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2025外研版高中英语必修第二册
Unit 5 On the road
Part 4 Writing
明信片——介绍旅游经历
写作题目
假定你是李华,你和家人在海南三亚旅游了七天。你的美国朋友Sam来信询问你的旅游经历。请用明信片的方式向他介绍你的旅游情况。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
5 May
Hi Sam,
Li Hua
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. n.(陆上的)风景,景致
2. n.大量,许多
3. 保持联系
4. 迫不及待做某事
答案 1.landscape 2.mass 3.keep in touch
4.can t wait to do sth.
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍旅游经历
(1)I (去三亚旅游) with my family.
(2)Sanya (位于中国的南部).
(3)After we got off the plane, we (迫不及待地欣赏美丽的景色).
(4)We were excited to see (很多) special trees and other plants along the road.
(5)When (吃午饭) at a restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa.
(6)He (被中国文化吸引).
(7)We agreed (保持联系).
第二段:介绍个人感受
(8) It is definitely (一次令人兴奋的旅行).
(9) I will be more than happy to have a chance (参观这个地方) again.
答案 (1)went on a trip to Sanya (2)lies in the south of China (3)couldn t wait to enjoy the beautiful landscape (4)masses of
(5)having lunch (6)was attracted to Chinese culture (7)to keep in touch (8)an exciting trip (9)to visit the place
2.句式升级
(10)用定语从句合并句(1)和句(2)
(11)用定语从句合并句(5)和句(6)
答案 (10)I went on a trip to Sanya with my family, which lies in the south of China.
(11)When having lunch at a restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa, who was attracted to Chinese culture.
连句成篇
5 May
Hi Sam,
I went on a trip to Sanya with my family, which lies in the south of China. We went there by plane and stayed there for seven days. After we got off the plane, we couldn t wait to enjoy the beautiful landscape. We were excited to see masses of special trees and other plants along the road. When having lunch at a restaurant near the beach, I made friends with a young man from Africa, who was attracted to Chinese culture. We agreed to keep in touch.
It is definitely an exciting trip. I will be more than happy to have a chance to visit the place again.
Li Hua
写作积累
一、介绍旅游经历
(一)单词
1.scenery n.景色,风景
2.splendid adj.壮丽的
3.attract vt.吸引
4.appreciate vt.欣赏
(二)短语
1.pay a visit to参观……
2.at the foot of在……底部
3.tourist spots旅游景点
4.have a good time/enjoy oneself玩得愉快
5.be rich in富含
6.places of interest名胜
(三)句式
1.So far I have been to many famous tourist spots, including...到目前为止,我已经去过许多著名的旅游景点,包括……
2.On the first day, we visited...and spent the whole day there.第一天,我们参观了……在那里待了一整天。
3.Our next destination is...which we have been expecting to visit for a long time.我们的下一个目的地是……我们期待去那里参观很久了。
二、介绍个人感受
(一)单词
1.relaxing adj.令人放松的
2.recommend vt.推荐
3.worth adj.值得的
4.explore v.探索
5.convenient adj.方便的
(二)短语
1.no doubt毫无疑问
2.all in all总而言之
3.in short简言之
(三)句式
1.Having been staying here for three days, I find it really worth visiting.在这里待了三天,我觉得它确实值得一游。
2.In a word, it s quite relaxing and interesting to travel there.总之,在那里旅行是非常放松和有趣的。
3.I m sure you ll have a good time.我确信你会玩得很开心。
实战演练
假设你是李华,上个月你去了四川九寨沟旅游。你的英国朋友Nick来信询问你的旅游经历。请你用一张印有四川九寨沟的明信片回复他,向他介绍你的旅游经历。
注意:1.词数80个左右;
2.可以适当增加内容,以使行文连贯;
3.开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
6 June
Hi Nick,
Li Hua
读后续写微写作
情景导入
你们学校组织了一次越野跑比赛,许多学生参加了比赛。请根据以上场景描述此次比赛的情况。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.环境描写
1. n.目的地,终点
2. n.路线,路途
3. 大量的
Ⅱ.动作描写
4. v.停止,放弃;离开(工作岗位、学校等)
5. 从事,参加
Ⅲ.心理描写
6. adj.激动人心的;给人印象深刻的
答案 1.destination 2.route 3.masses of 4.quit 5.engage in 6.dramatic
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.我们学校组织了一场越野跑比赛,许多学生参与其中。
Our school organized a cross-country running race and it.
2.路线从我们学校的大门到南山山脚下,又窄又崎岖。
which was narrow and rough went the foot of the South Mountain.
3.尽管他们很累,但他们没有中途放弃。
Tired as they were,they didn t .
4.他们竭尽全力到达目的地。
They tried their best to .
5.看到所有的参赛者都完成了任务是多么激动人心啊!
to see all the participants finish their task!
答案 1.masses of students engaged in
2.The route; from our school gate to 3.quit halfway 4.reach the destination 5.How dramatic it was
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接手段)
答案 Our school organized a cross-country running race and masses of students engaged in it. The route which was narrow and rough went from our school gate to the foot of the South Mountain. Tired as they were, they didn t quit halfway;instead,they tried their best to reach the destination. How dramatic it was to see all the participants finish their task!
答案与分层梯度式解析
Unit 5 On the road
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
6 June
Hi Nick,
Last month, I went on a trip to the Jiuzhaigou Valley in Sichuan Province. I went there with my brother by plane. I was attracted by its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and clean. Besides, I was impressed by the nice weather and convenient transportation there, which made my trip more enjoyable. I made good friends with a local taxi driver. We agreed to keep in touch with each other.
It is definitely an exciting and interesting trip. I will always remember this trip.
Li Hua
1.重点词汇
①impressed adj.印象深刻的
②convenient adj.方便的
③transportation n.交通
④enjoyable adj.令人愉快的
⑤definitely adv.肯定地
2.亮点句型
①I was attracted by its beautiful lakes, of which the water is clear and clean.(of which引导非限制性定语从句,从句修饰先行词lakes)我被它美丽的湖泊吸引,那里的水既清澈又干净。
②Besides, I was impressed by the nice weather and convenient transportation there, which made my trip more enjoyable.(which引导非限制性定语从句,从句修饰先行词the nice weather and convenient transportation;“made my trip more enjoyable”为“make+宾语+宾语补足语”结构)此外,那里的好天气和便利的交通给我留下了深刻的印象,这些因素使我的旅行更加愉快。
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