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2025人教版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
建议信
写作题目
假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Jack刚刚升入高中,他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你征求建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信,主要内容包括:
1.实际上很多新生都对高中生活感到困惑,因此不必过于担心;
2.建议:(1)报名参加课外活动,结交新朋友;(2)做好日程安排,关注学习。
3.希望建议能适合他。
注意:1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. adv.事实上
2. n.(大学或高中)一年级新生
3. v.建议
4. n.日程安排
5. 对……感到困惑
6. 课外活动
7. 关注
8. 对……是适合的
9. 报名(参加课程)
10. 跟上;赶上
11. 提前
答案 1.actually 2.freshman 3.recommend
4.schedule 5.be confused about... 6.extra-curricular activities 7.focus on 8.be suitable for 9.sign up(for sth.) 10.keep up with 11.in advance
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:表示理解,表明写信目的
(1) (事实上), (很多一年级新生都对……感到困惑)high school life.
第二段:根据提示给出建议
(2)I (建议)that you (报名参加课外活动)and they can help you make more new friends.
(3)You should (做一个合理的日程安排)and (关注)your studies.
(4)You can (跟上)other classmates in the class.
(5)You’d better prepare for the new lessons (提前).
第三段:表达希望
(6)I hope my suggestions will (适合你).
答案 (1)Actually;many freshmen are confused about (2)recommend;sign up for extra-curricular activities (3)make a reasonable schedule;focus on (4)keep up with (5)in advance
(6)be suitable for you
2.句式升级
(7)将句(2)升级为含有定语从句的句子
(8)用so that合并句(3)和句(4)
答案
(7)I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities that/which can help you make more new friends. (8)You should make a reasonable schedule and focus on your studies so that you can keep up with other classmates in the class.
连句成篇
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so don’t worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
To begin with, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities that/which can help you make more new friends. What’s more, you should make a reasonable schedule and focus on your studies so that you can keep up with other classmates in the class. Last but not least, you’d better prepare for the new lessons in advance.
I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you and that you will enjoy your high school life.
Yours,
Li Hua
写作积累
建议信常用句式
写信背景(写信的缘由)
1.I’m sorry/glad to hear that... 听到……很难过/高兴
2.I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 很高兴收到你的来信,向我征求关于……的建议。
3.You said in your last letter that...你在上一封信中说……
4.I’m sorry that you are having trouble/difficulty/problems in... 你在……方面遇到麻烦/困难/问题我感到很难过。
5.I have received your letter saying that... 我已经收到你的来信,信中说……
6.You have asked me for some advice with regard to...and I will try to make some helpful suggestions. 你向我征求了一些关于……的建议,我尽力给你一些有用的建议。
写信目的
1.I am writing to express my views about/on...我写信是为了表达我对……的看法。
2.I am writing to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with.我写信是想就你所面临的问题给你一些建议。
3.I’m writing to tell you what I think of... 我写信是想告诉你我对……的看法。
4.I am writing to you for the purpose of...我写信给你的目的是……
具体建议
1.I advise/suggest/recommend that you (should) do...我建议你做……
2.I’d like to suggest/advise that...我想建议……
3.I strongly advise/recommend you to do...我强烈建议你去做……
4.If I were you, I would...如果我是你,我会……
5.Why not do... /Why don’t you do... 为什么不做……/你为什么不做……
6.What about... /How about... ……怎么样
7.When it comes to such a situation, I would like to suggest that you should...当提到这样的情况,我想建议你应该……
8.There are several simple suggestions for you. To begin with,...Moreover/What’s more,...Finally,...有几个简单的建议给你。首先……, 此外……,最后……
结尾
1.I hope you will find these ideas useful/helpful.我希望你会发现这些想法有用。
2.I hope my advice is of some help to you. 我希望我的建议对你有些帮助。
3.I hope these suggestions will be of use to you.我希望这些建议对你有用。
4.I would appreciate it if you could consider my suggestions.如果您能考虑我的建议,我将不胜感激。
5.I believe you will take my advice into account/ consideration.我相信你会考虑我的建议。
实战演练
(2024江苏南通期中)
假如你是李华,你的好友Sam给你写信说最近在中文学习上遇到了一些困难,心情很沮丧。请你给他写一封回信,内容包括:
1.提出建议(不少于两点);
2.给予鼓励。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sam,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in learning Chinese.
Yours,
Li Hua
读后续写微写作
情景导入
准备了一个月的英语演讲比赛终于比完了,你忐忑不安地走下了演讲台,回到座位上等待裁判宣布比赛结果。请根据提示写一个语段,描述你当时忐忑不安和紧张的心情。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.情感描写
1. adj.惊吓的;害怕的
2. adj.焦虑的;不安的
Ⅱ.性格描写
3. n.信心;信任
4. adj.好奇的;求知欲强的
Ⅲ.心理描写
5. 要是……会怎么样呢
答案 1.frightened 2.anxious 3.confidence
4.curious 5.what if
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.在等待结果的过程中,我非常焦虑、紧张、害怕,不停地深呼吸。
While waiting for the result, I was so , and that I constantly took a deep breath.
2.我很想知道谁会是这次英语演讲比赛的获胜者。
I was who would be the winner of the English speech contest.
3.虽然我对自己有充分的信心,但我还是忍不住想,如果我没取得好成绩怎么办。
Although I myself, I couldn’t help thinking I couldn’t get good grades.
4.我的同学可能会嘲笑我,这会让我陷入一个尴尬的境地。
My classmates might laugh at me, which would make me get into .
5.幸运的是,我流利的英语给裁判留下了好印象,我成功了。
Luckily,my on the judges and I made it.
答案 1.anxious;nervous;frightened
2.curious to know 3.had full confidence in;what if 4.an awkward situation 5.fluent English made a good impression
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用恰当的衔接词)
答案
While waiting for the result, I was so anxious, nervous and frightened that I constantly took a deep breath, and I was curious to know who would be the winner of the English speech contest. Although I had full confidence in myself, I couldn’t help thinking what if I couldn’t get good grades. My classmates might laugh at me, which would make me get into an awkward situation. Luckily,my fluent English made a good impression on the judges and I made it.
答案与分层梯度式解析
UNIT 1 TEENAGE LIFE
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
Dear Sam,
I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble in learning Chinese.I am writing to give you some advice on the problem you are faced with.
First of all, you should develop an interest in learning Chinese, and it can serve as your driving force of learning a second language. Besides, I strongly recommend you to find a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication. Last but not least, you’d better read plenty of good Chinese articles to enrich your vocabulary.
Hopefully, the advice would be helpful to you. I’m confident that you will make it as long as you find the proper ways.
Yours,
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①be faced with...面临…… ②develop an interest in... 培养对……的兴趣 ③serve as 充当……
④recommend v.建议 ⑤hopefully adv.有希望地
2.亮点句型
Besides,I strongly recommend you to find a language partner, with whom you can improve your Chinese through daily communication.(with+whom引导非限制性定语从句)此外,我强烈建议你找一个语伴,你可以通过和他/她的日常交流来提高你的汉语水平。
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