2025外研版高中英语必修第一册同步练习题--Unit 6 Part 4 Writing（含答案与解析）
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2025外研版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
概要写作
写作题目
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In school and at home, most of us have been scolded(责骂) or even got punished for daydreaming. The majority of people say that by daydreaming we waste our time and energy on something that is nothing less than unproductive things. But many medical studies have stressed the fact that daydreaming works wonders for our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques. In fact, many problems can be easily solved when we daydream.
The greatest benefit of daydreaming is that your mood gets improved. By separating yourself from the world around you, you tend to enjoy the peace in your mind and get relaxed by daydreaming, as you think about something that calms your sense. When you start visualizing(设想) things while daydreaming, you need to forget all stress and tension (紧张). Then you get happiness from it and this happiness changes into a source of energy that keeps you in a good mood.
Many psychologists have said that people who daydream tend to have a sharper memory. It's true that when you are daydreaming, you tend to get carried away imagining various situations, either real or unreal. You tend to act differently in different situations, trying to satisfy your mind by doing what you want in your dreams. When your mind gets satisfied, you are in a better position to concentrate more on your work. Since daydreaming activates(使活动) the nerves of your brain, you tend to have better attention and your ability to remember things develops.
When you daydream, you automatically visualize yourself listening to your heart and therefore, you get to know yourself better. You also start realizing the mistakes you've made in life and you start trying your best to avoid repeating them. Such visualization techniques help you connect yourself with your soul.
文本分析
(1)语篇解读:
本文是一篇议论文,主题语境为人与自我。本文讨论了空想的好处:改善心情;激活大脑神经,让人的记忆力更好;有助于更好地认识自己,更有利于人们认识到自己所犯的错误并尽量避免犯同样的错误。
(2)段落主题
本文是典型的“总—分”结构,即提出问题—分析问题,结构明确,要点清晰。全文共分为四段。
每段主旨如下:
第一段:Daydreaming works wonders for our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques.
第二段:The greatest benefit of daydreaming is that your mood gets improved.
第三段:People who daydream tend to have a sharper memory, since daydreaming activates the nerves of the brain.
第四段:When you daydream, you get to know yourself better. You also start realizing the mistakes you've made in life and you start trying your best to avoid repeating them.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
要点1 第一段的主要内容可概括为要点1,该要点含有相对立的两部分信息,可用 引导的让步状语从句来表述; 可同义转换为daydreaming is a waste of time and energy; daydreaming works wonders for our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques可提炼概括为 。
要点2 第二段的主要内容可概括为要点2,该要点可和要点1进行整合,用非限制性定语从句衔接; 可同义转换为lift your spirits;该要点与要点1可整合为one of which is that daydreaming can lift your spirits。
要点3 第三段的主要内容可概括为要点3,该要点进一步介绍空想的好处,和要点2之间属于并列关系,可用短语in addition连接;people who daydream tend to have a sharper memory可同义转换为 ;daydreaming activates the nerves of your brain可同义转换为 。
要点4 第四段的主要内容可概括为要点4,该要点和要点3之间也是并列关系,为避免重复,可用moreover连接;get to know yourself better可同义转换为 ;realizing the mistakes you've made in life and you start trying your best to avoid repeating them可提炼概括为 。
答案
要点1 although/though; by daydreaming we waste our time and energy; daydreaming has a lot of advantages
要点2 your mood gets improved
要点3 daydreaming helps improve your memory;daydreaming helps make your brain more active
要点4 better know yourself;avoid making the same mistakes again
连句成篇
Though most people look on daydreaming as a waste of time and energy, many medical studies have found that it has a lot of advantages,(要点1) one of which is that daydreaming can lift your spirits.(要点2) In addition, it helps make your brain more active, thus improving your memory. (要点3) Moreover, daydreaming helps you better know yourself and avoid making the same mistakes again.(要点4)
写作积累
概要写作常用关联词
一、顺序
概括要点时,可以使用表示顺序的连接词,这样可以使文章脉络清楚。
first, second, third首先、第二、第三
firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally首先、第二、第三、最后
to begin with, then, furthermore, finally首先、然后、再者、最后
to start with, next, in addition, finally首先、然后、此外、最后
first of all, besides, last but not least首先、此外、最后但同样重要的是
most important of all, moreover, finally最重要的、再者、最后
二、并列
as well as也;not only...but(also)不仅……而且……;including包括
三、对比
on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……;for one thing...for another... 一方面……另一方面……;on the contrary与此相反;nevertheless然而;compared to与……相比;in contrast to相比之下
四、递进
even甚至;besides除了……之外(还);what's more更重要的是;as for至于;so...that... 如此……以至于……;moreover而且;furthermore此外;in addition除……以外;worse still=what's worse=to make matters worse更糟糕的是
五、例证
in one's opinion在某人看来;that is to say也就是说;namely即;as a matter of fact/in fact事实上;for example/for instance例如
六、强调
especially特别;indeed确实;at least至少;at most最多;not at all完全不;or rather更确切地说;particularly特别
七、因果
thanks to多亏了;as a result结果;because of/as a result of/on account of/due to因为;owing to由于
八、总结
in short总之;generally speaking一般来说;in my opinion/view在我看来;briefly/in brief总之;as far as I'm concerned我认为;as you know正如你所知道的;as is known to all众所周知;to sum up=to summarize=in summary总之
实战演练 答案见P143
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
I believe television influences our community in a negative way. Television influences people to copy what they see, especially the programs and advertisements on TV. They buy the products they saw on TV. They talk and act the way the characters on their favorite shows do. This is definitely a case of TV having a negative influence on people.
TV advertisements influence the way people purchase items. Advertisements intrigue(引发……的好奇心)them with bright colours and loud music. Advertisers only tell people good things about a product and not the bad things so people are persuaded to buy things they don't need. Sometimes they buy worthless things or broken things. Television advertising encourages people to waste money.
When people watch the same show on TV a number of times, they start to pick up the habits of characters on the show. Some of these habits are extremely bad, like laziness, bad attitudes and even swearing(咒骂) and hurting.
Children see lots of violence on TV, real violence and cartoon violence. A survey carried out by the International Coalition Against Violence showed that many cartoons are violent. Bugs Bunny and Fast and Furry-ous show an average of fifty-five violent acts every hour. The news every night they watch is full of violence too. That is worse because it's real violence and in cartoons it's just fictional. Dr Patricia Edgar, director of the Australian Children's Television Foundation, says, “Children are more afraid of what they see on the news than on other shows because they know it is real.” I think she is right and this is not good for children. Television should not show violence to frighten us. Children need to learn to be friendly. We should not learn about violence.
Television definitely has a very negative influence on our community. We should all pay real attention to it.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
1.语篇内容解读
本文是一篇议论文,主题语境为人与社会。文章主要从不同方面论证电视对人们造成的各种负面影响。本文的篇章结构为“总—分—总”。第一段内容为主题段,作者提出自己的观点,认为电视在各个层面对人们造成不良影响;第二、三、四段为支持性论据,分别从购买不必要的产品、形成坏习惯、暴力因素太多三个方面对电视的不良影响做具体论述;第五段总结全文,再次强调个人观点并呼吁人们对此进行关注。
2.文章脉络分析:
3.写作建议
段落 要点内容合并
1 将believe改为hold the view,influence改为affect,第一段可概括为:I hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively.
2 第二段主要说明人们将钱浪费在things they don't need和worthless things or broken things上,总结起来就是“不需要的东西”和“质量不好的东西”,这段可概括为:First, TV ads encourage people to waste money on some needless or poor-quality things.
3 利用词语替换法将pick up the habits of改为develop the habits of,这一段可概括为:Second, TV viewers tend to develop the bad habits of some TV show characters.
4 本段讲了两种violence,即cartoon violence和violence in news,一种是fictional violence,一种是real violence,所以我们将其总结到一起,换成real violence和unreal violence两个对应的表达。这段可概括为:Third, the TV audience is exposed to both real violence and unreal violence, of which real violence is worse.
5 最后一段一方面再次陈述观点,另一方面提醒人们关注此事,所以用so that将两句连接起来。这段可概括为:All in all, TV plays a negative role so that everyone should be concerned about it.
One possible version:
I hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively.(要点1) First, TV ads encourage people to waste money on some needless or poor-quality things.(要点2) Second, TV viewers tend to develop the bad habits of some TV show characters.(要点3) Third, the TV audience is exposed to both real violence and unreal violence, of which real violence is worse.(要点4) All in all, TV plays a negative role so that everyone should be concerned about it.(要点5)
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2025外研版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
概要写作
写作题目
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
In school and at home, most of us have been scolded(责骂) or even got punished for daydreaming. The majority of people say that by daydreaming we waste our time and energy on something that is nothing less than unproductive things. But many medical studies have stressed the fact that daydreaming works wonders for our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques. In fact, many problems can be easily solved when we daydream.
The greatest benefit of daydreaming is that your mood gets improved. By separating yourself from the world around you, you tend to enjoy the peace in your mind and get relaxed by daydreaming, as you think about something that calms your sense. When you start visualizing(设想) things while daydreaming, you need to forget all stress and tension (紧张). Then you get happiness from it and this happiness changes into a source of energy that keeps you in a good mood.
Many psychologists have said that people who daydream tend to have a sharper memory. It's true that when you are daydreaming, you tend to get carried away imagining various situations, either real or unreal. You tend to act differently in different situations, trying to satisfy your mind by doing what you want in your dreams. When your mind gets satisfied, you are in a better position to concentrate more on your work. Since daydreaming activates(使活动) the nerves of your brain, you tend to have better attention and your ability to remember things develops.
When you daydream, you automatically visualize yourself listening to your heart and therefore, you get to know yourself better. You also start realizing the mistakes you've made in life and you start trying your best to avoid repeating them. Such visualization techniques help you connect yourself with your soul.
文本分析
(1)语篇解读:
本文是一篇议论文,主题语境为人与自我。本文讨论了空想的好处:改善心情;激活大脑神经,让人的记忆力更好;有助于更好地认识自己,更有利于人们认识到自己所犯的错误并尽量避免犯同样的错误。
(2)段落主题
本文是典型的“总—分”结构,即提出问题—分析问题,结构明确,要点清晰。全文共分为四段。
每段主旨如下:
第一段:Daydreaming works wonders for our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques.
第二段:The greatest benefit of daydreaming is that your mood gets improved.
第三段:People who daydream tend to have a sharper memory, since daydreaming activates the nerves of the brain.
第四段:When you daydream, you get to know yourself better. You also start realizing the mistakes you've made in life and you start trying your best to avoid repeating them.
筛选、整合信息、转换表达
要点1 第一段的主要内容可概括为要点1,该要点含有相对立的两部分信息,可用 引导的让步状语从句来表述; 可同义转换为daydreaming is a waste of time and energy; daydreaming works wonders for our imagination, creativity and situation-handling techniques可提炼概括为 。
要点2 第二段的主要内容可概括为要点2,该要点可和要点1进行整合,用非限制性定语从句衔接; 可同义转换为lift your spirits;该要点与要点1可整合为one of which is that daydreaming can lift your spirits。
要点3 第三段的主要内容可概括为要点3,该要点进一步介绍空想的好处,和要点2之间属于并列关系,可用短语in addition连接;people who daydream tend to have a sharper memory可同义转换为 ;daydreaming activates the nerves of your brain可同义转换为 。
要点4 第四段的主要内容可概括为要点4,该要点和要点3之间也是并列关系,为避免重复,可用moreover连接;get to know yourself better可同义转换为 ;realizing the mistakes you've made in life and you start trying your best to avoid repeating them可提炼概括为 。
答案
要点1 although/though; by daydreaming we waste our time and energy; daydreaming has a lot of advantages
要点2 your mood gets improved
要点3 daydreaming helps improve your memory;daydreaming helps make your brain more active
要点4 better know yourself;avoid making the same mistakes again
连句成篇
Though most people look on daydreaming as a waste of time and energy, many medical studies have found that it has a lot of advantages,(要点1) one of which is that daydreaming can lift your spirits.(要点2) In addition, it helps make your brain more active, thus improving your memory. (要点3) Moreover, daydreaming helps you better know yourself and avoid making the same mistakes again.(要点4)
写作积累
概要写作常用关联词
一、顺序
概括要点时,可以使用表示顺序的连接词,这样可以使文章脉络清楚。
first, second, third首先、第二、第三
firstly, secondly, thirdly, finally首先、第二、第三、最后
to begin with, then, furthermore, finally首先、然后、再者、最后
to start with, next, in addition, finally首先、然后、此外、最后
first of all, besides, last but not least首先、此外、最后但同样重要的是
most important of all, moreover, finally最重要的、再者、最后
二、并列
as well as也;not only...but(also)不仅……而且……;including包括
三、对比
on the one hand...on the other hand...一方面……另一方面……;for one thing...for another... 一方面……另一方面……;on the contrary与此相反;nevertheless然而;compared to与……相比;in contrast to相比之下
四、递进
even甚至;besides除了……之外(还);what's more更重要的是;as for至于;so...that... 如此……以至于……;moreover而且;furthermore此外;in addition除……以外;worse still=what's worse=to make matters worse更糟糕的是
五、例证
in one's opinion在某人看来;that is to say也就是说;namely即;as a matter of fact/in fact事实上;for example/for instance例如
六、强调
especially特别;indeed确实;at least至少;at most最多;not at all完全不;or rather更确切地说;particularly特别
七、因果
thanks to多亏了;as a result结果;because of/as a result of/on account of/due to因为;owing to由于
八、总结
in short总之;generally speaking一般来说;in my opinion/view在我看来;briefly/in brief总之;as far as I'm concerned我认为;as you know正如你所知道的;as is known to all众所周知;to sum up=to summarize=in summary总之
实战演练 答案见P143
阅读下面短文,根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。
I believe television influences our community in a negative way. Television influences people to copy what they see, especially the programs and advertisements on TV. They buy the products they saw on TV. They talk and act the way the characters on their favorite shows do. This is definitely a case of TV having a negative influence on people.
TV advertisements influence the way people purchase items. Advertisements intrigue(引发……的好奇心)them with bright colours and loud music. Advertisers only tell people good things about a product and not the bad things so people are persuaded to buy things they don't need. Sometimes they buy worthless things or broken things. Television advertising encourages people to waste money.
When people watch the same show on TV a number of times, they start to pick up the habits of characters on the show. Some of these habits are extremely bad, like laziness, bad attitudes and even swearing(咒骂) and hurting.
Children see lots of violence on TV, real violence and cartoon violence. A survey carried out by the International Coalition Against Violence showed that many cartoons are violent. Bugs Bunny and Fast and Furry-ous show an average of fifty-five violent acts every hour. The news every night they watch is full of violence too. That is worse because it's real violence and in cartoons it's just fictional. Dr Patricia Edgar, director of the Australian Children's Television Foundation, says, “Children are more afraid of what they see on the news than on other shows because they know it is real.” I think she is right and this is not good for children. Television should not show violence to frighten us. Children need to learn to be friendly. We should not learn about violence.
Television definitely has a very negative influence on our community. We should all pay real attention to it.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
1.语篇内容解读
本文是一篇议论文,主题语境为人与社会。文章主要从不同方面论证电视对人们造成的各种负面影响。本文的篇章结构为“总—分—总”。第一段内容为主题段,作者提出自己的观点,认为电视在各个层面对人们造成不良影响;第二、三、四段为支持性论据,分别从购买不必要的产品、形成坏习惯、暴力因素太多三个方面对电视的不良影响做具体论述;第五段总结全文,再次强调个人观点并呼吁人们对此进行关注。
2.文章脉络分析:
3.写作建议
段落 要点内容合并
1 将believe改为hold the view,influence改为affect,第一段可概括为:I hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively.
2 第二段主要说明人们将钱浪费在things they don't need和worthless things or broken things上,总结起来就是“不需要的东西”和“质量不好的东西”,这段可概括为:First, TV ads encourage people to waste money on some needless or poor-quality things.
3 利用词语替换法将pick up the habits of改为develop the habits of,这一段可概括为:Second, TV viewers tend to develop the bad habits of some TV show characters.
4 本段讲了两种violence,即cartoon violence和violence in news,一种是fictional violence,一种是real violence,所以我们将其总结到一起,换成real violence和unreal violence两个对应的表达。这段可概括为:Third, the TV audience is exposed to both real violence and unreal violence, of which real violence is worse.
5 最后一段一方面再次陈述观点,另一方面提醒人们关注此事,所以用so that将两句连接起来。这段可概括为:All in all, TV plays a negative role so that everyone should be concerned about it.
One possible version:
I hold the view that TV is affecting people negatively.(要点1) First, TV ads encourage people to waste money on some needless or poor-quality things.(要点2) Second, TV viewers tend to develop the bad habits of some TV show characters.(要点3) Third, the TV audience is exposed to both real violence and unreal violence, of which real violence is worse.(要点4) All in all, TV plays a negative role so that everyone should be concerned about it.(要点5)
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