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2025外研版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
家庭记忆
写作题目
假设你是李华,父亲节快到了,请你写一封关于父亲的信给报社,作为报社的宣传材料。要点如下:
1.介绍父亲;
2.父亲对自己的影响和帮助;
3.表达自己对父亲的感激之情。
注意:
1.词数80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
思路点拨
遣词造句
Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空
1. vt.& n.尊重;尊敬
2. 在某人四十几岁时
3. 处于困境;有麻烦
4. 以……为傲
答案 1.respect 2.in one's forties 3.in trouble 4.be proud of
Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用
1.完成句子
第一段:介绍父亲并谈谈父亲对自己的影响和帮助
(1)He is always working very hard (来养活我们一家人), so his hair has already turned grey (在他四十几岁时).
(2)Others (因为他的善良而尊重他).
(3)Over the years, he has never (抱怨) our living conditions.
(4)Instead, he has made great efforts (为了让我们过上幸福的生活).
(5) When (我们陷入困境), he often encourages us to follow our dreams.
第二段:表达自己对父亲的感激之情
(6)I (以……为傲) my father.
(7)Following his example, I will (尽我最大的努力)to repay him.
答案 (1)to support our family;in his forties
(2)respect him for his kindness
(3)complained about/of
(4)to make us live a happy life
(5)we are in trouble
(6)am proud of
(7)try my best
2.句式升级
(8)将句(1)升级为含有“so...that...”结构的句子
(9)将句(2)升级为含被动语态的句子
(10)将句(3)升级为部分倒装句
答案 (8)He is always working so hard to support our family that his hair has already turned grey in his forties.
(9)He is respected by others for his kindness.
(10)Over the years, never has he complained about/of our living conditions.
连句成篇
Dear Editor,
I love my dad, who is an engineer in a factory. He is always working so hard to support our family that his hair has already turned grey in his forties. He is respected by others for his kindness. Over the years, never has he complained about/of our living conditions. Instead, he has made great efforts to make us live a happy life. When we are in trouble, he often encourages us to follow our dreams. What's more, he often gives us some useful advice.
I am proud of my father. Following his example, I will try my best to repay him. Happy Father's Day to the world's best dad!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作积累
表达对家人的感激之情的句式
1.I would like to convey my heartfelt thanks to you in this letter for...我想在这封信中就……向您表达我衷心的感谢。
2.With the deepest gratitude I write you this letter to express...怀着最深切的感激之情,我给您写这封信以表达……
3.If it had not been for your help/guidance/assistance..., I wouldn't have done sth.
= But for/Without your help/guidance/assistance...,I wouldn't have done sth.如果没有你的帮助/指导/援助……,我就不会做某事。
4.Please accept my sincere thanks for your help, which I will never forget.请接受我对你的帮助的诚挚感谢,对此我将永远不会忘记。
实战演练 答案见P120
(2024四川选科模拟测试)
你校英文报Lovely Family Memories栏目正在征稿。请你用英语写一篇短文投稿,内容包括:
1.你对家庭的认识;
2.分享一则家人间的感人故事。
注意:1.写作词数应为80个左右;
2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
读后续写微写作
情景导入
父亲和儿子在专业选择上产生分歧,请根据提示写一个语段,描述父子之间争吵并互相谅解的场景。
教材续写语料
Ⅰ.动作描写
1. v.靠近
2. v.叹气
3. v.道歉
4. 提高了嗓门
5. 不假思索地匆匆投入
Ⅱ.心理描写
6. v.尊重
7. 以……为傲
Ⅲ.外貌描写
8. n.脸颊
答案 1.approach 2.sigh 3.apologise
4.raise one's voice 5.jump in with both feet
6.respect 7.be proud of 8.cheek
微型读后续写
Ⅰ.单句写作
1.“我不敢相信你不理解!”儿子提高了声音,对父亲喊道。
“I can't believe you're not understanding!” the son , .
2.父亲深深地叹了一口气,走近儿子,把手放在儿子的肩膀上。
, the father and put his hand on his son's shoulder.
3.“我尊重你的选择,但你选择了一条不适合你的路,”父亲平静地说,声音柔和但坚定。
“I , but you're choosing a path that ,” the father said calmly, his voice soft but firm.
4.儿子点了点头,眼泪顺着脸颊滚落。
The son nodded, with big tears .
5.儿子,你不必为你的梦想或选择道歉。
Son, you don't have to your dreams or your choices.
6.只要你快乐,你在做你认为好的事,我就会为你感到骄傲。
As long as you're happy and you're doing what you believe in, I'll .
7.答应我在你全心全意投入之前,你会仔细考虑的。
Promise me you'll think it through carefully .
8.儿子擦去眼泪,看着父亲的眼睛,眼里充满了感激之情。
The son wiped away his tears and looked into his father's eyes, .
答案 1.raised his voice;shouting at his father
2.Sighing deeply;approached his son
3.respect your choice;doesn't suit you
4.rolling down his cheeks 5.apologise for
6.be proud of you 7.before you jump in with both feet 8.his eyes filled with gratitude
Ⅱ.连句成篇(注意使用适当的衔接词)
答案
“I can't believe you're not understanding!” the son raised his voice, shouting at his father. Sighing deeply, the father approached his son and put his hand on his son's shoulder. “I respect your choice, but you're choosing a path that doesn't suit you,” the father said calmly, his voice soft but firm. The son nodded, with big tears rolling down his cheeks. “Son, you don't have to apologise for your dreams or your choices. As long as you're happy and you're doing what you believe in, I'll be proud of you. But promise me you'll think it through carefully before you jump in with both feet,” the father said. The son wiped away his tears and looked into his father's eyes, his eyes filled with gratitude.
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
One possible version:
It's true that the family is an important part of our life. The family not only gives us warmth and comfort, but also support and strength.
Speaking of the lovely memory, one floods back instantly. Once my parents promised to give me a gift if I did well in exams. Unluckily, the result was bad. Instead of criticizing me, my father said,“No problem. Next time you can do better, and the gift is still for you!”I was greatly moved.
Whenever I recall it, a classic saying comes to my mind,“East or west, home is the best.”
1.重点词汇
①warmth n.温暖
②comfort n.安慰
③speaking of 谈起,提到
④flood v.(感觉或回忆)涌上心头;涌现
⑤promise to do sth.承诺做某事,保证做某事
⑥instead of 不是;代替
⑦criticize v.批评
⑧recall v.回忆起,回想
2.亮点句型
①It's true that the family is an important part of our life.(It作形式主语,that引导主语从句)诚然,家庭是我们生活的重要组成部分。
②The family not only gives us warmth and comfort, but also support and strength.(“not only...but also...”句型)家庭不仅给了我们温暖和安慰,也给了我们支持和力量。
③Whenever I recall it, a classic saying comes to my mind, “East or west, home is the best.”(Whenever引导让步状语从句)每当我想起这件事,脑海中就会浮现出一句经典的话:“金窝银窝,不如自己的草窝。”
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