2025外研版高中英语必修第二册同步练习题--Unit 4 Part 4 Writing（含答案与解析）
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2025外研版高中英语必修第二册
Unit 4 Stage and screen
Part 4 Writing
影评
写作题目
假定你是李华,你校于世界动物日在学校礼堂放映了美国电影《一条狗的回家路》,请你根据表格中的提示,介绍并评价这部电影。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
英文名称 A Dog s Way Home
类型 剧情/冒险
导演 查尔斯·马丁·史密斯(Charles Martin Smith)
剧情 一条名叫贝拉(Bella)的狗在与主人失散后走上了一条充满未知的冒险回家路
主题 动物应该被善待;人与狗之间互通的情感;对“家”的追寻与渴望
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. v.克服(困难)
2. n.(书、电影、戏剧的)情节
3. adj.令人印象深刻的,特别吸引人的
4. adv.完全地,绝对地
5. 放弃
答案 1.overcome 2.plot 3.dazzling
4.absolutely 5.give up
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:从整体上简要介绍这部电影的相关信息
(1)A Dog s Way Home is (一部冒险影片).
(2)It (由……导演) Charles Martin Smith.
(3)The film tells the story of (一条名叫贝拉的狗).
(4)She is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles (寻找它的家).
第二段:简要介绍电影情节并对这部电影的某些方面作出评价
(5)On Bella s way home, she (克服了各种困难) and even faces the risk of losing her life.
(6)Bella (从未放弃) and finally makes her way home.
(7) (电影的情节) is touching and dazzling, and the character Bella as a dog arouses the audience s pity.
(8) The friendship (贝拉和其他角色之间) is (绝对温暖人心的).
第三段:进行总结
(9) Animals are humans friends and should (被善待).
(10)May all of the (被遗弃的狗) find their homes.
答案 (1)an adventure film (2)is directed by (3)a dog named Bella (4)to look for her home (5)overcomes various difficulties (6)never gives up (7)The plot of the film (8)between Bella and other characters; absolutely heart-warming (9)be treated kindly
(10)abandoned dogs
2.句式升级
(11)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有过去分词短语作定语的句子
(12)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (11)A Dog s Way Home is an adventure film directed by Charles Martin Smith.
(12)The film tells the story of a dog named Bella who is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles to look for her home.
连句成篇
A Dog s Way Home is an adventure film directed by Charles Martin Smith. The film tells the story of a dog named Bella who is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles to look for her home.
On Bella s way home, she overcomes various difficulties and even faces the risk of losing her life. However, Bella never gives up and finally makes her way home. The plot of the film is touching and dazzling, and the character Bella as a dog arouses the audience s pity. Besides, the friendship between Bella and other characters is absolutely heart-warming.
Animals are humans friends and should be treated kindly. May all of the abandoned dogs find their homes.
写作积累
关于影评的常用表达
一、从整体上简要介绍电影的相关信息
(一)单词
1.romantic adj.浪漫的
2.realistic adj.写实的;现实的;实际的
3.moving/touching adj.动人的;感人的
4.classic adj.经典的
(二)短语
1.be directed by由……导演
2.be set in以……为背景
3.be based on基于,以……为基础
4.be adapted from由……改编
(三)句型
1. ...is the most popular film of the year, whose director is...and whose leading actors are...……是本年度最受欢迎的电影,其导演是……,其主演是……
2.It is a(n) sad/romantic/...film directed by...这是一部悲伤/浪漫/……的电影,导演是……
二、简要介绍电影情节并对电影的某些方面作出评价
(一)单词
1.impressive adj.令人印象深刻的
2.reflect vt.显示;表明;表达;反映
3.pride n.自豪
4.courage n.勇气
5.judgement n.意见;判断力
(二)短语
1.set out to do sth.开始做某事
2.long to do sth.渴望做某事
3.turn out结果是,证明是
(三)句型
1.It tells the story of a young man who fights against his destiny and eventually succeeds.它讲述了一个年轻人与命运抗争并最终成功的故事。
2.Set in the US in the late 1990s, the movie reminds many Americans of the period of...这部电影以20世纪90年代末的美国为背景,使许多美国人想起了……时期。
3.In the movie, ...is a naughty boy who always causes trouble for his parents.在这部电影中,……是一个淘气的男孩,他总是给他的父母惹麻烦。
4.The movie is about the growth of...who is considered...这部电影是关于……的成长的,他/她被认为……
5.The whole story develops in an atmosphere of...and ends in a touching way.整个故事在……的氛围中展开,并以一种感人的方式结束。
6.The growth of...reflects that many people in our life just complain about...but never...……的成长反映了我们生活中的许多人只是抱怨……却从不……
三、进行总结
(一)单词
1.amazing adj.令人惊奇的
2.inspiration n.鼓舞
3.spirit n.精神
(二)短语
1.in summary/all in all总之
2.be regarded as被视作
(三)句型
1.The film, with lovely characters, beautiful background music and interesting plots, is well worth watching.这部电影人物可爱,背景音乐优美,情节有趣,很值得一看。
2.The film is regarded as a great treat for all animation lovers.这部电影被认为是所有动画爱好者的盛宴。
实战演练1
假定你是李华,你校英语报于电影周期间征文,主题为“Movie Review”。请你用英语为你喜欢的电影作品写一篇80词左右的影评并投稿,内容包括:
1.简要介绍;
2.作出评价;
3.你的感受。
读后续写
写作题目
(2022 河北沧衡八校联盟期中)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny is a pretty six-year-old girl. Born in a small town in Scotland, she is the apple of her parents eye. One day when Jenny and her mother were checking out at the supermarket, Jenny saw a plastic pearl(珍珠) necklace priced at $2.50. Obviously, Jenny liked it very much. She stared at it for a moment and looked up at her mother. When the mother s eyes and the daughter s eyes met, they both couldn t help laughing knowingly.
Her mother bought the necklace for her on condition that she had to do some housework to pay it off. Jenny agreed. She worked very hard every day, and soon Jenny paid off the necklace. Jenny loved it so much that she wore it everywhere except when she was in the shower. Her mother had told her it would turn her neck green!
Jenny had a very loving daddy. He ran a cake shop in town. Business was slowing down, and the whole family only made ends meet. No matter what troubles he had, the strong man always smiled in front of his wife and child. Every evening, when Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story.
One night when the father finished reading an interesting story, he said, “Jenny, could you give me your necklace ”
“Oh, Daddy! Not my necklace!” Jenny said. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay ”
“Oh no, darling, that s okay,” her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.” Jenny held her beloved necklace tightly for fear that it would be taken away.
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny for the necklace after her favorite story.
“Oh, Daddy, not my necklace! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her She s my favorite.”
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“Oh no, darling, that s okay,” her father said and kissed her again on the cheek.
Inside the box was a beautiful, real pearl necklace.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.check out结账离开
2.can t help doing sth.禁不住做某事
3.pay off付清
4.slow down慢下来,减速
5.make ends meet勉强维持生计
6.for fear that...唯恐……
7.take away拿走,带走
障碍词汇
1.the apple of one s eye某人的掌上明珠
2.knowingly adv.心照不宣地;会意地
长难句剖析
原句 Jenny loved it so much that she wore it everywhere except when she was in the shower.
分析 该句为主从复合句。so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”,引导结果状语从句。
译文 珍妮非常喜欢它,以至于除了洗澡的时候,她在哪儿都戴着它。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
Paragraph 1:“哎哟,亲爱的,没关系。”爸爸说道,然后再一次亲吻了她的脸颊。(段首句)→经过一番犹豫,珍妮决定把项链送给爸爸。→爸爸拿着一个盒子来到珍妮的房间准备给她讲故事。
Paragraph 2:盒子里是一条漂亮的、真的珍珠项链。(段首句)→珍妮看到项链后十分开心。→爸爸攒钱为她买了一条真的珍珠项链。
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) adj.明亮的;炯炯有神的
(2) v.闪光;闪烁
(3) v.想知道;想弄明白
(4) v.颤抖
(5) 放弃
(6) 至少
答案 (1)bright (2)flash (3)wonder (4)tremble (5)give up (6)at least
2.完成句子
(1)Jenny s (明亮的大眼睛) flashed in the dark.
(2)She (想知道为什么) her father liked her necklace.
(3)Several days later, when Jenny s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was (坐在她的床上) and her lips (在颤抖).
(4)With one hand her father held the plastic pearl necklace and with the other he (从他的口袋里掏出一个蓝色的盒子).
(5)Jenny almost (跳下她的床) when she saw the shiny necklace.
(6)So he decided (戒烟) and use (他攒下来的钱) to buy a real necklace for his daughter.
(7)He was waiting for Jenny (放弃) the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one.
(8)The real necklace (至少值) $150.
答案 (1)bright big eyes (2)wondered why
(3)sitting on her bed; were trembling
(4)pulled a blue box from his pocket
(5)jumped out of her bed (6)to quit smoking; the money he saved (7)to give up
(8)was worth at least
3.句式升级
(9)把句(7)和句(8)合并成一个含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (9)He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one, which was worth at least $150.
连句成篇
“Oh no,darling, that s okay,”her father said and kissed her again on the cheek. Jenny s bright big eyes flashed in the dark. She wondered why her father liked her necklace. Several days later, when Jenny s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lips were trembling. “Here, Daddy,” she said, holding out her hand. She opened it and her beloved pearl necklace was inside. She put it into her father s hand. With one hand her father held the plastic pearl necklace and with the other he pulled a blue box from his pocket.
Inside the box was a beautiful, real pearl necklace. Jenny almost jumped out of her bed when she saw the shiny necklace. Her father had learned from his wife how Jenny got the necklace and how she loved it. So he decided to quit smoking and use the money he saved to buy a real necklace for his daughter. He had had it all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one, which was worth at least $150.
写作积累
心理描写——悲观情绪
一、单词
ashamed羞愧的 depressed沮丧的
guilty内疚的 down情绪低落的
remorseful懊悔的 isolated孤独的
desperate绝望的 pessimistic悲观的
二、短语
fall into despair陷入绝望
cry one s heart out哭得很伤心
with a sinking heart心情沉重
in low spirits情绪低落
down in the dumps闷闷不乐
实战演练2
(2022河北保定期中)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Peter woke up early in the morning. He went downstairs in a hurry and started to have his breakfast as quickly as possible.
“Why are you in such a hurry, early bird ” Mum asked him. “We will have an English spelling test today, Mum,” Peter said. “Mr. White promised to offer prizes to those who get full marks. I ve been studying the word list since last week. Although the words are difficult, I am well prepared for the test.”
Peter reviewed the spelling of each word once more carefully when Dad drove him to school. At last, it was time for the students to have the test. “Responsibility,” Mr. White started. Peter wrote it on his test paper quickly and confidently.
“The second word: contribution,” Mr. White said.
“So easy,” Peter thought. He quickly wrote the word down.
Thirty words later, the test papers were collected by Mr. White. “I am to mark your papers now,” he told the class. After marking the test papers, Mr. White said, “Three of you won a prize today for excellent test scores. Peter, David and Mary scored 100 percent in the spelling test!”
Mr. White praised them. Meanwhile, he gave the three students each a dictionary. Peter s was an English-Chinese dictionary—the one he liked best. Peter was so excited that he held it high when his classmates cheered. “This is my happiest moment,” Peter thought.
After Mr. White gave the test paper back, Peter had a look at the words, feeling proud of his spelling. All of a sudden, the word “contribusion” confused him. It didn t seem right. Peter began to compare them after taking out the word list. “C-o-n-t-r-i-b-u-s-i-o-n,” he whispered. He had spelled it wrong.
“What am I to do ” Peter said to himself. “I expect my classmates to think I m a master of spelling. If I tell Mr. White one of my spelling words is wrong, I ll have to give my prize back, or I will become an example of telling a lie”.
Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written on his test paper, Peter was lost in thought. After a while, he remembered a lesson Mum used to teach him—we ought to be an honest person.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Slowly,Peter raised his hand.
Peter looked around and found many of his classmates were smiling at him.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 4 Stage and screen
Part 4 Writing实战演练1
One possible version:
Leap is a very appealing film whose director is Peter Chan and whose leading actors are Gong Li and Huang Bo. The story took place between 1981 and 2016, during which the Chinese women s volleyball team won nine world championships. The film tells the story about the struggle of three generations of the Chinese women s volleyball team. It is very moving and their spirit of never giving up has inspired so many people.
Leap is definitely an exciting and touching film. The spirit of the Chinese women s volleyball team not only represents the gold medal and honour, but also represents the spirit of our nation, which is worth learning by us.
1.重点词汇
①championship n.冠军称号,冠军地位
②struggle n.奋斗,努力
③inspire v.鼓舞,激励
④represent v.代表
⑤be worth doing值得做
2.亮点句型
①The story took place between 1981 and 2016, during which the Chinese women s volleyball team won nine world championships.(during which引导定语从句)故事发生在1981年至2016年之间,在此期间,中国女排赢得了9次世界冠军称号。
②The spirit of the Chinese women s volleyball team not only represents the gold medal and honour, but also represents the spirit of our nation, which is worth learning by us.(not only...but also...结构,意为“不但……而且……”;which引导非限制性定语从句)中国女排的精神不仅代表着金牌和荣誉,还代表着我们民族的精神,这值得我们学习。
实战演练2
写作指导
情节线 情感线
时间 in an English spelling test 紧张、 兴奋 自信 高兴、 兴奋、 骄傲 困惑、 犹豫 坚定 感谢 兴奋
地点 at school
人物 Peter, Peter s mum, Peter s dad, Mr. White, Peter s classmates
背景 今天的英语课上将进行单词拼写测验,获得满分的同学可获得奖品
开端 彼得准备充分,信心满满地参加测验
发展 老师批阅试卷后,彼得、戴维和玛丽获得了满分,彼得得到了梦寐以求的奖品——英汉词典
高潮 但彼得拿到试卷后发现自己竟然拼错了一个单词,他犹豫是否要告诉老师实情,此时他想起来他的妈妈曾教他要做个诚实的孩子
Para. 1 慢慢地,彼得举起了手。(段首句)
根据材料的最后及续写第一段段首句可知彼得要承认错误。 ①彼得如何承认自己的错误 ②老师作何反应(是批评还是表扬),向同学们说了什么
Para. 2 彼得向四周望去,发现许多同学正朝他微笑。(段首句)
①老师做了什么 他收回彼得的词典了吗 ②彼得的心情如何
One possible version:
Slowly,Peter raised his hand. “Mr. White, I didn t score 100 percent in the test. I misspelled a word.” He stood up and handed his teacher the dictionary he liked best and his test paper. “I spelled ‘contribution’ with ‘s-i’ instead of ‘t-i’.” Peter could feel his classmates looking at him with surprise as he walked back to his desk. Mr. White held up Peter s test paper. “Class,” he said, “Peter did something even more important than spelling every word correctly in a test.” Mr. White smiled at Peter. “He taught us all a lesson on being honest.”
Peter looked around and found many of his classmates were smiling at him.“Peter, I want you to have this dictionary because you set a good example for all of us,” Mr. White said. Peter took the dictionary from his teacher and expressed his thanks to Mr. White. Meanwhile, he couldn t wait to show it to Mum and tell her one of his best days ever.
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2025外研版高中英语必修第二册
Unit 4 Stage and screen
Part 4 Writing
影评
写作题目
假定你是李华,你校于世界动物日在学校礼堂放映了美国电影《一条狗的回家路》,请你根据表格中的提示,介绍并评价这部电影。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
英文名称 A Dog s Way Home
类型 剧情/冒险
导演 查尔斯·马丁·史密斯(Charles Martin Smith)
剧情 一条名叫贝拉(Bella)的狗在与主人失散后走上了一条充满未知的冒险回家路
主题 动物应该被善待;人与狗之间互通的情感;对“家”的追寻与渴望
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. v.克服(困难)
2. n.(书、电影、戏剧的)情节
3. adj.令人印象深刻的,特别吸引人的
4. adv.完全地,绝对地
5. 放弃
答案 1.overcome 2.plot 3.dazzling
4.absolutely 5.give up
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:从整体上简要介绍这部电影的相关信息
(1)A Dog s Way Home is (一部冒险影片).
(2)It (由……导演) Charles Martin Smith.
(3)The film tells the story of (一条名叫贝拉的狗).
(4)She is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles (寻找它的家).
第二段:简要介绍电影情节并对这部电影的某些方面作出评价
(5)On Bella s way home, she (克服了各种困难) and even faces the risk of losing her life.
(6)Bella (从未放弃) and finally makes her way home.
(7) (电影的情节) is touching and dazzling, and the character Bella as a dog arouses the audience s pity.
(8) The friendship (贝拉和其他角色之间) is (绝对温暖人心的).
第三段:进行总结
(9) Animals are humans friends and should (被善待).
(10)May all of the (被遗弃的狗) find their homes.
答案 (1)an adventure film (2)is directed by (3)a dog named Bella (4)to look for her home (5)overcomes various difficulties (6)never gives up (7)The plot of the film (8)between Bella and other characters; absolutely heart-warming (9)be treated kindly
(10)abandoned dogs
2.句式升级
(11)将句(1)和句(2)合并为含有过去分词短语作定语的句子
(12)将句(3)和句(4)合并为含有定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (11)A Dog s Way Home is an adventure film directed by Charles Martin Smith.
(12)The film tells the story of a dog named Bella who is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles to look for her home.
连句成篇
A Dog s Way Home is an adventure film directed by Charles Martin Smith. The film tells the story of a dog named Bella who is separated from her owner accidentally and travels four hundred miles to look for her home.
On Bella s way home, she overcomes various difficulties and even faces the risk of losing her life. However, Bella never gives up and finally makes her way home. The plot of the film is touching and dazzling, and the character Bella as a dog arouses the audience s pity. Besides, the friendship between Bella and other characters is absolutely heart-warming.
Animals are humans friends and should be treated kindly. May all of the abandoned dogs find their homes.
写作积累
关于影评的常用表达
一、从整体上简要介绍电影的相关信息
(一)单词
1.romantic adj.浪漫的
2.realistic adj.写实的;现实的;实际的
3.moving/touching adj.动人的;感人的
4.classic adj.经典的
(二)短语
1.be directed by由……导演
2.be set in以……为背景
3.be based on基于,以……为基础
4.be adapted from由……改编
(三)句型
1. ...is the most popular film of the year, whose director is...and whose leading actors are...……是本年度最受欢迎的电影,其导演是……,其主演是……
2.It is a(n) sad/romantic/...film directed by...这是一部悲伤/浪漫/……的电影,导演是……
二、简要介绍电影情节并对电影的某些方面作出评价
(一)单词
1.impressive adj.令人印象深刻的
2.reflect vt.显示;表明;表达;反映
3.pride n.自豪
4.courage n.勇气
5.judgement n.意见;判断力
(二)短语
1.set out to do sth.开始做某事
2.long to do sth.渴望做某事
3.turn out结果是,证明是
(三)句型
1.It tells the story of a young man who fights against his destiny and eventually succeeds.它讲述了一个年轻人与命运抗争并最终成功的故事。
2.Set in the US in the late 1990s, the movie reminds many Americans of the period of...这部电影以20世纪90年代末的美国为背景,使许多美国人想起了……时期。
3.In the movie, ...is a naughty boy who always causes trouble for his parents.在这部电影中,……是一个淘气的男孩,他总是给他的父母惹麻烦。
4.The movie is about the growth of...who is considered...这部电影是关于……的成长的,他/她被认为……
5.The whole story develops in an atmosphere of...and ends in a touching way.整个故事在……的氛围中展开,并以一种感人的方式结束。
6.The growth of...reflects that many people in our life just complain about...but never...……的成长反映了我们生活中的许多人只是抱怨……却从不……
三、进行总结
(一)单词
1.amazing adj.令人惊奇的
2.inspiration n.鼓舞
3.spirit n.精神
(二)短语
1.in summary/all in all总之
2.be regarded as被视作
(三)句型
1.The film, with lovely characters, beautiful background music and interesting plots, is well worth watching.这部电影人物可爱,背景音乐优美,情节有趣,很值得一看。
2.The film is regarded as a great treat for all animation lovers.这部电影被认为是所有动画爱好者的盛宴。
实战演练1
假定你是李华,你校英语报于电影周期间征文,主题为“Movie Review”。请你用英语为你喜欢的电影作品写一篇80词左右的影评并投稿,内容包括:
1.简要介绍;
2.作出评价;
3.你的感受。
读后续写
写作题目
(2022 河北沧衡八校联盟期中)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Jenny is a pretty six-year-old girl. Born in a small town in Scotland, she is the apple of her parents eye. One day when Jenny and her mother were checking out at the supermarket, Jenny saw a plastic pearl(珍珠) necklace priced at $2.50. Obviously, Jenny liked it very much. She stared at it for a moment and looked up at her mother. When the mother s eyes and the daughter s eyes met, they both couldn t help laughing knowingly.
Her mother bought the necklace for her on condition that she had to do some housework to pay it off. Jenny agreed. She worked very hard every day, and soon Jenny paid off the necklace. Jenny loved it so much that she wore it everywhere except when she was in the shower. Her mother had told her it would turn her neck green!
Jenny had a very loving daddy. He ran a cake shop in town. Business was slowing down, and the whole family only made ends meet. No matter what troubles he had, the strong man always smiled in front of his wife and child. Every evening, when Jenny went to bed, he would read Jenny her favorite story.
One night when the father finished reading an interesting story, he said, “Jenny, could you give me your necklace ”
“Oh, Daddy! Not my necklace!” Jenny said. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her You gave her to me last year for my birthday. Okay ”
“Oh no, darling, that s okay,” her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.” Jenny held her beloved necklace tightly for fear that it would be taken away.
A week later, her father once again asked Jenny for the necklace after her favorite story.
“Oh, Daddy, not my necklace! But you can have Ribbons, my toy horse. Do you remember her She s my favorite.”
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
“Oh no, darling, that s okay,” her father said and kissed her again on the cheek.
Inside the box was a beautiful, real pearl necklace.
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.check out结账离开
2.can t help doing sth.禁不住做某事
3.pay off付清
4.slow down慢下来,减速
5.make ends meet勉强维持生计
6.for fear that...唯恐……
7.take away拿走,带走
障碍词汇
1.the apple of one s eye某人的掌上明珠
2.knowingly adv.心照不宣地;会意地
长难句剖析
原句 Jenny loved it so much that she wore it everywhere except when she was in the shower.
分析 该句为主从复合句。so...that...意为“如此……以至于……”,引导结果状语从句。
译文 珍妮非常喜欢它,以至于除了洗澡的时候,她在哪儿都戴着它。
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
Paragraph 1:“哎哟,亲爱的,没关系。”爸爸说道,然后再一次亲吻了她的脸颊。(段首句)→经过一番犹豫,珍妮决定把项链送给爸爸。→爸爸拿着一个盒子来到珍妮的房间准备给她讲故事。
Paragraph 2:盒子里是一条漂亮的、真的珍珠项链。(段首句)→珍妮看到项链后十分开心。→爸爸攒钱为她买了一条真的珍珠项链。
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1) adj.明亮的;炯炯有神的
(2) v.闪光;闪烁
(3) v.想知道;想弄明白
(4) v.颤抖
(5) 放弃
(6) 至少
答案 (1)bright (2)flash (3)wonder (4)tremble (5)give up (6)at least
2.完成句子
(1)Jenny s (明亮的大眼睛) flashed in the dark.
(2)She (想知道为什么) her father liked her necklace.
(3)Several days later, when Jenny s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was (坐在她的床上) and her lips (在颤抖).
(4)With one hand her father held the plastic pearl necklace and with the other he (从他的口袋里掏出一个蓝色的盒子).
(5)Jenny almost (跳下她的床) when she saw the shiny necklace.
(6)So he decided (戒烟) and use (他攒下来的钱) to buy a real necklace for his daughter.
(7)He was waiting for Jenny (放弃) the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one.
(8)The real necklace (至少值) $150.
答案 (1)bright big eyes (2)wondered why
(3)sitting on her bed; were trembling
(4)pulled a blue box from his pocket
(5)jumped out of her bed (6)to quit smoking; the money he saved (7)to give up
(8)was worth at least
3.句式升级
(9)把句(7)和句(8)合并成一个含有which引导的非限制性定语从句的主从复合句
答案 (9)He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one, which was worth at least $150.
连句成篇
“Oh no,darling, that s okay,”her father said and kissed her again on the cheek. Jenny s bright big eyes flashed in the dark. She wondered why her father liked her necklace. Several days later, when Jenny s father came in to read her a story, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lips were trembling. “Here, Daddy,” she said, holding out her hand. She opened it and her beloved pearl necklace was inside. She put it into her father s hand. With one hand her father held the plastic pearl necklace and with the other he pulled a blue box from his pocket.
Inside the box was a beautiful, real pearl necklace. Jenny almost jumped out of her bed when she saw the shiny necklace. Her father had learned from his wife how Jenny got the necklace and how she loved it. So he decided to quit smoking and use the money he saved to buy a real necklace for his daughter. He had had it all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap necklace so that he could give her a real one, which was worth at least $150.
写作积累
心理描写——悲观情绪
一、单词
ashamed羞愧的 depressed沮丧的
guilty内疚的 down情绪低落的
remorseful懊悔的 isolated孤独的
desperate绝望的 pessimistic悲观的
二、短语
fall into despair陷入绝望
cry one s heart out哭得很伤心
with a sinking heart心情沉重
in low spirits情绪低落
down in the dumps闷闷不乐
实战演练2
(2022河北保定期中)
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Peter woke up early in the morning. He went downstairs in a hurry and started to have his breakfast as quickly as possible.
“Why are you in such a hurry, early bird ” Mum asked him. “We will have an English spelling test today, Mum,” Peter said. “Mr. White promised to offer prizes to those who get full marks. I ve been studying the word list since last week. Although the words are difficult, I am well prepared for the test.”
Peter reviewed the spelling of each word once more carefully when Dad drove him to school. At last, it was time for the students to have the test. “Responsibility,” Mr. White started. Peter wrote it on his test paper quickly and confidently.
“The second word: contribution,” Mr. White said.
“So easy,” Peter thought. He quickly wrote the word down.
Thirty words later, the test papers were collected by Mr. White. “I am to mark your papers now,” he told the class. After marking the test papers, Mr. White said, “Three of you won a prize today for excellent test scores. Peter, David and Mary scored 100 percent in the spelling test!”
Mr. White praised them. Meanwhile, he gave the three students each a dictionary. Peter s was an English-Chinese dictionary—the one he liked best. Peter was so excited that he held it high when his classmates cheered. “This is my happiest moment,” Peter thought.
After Mr. White gave the test paper back, Peter had a look at the words, feeling proud of his spelling. All of a sudden, the word “contribusion” confused him. It didn t seem right. Peter began to compare them after taking out the word list. “C-o-n-t-r-i-b-u-s-i-o-n,” he whispered. He had spelled it wrong.
“What am I to do ” Peter said to himself. “I expect my classmates to think I m a master of spelling. If I tell Mr. White one of my spelling words is wrong, I ll have to give my prize back, or I will become an example of telling a lie”.
Staring at the red sign “100%” which was written on his test paper, Peter was lost in thought. After a while, he remembered a lesson Mum used to teach him—we ought to be an honest person.
注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
Slowly,Peter raised his hand.
Peter looked around and found many of his classmates were smiling at him.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 4 Stage and screen
Part 4 Writing实战演练1
One possible version:
Leap is a very appealing film whose director is Peter Chan and whose leading actors are Gong Li and Huang Bo. The story took place between 1981 and 2016, during which the Chinese women s volleyball team won nine world championships. The film tells the story about the struggle of three generations of the Chinese women s volleyball team. It is very moving and their spirit of never giving up has inspired so many people.
Leap is definitely an exciting and touching film. The spirit of the Chinese women s volleyball team not only represents the gold medal and honour, but also represents the spirit of our nation, which is worth learning by us.
1.重点词汇
①championship n.冠军称号,冠军地位
②struggle n.奋斗,努力
③inspire v.鼓舞,激励
④represent v.代表
⑤be worth doing值得做
2.亮点句型
①The story took place between 1981 and 2016, during which the Chinese women s volleyball team won nine world championships.(during which引导定语从句)故事发生在1981年至2016年之间,在此期间,中国女排赢得了9次世界冠军称号。
②The spirit of the Chinese women s volleyball team not only represents the gold medal and honour, but also represents the spirit of our nation, which is worth learning by us.(not only...but also...结构,意为“不但……而且……”;which引导非限制性定语从句)中国女排的精神不仅代表着金牌和荣誉,还代表着我们民族的精神,这值得我们学习。
实战演练2
写作指导
情节线 情感线
时间 in an English spelling test 紧张、 兴奋 自信 高兴、 兴奋、 骄傲 困惑、 犹豫 坚定 感谢 兴奋
地点 at school
人物 Peter, Peter s mum, Peter s dad, Mr. White, Peter s classmates
背景 今天的英语课上将进行单词拼写测验,获得满分的同学可获得奖品
开端 彼得准备充分,信心满满地参加测验
发展 老师批阅试卷后,彼得、戴维和玛丽获得了满分,彼得得到了梦寐以求的奖品——英汉词典
高潮 但彼得拿到试卷后发现自己竟然拼错了一个单词,他犹豫是否要告诉老师实情,此时他想起来他的妈妈曾教他要做个诚实的孩子
Para. 1 慢慢地,彼得举起了手。(段首句)
根据材料的最后及续写第一段段首句可知彼得要承认错误。 ①彼得如何承认自己的错误 ②老师作何反应(是批评还是表扬),向同学们说了什么
Para. 2 彼得向四周望去,发现许多同学正朝他微笑。(段首句)
①老师做了什么 他收回彼得的词典了吗 ②彼得的心情如何
One possible version:
Slowly,Peter raised his hand. “Mr. White, I didn t score 100 percent in the test. I misspelled a word.” He stood up and handed his teacher the dictionary he liked best and his test paper. “I spelled ‘contribution’ with ‘s-i’ instead of ‘t-i’.” Peter could feel his classmates looking at him with surprise as he walked back to his desk. Mr. White held up Peter s test paper. “Class,” he said, “Peter did something even more important than spelling every word correctly in a test.” Mr. White smiled at Peter. “He taught us all a lesson on being honest.”
Peter looked around and found many of his classmates were smiling at him.“Peter, I want you to have this dictionary because you set a good example for all of us,” Mr. White said. Peter took the dictionary from his teacher and expressed his thanks to Mr. White. Meanwhile, he couldn t wait to show it to Mum and tell her one of his best days ever.
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