy then
*What have you learned from the experience
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it.
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【答案】例文
Happiness is always around us if we put our heart into it.
In the final exam of last term, I failed my English exam. I was so depressed that I haven’t talked to anyone
for two days. My parents worried about me and they tried to comfort me. They told me failure didn’t mean the end of the world. I could use this opportunity to improve my English and learn a lot from the failure. I was moved by them and promised I would do better next time.
I felt my parents’ deep love and got power from their words from this experience.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本题为材料作文；
②时态：文章主要是对过去经历的回忆，时态应用一般过去时；
③提示：写作行文思路应根据所给问题提示展开。
[写作步骤]
第一步，叙述自己的一次经历；
第二步，描述当时的心情；
第三步，谈谈自己对此次经历的感想。
[亮点词汇]
①worry about担心
②learn a lot from从……学习
[高分句型]
①I was so depressed that I haven’t talked to anyone for two days.（so...that引导结果状语从句）
②I was moved by them and promised I would do better next time.（宾语从句）
2．（2024·江苏无锡·三模）2024无锡马拉松备受关注。迷人的春日美景与精彩的奔跑盛会完美相融。以一赛，见一城。锡马的十年，也是无锡快速发展的十年。在衣食住行等方面，无锡都呈现出了崭新的面貌。2025年，锡马将开启它的第二个十年。请你结合无锡的城市优势和马拉松给人们带来的积极影响，写一篇演讲稿，号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马，体验奔跑在最美樱花赛道上的幸福愉悦。
注意事项：1. 词数100个左右，演讲稿开头
与结尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
2. 图中内容为非限定性内容，可作参考；
3. 演讲稿中不得使用真实的个人姓名或学校名称；
4. 演讲稿必须写在答题卡指定的位置。
Dear friends,
The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon!
Thanks for your listening.
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
The 2024 Wuxi Marathon was successfully held on March 24, 2024. Over 260,000 people from 48 countries and areas attended the event. It’s an ideal choice for both first-time runners and experienced athletes.
Wuxi is a beautiful city which is located in Jiangsu Province, China. The city is famous for its natural scenery. One of the most popular attractions in Wuxi is Lake Taihu, a large freshwater lake. Besides, the climate in Wuxi is fit for a happy living. The weather here is always warm and there is much rain. Moreover, Wuxi is a remarkable place that produces outstanding people. Many famous persons were born here, such as Xu Xiake, Xu Beihong, etc.
By the way, running a marathon is a challenging but beneficial experience that can have a huge impact on our physical and mental health.
I hope all of you can take part in the 2025 Wuxi Marathon!
Thanks for your listening.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿；
② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③ 提示：根据思维导图中的内容进行介绍，号召更多的人来参加明年3月的锡马，可适当添加细节，但要突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出演讲主题，介绍无锡城市的一些优势；
第二步，介绍马拉松给人们带来的积极影响；
第三步，书写结语。希望更多的人来参加2025年3月的锡马。
[亮点词汇]
① be located in位于
② be fit for适合
③ moreover除此之外
④ produce outstanding people培养优秀人才
⑤ by the way顺便一提
⑥ have a huge impact on...对……有积极影响
[高分句型]
① One of the most popular attractions in Wuxi is Lake Taihu, a large freshwater lake.（“one of the +形容词最高级+可数名词复数”句型）
② Moreover, Wuxi is a remarkable place that produces outstanding people.（that引导定语从句）
③ By the way, running a marathon is a challenging but beneficial experience that can have a huge impact on our physical and mental health.（动名词短语作主语及that引导定语从句）
3．（2024·江苏泰州·二模）梦想，是夜空中最亮的那颗星，指引着我们前行的方向。某英文报正在举行题为“My dream”的征文活动，请根据以下问题提示，写一篇英语短文向该报投稿。
提示：
1. What is your dream
2. Why do you have the dream
3. How will you realize your dream (schoolwork, after-school activities, …)
注意：
1. 词数100左右；
2. 不得透漏学校、姓名等相关个人信息；
3. 信息完整，适当发挥，结构连贯，书写工整。
My dream
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【答案】例文
My dream
I want to be an astronaut. I love looking at the stars and space. I think it’s where we can learn a lot about life.
I have two reasons for this dream. First, I like hearing about astronauts and their exciting trips in space. They make me want to learn more. Second, I want to help find new things that can help everyone.
To make my dream come true, I will study hard in science and math. These subjects are important for exploring space. I will also join a club about stars and take part in science events. I will read books about space and keep up with the latest news about space travel.
Dreams are like the brightest stars. They show us the way to our goals. I will work hard to touch the stars and make my dream happen.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时和一般将来时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍自己的梦想，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，介绍自己的梦想是什么；
第二步，介绍自己为什么有这个梦想；
第三步，介绍自己会如何实现自己的梦想；
第四步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①come true实现
②take part in参加
[高分句型]
①Second, I want to help find new things that can help everyone. (that引导的定语从句)
②To make my dream come true, I will study hard in science and math. (动词不定式作目的状语)
4．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）李大钊曾说：“青年者，国家之魂”。一个民族只有寄望青春、永葆青春，才能兴旺发达。“Live life to the fullest, you only live once”，作为青少年的我们更应该燃烧自己的青春年华，才能不负自己，不负时代赋予我们的责任。请以“Live Life to the Fullest”为题，分享自己应该如何度过充实而有意义的学习生活。
Live Life to the Fullest
健康生活 1. 早睡早起，睡眠充足 2. 健康饮食，坚持锻炼 3. ……
高效学习 1. 制定计划， 合理安排时间； 2. 上课认真听讲，主动请教问题； 3. ……
乐观向上 1. 相信自己，积极迎接挑战； 2. 面对困难，坚持不懈； 3. ……
要求：
1)表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3)词数：90词左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）;
4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
Live Life to the Fullest
As teenagers, we should make full use of time and live life to the fullest.
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【答案】例文：
Live Life to the Fullest
As teenagers, we should make full use of time and live life to the fullest.
First of all, we should have a healthy lifestyle. It’s good for us to get up and go to bed early. Eating healthily and keeping exercising are also important. Besides, we need to relax ourselves after one day’s hard work.
Secondly, make plans in advance and manage our time well. In class, we must listen to the teachers carefully. When we have some questions, turn to the teachers for help. Also we should go over what we have learned as often as possible and prepare for the new lessons in time.
Last but not least, be confident! Be active to take new challenges. No matter what difficulties we face, don’t give up. We can also develop some hobbies to make our life more interesting.
Live life to the fullest so that we can become versatile talents and make our country strong and prosperous.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：写作要求已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点，适当增加细节，表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步，点明文章主题，表面青少年应当使自己的生活充实；
第二步，具体阐述在健康生活、高效学习、乐观向上三个方面应当怎样做；
第三步，结尾再次回应主题。
[亮点词汇]
①make full use of 最大程度利用
②as often as possible 尽可能经常地
[高分句型]
It’s good for us to get up and go to bed early.（it作形式主语）
No matter what difficulties we face, don’t give up.（no matter what…句型）
5．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）随着现代科技的发展，机器人已经来到我们身边，给人们的生活带来便利。请根据下表所述内容，介绍家用机器人的基本情况，并就如何更好地利用机器人为我们服务提出建议。
简介 家用机器人外观时尚，使用范围广泛，受到人们的欢迎。
主要功能 1. 煮饭、打扫房间；2. 照顾、陪伴老人；3. 拨打电话处理紧急事件，拯救生命。
存在问题 1. 技术不够成熟，存在安全隐患；2. 价格偏高，普通家庭消费不起。
你的建议 ……（至少两点）
要求：
1. 表达清楚，语法正确，上下文连贯；
2. 必须包括表格中所有的相关信息，并适当发挥；
3. 词数100左右（文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数）；
4. 不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。
参考词汇：家用机器人 household robots, 紧急事件 emergency
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
With the development of modern science and technology, robots have entered our lives, which brings great convenience to us.
Household robots, which are widely used and popular with people, look cool and have many types. They have many functions. Firstly, they can be used to cook and clean rooms. Secondly, they can help to take care of the elder people, and spend time chatting or playing chess with them. Moreover, they can even make calls for help in case of emergency and save lives.
On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. What’s more, the price is too high for common people to afford one.
Personally, robots should be used to improve people’s lives. Meanwhile, more advanced technology should be developed to ensure the safety and the price is expected to be reasonable as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：根据提示内容介绍家用机器人的基本情况，并就如何更好地利用机器人为我们服务提出建议。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题；
第二步，介绍家用机器人的简介和主要功能；
第三步，介绍家用机器人存在的问题；
第四步，介绍你的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be used to do被用来做某事
②in case of emergency在紧急情况下
③on the other hand另一方面
[高分句型]
①Household robots, which are widely used and popular with people, look cool and have many types. (which引导的定语从句)
②On the other hand, the technology used in household robots is not developed well enough to solve all the safety problems. (过去分词作定语)
6．（2024·江苏南通·二模）你们班想在毕业之前分小组为学校做一些有意义的事，如种植纪念树、捐书给图书馆、 拍摄宣传学校的视频等。假如你是李华，你们组打算邀请交换生Peter一起参加这次活动。 请你根据提示，用英文写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动安排及你们组的打算。
提示词语：memorial 纪念的
提示问题：
● What activities does your class plan to do Why
● When and where will your class organize them
● Which activity will your group choose Why
注意：
1. 表达中必须包括所给要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。
2. 词数90左右，开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。
3. 表达中请勿提及真实校名和姓名。
Dear Peter,
How is everything going _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Peter,
How is everything going I’m writing to invite you to join us.
Our class wants to do something meaningful for our school before we graduate. We have decided to plant a memorial tree, donate books to the library, and make a video to promote our school. These activities are not only a way to give back to our school but also to create lasting memories for our class. We have scheduled these activities next week at our school.
We all know that trees can protect us from sand and make our environment beautiful. So our group decide
to plant a tree for our school. We will meet at the school gate at 7 o’clock next Saturday. Then we will go to the playground. We will dig a hole, plant a tree and water it.
We sincerely invite you to join us for this special activity. Your presence would mean a lot to us.
Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示的内容，适当增加细节，并且突出写作的要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。直接说明要邀请Peter参加活动；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。重点介绍班级活动内容、时间、地点及原因，小组活动内容及原因；
第三步，书写结语。表达希望Peter可以参加活动。
[亮点词汇]
①meaningful有意义的
②promote推广
③give back回报
④create lasting memories创造持久的回忆
[高分句型]
We all know that trees can protect us from sand and make our environment beautiful. (宾语从句)
7．（2024·江苏无锡·二模）童年是每个人的生命里最具有怀念意义的片段。六一将至，你校英语俱乐部即将举行主题为“回首童年定格美好”的展览，邀请俱乐部成员提供一件生活中的物品参展，并撰写展品介绍，分享你与它的故事。假设你是俱乐部的一名成员，请根据你的展品写一篇英文介绍。
注意事项：
1.介绍须自拟，要求观点明确、语句通顺、意思连贯、符合题意；
2.词数在100个左右，介绍首尾已在答题卡上给出，不计入总词数；
3.介绍中不得使用真实的个人及学校信息；
4.介绍必须写在答题卡的指定位置上。
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【答案】例文
I’m happy to take part in the “Happy Childhood” show. For this show, I have chosen to provide a bamboo flute.
The flute was a gift from my mother on my seventh birthday. It is an instrument made out of a single piece of bamboo. It is dark brown and has eight holes, which help make beautiful music.
I chose this flute because it carries many memories from my childhood. I remember playing it for hours and hours. The music is so peaceful and calming that it holds a special place in my heart. The flute helps me learn a lot about music, culture and history. It is my friend.
I hope everyone to the show will have a good time.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：介绍自己与参展作品之间的故事，注意要突出重点，保证逻辑清晰，语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出参展话题，以及参展的作品；
第二步，详细介绍参展的作品；
第三步，讲述自己参展作品之间的故事；
第四步，总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①be made out of由……制成
②carries many memories from my childhood承载了许多童年的回忆
③learn a lot about...学习很多关于……的知识
[高分句型]
①It is dark brown and has eight holes, which help make beautiful music.(定语从句)
②I chose this flute because it carries many memories from my childhood.(原因状语从句)
③The music is so peaceful and calming that it holds a special place in my heart.(结果状语从句)
8．（2024·江苏泰州·二模）在学习和生活中，能够全身心地投入到一件事情中去，享受做事情的过程，是一种幸福!但求耕耘，不问收获！学校英文网站正在以“全身心投入 (Devotion)”为主题的征文活动。假如你是Jim，请根据以下提示，用英语写一篇短文投稿：
注意：1.文中不能出现真实姓名、校名等信息；
2.词数100词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Devotion
I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】范文：
Devotion
I’m glad to share my ideas about my devotion in my life. Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life.
One day, I saw some of my schoolmates painting in the art room. The colorful pictures caught my attention immediately. I was so drawn to the beauty in front of me that I joined the Painting Club. After that, no matter what happened, I still was on time to each art lesson and finished each painting carefully.
By doing this, I developed my ability and decided that I wanted to completely devote myself to painting. Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已经给出，考生要注意不要遗漏信息提示，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图。表明自己全心投入到画画中去；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述自己是如何爱上绘画的以及自己的具体做法；
第三步，书写结语。简单地阐述自己在这次经历中的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①devote oneself to全身致力于
②in front of在……之前
③on time按时
④not only…but also…不仅……而且……
[高分句型]
①Five years ago, I started to devote myself to painting, which turned out to be one of the most important experiences in my life. （which引导的非限制性定语从句）
②Not only did I win countless awards but also my painting journey helped me grow into a better person.（倒装句）
9．（2024·江苏常州·二模）很多家长喜欢给孩子挑选衣服，至少会建议孩子该穿什么。随着年龄的增长，孩子们对此会有不同的看法，有的孩子赞同，有的孩子不赞同，对此你有什么看法？
请用英语写一篇短文表达你的观点。
内容包括：
1. Should parents choose your clothes
2. Why do you think so
注意：
1. 词数 100左右;
2.开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
Should parents choose your clothes
Many parents choose their children's clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. Is it right for them to do so
In my opinion,
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【答案】例文
Many parents choose their children’s clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. ls it right for them to do so In my opinion, parents should choose children’s clothes. Their advice is helpful. Parents can help us choose the right clothes because they have more experience. It is part of their job just like making sure we can cat a healthy diet. As they are usually paying, it makes sense that parents should offer advice.If parents don't help us choose clothes, we may not wear things wisely, like a pair of shorts in the cold day. Besides, parents can teach us to dress properly to show respect at some special events.Choosing clothes can be a two-way effort. Children say what they prefer but parents have the final decision. It’s not just about what you wear but how you wear it.
例文
Many parents choose their children’s clothes, or at least advise their children what to wear. ls it right for them to do so
In my opinion, parents shouldn’t choose children’s clothes. It's your own decision.You should decide because you're the one wearing the clothes. Parents don’t always understand what children like or how to follow the fashion. What’s more, choosing your own clothes is an important step towards becoming independent and self-confident.
Choosing clothes can be fun and creative, and allows you to express yourself and develop your own style.
For some people, clothing is a way of showing you belong to a certain group. In addition, if children choose
their clothes, they are more likely to wear them, It means less wasted money.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；
②时态：时态为一般现在时；
③提示：在写作时注意阅读题目要求，把要点和个人观点写进去，并注意衔接，保证条理清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步，引出话题，介绍很多家长喜欢给孩子挑选衣服，至少会建议孩子该穿什么；
第二步，表达赞同或不赞同的原因；
第三步，书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①at least至少
②What’s more更重要的是
③be likely to可能
[高分句型]
①Parents can help us choose the right clothes because they have more experience. (原因状语从句)
②Choosing clothes can be fun and creative. (动名词作主语)
10．（2024·江苏泰州·二模）寓言故事给我们带来很多启迪，其中《龟兔赛跑》的故事耐人寻味。请以“The rabbit and the tortoise”为题，根据下面的图片和要点提示，用英语写一篇短文。
要点提示：
1. Describe the story of “The rabbit and the tortoise”.
2. Explain the influences that the story has on you.
写作要求：
1. 内容必须包括所给要点，可适当拓展；
2. 词数100左右。要求表达清晰，过渡合理，衔接自然；
3. 文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息。
The rabbit and the tortoise
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【答案】例文
The rabbit and the tortoise
One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. So they started at the same time. The rabbit thought he was sure to be the winner. But the tortoise was never discouraged and kept on moving forward as fast as he could. As the rabbit turned round a corner, he found the tortoise far behind him. He decided to have a rest. Unluckily, he fell asleep and the tortoise went beyond him.
After reading this story, I have learnt a lot from the tortoise. I am not good at my studies. But I will never give up. Besides, the story also tells me I shouldn’t look down on anyone else.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇寓言故事，为看图作文；
②时态：时态为一般过去时；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，介绍寓言故事《龟兔赛跑》；
第二步，具体阐述写作内容，逐一描述图片内容；
第三步，书写结语。表达自己从这个故事中所获。
[亮点词汇]
①at the same time同时
②kept on moving forward继续前行
[高分句型]
①One day, a rabbit and a tortoise decided to have a race to see who was faster than the other. （who引导的宾语从句）
②They agreed that the one who first got to the big tree in the distance was the winner. （that引导的宾语从句）
11．（2024·江苏·二模）尝试是一种积极的生活态度，它让我们在面对困难时不退缩，不逃避，而是
积极地去寻找解决问题的方法。只有敢于尝试，我们才能突破自我，实现更大的成就。请你结合自身体验描述一次挑战自我的经历。内容包括：
1. 你曾经尝试过做什么？
2. 你是如何突破自我的？
3. 这次尝试给你的启示是什么？
注意：
1. 词数：100左右(已给出的短文开头，不计入总词数)；
2. 内容完整 (照抄阅读语篇不得分)；
3. 文中不得出现与考生相关的真实姓名、校名等信息。
Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Trying is a positive attitude towards life. You would never know what you can get until you have a try.
Last term, there was a speech competition in our school. I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. With encouragement from my parents, I decided to give it a try. To prepare for the competition, I studied some speech videos carefully. Then I wrote my speech, and practiced delivering it again and again. Finally, I gave an excellent performance and won the third place. From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. It can help us find and develop our hidden talents and become more confident as well.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是材料作文；
②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述，适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步：表明写作意图。借用“尝试是一种积极的人生态度。”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步：具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——尝试的事、如何突破以及启示等均要一一阐述。
第三步：书写结语。表达“尝试新事物可以帮助我们发现和发展我们隐藏的才能，同时也让我们变得更加自信。”的美好。
[亮点词汇]
①have a try试一试
②prepare for为……做准备
③more confident更自信
[高分句型]
①I never entered a speech competition because I was afraid to speak in public. (because引导的原因状语从句）
②From this experience, I’ve learned that it’s meaningful to try something new. (现在完成时的用法)
12．（2024·江苏盐城·二模）阳光中学英语广播站推出一个专题为“My Favorite Chinese Folk Story”的栏目，请同学们介绍心中最喜欢的中国民间故事。请你就此写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：
1. What’s the main idea of the story
2. Why do you like the story
3.…
要求：不能照抄原文，不得在作文中出现学校和考生的真实信息：词数100词左右，开头已给出，不计入总词数。
My Favorite Chinese Folk Story
In the long history of China, there are many famous stories. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文
My Favorite Chinese Folk Story
In the long history of China, there are many famous stories. One of my favorite traditional Chinese stories is “Yu Gong Moves the Mountains”. Once upon a time, there was an old man named Yu Gong. Near his home stood two mountains which made it difficult for him to go outside. Therefore, he led his children to move them away. When laughed at, he replied, “My children will go on forever, but the mountains will get no bigger.” Winter left and spring came. They kept on working. Finally, a god was moved by him and took the mountains away.
This story reminds us nothing is impossible as long as we put our effort into it. We should never give up on the way of seeking light.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是篇材料作文；
②时态：本文的时态为一般过去时和一般现在时；
③提示：本文主要介绍自己心中最喜欢的中国民间故事，适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步，总述最爱的故事的名字；
第二步，详细介绍这个故事的内容；
第三步，介绍自己喜欢这个故事的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①Therefore因此
②forever永远
③as long as只要
[高分句型]
①Near his home stood two mountains which made it difficult for him to go outside（定语从句）
②This story reminds us nothing is impossible as long as we put our effort into it.（as long as引导的条件状语从句）
13．（2024·江苏徐州·二模）《环球时报》目前正举办以“My Country, My Pride”为题的征文活动，这个活动特别面向全球的青少年，鼓励他们通过文字来介绍自己深爱的祖国。请你写一篇短文投稿，从下列提示中选择两到三点适当展开，介绍你深爱的祖国。
注意：
1. 词数90左右(开头已写好，不计入总词数)；
2. 短文中不得泄露个人信息。
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country, it has a beautiful name--China. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文：
My Country, My Pride
I come from a great country, it has a beautiful name--China. It is a country with a long history and rich culture. It has amazing historical sites like the Great Wall, Forbidden City, and Terracotta Warriors. They all show the wisdom and hard work of the Chinese people.
China’s landscape is fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. Visitors often find it attractive and don’t want to leave.
The Chinese people are friendly and diligent, trying to make their country rich and powerful. I love my motherland deeply. And I am proud of its achievements. I will study hard to contribute to its future development.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主；
③提示：写作要点已给出，介绍自己的国家，注意不要遗漏材料中的内容，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我来自一个伟大的国家，它有一个美丽的名字——中国。”来引出下文对中国的介绍；
②第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“中国的历史和文化、风景名胜、中国人”三方面入手，重点介绍中国；
③第三步，书写结语。表达对祖国的爱，努力学习为祖国做贡献。
[亮点词汇]
①historical sites历史遗迹
②be proud of为……感到自豪
[高分句型]
①China’s landscape is fantastic, from its famous mountains and vast deserts to its lively cities and peaceful villages. (from…to…)
14．（2024·江苏泰州·二模）“双减”后，学校创立了许多新的社团。假如你是李华，在学校的公众号上看到社团招募新成员的信息，请用英语写一封申请信，写明你想加入的某一个或者某两个社团名称、自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
注意事项：
1. 信件需包含至少两个理由，可适当发挥，要求语句通顺，意思连贯、符合题意；
2. 文中不得提及真实的人名, 校名等相关信息；
3. 词数在100个左右，信件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account.
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m glad to see the notice on our school public account. I am so interested in basketball that I would like to join the Basketball Club.
I am a tall and strong boy. I like basketball very much because it is interesting. I often play basketball after school with my classmates and we have a lot of fun together.
There are two reasons why I want to join the Basketball Club. First, I want to lean basketball skills. Second, I hope to play some basketball games with this team and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.
I really hope I can become a member of this club.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇书信作文；
②时态：时态为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作开头以及提示要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏信息，并适当添加信息，使文章通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步，表明写作意图，直接说明来信意图来引出下文的自我介绍，直接说明自己想要参加的俱乐部；
第二步，具体介绍自身情况、加入理由以及希望。
[亮点词汇]
①be interested in对……感兴趣
②so...that...如此……以至于……
[高分句型]
①I like basketball very much because it is interesting.（原因状语从句）
②Second, I hope to play some basketball games with this team and I do enjoy the sense when we win the game.（时间状语从句）
15．（2024·江苏扬州·二模）假如你是李华，你们学校整理出一块空地，将用于拓宽学生活动和实践的空间。校英语报刊登了校方初拟的两种方案，建文化角或者菜园，向同学们征求意见。请根据提示给校报写一封信，谈谈你的想法和建议。
(1)所写内容必须包括一种方案的所有信息，可适当发挥；
(2)对你所选择的方案说明理由，并对其提出建议：
(3)文章不少于100 词，开头已给出，不计入总词数；
(4)文中不得出现真实的姓名、校名等信息。
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Comer or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文：
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m happy to hear that there is an empty area in our school for building a Culture Comer or a Vegetable Garden. In my opinion, it’s better to build A Vegetable Garden.
We are very tired from studying at school every day, so we need some relaxing time. We can work with classmates to learn farming skills in our spare time. We can grow all kinds of vegetables. We can harvest vegetables, such as tomatoes, potatoes and so on. Through labor we can also understand the hardships of our parents and the hard-won food. Not only can we form the good habit of working, we can also learn some life skills. So I suggest that we should build a vegetable garden. I hope my suggestion will be adopted.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一封书信；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：要求根据所给材料，就建文化角或菜园给出建议。写作时注意表述清晰，做到无语法和单词拼写错误。
[写作步骤]
第一步，对学校的方案表示感兴趣，并选出方案；
第二步，详述选菜园的理由，并提出建议。
[亮点词汇]
①be tired from 因……而疲劳
②hardship 困难
③hard-won 来之不易的
[高分句型]
① We are very tired from studying at school every day, so we need some relaxing time.（so连接并列句）
② Not only can we form the good habit of working, we can also learn some life skills.（倒装句）
16．（2024·江苏宿迁·二模）“天高海阔万里长，华夏少年意气扬。发愤图强做栋梁，不负年少。”《少年中国说》歌颂了少年的朝气蓬勃和发奋图强的精神风骨。《疯狂英语》杂志社正在开展以“I Have a
Dream”为题的英语征文活动。请你结合以下问题，写一篇英语征文。
1. What is your dream
2. Why do you have such a dream (at least two reasons)
3. How can you achieve your dream (at least in two ways)
注意：
（1）短文应包括表格中的全部信息并适当发挥，要求条理清楚、行文连贯、段落分明；
（2）文中不得出现真实校名、姓名；
（3）词数90左右，征文的开头已经给出，不计入总词数。
I Have a Dream
Everyone has a dream. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文:
I Have a Dream
Everyone has a dream. My dream is to become a famous pianist. I love piano and the magic sounds it makes. I have been in love with piano since my childhood. Each time my fingers touch the keys, my heart is shaking with excitement. Now playing the piano has become my habit. It can make me relaxed and forget all the worries.
Although I’ve learned the piano for almost ten years, I know there is still a long way to go. First, I should spend enough time every day to practise. Just as the saying goes, “Practice makes perfect.” Besides, going to the piano concerts is also important because it is of great help to me.
I really hope that I will become a famous pianist one day.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材：本文是一篇材料作文；
②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”；
③提示：写作要点已给出，要注意不要遗漏题目中询问的三个主要问题，并适当增加细节。
[写作步骤]
①第一步，承接开头，介绍自己的梦想及原因；
②第二步，具体阐述如何实现梦想；
③第三步，表达期许。
[亮点词汇]
①be in love with 爱上
②Practice makes perfect. 熟能生巧。
③be of great help 很有帮助
[高分句型]
①Although I’ve learned the piano for almost ten years, I know there is still a long way to go.（although引导的让步状语从句）
②Besides, going to the piano concerts is also important because it is of great help to me.（because引导的原因状语从句）