2025外研版高中英语必修第一册同步练习题--Unit 4 Part 4 Writing(含答案与解析)

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2025外研版高中英语必修第一册
Part 4 Writing
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写作题目
  阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
  Jack and his wife Tonya were sailing around Africa with their friends Max and Sasha. One day they saw a big fishing boat. It was moving fast. “Hello!” they shouted. The men on the boat looked at them angrily. Max looked carefully at the boat.
“Something's wrong with their fishing net,”he said. They got nearer to the net. “What's that ” said Tonya. “There is something in the net. It's alive.” Very slowly, they moved nearer.
“I can see it now,” said Tonya. “It's a killer whale—it's hurt. There's blood in the water. How can we help it ” “I can see it too. It's a baby but we must be careful,” said Max.
Jack jumped into the water. “I can get the net off its fin,” he said.
Jack got the net off the baby killer whale. There was a big cut on its fin. It swam away.Suddenly there were other killer whales near the boat.
“Jack!Get in quickly,” shouted Tonya.
Jack swam to the boat as fast as a fish. “I'm going to call that baby killer whale Lucky,” he said.
As they moved away, it began to rain harder and harder.
Jack said, “We must get away from the wind. I can see a town over there. Let's go.”
The town got nearer but the waves got bigger. Suddenly a very big wave hit the boat.
“Is everyone OK ” shouted Jack. “Tonya ... She's not in the boat,” said Sasha. “She's in the water.”
They looked into the cold, dark water for hours. “Tonya! Say something, Tonya. Where are you ” shouted Max.
The wind got stronger and the boat was full of water. Another big wave hit the boat. “Jack, do you want us all to die ” said Max. “We can't stay here any longer. Tonya is wearing a life jacket and she can swim very well. Let's sail to the town.”
Moments later the boat hit a beach. They went out. Max and Sasha slept on the beach. Jack sat near the water, looking at the sea and thinking of Tonya.
  注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
  At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea.                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
  Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he saw someone waving to him.                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
文本分析
初识文本
重点词汇
1.alive adj.活着的
2.get away from (得以)离开,脱身
3.wave n.波浪 v.挥手
4.be full of... 充满……
障碍词汇
1.sail v.(人)乘船航行
2.net n.网
3.fin n.(鱼的)鳍
4.cut n.伤口
5.life jacket n.救生衣
6.hit v.攻击,袭击;到达(某地)
故事要素
深研文本
预测情节发展
第一段:那时,Tonya在500米外的海里→Tonya一个人,十分恐惧,拼命求救→Tonya被“Lucky”所在的虎鲸群救了→Tonya被虎鲸群带到近岸处。
第二段:Jack正沿着海滩走着,突然他看到有人向他挥手→Jack发现向他挥手的人是Tonya→Tonya上岸后向Jack说明是“Lucky”救了自己→Jack向“Lucky”表示感谢→“Lucky”和其他虎鲸游向大海。
遣词造句
1.用单词或短语填空
(1)     vt.包围
(2)     adj.害怕的
(3)       启程;出发
(4)       踏上
答案 (1)surround (2)frightened
(3)set off/out (4)set foot on
2.完成句子
(5)Tonya              (被……包围)the cold sea water, and she was so frightened and just                    (疯狂地喊救命).
(6)Tonya found herself                        (正在从海中升起).
(7)    (令人惊讶的是), she was on the back of a big killer whale and there were some killer whales around her.
(8)Tonya              (踏上)the beach, and then Jack ran towards her and               (紧紧地抱住她).
(9)Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin,         (真诚地说), “Thank you, Lucky!”
答案 (5)was surrounded by; shouted crazily for help
(6)rising out of the sea
(7)Surprisingly
(8)set foot on;hugged her tightly
(9)saying sincerely
3.句式升级
(10)用含有非谓语动词作状语的句子改写句(5)
                           
                           
(11)用含有with的复合结构的句子改写句(7)
                           
                           
(12)用含有the moment引导的时间状语从句的句子改写句(8)
                           
                           
答案 (10)Surrounded by the cold sea water, she was so frightened and just shouted crazily for help.
(11)Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her.
(12)The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly.
连句成篇
  At that time, Tonya was five hundred meters away in the sea. Surrounded by the cold sea water, she was so frightened and just shouted crazily for help. Suddenly, Tonya found herself rising out of the sea. Surprisingly, she was on the back of a big killer whale with some killer whales around her. Among them, Tonya saw a small one, who was saved by Jack a few moments ago—Lucky. They set off to catch up with the boat.
  Jack was walking along the beach and suddenly he saw someone waving to him. Later, he found that it was Tonya! The moment Tonya set foot on the beach, Jack ran towards her and hugged her tightly. Tonya smiled, “Don't worry. I'm fine. I think we should thank the killer whales who saved my life. Look, the small one is Lucky!” Jack walked towards Lucky and stroked its fin, saying sincerely, “Thank you, Lucky!” Lucky shook its fin and then these killer whales swam away into the vast sea.
写作积累
心理描写——高兴、激动、兴奋
一、词汇
1.excitement n.激动;兴奋
2.thrilled adj.非常兴奋的,极为激动的
3.cheerful adj.高兴的;令人愉快的
4.overjoyed adj.狂喜的;无比高兴的
5.excitedly adv.激动地;兴奋地
6.happiness n.幸福;快乐
7.satisfactory/satisfying adj.令人满意的
8.satisfaction n.满意;满足
9.touched adj.感动的
10.thankful/grateful adj.感谢的;感激的
11.dance for/with joy高兴得跳起舞来
12.in high/cheerful spirits兴高采烈
13.burst into tears突然哭了起来
14.be wild with joy/delight/happiness/be over the moon欣喜若狂
15.tears of gratitude/appreciation感激的泪水
二、句子
1.Delighted and thrilled, I gave a jump in the air and then skipped into the supermarket along with my smiling mother.又高兴又激动,我蹦跶了一下,然后蹦蹦跳跳地跟着微笑着的妈妈进了超市。
2.Full of happiness/Pleased beyond description/Overjoyed, he jumped up and ran happily around the yard.他高兴极了,跳起来,高兴地在院子里到处跑。
3.Her hands were trembling with excitement as she opened the box.当她打开盒子时,她激动得手发抖。
4.Then came a happy voice far from where we were, bathing us in extreme joy. Everyone was grinning from ear to ear.这时,一个快乐的声音从远处传来,使我们沉浸在狂喜之中。每个人都笑得合不拢嘴。
5.With tears of gratitude rolling down his cheeks, Peter said thankfully, “You've saved me today. I couldn't thank you enough.”感激的泪水顺着彼得的脸颊流下,他感激地说:“今天你救了我。我对你感激不尽。”
6.He smiled with gratitude as he accepted the flowers given by a small boy.当他接过一个小男孩给的花时,他感激地笑起来。
7.After Steve learned this satisfactory result, a sense of joy and happiness swept over/flooded over him.史蒂夫听到这个令人满意的结果后,一种喜悦和幸福的感觉涌上心头。
实战演练 答案见P127
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
Robert and Henry were friends in the same class.They always played together and went home together. One day, Robert and Henry were going home from school. On turning a corner, Robert cried out,“A fight! Let's go and see!”
“No,” said Henry,“Let's go home quietly and not meddle with(干涉) this quarrel. We have nothing to do with it and may get into trouble. Also, our parents are expecting to have dinner with us and I don't want them to worry aboutme.”
“You are a coward(懦夫), and afraid to go,” said Robert, and he ran off. Henry went straight home, and in the afternoon he went to school as usual.
But Robert had told other boys that Henry was a coward, and they laughed at him a great deal. From then on, they looked down upon Henry and didn't want to play with him.
Henry was sad but he wasn't angry with Robert for his rude behaviour, because he knew that they misunderstood him, and that he ought to be afraid of nothing but doing wrong. Thus, he just ignored the other boys' laughter and continued to go to school and study as usual. However, Robert didn't invite Henry to go home together anymore. Instead, he had some other boys who also thought Henry was a coward. Every day after school, they didn't go home directly but went to the river or somewhere to play games and had a lot of fun.
A few days later, when bathing with his new friends in a river, Robert got out of his depth. He struggled and cried for help, but he failed. The boys who had called Henry a coward got out of the water as fast as they could, but they did nothing to help him.
  注意:续写词数应为150个左右。
  It seemed as if Robert would be dying.                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
  Thus, Robert's life was saved.                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
                           
答案与分层梯度式解析
Part 4 Writing
实战演练
写作指导
故事要素 Time one day, a few days later
Place at a corner, in a river
Character Robert, Henry, the boys
Reason Robert misunderstood Henry, thinkingthat Henry was a coward.
Conflict Robert was drowning in the river. He cried for help but the boys got out of the water and did nothing to help him.
前文故事情节 Robert和Henry是同班的朋友。他们总是一起玩、一起回家。一天,他们在回家路上看到有人打架,Robert想去看看但Henry拒绝了,于是Robert就认定Henry是懦夫并告诉其他男孩他是个懦夫。Henry并不生气,但Robert却选择和其他人一起玩而不和Henry玩。几天后,Robert在河里溺水,其他男孩赶紧从水里出来而不去救他。
续写方向 Paragraph 1:It seemed as if Robert would be dying. ①根据已给出的续写首句“It seemed as if Robert would be dying.(Robert好像要死了。)”可知,本段主要讲述Robert落水后的情景。 ②Robert是否会得救 谁救了Robert (根据续写第二段首句“Thus, Robert's life was saved.”可以猜想,第一段中应该出现Henry救Robert的过程及表现出的勇敢。)
Paragraph 2:Thus, Robert's life was saved. 根据续写第二段首句“Thus, Robert's life was saved.”可知,Robert得救了。因此本段应讲述Robert得救后的故事。Robert最终明白自己误会了Henry,知道了什么才是真正的勇敢,两人重归于好。
整理思路 续写第一段:Robert快要淹死了→Henry恰巧路过→Henry毫不犹豫地下水救Robert。 续写第二段:Robert得救了→Robert明白了什么是真正的勇敢,两人误会解开→Robert的感悟。
One possible version:
  It seemed as if Robert would be dying. Just at that moment, Henry happened to be passing by. Hearing the screams, Henry ran to the riverside, threw off his clothes and jumped into the water without hesitation. He grabbed Robert just before he was sinking at the last minute. In spite of much danger and with great effort, he brought Robert to the riverbank.
  Thus, Robert's life was saved. Robert and his new friends were ashamed of having called Henry a coward. They realized that Henry had true courage. They said sorry to Henry for their rude behaviour and asked for his forgiveness. Henry forgave them happily. He and Robert were friends again and they went home together as usual. From this, Robert learned what true courage was—never be afraid to do good, but always fear to do evil.
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