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UnitUnit9 Have you ever been to a museum
For you to consider Objectives-focus on structure, content, grammar & language Self-check Peer check Teacher’s assessment
Structure and content I write the letter into paragraphs. (1 point)
Para : I have introduced the name of the place (1 point)
Para_____:I have written all the aspects.(location/size/population/language/food,/fun places/weather) (3 points)
Para.____:I have showed my conclusion. (1 point)
My writing is tidy and clear. (1 point)
Grammar and language My expressions are right. (3 points)
There are spelling mistakes. (1 point)
I have used some good sentences. (2 point)
I have used some conjunction words and transitional sentences.. (1 point)
I have checked my word count is around . (1 point)
Total Score
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Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum
Writing Name
I. Analyze the topic
Writing Topic
Make a list of facts about your hometown or a place you have been to.Then write an article to advertise(为...做广告) your hometown or a place you have been to.
写作要求：1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.书写规范，80词左右；
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
Person：
Tense：
Text：
Details
Reader：
II. What aspects(方面) can we write in this travel article
size
location
population
Language
food
fun places
weather
best time to go
III. Make an outline
Structure：
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IV. Finish the first draft
Have you ever been to...
Size and location It is...square kilometers in size.It is in the southwest part of ... province/ China. Population and language It has a population of... Many people here speak... Food Have you ever tried ... Fun places If you like/..., you can go ... weather and best time to go The best time go there is in...because the weather in... is the best.
In a word,... is a beautiful and amazing city to visit and relax. It is worth traveling.
V. Finish the second draft(共27张PPT)
Unit 9 Have you ever been to a museum
Section B
Activity 1 :Pre-reading---Free talking
the Palace Museum
A: Have you ever been to … B:Yes, I have. / No, I haven’t.
the Terracotta Army
the Bird’s Nest
the Great Wall
A: What place have you ever been to B:I have already been to...
Activity 1 :Pre-reading---lead-in
Have you ever been to Singapore？
What do you know about Singapore？
·What kind of text might it be
An ad.
A story
news
·What might the writer write about
·Where can you probably read the text
a nature newspaper
a health website
a travelling magazine
Activity 2 :While-reading---predict
The writer writes about:
language
food
fun places
traffic
temperature（气温）
location (位置）
history
culture...
Location
Language
Food
Fun places
Temperature
Activity 2 :While-reading---Read for main ideas
Location
Language
Fun places
Temperature
Food
Activity 2 :While-reading---Read for main ideas
Location
Language
Food
Fun places
Temperature
1. Where is Singapore
2. Which is true about the language spoken in Singapore
in southeast Asia
close to the equator
not too far from China
Location
Language
Food
Fun places
Temperature
A
B
C
D
Activity 2 :While-reading---Read for details
What food can you eat in Singapore
Location
Language
Food
Fun places
Temperature
Activity 2 :While-reading---Read for details
·What fun place is mentioned(提及) in the text
see animals at night
in a more natural environment
·Why is Night Safari special
Activity 2 :While-reading---Read for details
Location
Language
Food
Fun places
Temperature
What’s the temperature in Singapore
The temperature is almost the same all year round.
Location
Language
Food
Fun places
Temperature
Activity 2 :While-reading---Read for details
Why
It is close to the equator.
When is the best time to go there
Whenever you like
equator
Activity 3 :Post-reading---Retell
How much do you know about Singapore
It is in ...
You can try different kinds of food there, such as...
The fun place is...You can visit...at night becaue...wake up....
Most people there speak...and...
The temperature is...because it is cloes to...So you can choose to go there...
Singapore is a wonderful and safe place to take a holiday.
That’s all. Welcome to Singapore!
Student A:
Student B:
Student C:
Student D:
Would you like to visit Singapore after reading this text Why
Why does the writer write this text For whom
Activity 4 :Post-reading---Read and analyze
choose a/an picture
write in attractive language
consider(考虑) readers’ interests/needs
How does the writer attract(吸引) the readers in the text
use an attractive title
use exclamation sentences(感叹句)
use the second-person prons(第二人称)
eye-catching
use description(描述) words
Why use “questions”
To attract readers’ attention.
...
Why use “you”
To get closer to the readers.
...
use questions(have you ...)
location
language
food
fun places
temperature
Activity 4 :Post-reading---Read and analyze
Activity 5 :Write---Pre-writing
China is also a great and beautiful country to take a holiday.
Activity 5 :Write---Pre-writing
Writing Topic
Make a list of facts about your hometown or a place you have been to.Then write an article to advertise(为...做广告) your hometown or a place you have been to.
写作要求：
1.条理清晰，语句通顺，语法正确；
2.书写规范，80词左右；
3.文中不得出现涉及真实的人名、地名或校名等。
Activity 5 :write
---Pre-writing
Analyze the writing topic
Person
The second& third person
Tense
The simple present/present perfect tense
Text
An ad
Reader
all the people who want to travel to this place
What can we write
Details
1.Write an ad for your hometown or a place you have been to
2.80 words
Activity 5 :Pre-writing What can we write
What aspects(方面) can we write in this travel article
A place
fun places
Activity 5 :Pre-writing What can we write
What sentence structure can we write
Size
Location
Population
Language
Food
Fun places
Weather
Best time to go
句型：
For ..., this ... in ... is a ... place to take a holiday.
It is...square kilometers in size.
It is in the southwest/southern of ... province/ China.
For thousands of tourists from China, this small island in Southeast Asia is a wonderful and safe place to take a holiday.
Singapore
Activity 5:Pre-writing What can we write
Size
Location
Population
Language
Food
Fun places
Weather
Best time to go
On the one hand, more than three quarters of the population are Chinese, so you can simply speak Putonghua a lot of the time. On the other hand, Singapore is an English-speaking country, so it’s also a good place to practice your English!
What sentence structure can we write
Singapore
句型：
1.On the one hand, ... population are..., so you can simply speak ...
On the other hand, people here speak..., it’s also a good place to practice...
2.It has a population of... Many people here speak...
3.90% of the population ...are....,so you can simply speak...
Activity 5 :Pre-writing What can we write
Size
Location
Population
Language
Food
Fun places
Weather
Best time to go
What sentence structure can we write
Singapore
句型：
Have you ever tried ...
1.Maybe you fear that ... However, you won’t have any problem finding...
2.It’s also a place to try new food, such as...
3.Whether ... or ...，you’ll find it all in ...
Have you ever tried Chinese food outside of China Maybe you fear that you won’t be able to find anything good to eat when you travel. In Singapore, however, you’ll find a lot of food from China; you won’t have any problem getting rice, noodles or dumplings. Singapore is also an excellent place to try new food. Whether you like Indian food, Western food or Japanese food, you’ll find it all in Singapore!
Activity 5 :Pre-writing What can we write
Size
Location
Population
Language
Food
Fun places
Weather
Best time to go
句型：
1.Most large cities have ... but have you been to... It is the best ... to ...
2.If you like/love/enjoy ..., you can go ...
3.There are so many fun places in ...such as...
What sentence structure can we write
Singapore
Most large cities have zoos, but have you ever been to a zoo at night Singapore has a Night Safari. It might seem strange to go to a zoo when it’s dark. However, if you go to see lions, tigers or foxes during the daytime, they’ll probably be asleep! A lot of animals only wake up at night, so this is the best time to watch them. At the Night Safari, you can watch these animals in a more natural environment than in a normal zoo.
Activity 3 :Pre-writing What can we write
Size
Location
Population
Language
Food
Fun places
Weather
Best time to go
句型：
1.One great thing about ... is that ... So you can choose to go whenever you like.
2.It’s neither cold nor hot there all year round.So you can you there...
3.The best time go there is in...because the weather in... is the best.
One great thing about Singapore is that the temperature is almost the same all year round. This is because the island is so close to the equator. So you can choose to go whenever you like — spring, summer, autumn or winter. And, of course, it’s not too far from China!
What sentence structure can we write
Singapore
Activity 5 :Pre-writing Make an outline
Structure
(结构)
Beginning:
Body:
Ending:
population and language
Lead to the topic.
Have you ever been to...(1sentence)
fun places
conclusion(总结)
In a word,... is a beautiful and amazing city to visit and relax. Welcome to...
size and location
food
weather and best time to go
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While-Writing
Activity 5 :While-writing
Activity 5 :Post-writing
a clear structure:beginning,body,ending.
correct content:size/location/population/lauguage/food,fun places/weather/best time to go
some conjunction words and transitional sentences
some good sentences
no spelling mistakes
a clear and tidy hand writing
no wrong sentences
enough words
Structure
and
content
Grammar and language
Activity 5 :Post-writing
Spelling mistakes
Wrong sentences &Punctuation mistakes
Good sentences
Conjunction words
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Check the composition
Activity 5 :Post-writing
Work in groups,correct the mistakes and appreciate(欣赏) your group members’ compositions. Then show it to the class.
Focus on: 1. structure(结构)
2. handwriting(书写)
3. points(要点)
4. grammar(语法)
5. punctuation(标点)
6. language(语言)
7. fluency(流畅度)
